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“We All Have A Look A Like”

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#286
Nov 19, 2012
 

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Love is a language spoken by everyone but understood only by one heart!!!!!
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Nov 21, 2012
 

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They walk the knife-edge together,
but they disagree
about the sharpness of the blade,

They dream aloud, together, happy,
and they turn over in the half-light,
how it turns out different, different,
but they don't know why, as they can't predict when,
and this worries out the life they thought they'd have,
like ice in a crack in a rock,

They meld time together,
and take entirely different meanings,
and later disagree about the influences of the moon,

They roll together in search each of the other,
and then sink back, silenced,
and they can't say precisely what they saw,
this time or any other,
and the future burns as fitfully
as the present burns the past,

They try to live different lives together,
but they discover that together is not different,
and that different is not together, exactly,
and that exactly is not how anything ever remains,

They try to keep their own shape on things,
but disagree about how things take their own shapes on,
automatically, and,

They, most of all, can't understand
why love could turn out so unseemly, crying,
in a deeply imperfect world
where eternity invades time and change
in such variously inconvenient ways,

When the most innocent joy of all, originally,
was simply looking into each other's eyes
with such thankfulness,
and saying absolutely nothing,
small mercy in a hard world,
gone again.

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Nov 21, 2012
 

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Each girl has that one boy she'll never lose feelings for

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Nov 21, 2012
 

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Princess Hey wrote:
Each girl has that one boy she'll never lose feelings for
a fireman called peter jones........ he emigrated...... i was heart broken...... lol

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#290
Nov 21, 2012
 
yes "S&P" I know what you mean I have one just lost as well and its hard..but what do ya do..have to move on and let it go but that love still right there in the bottom of your heart..always looking to see if thats coming back or can other match up to the next one. if you can move on sometimes its hard..have a good one...:O)..
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Nov 23, 2012
 

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I donít want your love for tax purposes.
I donít want your love bearing the twin corpses of tradition
and overpopulation in its arms like dusty wedding garments.
I donít want your love steeped in the bitter waters of jealousy,
dripping self-righteous rage in my eyes when I look astray
and no, I donít want you to make my bed.
I want you to help me mess it up.

I want your love raw and bleeding, pulsating, delirious.
I want your love to rip through your body like electricity,
your back arching spasmodically with the force of its current,
your frame barely able to contain it all.

I want your love sevenfold:
once for each of my senses and twice more to make sure
it takes its rightful place among the Great Wonders of the World.

I want your love dripping from my beard when I come up for air,
and I resent the air. I resent the fact that I need it
when all I want is to plunge back into the Great Divide.
I am facing the place we came from.

I want your love to bloom like a rose,
and I fully expect your thorns to mark my back.
Iíll find your most ticklish spot and slap it
while I bite your second most ticklish spot.

Iíll overload your senses,
caressing your every part with mine
until Iím like ten lovers.

Tonight Iíll make you squirt farther than I can.

Tonight I want your love sweating and panting,
collapsing, then napping in that perfect moment
before conversation becomes relevant again.
We have pushed each otherís bodies to the breaking point
and kept each other safe.

It feels like our lives were in each otherís hands.

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#292
Nov 23, 2012
 
Nothing feels better than when you love someone with your whole heart and soul and they love you back even more.!!!!

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#293
Nov 23, 2012
 
Princess Hey wrote:
yes "S&P" I know what you mean I have one just lost as well and its hard..but what do ya do..have to move on and let it go but that love still right there in the bottom of your heart..always looking to see if thats coming back or can other match up to the next one. if you can move on sometimes its hard..have a good one...:O)..
hay good evening Princess.......

well i know what you mean...... i do think of him from time to time..... although it was over 10 years ago....... he called my mother to get my phone number about 7 years ago.... and we had a long chat on the phone.... where he told me he was getting married..........and then he came home to visit his parents who live not far from me....... i last saw him 2 years ago..... and to my shame i pretended i didn't know him....... until he made it perfectly obvious that he wasn't going to let that go.... so i succumbed, and gave him a peck on the cheek.... he said in no uncertain terms , that he is now separated..... and i got the feeling he was hinting for a date...... i should've made more of an effort to keep in touch....... i wouldn't mind but he was still as handsome as ever...... tall, dark and very handsome......

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#294
Nov 23, 2012
 
well yes you should have but you know all the should ofs isnt going to make it better now..just follow your heart it knows you better than you know yourself. just dont be fooled by the looks go with your heart..My saying is if you love it set it free if it comes back it was meant to be..Good luck and dont let a second chance pass you by..take that chance..God bless...

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#295
Nov 23, 2012
 
Princess Hey wrote:
well yes you should have but you know all the should ofs isnt going to make it better now..just follow your heart it knows you better than you know yourself. just dont be fooled by the looks go with your heart..My saying is if you love it set it free if it comes back it was meant to be..Good luck and dont let a second chance pass you by..take that chance..God bless...
thanks chick...... maybe the next time we bump into one another....... who knows.....
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Nov 23, 2012
 
Without a vessel

my orb does wander peerless;

An unmatched

beauty drifting and floating fearless.

Until a pushing

force pulls me to familiar members,

I immediately

disperse into common embers.



MinglingÖ



Tingling transforms intertwined clusters.

I remain a billion

fireflies swarming and attracting others.

Generating heat

pulsates through the diamonds strewn

across the void

between me and you.



Our spirits create

an assortment of sparks

fusing together and lighting the arc.

Even aardvarks couldn't exist in this dark.

Skylarks don't fly in surroundings this stark,

and I feel like a magnet, or moth to the flame.

Being sucked up by funnels

feels fairly the same

and this tugging is bringing

my memories round

and they're making me wonder

what was deep in that ground.



With the scarf and the tie, the hill and the feather,

you meant to be warm, inviting and whether

the weather was violent or drafty and strong

to hold my head high and keep climbing along.



So with that,

if I followed it down to a tee,

I'd get to go back where my soul use to be,

but the rules are quite simpleÖ

a permanent shelf.

We'd get to return,

but not back as ourselves.



Mingling...



and tingling disintegrates intertwined clusters.

I am a swarm

of fireflies stealing away from others,

watching the

diamonds flicker and eventually they die.

Now I am left a

scattered mess with no one to abide.



Then suddenly,

Heavenís funnel sweeps me up and twirls me round.

No doubt to deliver

me to where I am abound.

No doubt to whip

me senseless and rob me of my sound.

No doubt to strip

me of my thoughts, Iíve come to find profound.

“Geez..”

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Hey wait I dont think I understand I mean...
I said wait I dont think you understand, I mean it
When? Why? Where? Youíve got to be kidding, this canít be true
I donít even want to see your face
After all that we've been through you dont threw it all away

We can never go back now
It was all a lie, wasnít it?
The memories, your crocodile tears and fake smiles
So fuck you very much although I wish it wasn't so,

Thanks for wasting my time
I donít need memories

Girl I just never want to...

*errr still sounds not right, SIGH!!:)
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juggheaD wrote:
Hey wait I dont think I understand I mean...
I said wait I dont think you understand, I mean it
When? Why? Where? Youíve got to be kidding, this canít be true
I donít even want to see your face
After all that we've been through you dont threw it all away
We can never go back now
It was all a lie, wasnít it?
The memories, your crocodile tears and fake smiles
So fuck you very much although I wish it wasn't so,
Thanks for wasting my time
I donít need memories
Girl I just never want to...
*errr still sounds not right, SIGH!!:)
girl made the right choice from the sounds of it Juggie..
maybe it was your approach, style

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#299
Nov 24, 2012
 
I might not be perfect,but neither are you,So go and check your mistakes before rating mine!!!!
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Princess Hey wrote:
I might not be perfect,but neither are you,So go and check your mistakes before rating mine!!!!
You tell him girlfriend!!

Who we yellling at?

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#301
Nov 24, 2012
 
If you are single make the best of it.Its not because you're not good enough for anyone...It means no one is good enough for you!!!!

not yelling at anyone QC just something I have in my little notebook and decided to put it out there..It just seemed like it fit this morning...
hope you are having a good morning..

“Geez..”

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QuiteCrazy wrote:
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girl made the right choice from the sounds of it Juggie..
maybe it was your approach, style
ha ha! very funny, a little support would be nice. Just cant get the hang of it. Poem I mean.

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its okay Jugghead it doesnt have to rhymn just put your thoughts and you make them work for you..You will be fine..:O)..
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Nov 25, 2012
 

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Telling the truth
Will cause you a lot of trouble
Commit the crimes of poetry
Dig through the savage underbelly
Every sexual dream
Everything you want to take as your own
Does the heart die
Will the sentence be passed
How much time served in this prison
Ripping apart the veil of secrecy
Exposing the truth in the light
Feelings dragged down an empty street
Love is killed in the night
Will they call you scum
For being accused of these poetic crimes
Wear it as a badge of honor
Burn down the night
Steal all visions
The dawn is a forbidden dream
Beyond all of our desires
I will see you there
Your hair lit up by the first rays of the sun
Never losing the love we share
As the rules of society
Are abandoned at daybreak
And I take you in my arms
Under a cloudless sky
Not caring about the price
Not caring about the sacrifice

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Nov 25, 2012
 

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You will see alot of things,but they will mean nothing to you if you lose sight of the thing you love.

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