Adrian DeVine

The Gap, Australia

#329 Oct 8, 2012
Sorry to all those whom I ever hated......
I thought you were my enemies....
It took me a while to realise that real enemies of mine lie not outside...
But deep within inside.....
In the dark corners of my own psyche....

“Want A Friend, Be One”

Level 9

Since: Mar 12

You'll Know Your True Friends.

#330 Oct 8, 2012
Good looks fade,but a good heart keeps you beautiful
Adrian DeVine

The Gap, Australia

#331 Oct 8, 2012
IReasonablyI wrote:
<quoted text>
I've told you before, I don't know if you caught it.
I appreciate your talent.
A writers spirit is evident with every word you post.
It is known to those who read how you feel today. Your
admirers all agree. What more do I want to say?
It doesn't feel like it is enough yet.
Readers and Writers turn a good number of
us on and you do that, and more.
As for the other's warnings -- it's like when Dad and
Mom told me not to do something: peaks the interest for
sure, but I didn't need them to make up my mind for me.
Look forward to always taking a peak at your works. I
won't pretend ... I wish you were more clear which are
your very own thoughts and phrases. It wouldn't matter
much except for getting acquainted is already a challenge
and I know you understand my meaning.

Thank you so much for your thoughtful message.

It means a lot to me, that you would take the time out of your morning or afternoon or night or whatever time it was where you are to write to me and that you would say such kind things in your correspondence, and poetry here.

I sincerely appologize for my belated reply, and my acknowledgement of your ever so sweet and fugacious words, and I hope that you will forgive my apparent procrastination.

The magnanimity of people I know only through the internet, including yourself, truly amazes me.

Thank you so much for making my evening.

Warm Regards,

Adrian (DeVine) Knight.

“Want A Friend, Be One”

Level 9

Since: Mar 12

You'll Know Your True Friends.

#332 Oct 8, 2012
A tongue has no bones but is strong enough to break a heart,so be careful with your words!!!
Adrian DeVine

The Gap, Australia

#333 Oct 10, 2012

No one can take your place with me,
And time has proven that I'm right.
There's no place I'd rather be,
Than at your place for the night.

No time can pass your sight unseen
No moment steals away unfound.
Lifetime lived in such a dream,
Floats like a feather to the ground.

And for the first time I've been seeing,
The things I'd never notice, without you.
And for the first time I'm discovering
The things I used to treasure about you....

The birds like leaves on Winterwood,
Sing hopeful songs on dismal days.
They've learned to live life as they should.
They are at peace with natures ways.

You are as natural as the night,
And all that springs from you is good.
And the children born beneath your light,
Are like the birds on Winterwood.

Words & Music by Don McLean.
Adrian DeVine

The Gap, Australia

#334 Oct 10, 2012
Love is much like a wild rose,
beautiful and calm,
but willing to draw blood in its defense.......
Mark A. Overby.

Take my hand and lead the way;
Tell me all you want to say.

Whisper softly in my ear
All those things I want to hear.

Kiss my lips and touch my skin;
Bring out the passions deep within.

Pull me close and hold me near;
Take away my pain and fear.

In the darkness of the night;
Be my beacon, shine your light.

In the brightness of the sun,
Show me that you are the one.

Give me wings so I may fly;
For I can soar when you're nearby.

Enter my heart, break down the wall,
It's time for me to watch it fall.

I've been a prisoner, can't you see?
Break by chains and set me free....

Strip me of my armor tight;
You'll find I won't put up a fight.

Release my soul held deep within.....
I'm ready now....let love begin.

Ruth Kephart.
Adrian DeVine

The Gap, Australia

#335 Oct 10, 2012

Love is.... A strange and winding road

Love is.... A heavy burdened load

Love is.... An oddly tragic song

Love is.... A way to right a wrong

Love is.... The bright sun on a cloudy day

Love is.... A timeless, foggy haze

Love is.... A way to pass the time

Love is.... A punctuated line

Love is.... A tearful kiss goodbye

Love is.... A lilting, lustful sigh

Love is.... A sweat soaked, dirty sheet

Love is.... Our eyes when ere they meet

Love is.... A starry, moonlight night

Love is.... The reason why we fight

Love is.... This thing I feel for you.....

In hopes that You will Love Me too
Adrian DeVine

The Gap, Australia

#336 Oct 10, 2012

She fed him
love and affection
like dollops of whipped cream
smothering him in sweetness....

He soaked it up
like Drambuie liqueur on sponge cake
hoarding it in
his empty soul...

They sorta survived that way
in a lopsided balance
until her bowl was empty
and his quite full.

Then someone touched
her cheek
telling her she was special
and for the first time
she tasted the sweetness of cream.

“Want A Friend, Be One”

Level 9

Since: Mar 12

You'll Know Your True Friends.

#337 Oct 10, 2012
You can stay in your corner of the forest waiting for others to come to you.You have to go to them sometimes!!!!
Adrian DeVine

The Gap, Australia

#338 Oct 13, 2012
I was dark as a gigantic shadowed mountain

I was impenetrable like a frozen ocean

I was silent like cactuses in a desert of nothingness

I was absent as the cold sleep of death

I was static like an atom between galaxies

But I was not alone, not abandoned

We were lovers, young and passionate

We made love, through and through

Our bodies flew away in the agony of pleasure

Then we both, in the horizon of thought

Disappeared like gods behind the chaos of creation.
Adrian DeVine

The Gap, Australia

#339 Oct 13, 2012
If the world has no love
No sweetness nor sorrow
If the days would rain
Like featureless water
Bountiful and boundless
What purpose shall we serve
In this cloud of haze –
In breathing without air
Dreaming without dreams
We find ourselves choiceless
In this flame un-lit
With nothing here

Nothing indeed....

“Want A Friend, Be One”

Level 9

Since: Mar 12

You'll Know Your True Friends.

#340 Oct 13, 2012
The greatest thing in life is finding someone who knows all your mistakes and differences and still finds you absolutely amazing!!!
Adrian DeVine

The Gap, Australia

#341 Oct 16, 2012
I want to take your face in my hands
Tell you what you mean to me
Look deeply into your starry eyes
Bury my face in your flesh

Don't say it's the time to be alone
Let me take you to the ground
Tear up all the years between you and me
Rip each other's hair out

Life is just a waste without your smile
I feel your body against mine
As if it were yesterday coming alive
Not caring who is watching us

An image for all time
I knew your name before anyone
Living in my eternal dreams
To me you mean everything

Now I'll rip a hole in my heart
So you can put some love inside
I never want to feel your tears on mine
Unless the pleasure is unendurable

Reach deep inside with your hands
Take my heart and make me understand
I want to feel your love again
Never going to hurt you
Adrian DeVine

The Gap, Australia

#342 Oct 16, 2012
I will read that story
Promise you I will
The one about how you felt
In the morning haze

Counting all of our lovers' graves
The sky can bleed the sunset
Turn the moon against us
Drag our sorrows into the night

Forever in search of another day
That shone upon our faces
Warming our flesh
As we welcomed the sun

There is a boldness in touch
A misguided reverie in pain
I would welcome you in my arms
In the darkness

The sun rising
A pure feeling of joy
Fueling the earth
Making us whole

Not content to sit in the shadows
During a radiant dawn
Bask in the light
Embrace it

“Want A Friend, Be One”

Level 9

Since: Mar 12

You'll Know Your True Friends.

#343 Oct 16, 2012
If you ask me how long I'll be your friend? My answer will be ,I dont know cause I really dont know which one is longer,Forever or Always!!!


“Just a lil' humor there.....”

Since: Sep 12

OR NOT .... <[;-)

#344 Oct 16, 2012
One day I fell in love
It felt good like I know that it should
Then one day you fell out of love
And it hurt all over as it could.

Coulda, Shoulda, Woulda if I only knew how
Never should have called your mother a cow.

How Now are we to live
You were always there to take what I had to give.

I'm not a poet
Yes, I already know it.

Love I called out to thee
Where is it now when I'm ready to see.
Just be patient - your day will come
On those few words I may never agree.

Haven't met the right one
Aren't I getting to old to count on that line?
Oh to feel that imaginary love again
Wouldn't that be so fine.

Bla bla bla BLA.

“Smokin' Hot'n'Feelin' Groovy”

Level 9

Since: Apr 12

Here, There, and Everywhere,..

#345 Oct 16, 2012
Love goes Hand in Hand,... Other Bruises go Fist in Fist,...
Adrian DeVine

The Gap, Australia

#346 Oct 16, 2012
I hear those words
I want to stamp them out
Shred the lies
until there is no doubt
Love is a word
that remains in flames
Spinning around
in all of our games

won't get us too far

Drowning in the water
of pagan romanticism

Slice up the veins
that lead to our hearts

Push each other
until there is no way out

We stand staring
into each other's eyes

There is nothing left
of those outrageous lies

Take me down
before we both break


“Just a lil' humor there.....”

Since: Sep 12

OR NOT .... <[;-)

#347 Oct 16, 2012
A hand out is not what I seek
It's always nice to have a Helping Hand on occasion.

Turn away do not look
I'm feeling vulnerable - well maybe just a peek.

Peak, tweek, geek
what does it matter
When all of a sudden there came a clatter.

Big fat guy in a red suit
Calling me a HO HO HO HO
I ran after him in heavy pursuit.

Silly Nilly, I thought it was her name
So confusing it was to learn her little game.

“Want A Friend, Be One”

Level 9

Since: Mar 12

You'll Know Your True Friends.

#348 Oct 16, 2012
I dont need a perfect one,I just need someone who can make me feel that I'm the only one!!!!

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