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Passing by the park of dreams
Equal poles and opposite
Met and danced to different tunes
Strange now to remember it.

Walking through a field of mines
Souls in harmony at play
Things we never asked to know
Strange to think of it today.

Dreams that pass beyond the fog
Reaching clarity to fly
Look back down with secret smiles
Strange to think it was a lie.
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Dec 6, 2012
 

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She said;
"I was there.

Left my taste
in his mouth.

My flavor,
on his lips.

Revlon Summer Bronze
on the pillowcase,
and his blue glass piece.

He left my price,
on the dresser.

His sin
in my temptation
of anything goes.

His wedding ring
on the hotel nightstand
with a handwritten
Thank You note."

“There Are Angels Among Us”

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yes you maybe out of my sight but never out of my mind!!!
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Wish I could hold a dream for you
If I did I know it would help you through
Itís never easy when the heart gets in the way
Wish I could hold you close and take your pain away

Wish I could let your fears subside
Every night when youíre alone and need to cry
Itís not like the damage has to be the end
Wish I could hold you close, my friend

Itís never fair when the world turns upside down
Itís never clear when the heart is in the lost and found

Wish I could hold my breath for you
If I did I know we could find a higher latitude
Itís never easy when the pain and heart are one
Wish I could mend your heart and help you carry on

Wish I could make a dream for you
If I did I know we would be at a different altitude
Itís never easy when the heart feels so betrayed
Wish I could take your pain away
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Have I ever told you
that if I sit really still and silent,
sometimes. I like to think
I can hear your heart beating
in time with mine?

Have I ever told you
that when I watch you speak to me
through lines and cords,
and bytes and ram,
I imagine
your voice,
whispering into my ear?

Have I ever told you
that I wait out each day
in anticipation,
wanting
only an hour or two,
just a second in space and time,
to feel close to you?

Have I ever told you
that there has been times,
when I ached for you,
ached for you so badly,
that the emotions overwhelmed me..
and so I sat and cried?

Have I ever told you
that sometimes,
I will reach out,
touching your name
on this cold screen before me,
wishing
I could reach in
and pull you to me?

Have I ever told you
that after the first time I heard
the sound of your voice,
thousands of miles away,
I sat up all night,
turning the conversation over and over
in my mind,
examining it,
like some newly discovered species of flower?

Have I ever told you
that I would give everything up,
just for one night
to be able to lay near you,
to feel your chest rise and fall
with each breath you take,
just to know that you are real?

Have I ever told you
that I dream of you often,
I dream of you reaching out
and touching my hand,
simply to let me know
that you are there,
and everything is okay?

Have I ever told you,
have I still yet to tell you ...
that I love you?

A beautiful poem.... eh ?

The feelings were true,
but the lies took it awayÖ
Idk but I can't sleep
and I been sitting here thinking Ö
I dont want to go back in time

I just am so sorryÖ

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The hardest thing about dreaming about someone you love is to wake up,but if the only place I could see you was in my dreams,I would sleep forever and never ever wake up...
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Princess Hey wrote:
The hardest thing about dreaming about someone you love is to wake up,but if the only place I could see you was in my dreams,I would sleep forever and never ever wake up...
Itís hard to pretend you love someone if you really donít, but itís harder to pretend you donít love someone if you really do.

Relationships are like glass. Sometimes itís better to leave them broken than try to hurt yourself putting it back together...

PS:- Oh, hey Princess (BTW).....Sometimes you need a little encouragementÖ even if its from the person you never thought it would come from....(wink, wink )

bye xo

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Sometimes the one uplifting needs uplifted..no one is perfect we are all only human..Thanks..Love stinks sometimes but we all do it..we all always will no matter what happens..I will never give my heart again unless its for sure.I never pretend, its hard enough as it is, then sharing your heart felt secrets only to have them killed..Maybe we dont know whats there in front of us because we dont want to see.I guess better left like it is and just go away..TY..Later..XO (winks) back.Just saying before I go..(LY)...
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Sometimes the sun sets over
And we can't see eachother
Sometimes the moon will get closer
And make warmer our cold shoulders

Don't promise tokens of love
Don't promise none of the above
But that maybe we
Can trust in time
Trust in time
To take
To take one more step for us
To take
To take one more breath for us

Don't promise, just walk with me to the end of the path
And if my legs get weak, don't promise to take me back

Sometimes, the heart beats loudly,
But softly is when it's best,
Offers private choir in our chests.
And it's between you and me, not the rest
So don't go making promises.
Just walk with me to where the sun sets.
Where the sun sets,
And the moon gets closer.

Trust in time
To take
To take one more step for us
To take
To take one more breath for us

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Is this real or in my dreams,
my worlds unraveling at the seams,
you have my heart now take my soul.
This Cyber love is what makes me whole.
I cant believe whats happening to me.
Your face so perfect that I've never seen.
Your lips so soft I may never touch.
I only feel the keyboard I clutch.
I need you now I need you forever.
In an electric world to be together.
A surreal place that plays with the mind.
In a cloned world of two of a kind.
I consume your words,they filter inside.
No matter what i do I cant seem to hide.
My trembling hands awaiting the rush.
When I feel you near to resume the crush.
You're my everything my unyeilding desire,
The spark to the match before it lights fire.
The angel within that whispers my name controlling the moves in this wicked game.
This Cyber love is why I awake.
This cyber love is my escape.
The time has come I feel it in my spine.
when I look towards the light and see you online!!!!
not written by me I found this and wanted to share. it
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ďSENSITIVEĒ

Last night I lost track of all
my dream hidden
lost time
my beating heart
my love is misunderstood
tonight Iím sensitive!.

Last night I lost my memory thinking
worn my memory,
hours with you,
my heart consecrated
my love is infinite and conquered
tonight Iím sensitive!.

There are so many things in me,
that want to share,
there are so many things I like,
what I like most is in you,
there are so many things I want to feel,
what I feel is for you!.

Last night I lost track of everything,
Last night I lost the notion of all,
my mind flying,
sound lost,
the night ended,
my heart possessed and delivered,
Love is my gift,
tonight Iím sensitive!.

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If there is a heaven out there somewhere,its a place where we never have to say goodbye!!!
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I find you
in a marble hallway,
surrounded by petticoats
and translucent dreams;
you are seated
on the third step,
playing with jigsaw pieces
that fell
from a broken picture
of me...

In your eyes I see
wishes and tomorrows,
specks of time
floating in the iris,
whilst the past
is burried in the pupil,
falling deeper
with each blink of sunlight.

Your hands
torn by rugged glass,
wrapped in silk,
save for the thumbs,
swathed in cotton,
turning vibrant pink;
you were never fond
of the gift of touch
embedded in the tips..

But the days are moving
between stone pillars,
elevated by your patience,
the gift that brought you
to this place,
when long nights stole
the silent footprints
leading from your destination
of cold iron gates.

Will you stay here
among the enchanted?
I have to go
but am glad I saw you
were you feel happy,
talking to your wildest dreams
and giving names
to your sparkling jewels
were they lay on your lap.
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Did I lead you astray ?
Don't speak...

Did I touch you too much?
Don't speak...

Did I move too quickly
Don't speak...

Did I play out of tune?
Don't speak...

Did I leave you to cry?
Don't speak...

Did I shout too soft?
Don't speak...

Did I blunt your sexuality?
Don't speak...

Did I ask too much of you?
Don't speak...

No

Don't speak

I cannot hear you.
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I pick up your tears

you comb through my hair

our passion flows

between dark and fair;

I wrote you these poems

in hope of a kiss,

but the nights you gave me

are lost in the mist.

Your mirror is broken

my reflection a maze

I fold into your arms

and the night is a haze

you tell me I'm safe here

as I lay down my head

and search through the labyrinth

you made in this bed.

If the night is my keep

I will stay were I am,

soaked in exerction

and peppered with calm;

if life gave me patience

to journey this far

I can wait until morning

to know who you are.

~DeVine.
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The blue dress hangs, lifeless, smeared lipstick on opaque glass covering the last words he wrote, a simple valentine in red, never seen by eyes that cried in dark alleyways on dark lonely streets...

Watching the old limp into evermore, softly losing the sweat of sexual need.

She remembers kissing the window in momentary expectation...planning the day with touch and smile..

Only to realise he was only a shadow no longer cast where she stands waiting for his words to leave her head.

She sits cross-legged in needy fulfilment, her day of rest stretched out to include any moment she cannot move.

Someone with tender fingers leaves a trail across her spine, collecting the shivers she happily discards to a tune from a distant voice.

This is her year of solitude, planned out with scratchy records giving directions only she recalls written on her wedding finger.

The door to her resting place closes, leaving her in the usual dim corner.

This is the graveyard of wood
Where I watched the sun split in two,

This is the path were I stood,
And had my first vision of you;

I was the young man with the animal heart
You were the older angel in white,

I felt blind to a world torn apart,
You came to restore my sight.

I fell to my knees and prayed for your hand,
My soul poured to you like water,

You were the light that made me understand,
I was freed from the life of a prisoner.

So to you now, my poems I write,
and the songs I sing,

Safe beneath your angel wing.

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The greatest gift you can give someone is to believe in them!!!!

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Princess Hey wrote:
The greatest gift you can give someone is to believe in them!!!!
Sooo TRUE..Princess Hey...WHAT IF? WHAT IF..we hadn't BELIEVED in the inventors of EVERYTHING that makes OUR life WHAT it is today??? Have a GROOVY nite, Chick...

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Dec 13, 2012
 
TY,CC..you have a great night as well..hope your day was good..mine was sad..:O(

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Princess Hey wrote:
TY,CC..you have a great night as well..hope your day was good..mine was sad..:O(
WHAT THE FREAK...DO YOU Mean that your day Was Sad??? I did have an "uneasy" day..felt like I was being pulled in different directions...like Taffy Pulling...couldn't get a handle on it..
FINALLY...a shot of Lime Vodka... calmed meeee down. FEEL BETTER..(((HUGS)))...LY...

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