LOVE and OTHER BRUISES

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Nov 18, 2012
 
It was predetermined
The magic connection
The intellectual agreement
The steady rhyme of pulse rates

I can't recall the day date or time
I have no regrets whatsoever though
It's called fate
And it brought us together

It was love at first sight
Different views,same agreements
Independent decisions
Mutual love and respect

Life is a bitch and am having my turn at "her"
Ever since we bumped into each other
Pain is a rare feeling for me
For better for worse

Looking back at my life before I met you
Erase and rewind
Fast-forward if possible
You play the major role

Here and now
There and then
I live in the present
Bygones are fuckin' bygones and nothing else

The warmest person I have encountered
Giving love a whole new meaning
Giving flesh to the bones
Putting a smile where it was missing

Can you fall in love with someone you've never met?
Can you be obsessed with the unknown?
Can you make plans with a stranger?
I know for a fact that you can......

I love her with all my strength
I adore her with all my desires
Call it obsession
I call it love

“Eleanor, Where is your heart?!”

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Nov 18, 2012
 

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SOBRIQUET DeVINE wrote:
It was predetermined
The magic connection
The intellectual agreement
The steady rhyme of pulse rates
I can't recall the day date or time
I have no regrets whatsoever though
It's called fate
And it brought us together
It was love at first sight
Different views,same agreements
Independent decisions
Mutual love and respect
Life is a bitch and am having my turn at "her"
Ever since we bumped into each other
Pain is a rare feeling for me
For better for worse
Looking back at my life before I met you
Erase and rewind
Fast-forward if possible
You play the major role
Here and now
There and then
I live in the present
Bygones are fuckin' bygones and nothing else
The warmest person I have encountered
Giving love a whole new meaning
Giving flesh to the bones
Putting a smile where it was missing
Can you fall in love with someone you've never met?
Can you be obsessed with the unknown?
Can you make plans with a stranger?
I know for a fact that you can......
I love her with all my strength
I adore her with all my desires
Call it obsession
I call it love
Don't show this one to your wife.

“I Wish 4 U Always Blue Skies”

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Nov 18, 2012
 

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Go for someone whoses not only proud and glad to have you but will also take the risk and effort just to be with you.....
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To my second favourite memory,
oh, she laid me long and cool,
led me to betray myself
and call myself a fool.

The rhetoric of gesture
that she used to raise my soul...
but the unclear meanings seized me
in some void, embodied whole.

Her movements were a monologue
defying all the world
to cipher any meanings
in her body's sweeping, skirled.

With her on the plateaus high,
to fill the void with words
I destroyed her self-born speaking
with precise, pedantic verbs.

That strangled our fine dialogue,
and finally laid it down
grammatically correct and all,
dressed in syntax' flaxen gown.

But now? She speaks no words
at all to me. Can I translate?
The silence is all hectic.
Love became debate.
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Nov 21, 2012
 

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I fish wrote:
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Don't show this one to your wife.
If I had a wife I would......why not, what's your reason for saying that ?
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She was a passing remark
to a very old desire.

She was willing, spilling her soul
on my heart, and she did gyre
in the smokiness of the room
as never another, like as not, will loom.

She was learning, making
herself in the undertaking,
so beautifully it was a gift.

All that night time we did drift
on the timelessness. That lark.

It was not impossible to tire
but it was an extended roll
on an ocean bed of fire;
in which she discerned a kind of doom -
she stopped her whirling on the sand dune,
went back to her other man waiting
there within the shadows of her flaking.

And as her parting remark
did lift her, I endured that rift
within the lute.......

Still I see that lark.

“I Wish 4 U Always Blue Skies”

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If someone is strong enough to bring you down then show them you are strong enough to get up..
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We danced as lovers dance
to music only we had heard.
A hot beat to which we moved
in perfect time,
with perfect synch.
Unhurried though each driven on,
both knowing how the dance would end.

We shared the lead
as the tempo quickened.
You followed me,
I followed you,
each wanting that conclusion
as ageless passion demands its due.
Our cries loud as bodies yield,
sounds from deep within escaped
to alert close neighbors
to the simultaneous climax of our dance.

The music softened,
mellow in its final strains.
We curled together our contented bodies,
our cries at last subdued,
and only now a gentle purring.
In this quietness our muffled moans yell out
a thousand words of utter joy,
in celebration of our dance,
in recognition of our love.
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Invitation given with thought and care,

Only one request sent to this affair.

Let us together quench this mad desire,

This tide of passion, this lingering fire.

At the epicenter of emotion,

Our bodies will spin, dance in slow motion.

Pulse-pounding heat shall make our torsos shake

With echoing rapture, my handsome rake.



When you see my hands clench and hear my smile,

When you feel my body quake all the while,

Impale me with your sword and swear to all,

“There’s never been anything like her thrall…

Riding the tide of our lovers’ passion

Bodies humming with desire, I ration

My lust, though she permits everything,”

And I will confess that you are my king.



A celebration of our senses starts.

The rocket’s last glare as all sense departs.

Pulses pounding in resounding rapture,

Arms wrapped around each other to capture

Strained muscles under the skin, panting breaths,

Nearly tumultuous lust calling death’s

Silent victory; now slower motion—

Sweet and true—as they take the devotion;

Him, his playful and sensual sweetheart,

Her, her own handsome and loving DeVine.

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#442
Nov 22, 2012
 
happy thanksgiving to everybody..enjoy and please be carefull ILY guys...:O)
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There are days when

sliding into

the dream world of the scent

of your skin

the taste

of your tongue

is the only lesson I need



On being human

on breath and

breathing

laughing

loving

dying



and so this day

ends

as it began



in the prayer

of your

sweetest

kiss

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my day was good and pray that all you guys had a great one too.You know we all have alot to be blessed and thankful for.Just waking up every morning we are blessed..still loving you guys so much..my bestests..so glad I found my way over to offbeat and met all you guys..You are all the best.
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(She........)

I could say that he strums me like a bass
or that he opens me like a red zinnia

Truth is,
there's nothing dainty about it

He has broad, heavy hands,
thick fingers, callused,
from sculpting for life,
carpentry and house repairs
for a living

I always watch his forearm
when he puts his hand
between my thighs

I can't prove it,
but I swear, seeing
the muscles clench and flex
accounts for at least half
the wave that washes over me,
for lack of a better euphemism

He knows exactly what to do

God, I love his hands!

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#446
Nov 23, 2012
 
sometimes when the people you love hurt you the most,its better to stay quiet because if your love wasnt enough ,do you think your words will matter????
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Do I dare share with you my love this secret
The thing above all else that fills me with fear at this moment

Leaves me feeling so petrified and frightened
Like the little boy I once was so very long ago

Would it make you lose respect, think me weak
Cause me to fall from esteem in your eyes

I'm sure you could try to guess, figure it out
Maybe it was fear of the unknown, surrounded by danger

Perhaps you would go with failure, being unmasked
Revealing all of this self-doubt and uncertainty

Wrestling with my own mortality, the stalking of death
Wondering if my life had purpose or that God would approve

Then again it could be losing a loved one
Or falling out of love or being discarded for another

While all good hunches, none are the truth
You see it's something happening more often than you think

It is the moment after bliss, while I am still coupled with you
As I feel my strength, my manhood soften, la petite morte

For then I am naked, vulnerable, and scared
Lying helpless in your arms, overwhelmed

Drowning in feelings and sensations that I normally tamp down
Now a swim in a great ocean of emotionality, fighting heaving waves

Thankfully you are always there with me, holding me tight
Gently caressing my back and shoulders, soothing me

It is only just now that it dawns on me, goosebump realization
That you have known this all along and even love me deeply for it

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No matter what,once in your life someone will hurt you.That someone will take all that you are,and rip it into pieces and they won't even watch where the pieces land.But through the breakdown,you'll learn something about yourself.You'll learn that you're strong and no matter how hard they destroy you,that you can conquer anyone!!!!
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A devious demented diatribe
About the stars falling from the sky
And landing in your eyes
I still feel the touch
Of your hand in mine
Over the years of darkness
Through the years of bliss
All of the things
I wanted to say to you
Hidden in the clouds
Derided by the sun
Anticipated by the night
I wish the world would stop
And we could make a swift exit
Swept up in our more pleasant fantasies
Circumventing the pain in our souls
Augmented by a starry night
That we share together
I would be with you
Throughout all of your days
However bleak or sweet
Forever entwined together
In our most private solitude
Where we shut out the world
And speak to each other
Through our fragile hearts
As we prove our love
To each other
And to the world
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Perceiving an eclipse
A bitter end followed by a new beginning
Caressing your face in my hands
I see the emotions in your eyes
Communication without speaking
Feeling our way wordlessly
The way you blush and understand instinctively
The world does not exist between us
Nor the hearts that have been broken
Evolution of desire
Accepting the inevitable
A reality hidden in the present
To be unleashed in the near future
Take my name as a lion hunts his prey
Let the jaded teardrops fall
I see the angel in you
Presiding over a fanciful cabaret
The glitter fading in the starlight
Breaking into the realm of abandon
Feel my flesh against yours
The softness of your skin appreciated
The wetness of your mouth
Your breath upon me
Hold a dream hostage
Let time decide who rules
I feel your moist fur
Triangulation of access
I want my animal spirit
To penetrate your soul....

~DeVine.

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Life is everything when the person you love miss you in your absence,but life is nothing when they miss to understand your importance in your presence.
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The moon has become a dancer
at this festival of love.
This dance of light,

This sacred blessing,
This divine love,
beckons us
to a world beyond
only lovers can see
with their eyes of fiery passion.

They are the chosen ones
who have surrendered.
Once they were particles of light
now they are the radiant sun.

They have left behind
the world of deceitful games.
They are the privileged lovers
who create a new world
with their eyes of fiery passion.

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