FADED LOVE and LOVE LOST
Anonymous

The Gap, Australia

#328 Nov 30, 2012
Who said that love was fire?

I know that love is ash.

It is the thing which remains
When the fire is spent,
The holy essence of experience.
Anonymous

The Gap, Australia

#329 Nov 30, 2012
I'm tired of Love lost,
of cookie-cutter me missing you
and all of the ridiculous rhymes that ensue.

More and more I am fed up,
plainly sick of inflated ego's
insulated by chosen ignorance
or inborn imbalances,
maybe a history of inbreeding
from a catalyst of parochial need.

You are a parody of mental health
shaping the shifting black and white
to propound cheap love,
I feel this as a slight.

Committing any wisp of originality
to become an unconscious marketing ploy,
you're looking for glory
in methods unlearned
now butchered, bleeding clichés
to stain pages and pages
with your sullen insecurities.

For that I name you a cretin,
a slavering jowls
dripping greedy soul.

Comprehend there is no invalidation
of your emotions,
just a damning of self neglect
and hidden pride in suffering
all laced with the
unspoken demand for my respect.

“Want A Friend, Be One”

Level 9

Since: Mar 12

Just Collecting Points..

#330 Nov 30, 2012
Sometimes some problems can only be solved if you are willing to shut your mouth and learn how to open your ears,heart and head....!!!!
Anonymous

The Gap, Australia

#331 Dec 6, 2012
It wasn't so hard to fall for your eyes,
and let you hold me, like a mother holds a baby...

and in that dark room, with the lightbulb blown,
it made things more peacefull.... no more blinding light.

Can I ask you why, you said " girl your trouble",
Those words just slipped from your mouth I guess.

I could almost get lost in your thoughts,
get lost inside your head.
But then you turned your back,
and fell asleep instead.

Morning came, and you held me tight,
I could smell you on my skin.
things just felt so simple,
no more scary questions left..

I could almost get lost in your thoughts,
get lost inside your head.
but then you turned your back,
and I went home instead.

Maybe tonight I'll ring you,
maybe tonight I'll hear your voice.
and things will just seem simple.
No more broken heart.

I could almost get lost in your thoughts,
Get lost inside your head.
or maybe I'll turn my back,
and forget about you instead.
Anonymous

The Gap, Australia

#332 Dec 6, 2012
She said......

"Baby, I've never cried like this before.
I know that if you wasn't in my life, I'd cry a million tears more,

I love you more than words could ever express,
My mind speaks the truth, but my heart has something to confess.

As I'm crying i imagine living my life without you here,
As I calm myself down, nothing makes sense without you near

And I don't know what to do because everything's a mess
my heart is stripped of comfort and my mind is undressed,

look into my eyes and you'll see the cracks in my heart
look into my heart and you'll see that I can't live my life if we're apart

I've got to be strong, but everytime i tell myself to be, I feel weaker.
I look into the mirror, wipe away my tears and say "teach her"..

Nobody should look for another person to complete them,
but without you, it would ruin me as a person.

I've built my life and all of my dreams around you,
I've revolved my life around making sure that happiness surrounds you,

I don't know how to free myself from this pain,
every photo, every memory, every touch, every train,
every laugh, every cry, every smile, every pain,

Every name.
Every name that has never meant as much to me as yours,
you've accepted me the way I've accepted you, regardless of my flaws,

For as long as I love you, you will never be alone.
and I will love you forever."

“Want A Friend, Be One”

Level 9

Since: Mar 12

Just Collecting Points..

#333 Dec 6, 2012
You are special,you are a beautiful soul,amazing in your own way.It may be your eyes,your smile,
your laugh,your inner glow.Everyone of us has a quality that someone else admires!!!!
Anonymous

The Gap, Australia

#334 Dec 6, 2012
Princess Hey wrote:
You are special,you are a beautiful soul,amazing in your own way.It may be your eyes,your smile,
your laugh,your inner glow.Everyone of us has a quality that someone else admires!!!!
Hey, Princess....who's your secret love ?

“Want A Friend, Be One”

Level 9

Since: Mar 12

Just Collecting Points..

#335 Dec 6, 2012
hey "KD",thats best left in my heart..hope you find yours..you are sweet,kind and loving in your own way..someone is there for you as well.Dont stop looking shes there for you..:O)..I will always be your best friend..(LY)..
Anonymous

The Gap, Australia

#336 Dec 8, 2012
Trains stopped coming
that day you left.
You promised me you'd come back;
I promised waiting, though bereft.
Radios and news I hear
fill me with hope,
much more with fear
that somewhere far
across deep seas,
beyond my reach,
apart from me;
you could meet a bloody end
with no one there to hold your hand.

Summers come, wintry winds blow.
I sit by silent train tracks
watching green moss grow
between rotting planks, hard rails of steel.
Prayers fill each day. I yearn the nights long
for God to fill my arms with
you, still bold and strong.
It's been too long for you to be gone,
but I keep holding on.

Our neighborhood is quieter now
with no train traffic making rounds.
Breezes still travel,
whistling though archways
lined with grape bearing vines.
But this year, frost came early
It was a sign; an omen that
I'd never feel your hand in mine
Then one cold day, deep first snow fell.
Like a ghost train straight from hell,
a letter came with edges black
telling me you won't be back.

Now I sit at our backdoor
I feel you kiss my lips once more
We toast our love with favorite wine's glow
then "Farewell my true love" I say.
Down decaying tracks you go.
Anonymous

The Gap, Australia

#337 Dec 8, 2012
Frozen by ice,
And burnt by fire.

Humans are the same,
They are all liars.

Pretending to care,
Pretending to love.

They will stab you in the back,
When push comes to shove.

They lie, steal, and cheat,
Pretending they are saints.

Pretanding the world is a perfect place,
When really it ain't.

It's funny how we lie to ourselves,
As much as others.

Trying to fix the unfixable,
Until we smother.

So go ahead and pretend what your not,
And become plastic; fake.

We all will relize what is real,
When our lives are at stake.
Anonymous

The Gap, Australia

#338 Dec 8, 2012
Depthless.
trackless,
lovely pools of obsidian black
Your midnight eyes draw me in.

I’m helpless in their
gravity well,
and I sink forever
below the event horizon,
willingly trapped by
the windows of your soul.

There is no escape for me -
and that’s just the way
I like it…
Anonymous

The Gap, Australia

#339 Dec 8, 2012
Princess Hey wrote:
hey "KD",thats best left in my heart..hope you find yours..you are sweet,kind and loving in your own way..someone is there for you as well.Dont stop looking shes there for you..:O)..I will always be your best friend..(LY)..
Dawn at light,
shedding through doubts,
poking holes through the shrouding clouds.
Waking leap,
filling lungs with the joy,
roaring through shadows like a she-wolf.
Epiphany,
smiles untangle a knitted brow,
curtains thrown open to the gleaming now.

“Want A Friend, Be One”

Level 9

Since: Mar 12

Just Collecting Points..

#340 Dec 8, 2012
Love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss,and ends with a teardrop!!!!
Taffy

Euless, TX

#341 Dec 8, 2012
Princess Hey wrote:
Love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss,and ends with a teardrop!!!!
sometimes all in one day! Lol!

“Want A Friend, Be One”

Level 9

Since: Mar 12

Just Collecting Points..

#342 Dec 9, 2012
Then it wasnt love only lust!!!!
KNIGHT DEVINE

The Gap, Australia

#343 Dec 10, 2012
There is a place he with the pain of loss must go

To be free to really live again and to grow.

The valley of the shadows of grief lies

Between the broken-hearted and new sunrises.



The slow cortege surely fills with dread

Him who carries his beautiful dreams, now dead.

As he drags the hearse forward, he earnestly prays

For a miracle of resurrection along the way.



In his heart he knows the old life is gone

And the futility of his hanging on.

So he gathers his courage and moves ahead,

Seeing only dimly through tears he sheds.



Burying the memories and plans so dear

Cuts so deeply and fills him with such fear.

Will letting go really his bitterness cleanse?

Dare he ever trust or try loving again?



Stricken with despair in heart and soul,

He inters the past as the mournful bell tolls

Blindly he reaches out into the now empty air,

To find nurturing friends and God waiting there.



A new road he must travel but never alone.

One day at a time he moves toward home.

New beginnings he sees through the veil torn

And knows only by dying to the past his future is born.

KNIGHT DEVINE

The Gap, Australia

#344 Dec 10, 2012
Do they see me?
Vast and empty is this cavity
This world of obscurity,
In God's mouth.
Where neither hell or heaven could
spit you out.
The stars swoon over the velvet expanse
The planets turn to guided hands
I'm the rock
To make amends.
For I was, now I'm not
The very last.
I'm seeing into the galaxies
Lightyears of could be's.
I'm rummaging through my memories
Wondering what I would be.
Burning.
But, I'm the rock
They all forgot
Guided not by laborious hands
I was the last,
And now the first.
To stare into darkness
And make amends.

“Want A Friend, Be One”

Level 9

Since: Mar 12

Just Collecting Points..

#345 Dec 10, 2012
Never apologize for being sensitive or emotional,
Let this be a sign that you've got a big heart aren't afraid to let others see it.Showing your emotions is a sign of strength.
KNIGHT DEVINE

The Gap, Australia

#346 Dec 10, 2012
Princess Hey wrote:
Never apologize for being sensitive or emotional,
Let this be a sign that you've got a big heart aren't afraid to let others see it.Showing your emotions is a sign of strength.
Princess, is your first name Dawn ??
KNIGHT DEVINE

The Gap, Australia

#347 Dec 10, 2012
LOVE AFLOAT

on the

THE LOVE BOAT

thats the.......

"DAWN PRINCESS."

http://youtu.be/tuZD02chS7o

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