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Jan 1, 2013
 

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Quadrant questioning that questions the
inquisitive

Common chaos is a breath of fresh air indeed

wearing downtrodden dialect as a garment

Farm out fancy rebuttals for proof of penance

hark the humility & hoist humbled hymns

Hedonism helms a prison for the given and
dismissed

Produce pleads for seeds, allotted in constant
trance

Sculpt a hidden dance for the apex of a secrecy

lost in a language, generating a newer glyph

convalescent excellence to neglect a bigger
negligence

Exit to the left while detecting a deeper breadth

aphotic atrocities prompting phonics provoking
depth

More-so meager readings recording eager esoteric
elegies

Merged in medley: Mexican stand-off matrix mayhem

Tape the pillaged worm across the tattoo of
tempted tolerance

And paint millions of spermatozoa across the spine
of a willing temptress

Touching the epic empress while the empire ducks
and dodges

Impending evolutions revolting reverence &
revelation

“Spell out the word: E-J-A-C-U-L-A-T-I-O-N”

Only to 'cum' even closer to the conclusion of a
dry climax

Silence young man! Clean up your room, stop
leaving those sticky towelettes at the bottom of
the hamper

Switch to nursery urgent novelty wordplay:

Stamina grammar jam packed with amateurs
mastering the factors that act upon the actions

Flaccid acidic validity rapidly ravishing
authorial actors

Hotter flashes burying ashes in casket filled with
bastards

-Whew-.......Fuck,

Speed up and catch your breath
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Shades of gray, in the stars of darkness

A fallen tear ripples through the night

A matured, dusty road - wandering

Blindly In search of my soul’s moon light



The echoes past, I dare not address

For fear of shadows engulfing me

Slivers of vanished moments – reveals

The meadow by the old willow tree



A kiss, a touch, the awakened mist

Reflections on the silvery wake

The grave mere of profusion - wafting

Reels of silhouettes across the lake



In smooth gasping moments, I ponder

The cool, wavering blindness below

Silencing of the nights music – rings

New memories of reprieve bestow.......

NB:-- Storyline: This can be taken metaphorically or literally. One walks down a matured, dusty road in search of ones self; running from ones past shadows or old memories overtaking them.

Reflecting on memories like a movie reel by a meadow lake. So alone and lost, left with only one choice but to literally drown ones memories.

~DeVine.
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Trust is a bond,

One that must be acquired

Over a number of rough times.

And you, my dear,

Have only earned

A one-way trip out of my life.
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You feel with what your fingertips
would brush, with cocked brow
ravishing over painted lips.

You feel with what your gazing eyes
would see, with stolen glances
among the starlit skies.

It was you, at every turn,
with your soft heated breath,
enflames desire in which I yearn.

It was you, beneath the night
skies, who molded flesh against
flesh, becoming my guiding light.
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At night I dream of you,
Coming to be by my side.
I see your silhouette at first;
I watch your calm, quick glide.

Vivid images;
Pictures in my mind.
My night's love, my passion;
All in you I shall find.

Once again, you'll whisper to me,
"Hello, my dear. "
Your touch eases me,
Removing any fear.

Your gaze meets mine;
The warm look in your eyes,
It melts my heart. From now on
Nothing but blue skies!

Tonight you romance me;
Our bodies entwine.
You enter; I gasp!
Our souls combine.

A touch here, a tickle there,
It enthralls me; I am captivated.
Our bodies move, the motion constant;
My body's completely activated.

Throughout the night
Our passion flows,
Coming together,
My emotion grows.

For you, in dreams,
Oh, how I care.
But when morning comes,
I am left in despair.

Anther night gone and passed.
I awake in ecstasy all alone.
For you visit at night; In dreams you come.
And I dread the coming of a new dawn.
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The sweet taste of love
Still lingers in my mind
A succulent tasty morsel
A treasure worth its find

A wet and juicy fruit
That fills my mouth with joy
Like candy to a baby
An edible sexy toy

With nectar sweet as honey
A syrup of flowing silk
Like a bubbly kind of lava
As smooth as warm clear milk

It breathes with scented oils
Like a flower in the mist
And blossoms when caressed
By the feel of a lover's kiss

A dessert at its very best
When embraced with lots of love
I know I'll never get enough
Of this treat I'm thinking of
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FORGIVE ALL BUT SOME FORGIVING LIKE JESUS

ICE QUEEN MEDUSA

EVIL PEOPLE........PURE-EVIL

HEARTLESS BLESSINGS IN IGNORANCE UNINSURED LOSS KILLER

CURIOSITY ECLIPSE OF LOVE LOVE IS GONE

LOVE ANALYSIS MY TRUE LOVE FOR YOU TRUE MAGICAL LOVE TRUE LOVE IN HEART RARE TRUE LOVE

TRUE LOVE CAN NEVER HURT MISSING HURTS HURTS SO DEEP I HIDE MY HURTS

REPEATED HURTING VICIOUS CIRCLE DEMONS OF DARKNESS SENRYU :

DARK PAIN DARK PAIN DARKNESS DARK COLOURS

VICTORY OF DARKNESS DARK FORCES SUN AND WATER THE SUN

LOVE AND SUNLIGHT SUNFLOWER AND SUN SETTING SUN SINKING SUN SUNSET AND LIFE

EVERLASTING SUNSET SUNSET

MISCARRIAGES OF DREAMS OUR DREAMS PARADOXICAL DREAMS

TREE OF HATRED TREE OF LOVE FLOW OF LOVE KINDNESS AND MERCY

HYPOCRITES UTTER HOPELESSNESS PAST PAIN PAST IN A PINEBOX?

EVERLASTING PAST GHOSTS FROM THE PAST DON'T WANT TO WAKE UP IMMORTAL LOVE

IN LOVE WITH YOU TO BE EVERGREEN TREE LOSING LEAVES FALLING LEAF MIND READING?!!

BETRAYAL OF MIND WAVES AND THOUGHTS OUR THOUGHTS UNTOUCHABLE LOVE,

LIFE AND ETERNITY BORROWED TIME REASONS TO LIVE ON

I WANT TO KNOW LOOK AFTER YOUR HEART PAIN IN THE HEART AGONY OF HEART

LOVERS OF HEART WINNING HEART FOOTPRINTS IN THE HEART

DEPTH OF HEART IN LOVING

LOYALTY HEAVEN AND HELL

A MIRACLE RECURRING DEATH WARM GLOW

MY LOVE FOR YOU A GOD GIVEN GIFT

LOTUS AND WASP SILENCE A BIRD AND THE MOON

LOVE AND FRIENDSHIP WHAT IS FRIENDSHIP?

FRIENDS GOOD FRIENDSHIP TRUE FRIENDS FRIEND IN NEED A PEARL IN HEART?!!

JUST BE A FRIEND TOGETHER FOR THE LAST TIME

LAST MESSAGE LAST WISH........

~DeVine.

“Sexy P.H. & Jersey Boy”

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Since: Mar 12

Heavenly SUN shine!!!!!

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Giving someone all your love is never an assurance that they'll love you back.Dont expect love in return,just wait for it to grow in their heart,but if it doesnt be content it grew in yours...Yes so true..

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What a dumbazz ^^^^^

Rotflmao !
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What a dumber dumbazz ^^^^

Rothflmao !

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Heavenly SUN shine!!!!!

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Jan 3, 2013
 
yes LB I was at one time ...have learned alot lately..Have a great night..

Being with no one is better than being with the wrong ones.Sometimes those who fly solo have the strongets wings...
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Jan 3, 2013
 
Princess Hey wrote:
yes LB I was at one time ...have learned alot lately..Have a great night..
Being with no one is better than being with the wrong ones.Sometimes those who fly solo have the strongets wings...
OMG.....you're here again.....

please GO AWAY!!!
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My lips were buds of innocence until you
came one day
And drew a fountain from my heart and
careless went your way,

My lips were hungry, eager flowers curved
in ecstatic bliss
To gather the soft sweetness of my next
lover’s kiss.

My lips were luscious ripeness of a crushed
and poisoned vine
When you bent your lips upon me and my soft
ones clung to thine

My lips are withering fading flowers, full
weary unto death
Dew without moisture is thy kiss; wind
without heat thy breath.

A fugitive tear wells up from my eyes and
is secretly, silently shed.
Are lips that once were innocent, so
withered, so parched, so dead?
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I want to write
I want to write the songs of my people.
I want to hear them singing melodies in the dark.
I want to catch the last floating strains from their sob-torn
throats.
I want to frame their dreams into words; their souls into
notes.
I want to catch their sunshine laughter in a bowl;
fling dark hands to a darker sky
and fill them full of stars
then crush and mix such lights till they become
a mirrored pool of brilliance in the dawn.
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I did not know that you had the power to
hurt me,
I think I must have bequeathed it to you
unknowingly
One starlit night when I read the secret in
your eyes.
Did you read mine? I know now that you did.
Use your power gently, beloved, for in your
hands it becomes a merciless whip.

I did not know that you had the power to
make me happy,
I think I must have bequeathed it to you
unconsciously
In the warm darkness when your lips met mine
and pressed their weight of love on them.
Did your soul leap to meet mine? I know now
that it did.
Use your power gently, beloved, lest in your
hands it grows too great for me.
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Today,
The sea has its own religion,
It is as blue
As an acori bead
I rubbed in my hand.

I think
Of swimming out
for miles
and miles in prayer.

I think
Of never struggling back
In doubt.

As though
In a world like this
Love starts over and over again.
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false february spring
fools trees into blooming
early spring's irish creeks
sneak into my blood streams

old melodies and stories
the spring's cheap champagne
carries light memories

my oh my
her name was computer science
she was a calculating type
but we formed a heavenly alliance
now I miss her bits and bytes

I must sing to her
(any pretext will do)
don't kid yourself
that I was in love with you
I kid myself
that I wasn't in love with you.

old melodies and stories
the spring's cheap champagne
carries light memories

I know food and evenings and dance
but words -- I split in two
I don't know who I am
and who was in love with you
I know evenings and champagne and dance
but I am lost in the land of romance

welcome (!) the early spring
in my late autumn
I bathe in champagne bubbles
on my way to the bottom
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Panties damp
against yours lips;
your body jumping
against my fingertips;
your moans
echo in my ears;

our bodies moving with a pace
that belies our years;
your mind awash
with desire
as I attempt to satsify
your inner fire.

“Sexy P.H. & Jersey Boy”

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Learn to love with all your heart and accept the unloveable side of others.For anyone can love a rose,but it takes a great heart to include the throns...so true...
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Moody jazz,
Gershwin maybe,
assages ears candles create playfull shadows where
mysteries thrive,
edges of inanimate objects,
softened by your sultry curves
milky your skin shone beneath your
negligea,
palpable desire lingers in the air,
dance as ritual,we engage in gracefull
motion.

artistic in gesture,electric in touch
our embrace overwhelmes sences,
waves of pleasure satiate yearnings,fulfilling
itself,
strive to prolong exstatic impulses
crescendo releases at apex of our love.

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