LOVE and OTHER BRUISES

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Well as I never got a response to my last post, I figure that I'd better kick it up a notch or two....here goes...
Aroused
in torrential foreplay
I fantasize
biting my lower lip,
every room turns
into an erotic playground.
Nipples erect,
pressed hard upon
the walls of your chest
and the purring
of our tongues
caressing up against
each other,
quivering as your prose delves
deeper and deeper
into the soul.
In lustful desire,
bodies arc and
hips thrust in motion
to an erotic hymn.
A captured landscape
of uncontrolled passion.
Mouths passionately locked,
succulently, consuming.
As if knowing each other
from a time gone by
Electric surges flow,
releasing into a shuddering
luscious orgasm.
The poem was most helpful. Thank you for indulging me. Spent the weekend enjoying my family and friends as they came in and out of the house. I have an open door policy which finds me always in the kitchen. If it were not for my culinary skills I would never see my children nor my love ones,lol. j/k


Flirting With Spontaneity
-Magdalena

Impulsive perversion
flirts with my spontaneity
curving a kinky tongue
across a wicked smile
daring to bare my mind
naked and wordless
I scintillate in the direction
of my intention

Straddling his ideas
out in the open space
wild wanton exhibitionism
plays along my lips
indecent touches
of silky provocation
I lay upon him
in my scantily clad defiance
I throw temptation forward

allowing his hands to strip
and stroke my vivacious spirit
tantalize my scent
with digit insistence
that liquefies

my jaunty air bewitches him
into liberated expression
as I take his rise
to the depths
of my bared daring soul

his ample adventure
brings me to a
quivering ecstatic peek
liquid release rocks our moment
and there we linger
wrapped together naked
out in the openness
as I curve a kinky tongue
across his wicked smile
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I was busy with

frivolity & its

pursuit of intellect

when this dig poked

its head out from

this blog screen

and said, dude,

bring fist down

to table and I thought

well, what does

make me happy,

other than the

absolute mystery

of composition

with specific regard

to feeling, its

inscrutable range

of depth and

immediacy

and creeping

action on the ever

unready to be

pleasant mind?

The first thirty

seconds of Polvoís

Tilebreaker,

for one, and as

it turns out

you can read

The New Spirit

and listen to

On The Mouth

on headphones

on the L train

beginning with

a G, and thereís

something

transistent about

the two at once,

the looked at

listening of sitting

and reading while

the singer sings

ďclean is not a

state thatís realĒ

and maybe that

would be in

The New Spirit

or not,

but pullulating

does drop

by, and the

post-punk position

as complanation

of ďIím ready to

leave againĒ drops

by repeatedly to

begin and begin

and begin, and itís

less clear to me

now as to how

war and aesthetics

sit in temporal

relation to one

another as both

are and are not

ignored, and endless

war doesnít quite

greet endless aesthetics,

or perhaps they

touch like two

digitally composed

globes that animate

one globular unreal

and they're

easily perceived

something on the

verge of something

else so one may be

the old moved mover

of yore, though

interconnection is

a military invention

isnít it, and art is

always usually x

amount of years

behind military tech

and ditching beauty

hasnít exactly shortened

the gap, but ditching

irritation is no help

either. I keep wanting

to dig The Hurting,

which must have

worked very hard

for me in an older

continuous present

but I only get a few

good seconds from

each tune, though

Siouxsie and Kiss

Them For Me

almost shockingly

gives minutes,

and three feet

High & Rising

joyfully conjures

embarrassment Ė

I literally needed

a little rug to cut,

slide, move the feet

without lift this

one Buffalo eve

in the deep of an

anti-gathering

complex of quadrangle

living: all those

permutations

in sample form

of rock and soul

so oddly delicate

as to feel unvanished

in time without

resembling memory.
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You own this thread Adrian. I can't think of another whose lovely words have caused more ugly bruises than yours.
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Sweetie-Pie wrote:
You own this thread Adrian. I can't think of another whose lovely words have caused more ugly bruises than yours.
"I don't accept that my tears make a person suffering to be the effect that I mean a coiled phone cord on my shoulder
a house for male tears.

I wouldn't have liked it to be that way but I accept it of my choice - one of those things you release to care.

Sometimes I don't want to know what's going on it interferes with my swell of massive inspection that buys up my wage to scare death
which falls for love with the particles of memory."

~DeVine.
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When I love you is met simply with silence,
When a kiss is no longer a kiss,
When your touch is cold and hollow,
When it's no longer me you miss.

When that smile is not for me,
When I'm no longer the apple of your eye,
When you're a ghost in my dream,
When I no longer have tears to cry.

When I'm all alone and vanquished,
When I no longer feel a thing,
When you're heart and head are elsewhere,
When I no longer have will to sing.

This love it feels one sided,
No quid pro quo you see,
I gave you all my love,
And you gave it back to me...

So why am I still hanging on your lips?

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So what that you can make my pen spill lines every night
you aren't there when I turn around

you might be my muse
but that doesn't make you mine

you have touched my heart
in ways you'll never let me touch you

It is better this way
because you get me to write so fiercely......
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I love your smile.
I hate it when it's not for me.
I love your voice.
I hate it when it's not addressing me.
I love your eyes.
I hate it when I can't see myself in them.
I love your lips.
I hate that I can't have their kiss.
I love your hands.
I hate how they'll never really touch me.
I love your body.
I hate how I'll never really feel its warmth.
I...
I love you.

I fuckin' hate how you'll never love me back...

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This is the world
we get and only
this, the blood and the water mingle,
and wordless
the moan among lilies and honeysuckle,
the branches shake
like my arms after rough
sex I want
you fresh from the hunt
your face smeared with the perfume
I leave on your mouth
itís this overgrowth that reminds me
of how much
we are overrun
with the excess and the lush,
I have pressed
this hand to your plush

forget
that I said this.
This world
we made is the only one we get,

and it splays to a golden
center
and it singles us out
for sacrifice.
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She reminded me of the sunshine, in the way that you would want to lay in itís radiance and stay there forever.

You would want to feel itís everlasting glow all over you, you want itís presents to leave itís print on you, she was like the sunshine.

The smell of jasmine floated in the air with a cool breeze that reminded me of her essence, the scent trickled on my skin and caused joy of her.

I could feel her in my arms with happier times, she spoke her own perfection and the words lingered in my heart.

In you and me we will find eternity that happiness blossoms everyday in the glory of love.

There is nothing more beautiful than you and the smile you create when you look at me.

I am forever humble in your arms that distil peace and recognise my love for you.

The joy that beats with rhythm to sing a song of happiness and give praise to the beauty of you.

Your perfection is real in dreams that guide lovers to their place of peace.
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The past is swept away in this moment

Where wind is heavy with damp and salt

And the warmth washes over dancing palms

While my shining wet body in the sand

Touches two worlds unknown and mysterious

A third world stretches out and above me

And I am so alone in this perfect moment

Where thoughts of deep intent and mystery

Scratch upon the surface of lazy conscience

And flutter in and out and through me

Awakening some long lost forgotten feeling

Of thought and truth and depth and knowledge

And in that instant I know you will never share
this

A part of a moment in the long list of the present

Where I want to reach out and clink dripping
glasses

And speak of insights once buried underneath

The shells and sea and ever changing sky

Where I search you out and call with my heart

Returning time and again unanswered, unfound

With my hands that grasp dry sand

And watch time falling through the cracks.......

Between my fingers.
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Kate, I want to help in anyway I can,
So by the end of this note I hope you feel better.
I know you feel pain of which you can no longer stand,
I just want to do my best to make things better.

A pretty girl, I met some months ago.
I asked her how she was,
She replied "I don't know."

There was pain in those eyes,
I saw it in her stare.
It would be morally appalling,
To say "I don't care."

I got to know her, and the days went by.
Something remarkable happened;
No longer did I feel the urge to cry.

Looking back, at the girl I knew,
So smart, so friendly, so fantastic are you.

You have much ahead of you,
Though some may hurt,
But as long as you keep your heart true
Outweighing the pain will be pure comfort.

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PROFILE DeVINE wrote:
Kate, I want to help in anyway I can,
So by the end of this note I hope you feel better.
I know you feel pain of which you can no longer stand,
I just want to do my best to make things better.
A pretty girl, I met some months ago.
I asked her how she was,
She replied "I don't know."
There was pain in those eyes,
I saw it in her stare.
It would be morally appalling,
To say "I don't care."
I got to know her, and the days went by.
Something remarkable happened;
No longer did I feel the urge to cry.
Looking back, at the girl I knew,
So smart, so friendly, so fantastic are you.
You have much ahead of you,
Though some may hurt,
But as long as you keep your heart true
Outweighing the pain will be pure comfort.
Every hour

Every moment

Every second

Of every day

Does this woman know pain

Even in her sleep it is relentless

She wakes to the sounds of her own moans

In every fiber

In every cell

The screams of pain echo and reverberate

Never ending

And

Never quieted

Yet

She walks her path knowingly

Understanding that it is a pain she must carry

Every hour

Every moment

Every second

Of every day

And

Though it is of her

It is not her

Nor

Will it ever be

Thank you Adrian. I have found comfort in your words:)

“I could be your Princess.”

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Feb 18, 2013
 
You can't be loved if you go without
PESCreate - Trish

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Dad loved me and gave me the greatest of hugs

One day Dad got too busy and the hugs ceased

Mom never hugged me

Lonely days and lonely nights turned into years with no one to hug

He said and He said and He said it too, but I'm sorry a hug will not do

LOVE and OTHER BRUISES remind me of how much a hug really can do

Come here and let me hug you too

Compassion
Caring
Sharing
Daring
Endearing

Hugs are better than drugs

“ROCK ON ROCKERS!!”

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Feb 18, 2013
 
PESCreate - Trish wrote:
Dad loved me and gave me the greatest of hugs
One day Dad got too busy and the hugs ceased
Mom never hugged me
Lonely days and lonely nights turned into years with no one to hug
He said and He said and He said it too, but I'm sorry a hug will not do
LOVE and OTHER BRUISES remind me of how much a hug really can do
Come here and let me hug you too
Compassion
Caring
Sharing
Daring
Endearing
Hugs are better than drugs
GOT THAT RIGHT.. Trish...(((HUGS))) CURE....DRUGS...KILL.. Good to SEE you!!
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Feb 18, 2013
 
SORRY !

WOW....next time I attempt to draw a HEART....I think I should follow the instructions more closely.

Never thought I'd get all of that mumbo-jumbo ??
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Feb 18, 2013
 
PROFILE DeVINE wrote:
SORRY !
WOW....next time I attempt to draw a HEART....I think I should follow the instructions more closely.
Never thought I'd get all of that mumbo-jumbo ??
Please forgive me ...

for what I'm gonna do with this post.

Sorry, I just can't help myself.

:)
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Feb 18, 2013
 
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Every hour
Every moment
Every second
Of every day
Does this woman know pain
Even in her sleep it is relentless
She wakes to the sounds of her own moans
In every fiber
In every cell
The screams of pain echo and reverberate
Never ending
And
Never quieted
Yet
She walks her path knowingly
Understanding that it is a pain she must carry
Every hour
Every moment
Every second
Of every day
And
Though it is of her
It is not her
Nor
Will it ever be
Thank you Adrian. I have found comfort in your words:)
Maybe I'm a glutton for punishment;

because I rehash every moment we ever had.

I've analyzed every word you ever said to me;

checking my heart against my mind.

When you encroach on my thoughts;

I allow you an all access pass.

When you seep into my dreams;

I let the valve flow...wide open.

My memory, the one's that photographic,

has become my curse instead of my blessing.

I remember your words

our talks on the phone

perhaps, our conversations soon in person (?);

I remember...

verbatim.

I keep telling myself that the more I relive

the less they'll matter.

But all it does is clutter my brain with loves litter.

My emotions are a force of nature...

helter-skelter...

one minute I love you and wish you were here

the next I'm so mad ;

My infatuation is all consuming.

At times I know, I could yield to your touch once more;

other times, the thought of you makes me cry.

The hurt...oh, the hurt.

It's the only constant.

No matter what emotion is currently at play,

hurt is always they back beat.

I'm the strong one, damnit!!!!

This whirlpool of emotions makes me

so very ashamed.

The only conclusion I can draw,

I think I get off on the pain.



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Feb 18, 2013
 
WOW !

LIFE IS So INTENSE
HEARTs can be so SHATTERED

WE ALL BLEED RED and LOVE MATTERS

“ROCK ON ROCKERS!!”

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#751
Feb 18, 2013
 
Alias - Trish wrote:
WOW !
LIFE IS So INTENSE
HEARTs can be so SHATTERED
WE ALL BLEED RED and LOVE MATTERS
Ya know Trish..LIFE is INDEED intense..it takes EVERY emotion and feeling we possess to make it through the waking hours. Lives and hearts do get shattered WHEN an intruder breaks into your home or heart..Uninvited! If they were a Guest it a true loved one..THEY would have NOT caused YOU any pain or hurt. Yes, we ALL bleed red..No matter WHAT skin color you have and LOVE does MATTER.. if the One YOU Cherish loves YOU back!! Have a nice nite Trish!!

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