FADED LOVE and LOVE LOST

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KNIGHT DEVINE

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#347
Dec 10, 2012
 
LOVE AFLOAT

on the

THE LOVE BOAT

thats the.......

"DAWN PRINCESS."

http://youtu.be/tuZD02chS7o

“I Wish 4 U Always Blue Skies”

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Dec 10, 2012
 
No Its not "KD" Im sorry..this is my name "DDW"I told you register and you will Know..Thats all I can do for now..or give me your email address hows that..
KNIGHT DEVINE

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Dec 10, 2012
 

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Feed, my beloved
sleepy and prudent
caress with utter care
with assurance
and, yes, with love.

No need for haste
for the night dreams
in its silent slumber,
dreams that spun the stars
into the velvet sky
aware of life and death
as they gleam and flicker.

Let each drop
nourish your ethereal body
and enslave your soul
into the depths of hunger.
Let them seep into your flesh
and flush you
with evanescent life.

Invade his thoughts
if you will
and savor the desperation
of your victim's heart,
loathsome
yet beseeching.

Wring him dry
and be thankful
that this vile banquet
is for us alone.

Ours to endure.
Ours to bargain.
KNIGHT DEVINE

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#350
Dec 10, 2012
 
Princess Hey wrote:
No Its not "KD" Im sorry..this is my name "DDW"I told you register and you will Know..Thats all I can do for now..or give me your email address hows that..
I cannot register......I do not have an account of my own.

that's how that is......however there is another way.

PS: Would you leave your e-mail address here for all and sundry to see and exploit ?......I very much doubt it
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#351
Dec 11, 2012
 
from morning's
first light
to evening's
last star
always remember
how special you are.

Adrian.

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Just a thought..No didnt think so..worth a try..no dont believe anybody would you are right..:O)..

I know everything happens for a reason,just wish I knew what the reason was!!!
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Dec 11, 2012
 
As I lay me down to eat
I pray her puss don't smell like feet
If it smells to bad to lick
I pray she likes sucking d--*

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Dec 11, 2012
 
Nothing in this world worth having comes easy!!!
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Uninvited, the thoughts of you stayed too late in my head,

So I want to bed, dreaming you hard, hard, woke with your name, like tears, soft, salt, on my lips, the sound of its bright syllables, like a charm, like a spell.

Falling in love is glamorous hell;

The crouched, parched heart like a tiger ready to kill;

A flame's fierce licks under the skin.

Into my life, larger than life, beautiful, you strolled in.

I hid in my ordinary days, in the long grass of routine, in my camouflage rooms.

You sprawled in my gaze, staring back from anyone's face, from the shape of a cloud, from the pining, earth-struck moon which gapes at me.

And I open the bedroom door...the curtains stir..

There you are, on the bed, like a gift, like a touchable dream.

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You can break down a woman temperarily,but a real woman will always pickup the pieces,rebuild herself,and come back stronger than ever.!!!!
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My Secret

I have a secret something i need to share.

Sometimes i'm not as stong as I appear.

My heart is fragile and terrifed to trust.

I've fallen in love, watched as it turned to dust.

I've always gave my all,they took never offering me anything but pain.

They told me lies, twisted the truth untill I felt like I was going insane.

So many broken promises and forgotten dreams lost.

Never matter to them because my heartache was the cost.
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I want to clasp you to my heart
but my arm doesn't move.

I want to tell you words of love
but my lips don't move.

The love in me
has let my right hand forget

its cunning and my tongue cleaves
to the roof of my mouth.

What shall I do?
I'll hold you with my left arm

and keep silent until
you hear me.
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Can't save her

He wants her

But her soul

Is unforsaken

To his motion kiss

Her skin embraces

Her blacken iris

Her violet strands

Cover his neck

As he feels

The necture of his blood

On her wicked lips

He wants what he can't have

He wants her

But she will out live

His passionate

Love

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I wonder if sometimes in the dusk,

When the brave lights that gild thy evenings

Have not yet been touched with flame,

I wonder if sometimes in the dusk

Thou rememberest a time,

A time when thou loved me

And our love was to thee all?

Is the memory rubbish now?

An old grown

Worn in an age of other fashions?

Woe is me, oh, lost one,

For that love is not to me

A supernal dream,

White, white, white with many suns.

-Stephen Crane
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She glanced my way,
grew tiresome of being
a loner in the daydreams.

Our faces met,
the moment
perfect like sun rays
upon quiet streams.
Didn't have to do much
exploring based on
curiosity of mine.
To realize that,
she's why I'd rather
be deaf than blind.

Her hairline flowed
smoothly,
crashing, and tickling
into hooked shaped ear
lobes.
I lost count of her
strands of hair strips,
that dangled down
hollowed cheekbones
like waterfalls over hidden
stone.
Quickly I vanished into
hypnotic pupils,
pulling attention in
deeper.

Still suprised of
my escape,
yet oddly disappointed.
She is an advertisement
appointed,
for easily appealed viewers.
There's no fortune needed
to observe her natural art,
fortunately.
Poetry in motion she is,
creatively blessing the
photographic memory.

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I glanced upon him
Once, twice, three times......

I grew fond of him
Yet did not feigned my words as others did before me

I longed to know him
as he was; not what he projected others; he maintained his artificial appearance so no one could see his vulnerability; And I loved him all the more for it.

I longed to pull him into my bosom and whisper sweet love into his ear.

I longed to assure him I too knew vulnerability; for we were cut from the same garment.

A desire to nurture him came from deep within the recesses of my mind and my body but he would not allow it.

Overcome with desire I wanted to feel his naked flesh; his body gently pressed into mine.

Longing madly for the comfort of his arms
The consistency of his words.

My mind became clouded with the trivial, chatting of others;

Until the chatting sat wildly in my head
Playing over and over and once again.

Confusion blanket my thoughts
The struggles to clear the mind were fruitless.

He told me no different
Yet acted indifferent.

Spinning madly, wildly out of control until my mind could think no more.

The arms I longed for offered no comfort.
A ship without a captain; yet I sat the boat a sail.

The compass offered no destination;

There my heart was;
Roaming restlessly upon the sea.

Looking to the stars for guidance
to a port that was safe and familiar.

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Check_ Your_ Pulse wrote:
I glanced upon him
Once, twice, three times......
I grew fond of him
Yet did not feigned my words as others did before me
I longed to know him
as he was; not what he projected others; he maintained his artificial appearance so no one could see his vulnerability; And I loved him all the more for it.
I longed to pull him into my bosom and whisper sweet love into his ear.
I longed to assure him I too knew vulnerability; for we were cut from the same garment.
A desire to nurture him came from deep within the recesses of my mind and my body but he would not allow it.
Overcome with desire I wanted to feel his naked flesh; his body gently pressed into mine.
Longing madly for the comfort of his arms
The consistency of his words.
My mind became clouded with the trivial, chatting of others;
Until the chatting sat wildly in my head
Playing over and over and once again.
Confusion blanket my thoughts
The struggles to clear the mind were fruitless.
He told me no different
Yet acted indifferent.
Spinning madly, wildly out of control until my mind could think no more.
The arms I longed for offered no comfort.
A ship without a captain; yet I sat the boat a sail.
The compass offered no destination;
There my heart was;
Roaming restlessly upon the sea.
Looking to the stars for guidance
to a port that was safe and familiar.
*feign

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Its true that we dont know what we've got until we lose it,but its also true that we dont know what we've been missing untill it arrives!!!!

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Love walked alone.
The rocks cut her tender feet,
And the brambles tore her fair limbs.
There came a companion to her,
But, alas, he was no help,
For his name was heart's pain.

-Stephen Crane
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Check_ Your_ Pulse wrote:
I glanced upon him
Once, twice, three times......
I grew fond of him
Yet did not feigned my words as others did before me
I longed to know him
as he was; not what he projected others; he maintained his artificial appearance so no one could see his vulnerability; And I loved him all the more for it.
I longed to pull him into my bosom and whisper sweet love into his ear.
I longed to assure him I too knew vulnerability; for we were cut from the same garment.
A desire to nurture him came from deep within the recesses of my mind and my body but he would not allow it.
Overcome with desire I wanted to feel his naked flesh; his body gently pressed into mine.
Longing madly for the comfort of his arms
The consistency of his words.
My mind became clouded with the trivial, chatting of others;
Until the chatting sat wildly in my head
Playing over and over and once again.
Confusion blanket my thoughts
The struggles to clear the mind were fruitless.
He told me no different
Yet acted indifferent.
Spinning madly, wildly out of control until my mind could think no more.
The arms I longed for offered no comfort.
A ship without a captain; yet I sat the boat a sail.
The compass offered no destination;
There my heart was;
Roaming restlessly upon the sea.
Looking to the stars for guidance
to a port that was safe and familiar.
I'm sorry that
the world turns round
turns its back on your back
while the heavens frown

rain washes
while your sorrows drown
in the mire like desire
baited breath broken down

I'm knocking
and there's no one home
save the mice and the spiders
and your old lonesome gloam

tantalize me
with your vacant stare
run your fingers
through your wayward hair

it's the ghosts that you fight
vanquish day like a knight
in the night of a day
like an empty sight

soaking in your sweaty bones
casket hanger on handsome loan
tickling tightrope beneath your feet
deadly dance unto defeat

social icicle
confectionary sweet
suckling on a shriveled teat
torn and tattered blue and beat

frozen forgotten like a fire's retreat
and I'd hold your hand
kicking sand in the gutters
catching wind on a breeze

and I've lost myself in a kitten's sneeze
your twisted embers
blazing blazing like the starlight
cutting clear though heaven

I'm sorry that
the world turns round
turns its back on your back
while the heavens frown

rain washes
while your sorrows drown
in the mire like my desire
baited breath broken down

let the last one down
let it down let me down
and so I sing your praise
weather worn prayer and phrase

you who are most beautiful
as you look into my eyes
I fear the beauty
and I fear the angel's cries

cursed coward's heart
collapsing down on me
never knowing life
or what I'm meant to be

I hear the words
of a poem in your soul
tell them to the world
like the lights burn bright and slow

If I could kiss your fingers
and let all of heaven know
I beg your friendship
and I ask you not to go

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