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I see the parameters
The boundaries few dare to escape
What are they afraid of?
When push comes to shove
All see the truth
The scars you bear
Do not diminish
Your beauty
They are a trick of the mind
An illusion between me and you
You stand on the precipice
With a confidence
Like a cat
Waiting to pounce on your prey

“.remember when congress tried-”

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..to SOLVE our problems?...

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....i've never had the gift of poetry....but i've always liked the words in this tune...

Faded Love

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Old Sam wrote:
....i've never had the gift of poetry....but i've always liked the words in this tune...
Faded Love
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v =3RwmYTZtNokXX
Sam I agree, it's a great old song (Words & music written by Bob and John Willis), but I much prefer this version by the "King."

http://youtu.be/tkSh_gfu_bg

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The best revenge is happiness,because nothing drives people more crazy than seeing someone actually having a good life!!!!

good song Samm....liked it..I like it by patsy cline..:O)

“Just a lil' humor there.....”

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OR NOT .... <[;-)

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#310
Nov 25, 2012
 
SOBRIQUET DeVINE wrote:
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merci beaucoup Trish !
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What do you find cool?
A mysterious
guy (like me)
Or maybe a pot smoking
hippie?
Brando or Monroe?
Or that
Guitarist dude?
Or is it me
Or maybe
Mysterous You?
Or us!?
Well, how about, this poem?
Adrian, I didn't catch this one until yesterday.
I have said visited with you in some time and I
wanted to say Hello and Hope you are well. I like
how you are spelling your name these days.

Oh and I loved this piece.
:)
Hope you are smiling this day.
Trish

Oh - please find Wet for me.

“Just a lil' humor there.....”

Since: Sep 12

OR NOT .... <[;-)

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#311
Nov 25, 2012
 
You were really lQQking for any answers were you.
:))))

Oh, and the typo was meant to say I haven't visited with you. It's been too long actually. I'm not as intimidated to do that as I used to be.
;~)
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PEACE
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PESCreate wrote:
You were really lQQking for any answers were you.
:))))
Oh, and the typo was meant to say I haven't visited with you. It's been too long actually. I'm not as intimidated to do that as I used to be.
;~)
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PEACE
Some answers, yes but........you'll need to tell me more I suspect ?

These times they are phantoms
To what came before
I felt a surge of fallen shining beauty
Like nothing that I had ever seen
You stand in the light
Of my dreams
You always wanted something beyond
What the world could ever show
Will we live life in the shadows
In the empty halls without doors
You do not want to speak of love
Let it be all put to bed
Those thoughts left in my heart
Where they can do no harm
I'm just a stranger
Who is passing by
What are we
But people passing by tonight
I thought I saw something in your eyes
A flicker of recognition and hope
Of a feeling felt long ago
I remember your tears
When you heard my words
That summer burned the sweat into our skins
Holding your face in my hands
The beauty one man understands
These times are traitors
To what we know inside
The end of all your pretty plans....
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Nov 25, 2012
 
PESCreate wrote:
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Adrian, I didn't catch this one until yesterday.
I have said visited with you in some time and I
wanted to say Hello and Hope you are well. I like
how you are spelling your name these days.
Oh and I loved this piece.
:)
Hope you are smiling this day.
Trish
Oh - please find Wet for me.
Hi & Hello again Trish, you really can be sweet when you want to, can't you ?
Smiling all the while.....don't give me any reason not to, huh ?

Like I've said before, if you like I'll forward the original "WET" to you.....all you gotta do is furnish the on-forwarding details.

“Just a lil' humor there.....”

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Nov 25, 2012
 
Knight DeVine wrote:
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Hi & Hello again Trish, you really can be sweet when you want to, can't you ?
Smiling all the while.....don't give me any reason not to, huh ?
Like I've said before, if you like I'll forward the original "WET" to you.....all you gotta do is furnish the on-forwarding details.
Sweet when I want to be? I am normally sweet. It takes a good amount of stupid sh!t to get me going and then I have no want in me to be sweet to those piszzzing on me.

I would appreciate if you reposted it or were able to tell me what page it was on. I could go look, but you can appreciate what a task that would be.

I didn't understand the last one. I misspelled another word. I meant to say you weren't really seeking answers to all those questions in that previous post.

“Geez..”

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Nov 25, 2012
 

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Never thought I'd meet the one ta make me understand what it means,
Truely take my breathe away the way you do there aint no other.

That can make me feel this way just to see you smile makes me say.
Your laugh, your hand in mine, everything about you
Baby boo you take my breathe away

Okey I know I donít say it much but baby
Please believe me when you hear the song say.

*errr Still not quite right *

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See Jugghead you were great..hopefully the one will see it and undertsand..Goodluck and God bless.by the way that was very sweet and nice..:O)

Trying to forget someone you love is like trying to remember someone you never met!!!

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#317
Nov 26, 2012
 
LOL it's just a words but TY PH :)

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You are so welcome.Jugghead..:O)

There are things that we dont want to happen, but have to accept.Things we dont want to know,but have to learn and people we cant live without, but have to let go!!!

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#319
Nov 26, 2012
 
LOL PH you to damn serious! you sounds like my american grand ma.

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Nov 26, 2012
 
Knight DeVine wrote:
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Sam I agree, it's a great old song (Words & music written by Bob and John Willis), but I much prefer this version by the "King."
http://youtu.be/tkSh_gfu_bg
I never knew he sang that......good ol' Elvis.

Thanks, KD.

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#321
Nov 26, 2012
 
Ol Willie has some good love lost songs too.

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While you are ignoring her,Another guy is giving her attention.
While you are giving her problems,Another guy is listening.
While you are too busy,Another guy is making time for her.
While you are making her cry,Another guy is trying to make her smile again.
When you are not sure if you still want her,
Another guy has already figured it all out!!!
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Lying apart now, each in a separate bed,
He with a book, keeping the light on late,
She like a girl dreaming of childhood,
All men elsewhere - it is as if they wait
Some new event: the book he holds unread,
Her eyes fixed on the shadows overhead.

Tossed up like flotsam from a former passion,
How cool they lie. They hardly ever touch,
Or if they do, it is like a confession
Of having little feeling - or too much.
Chastity faces them, a destination
For which their whole lives were a preparation.


Strangely apart, yet strangely close together,
Silence between them like a thread to hold
And not wind in. And time itself's a feather
Touching them gently. Do they know they're old,
These two who are my father and my mother
Whose fire from which I came, has now grown cold?
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Packing
Cleaning
A studio no more
As my paints go dry

I smell the last of
the Oil paints
Laying to waste

My spirit is painted black
Oil all over my face
As my soul is no more

Lost my inspiration to paint
What to paint? Where is my muse?
I am lost in emptiness.

As I clean
There it is
The lipstick
On her wine glass
On the lip
Of the Glass

As clear as day
her fingerprints

That night long ago
On a full moon
On a day where the wolf called
As the wild spirits came out

There she was in my canvas
I drew here in the essence of charcoal
A over my newsprint
A over my Canvas of my soul
Yearning to feel her spirit in my thoughts
In my paint brush
Strokes that brought my desires
Desires of Burnt Umber
To Scarlet Purple Lake
Onto the white canvas

That night of oil and brushes
Her soul spoke to mine
No she is gone
No more. It is gone
My love is gone

She left. My love left
My heart shattered
Where have you gone
I am lost
I am no more......

Fingerprints
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I don a mask each waking day...
A painted smile that veils dismay
But hidden deep beneath the paint
Lie empty eyes, obscure and faint

My smile is wide...frozen...deep
My eyes tell lies my soul must keep
I dance, and laugh, and shrug, and jest
To hide the emptiness that fills my chest

"All is well... I'm doing fine..."
Are two of my favorite deceitful lines
I bury my soul beneath heavy stones
That are mortared in dreams and wedged with bones

Raining tears have dredged my mask...
But those who've noticed have failed to ask
Surely crimson eyes have told the tale -
That behind this smile... I live in hell

So turn your head... pretend I'm fine...
I've grown callouse to pretentious minds
But hear these words and know their truth
Behind tomorrow's mask... I could be you

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