LOVE and OTHER BRUISES
DAh

San Jose, CA

#836 Apr 13, 2013
Sally Brown wrote:
Ok! I'm CONFUSED!
Until just now I had never heard/read this poem b-4. The only question I have is does it really matter? To be quite honest would it be any different as if it were me feeling this way and instead of writing and making up my own material I just sat down and watched The Lakhouse or something like that. Simply Devine is in pain I can totally UNDERSTAND that. We all have our own ways of working through these moments. I know I do!
Simply Devine writes some beautiful stuff. I know I couldn't do that or even find anything like it or where to look.
Keep it up Simply Devine!
Take care
His way to get through his pain is to hurt others to make them feel as terrible as he wants.. and he doesn't use many of his own words and those are usually the ones that show his true colors of blindness.

That's not nice or even necessary.. If that is your real name, know this as well.. few know this poets real name or anything else that is truthful.

Just so you know Sally Brown.
DAh

San Jose, CA

#837 Apr 13, 2013
Laura Beth wrote:
<quoted text> These are poems written by others. He simply uses them for his suave persona to lure women and Men. So you know he is in pain ? What ? How did you know this ? Through other peoples published poems stolen ? That's quite a stretch for you too assume. Now if you are in pain and say so, that is a different story. Be careful around here. That one is a real creepy dude.
No one ever ASSumes how much pain you are in at any given moment in your topix career. Beauty and beast when you arrive, guess which you are? LB, believe all the rumours you hear and spread K?

Level 7

Since: Dec 12

Location hidden

#838 Apr 13, 2013
DAh wrote:
<quoted text>
His way to get through his pain is to hurt others to make them feel as terrible as he wants.. and he doesn't use many of his own words and those are usually the ones that show his true colors of blindness.
That's not nice or even necessary.. If that is your real name, know this as well.. few know this poets real name or anything else that is truthful.
Just so you know Sally Brown.
Well to be quite honest I only read what I want and have not taken the time to notice him being hurtful to others or making them feel terrible. If I start to read something and find I have no interest then I stop reading and move on.

Names real names? Like I'm really Sally Brown and he's really Simply Devine and what ever other names he uses.

How long has Simply Devine been around? Anyone know or would Simply like to help out here?

Now this is bring me to what I do best DIG!

“Want A Friend, Be One”

Level 9

Since: Mar 12

Smiling :o) all the way....

#839 Apr 13, 2013
okay adrain please come back on here and let them have the answers they need if you feel like explaining..if not then just dont thats your choice..I have been here a while and he was here before I came..we are all under a different name but everybody knows my name real one adrain doesnt forget to use my nickname so no big deal.yes he has been mean to some but will say he is sorry but in his way..he is still loved by us all.he uses others poems so do I but I say I got off net or wherever at times but know some is from the net and I add my own words to kind of make it my own..LOL. lets all get along okay..let Adrian have his thread and post his or others poems they are all still cool..its hard for me to swallow the hard core ones but I still read even them..you guys are all my friends and I hope to ramaim friends with everybody even thru all of this..Yes Adrian you are my bestest too..and always have been..Im not your friend once and gone the next I dont work that way..if you are on here buddy please comment..Okay..LY..(hugs)..

Level 7

Since: Dec 12

Location hidden

#840 Apr 13, 2013
Simply deVine wrote:
"BABY YOU'RE RIGHT, THERE IA A MARRIAGE YEARS QUOTIENT YOU DIDN'T KNOW ABOUT......."
Some people say a true love starts
With a question, Facebook, or inflated hearts
Like carts of unadulterated endless charts
With nothing but lines and your sweet, sweet time
Sublime and a variety of the lowest piety
Nonexistent, in fact, for charts are not religious
Conspicuous it may be but never incredulous
But anyways, back to the discussion of love
We like to think we are above the jaws
Of flaws and the paws of crows' loud caws
Gnawing at your smaller half of a wishbone
Wishing your heart won't go away, amiss
The bliss of the sharing of the mutual countenance
And the mountains and hills of the time that ensues
Forever and ever and ever true
Oh, the requests of adolescent hormones
The tone of the moans under the covers create
Sweet metronomes at home for a duration
Before the two meet up at the break-up train station
With one going to little Kalamazoo
and the other to Timbuktu.
In honesty, no relationship ends well
Car crash, divorce? Only time can tell
Perhaps she fell down the stairs
Or the scars are all too much to bear
Scared, impaired emotionally and slowly
Slipping from the Earth and off into orbit
The minty flavor begins powerfully
Without dour or sour tastes of infidelity
Incredibly but shortly the taste goes away
As you chew and chew more, your jaws get sore
Your mouth gets dehydrated around and about
when it's time to spit it out.
Perhaps her train is still here
Perhaps her ears droop along with the tears
That she wears below her glistening eyes
Wise as I think I may be
She must be here.
She must be.
Please.
But no, that ship has sailed
I have failed, her leaving this paper town
and my paper body shrivels under the weight
of the water streaming from my paper face
The pen paling in contrast to the sword
when its inky contents get all over the floor.
I agree with PH please NEED to hear from you! This one ^^^^^

like b-4 WOW!
International Law

United States

#841 Apr 13, 2013
Princess Hey wrote:
I am with you SB he is great and others dont like what he has to say,but you know thats his choice and look what the thread says you know..he is a great guy/man whomever..I think he is awesome even though he has been mean saying things to me its all okay..I have forgiven him but you know if people dont want to read what he has to say why even bother to come on the thread they know what the thread is about before they even look..so heres to you adrain we love what you write,what you have to say,so pick ourself up and dust yourself off and let the rest roll off your back..you are loved so much and if you cant see this then you are so blind..now get yourself back here and write us some more ..Thank you for what you do for us and our feelings..you rock...:O)
I believe the call it COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT, you blithering dumbass! Why do you support and encourage a THIEF???

“Want A Friend, Be One”

Level 9

Since: Mar 12

Smiling :o) all the way....

#842 Apr 13, 2013
and who cares..come on this is topix..get real..
name calling isnt nice either..okay.I had much rather read a reused poem than have someone on here calling me names..gee real becoming of you and thanks for the name..as for being dumb no dont think so and for the azz part I do have one of those as well..so do you..but it is what it is.com e on...stop...I am done with this so please no more name calling...TY..you all have an awsome day..
Trkr Dlte

San Jose, CA

#843 Apr 13, 2013
Princess Hey wrote:
okay adrain please come back on here and let them have the answers they need if you feel like explaining..if not then just dont thats your choice..I have been here a while and he was here before I came..we are all under a different name but everybody knows my name real one adrain doesnt forget to use my nickname so no big deal.yes he has been mean to some but will say he is sorry but in his way..he is still loved by us all.he uses others poems so do I but I say I got off net or wherever at times but know some is from the net and I add my own words to kind of make it my own..LOL. lets all get along okay..let Adrian have his thread and post his or others poems they are all still cool..its hard for me to swallow the hard core ones but I still read even them..you guys are all my friends and I hope to ramaim friends with everybody even thru all of this..Yes Adrian you are my bestest too..and always have been..Im not your friend once and gone the next I dont work that way..if you are on here buddy please comment..Okay..LY..(hugs)..
Touching ;)
Polly wanna cracker?
J/kiddin YA PH, and ignore the behaters K?
U B alright, bit sappy maybe, but OK.:-)

Level 7

Since: Dec 12

Location hidden

#844 Apr 13, 2013
What just happened here?

Simply keep it up I like it!
Oh Geees

United States

#845 Apr 13, 2013
Trkr Dlte wrote:
<quoted text>
Touching ;)
Polly wanna cracker?
J/kiddin YA PH, and ignore the behaters K?
U B alright, bit sappy maybe, but OK.:-)
PEST Trash???????
Library Card

United States

#846 Apr 13, 2013
Sally Brown wrote:
What just happened here?
Simply keep it up I like it!
Then go read the BOOKS that the idiot steals the poetry from. Can you read?
Trishtrashdashof dish

San Jose, CA

#847 Apr 13, 2013
Who? What? ME? HECK NO! NOT ME TOO!;-)

**Uh Oh**

Gee Wizzz????Ü

Keep it simple man, moorefun dat way, HA?

Violets are Blue
Roses are Red
You smell delish
(:I may not be right in the head:)
Trishtrashdashof dish

San Jose, CA

#848 Apr 13, 2013


DiVine and so R U Babe`
R U Vlbl? ;)
I M EZ!*wink*

Laura Beth

Since: Aug 09

Location hidden

#849 Apr 13, 2013
Must be crack hour in San Jose
DAh

San Jose, CA

#850 Apr 13, 2013
What time should we expect you and the family?
What's for dinner, I'm a pig! How bout you babe?
Sweetie-Pie

United States

#851 Apr 13, 2013
Laura Beth wrote:
Must be crack hour in San Jose
Nobody cares, Beth, so go away.
PESCreate

United States

#852 Apr 13, 2013
Sweetie-Pie wrote:
<quoted text>
Nobody cares, Beth, so go away.
Sup LB?

“Want A Friend, Be One”

Level 9

Since: Mar 12

Smiling :o) all the way....

#861 Apr 14, 2013
If you cant find the light at the end of the tunnel ,its you are the light.
I hope that is only a poem and you dont really feel that way..its okay.please dont be lonely,sad or blue.I am your friend.just talk to me..okay..I am here ..

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Since: Dec 12

Location hidden

#862 Apr 15, 2013
Simply deVine wrote:
I always thought
That I'd spend my life
Reading the same sad stories
And crying over the same sad endings
To them.
And I'd listen to the same heartbreaking songs
And shed similar tears for each note
That pulled something away from me.
I thought that someones sadness
Expressed in art
Pulled pain into my heart
But happiness
Expressed in art
Breaks me, too.
And I don't know
If I have lost myself
Or found myself
In the tears I have shed
For such enigmatic beauty
I don't know if my heart is broken
Because it has withered away to nothing
Or if it is so full
Of pain and happiness
And everything surrounding and
Inbetween
That it will burst out of my chest.
I know that it is hurting.
I am bad and I wish I could feel something strongly.
All I feel is nothing.
Simply keep it up! Most people just don't understand! This is the way I see it! Simply can feel the words and the true meaning of them as he sees/writes them.
Kathleena

Since: Jan 13

Location hidden

#863 Apr 15, 2013
Simply deVine wrote:
I always thought
That I'd spend my life
Reading the same sad stories
And crying over the same sad endings
To them.
And I'd listen to the same heartbreaking songs
And shed similar tears for each note
That pulled something away from me.
I thought that someones sadness
Expressed in art
Pulled pain into my heart
But happiness
Expressed in art
Breaks me, too.
And I don't know
If I have lost myself
Or found myself
In the tears I have shed
For such enigmatic beauty
I don't know if my heart is broken
Because it has withered away to nothing
Or if it is so full
Of pain and happiness
And everything surrounding and
Inbetween
That it will burst out of my chest.
I know that it is hurting.
I am bad and I wish I could feel something strongly.
All I feel is nothing.
"I always thought
That I'd spend my life
Reading the same sad stories
And crying over the same sad endings
To them..."

I always thought
That I'd see you again...

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