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“Crown Of Life”

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I love my eyes when you look in to them.I love my name when you whisper it,love my heart when you love it and love my life because you are in it..dont ever leave..

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the best place in the world is in the arms of someone who will not only hold you at your best,but will pick you up and hug you tight at your weakness moment!!!!
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One day I was born
my mother was young and torn
She said I was very hairy and
she hated to touch me I was so scarey

Mother claimed to love her children
then later admitted she wasn't the mother she should have been

I made a mistake and they chose to hate me forever
I wouldn't choose hate, no not ever
We shouldn't use the words always and never
Some can't hide their hatred, I say WHATEVER!

Some are self-centered and selfish
Not happy unless they get their every wish
You do it my way
or hit the highway

Love and OTHER Bruises
I Wish

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Topix would delete all of this phaggyass nonsense.
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Cruel
was it necessary?

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hello, i was reading the comments, life no one can understand, I think everyone has a different way of thinking and acting

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if you tell me you love me
  and I're entertaining
  I conosco one
  that for me is dying

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love

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follies of love
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A fist disguised as a heart.
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Apr 13, 2013
 

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Simply deVine wrote:
<quoted text>
Lustful deceit of truth;
Unadulterated treachery of youth;
Transformation acceleration - Sloth
Like candle to moth
Deliberate disregard of lucidity
Profligacy elected humility
Portly modish scrawny
Legislature legitimate parody
exposure....yes, it's necessary
cruel.....well thats open to conjecture
I think I love U
May I clarify? I will ... I love you even, when I don't very much care for you, at times.
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P&L24UAlwysRgdlz

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Rockin' USA ;)

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LOVE makes ...YOUR WORLD BRIGHTER... In every way!!
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Move along folks. Nothing to see here. Just a bunch of gay spam. Move along folks, move along.

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Simply deVine wrote:
"BABY YOU'RE RIGHT, THERE IA A MARRIAGE YEARS QUOTIENT YOU DIDN'T KNOW ABOUT......."
Some people say a true love starts
With a question, Facebook, or inflated hearts
Like carts of unadulterated endless charts
With nothing but lines and your sweet, sweet time
Sublime and a variety of the lowest piety
Nonexistent, in fact, for charts are not religious
Conspicuous it may be but never incredulous
But anyways, back to the discussion of love
We like to think we are above the jaws
Of flaws and the paws of crows' loud caws
Gnawing at your smaller half of a wishbone
Wishing your heart won't go away, amiss
The bliss of the sharing of the mutual countenance
And the mountains and hills of the time that ensues
Forever and ever and ever true
Oh, the requests of adolescent hormones
The tone of the moans under the covers create
Sweet metronomes at home for a duration
Before the two meet up at the break-up train station
With one going to little Kalamazoo
and the other to Timbuktu.
In honesty, no relationship ends well
Car crash, divorce? Only time can tell
Perhaps she fell down the stairs
Or the scars are all too much to bear
Scared, impaired emotionally and slowly
Slipping from the Earth and off into orbit
The minty flavor begins powerfully
Without dour or sour tastes of infidelity
Incredibly but shortly the taste goes away
As you chew and chew more, your jaws get sore
Your mouth gets dehydrated around and about
when it's time to spit it out.
Perhaps her train is still here
Perhaps her ears droop along with the tears
That she wears below her glistening eyes
Wise as I think I may be
She must be here.
She must be.
Please.
But no, that ship has sailed
I have failed, her leaving this paper town
and my paper body shrivels under the weight
of the water streaming from my paper face
The pen paling in contrast to the sword
when its inky contents get all over the floor.
Wow!

Keep it up.........Simply Devine!

The hearts the hardest think to heal I know that for a fact!

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Simply deVine wrote:
"BABY YOU'RE RIGHT, THERE IA A MARRIAGE YEARS QUOTIENT YOU DIDN'T KNOW ABOUT......."
Some people say a true love starts
With a question, Facebook, or inflated hearts
Like carts of unadulterated endless charts
With nothing but lines and your sweet, sweet time
Sublime and a variety of the lowest piety
Nonexistent, in fact, for charts are not religious
Conspicuous it may be but never incredulous
But anyways, back to the discussion of love
We like to think we are above the jaws
Of flaws and the paws of crows' loud caws
Gnawing at your smaller half of a wishbone
Wishing your heart won't go away, amiss
The bliss of the sharing of the mutual countenance
And the mountains and hills of the time that ensues
Forever and ever and ever true
Oh, the requests of adolescent hormones
The tone of the moans under the covers create
Sweet metronomes at home for a duration
Before the two meet up at the break-up train station
With one going to little Kalamazoo
and the other to Timbuktu.
In honesty, no relationship ends well
Car crash, divorce? Only time can tell
Perhaps she fell down the stairs
Or the scars are all too much to bear
Scared, impaired emotionally and slowly
Slipping from the Earth and off into orbit
The minty flavor begins powerfully
Without dour or sour tastes of infidelity
Incredibly but shortly the taste goes away
As you chew and chew more, your jaws get sore
Your mouth gets dehydrated around and about
when it's time to spit it out.
Perhaps her train is still here
Perhaps her ears droop along with the tears
That she wears below her glistening eyes
Wise as I think I may be
She must be here.
She must be.
Please.
But no, that ship has sailed
I have failed, her leaving this paper town
and my paper body shrivels under the weight
of the water streaming from my paper face
The pen paling in contrast to the sword
when its inky contents get all over the floor.
Lord have mercy, have you no shame in stealing other poets work ? That poem was written by Brad McPherson.

http://hellopoetry.com/-brad-mcpherson/

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Apr 13, 2013
 

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Be a hand that reaches out,be a smile for those who have no reason to smile,be a light for those who live in darkness.Show them what it means to truly love...you know how to make someone feel special,you have before..:O)..
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love and other bruises...

nice.

~Oz

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Ok! I'm CONFUSED!
Until just now I had never heard/read this poem b-4. The only question I have is does it really matter? To be quite honest would it be any different as if it were me feeling this way and instead of writing and making up my own material I just sat down and watched The Lakhouse or something like that. Simply Devine is in pain I can totally UNDERSTAND that. We all have our own ways of working through these moments. I know I do!

Simply Devine writes some beautiful stuff. I know I couldn't do that or even find anything like it or where to look.

Keep it up Simply Devine!

Take care

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Sally Brown wrote:
Ok! I'm CONFUSED!
Until just now I had never heard/read this poem b-4. The only question I have is does it really matter? To be quite honest would it be any different as if it were me feeling this way and instead of writing and making up my own material I just sat down and watched The Lakhouse or something like that. Simply Devine is in pain I can totally UNDERSTAND that. We all have our own ways of working through these moments. I know I do!
Simply Devine writes some beautiful stuff. I know I couldn't do that or even find anything like it or where to look.
Keep it up Simply Devine!
Take care
These are poems written by others. He simply uses them for his suave persona to lure women and Men. So you know he is in pain ? What ? How did you know this ? Through other peoples published poems stolen ? That's quite a stretch for you too assume. Now if you are in pain and say so, that is a different story. Be careful around here. That one is a real creepy dude.

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I am with you SB he is great and others dont like what he has to say,but you know thats his choice and look what the thread says you know..he is a great guy/man whomever..I think he is awesome even though he has been mean saying things to me its all okay..I have forgiven him but you know if people dont want to read what he has to say why even bother to come on the thread they know what the thread is about before they even look..so heres to you adrain we love what you write,what you have to say,so pick ourself up and dust yourself off and let the rest roll off your back..you are loved so much and if you cant see this then you are so blind..now get yourself back here and write us some more ..Thank you for what you do for us and our feelings..you rock...:O)

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