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#21 May 7, 2013
My only thoughts are:

"Now this this is one of them occasions
Where the homies not doin' it right
I mean he found him a h0e that he like
But you can't make a h0e a housewife"

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#22 May 7, 2013
Sublime1 wrote:
My only thoughts are:

"Now this this is one of them occasions
Where the homies not doin' it right
I mean he found him a h0e that he like
But you can't make a h0e a housewife"
True but that hoe still is a human being, and like human beings they feel the same emotions we feel. Anger, heartache, loneliness. We shouldn't judge people about the way they act, dress or do for a job all of us need to get by. Ruby was scared, heartbroken and lost when I found her, she's now very successful studying law and having a part time job as a secretary at a law firm I turned her life around

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#23 May 7, 2013
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True but that hoe still is a human being, and like human beings they feel the same emotions we feel. Anger, heartache, loneliness. We shouldn't judge people about the way they act, dress or do for a job all of us need to get by. Ruby was scared, heartbroken and lost when I found her, she's now very successful studying law and having a part time job as a secretary at a law firm I turned her life around
I'm happy to hear that, but for every guy like you there are 20 schmoes whose hearts were ripped out in a train wreck.

My bro met a girl too. At a bar, just like you. She wasn’t even shaking. She just liked to do coke … who hasn’t done it at least a few times? Everyone I knew growing up did coke … I was pretty much the exception (done it a few times, but outside of 420 and occasional X at the club (and I didn’t even really get into that until college), I never really got into drugs … I was the one out of our group of friends that everyone always said was going to make it somewhere someday. She wasn’t one of these people who did it to keep the party going. She did it all the time, but he didn’t know that at first.

They met … they hit it off … partied together … sex on the first night … he moved in with her not to long after they met … she had her own place … she was cute (he thought she was … I didn’t think she was anything special, but she wasn’t bad … blond, blue eyes, skinny).

She knew the biggest drug dealers in my home town … within a few days of meeting her one of the biggest cut up a huge brick of coke on her kitchen table and left the scraps … they had so much coke … just from the scraps … they didn’t know what to do with it … they were partying like rock stars for weeks and giving it away to friends.

Nothing but good times, but then something happened that changed my bro. She got prego. Something clicked in my bros head … he didn’t want to do it anymore like they were doing it (sometimes sure, but all the f’ing time … every weekend … more than every weekend … no)… he was going to be a dad. She on the other hand couldn’t stop. What if that had happened to you? What if she couldn’t have stopped, like his girl couldn’t?

Long story short, after many cancelled weddings (hall reserved and everything)… after many binges where she would disappear for days (2 or 3 days after she had their second child she dropped her off with me and my wife and went on a coke binge for a few days)… many arguments between he and me about how he can’t marry her while she is like that and have her running around town with our last name (she was using it before they were even married)… after two children he had with her, which she did coke through the pregnancies, which is not good for children developmentally (and she almost never see’s the kids (calls last second and cancels … constantly breaks their hearts … they’ve both been in therapy since they were young)… she doesn’t even pay a dime for them … to this day … it’s very hard on them), he finally gave up, which was good because she wasn’t even close to rock bottom.

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#24 May 7, 2013
She was so into to drugs, she was working for a dr. and she was stealing his script pads and writing her own scripts to get pain killers. She ended up getting busted. She was going to rat out the biggest drug dealer in town to get out of trouble (that’s not f’ing smart … I know these people … it’s not a big town … that will get you potentially killed). Except, what did the dummy do, she stole another script pad, went back to the same f’ing pharmacy and tried to get more pain killers and she was arrested again. The police said no deal and she served time.

Forgive me, but I would never contemplate a relationship with someone who is addicted to drugs and I don't think it's a good bet that you will be the exception to the rule … someone who goes out and parties on occasion … sure that’s ideal, but has the discipline to not let it consume them. Especially speed … IMO, it’s 5 times worse than coke.

You also can’t save someone or turn her life around. Only the addict can do it. You were lucky she saw the light. Another bro of mine, bro, my cousin, and my buddy Junior never did. And you can be there for someone and love them, but in the end being here and loving someone is not enough in a lot of cases. You were lucky. You were the exception. Good for you and her!

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#25 May 7, 2013
Anyway, I see I've interrupted your thread. Enough about my experiences. Please continue with your story.

:)

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#26 May 7, 2013
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Anyway, I see I've interrupted your thread. Enough about my experiences. Please continue with your story.

:)
Dude that's terrible but me and ruby broke up that's why I started the book but it wasn't on bad terms she had to move because of work and school so we drifted apart she's changed man she's happy for once if you want I can put up a few more chapters so you can get a grasp of her, and how she stopped the drug use, it was after the over dose (spoiler)

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#27 May 7, 2013
Chapter five

"Realisation"

The next morning I woke up on the beach, knowing I left ruby alone last night started to play in my head. I didn't know what to feel. As I walk down the beach I get a phone call
" hello?" I answered
"Hey dude it's Jessie, you gonna pick up your shit from mine or what?"
I forgot I left all my stuff at his I could never stay at his because his landlord was strict on that sorta stuff
"Oh shit yeah man I'm on my way" I replied as I started searching for a bus stop.
The whole trip to Jessie's house I had ruby on my mind, her soft red lips, her sexy grin, those emerald green eyes. I just got off the bus when my phone rang again.
"Alright fuck Jessie I'm here" I answered the call
"Umm what?" Said a soft voice in the other end, it wasn't Jessie it was ruby
"Oh sorry I thought you were my friend" I apologised
"You left me" she said in that soft voice "I was worried are you ok?"
"Am I ok?" I replied "are you ok?"
"I'm fine... Just... Scared" she said "my boyfriend got out today... i told him what happened last night..."
I groaned "why would you do that?where are you? are you safe?" i asked starting to panic
"I'm home right now" she replied
"Ok ill be on my way soon ok? I got to get a few things then I'm on my way ill keep you safe ok?" I reassured her
"Ok hurry please?" She said in the same scared voice
"Ok see you soon" I replied
"...I love you" she said I could tell she meant it but it was different I've never been told I was loved I hung up and quickly explained to Jessie what was going on
"Ok" he said nodding "I'm coming with you"
"Dude you don't have to do that!" I said worried
"I got your back man" he said back patting me on the shoulder "lets go"
I felt a rush of gratitude toward Jessie as we jumped in the car towards chevron island, hoping ruby was safe... The crazy things we do for love...

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#28 May 7, 2013
Keep this page ALIVE!! Come on spread it!

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#29 May 7, 2013
Boop

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#30 May 7, 2013
What a crock of shyt!

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#31 May 7, 2013
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What a crock of shyt!
Hey! That's not very nice!

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#32 May 7, 2013
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What a crock of shyt!
But I really don't give a shitittie critic all you want dude. This book is gonna make me millions!

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#33 May 7, 2013
*Yawns*..... Carry on Harold Robbins!

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#34 May 7, 2013
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*Yawns*..... Carry on Harold Robbins!
My names Dante but thanks man you too

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#35 May 7, 2013
Chapter six

"Rush"

We arrived at Ruby's house, I jumped out of the car sprinting toward her door. As I opened it i saw that she was running as fast as I was running though her small unit grabbing things left and right and stuffing them in a bag. I helped her grabbing a few of her shirts and bras throwing them in the small suitcase she had. She quickly hugged me and kissed me on the cheek before grabbing her suitcase and running outside she threw the bag though the open window of our car just as we started to hear the sound of Motorbike engines
"JESSIE!! GET US THE FUCK OUT OF HERE!!" I screamed as he started the engine, ruby rocking back and forth in the back seat. He stepped on it driving out of the driveway as fast as he could we started hearing gunshots, the back window shatters as ruby started to scream. Jessie was panting and sweating I was wondering why when I looked down
"HOLY FUCK JESSIE, YOUR SHOT!!!!"
"I'm fine it's just my arm, FUCK!!" He screamed as he swerved to the left. I grabbed the wheel and started to steer. The bikes where still following us as we kept driving through the main streets of surfers paradise
"We need a safe place" as I looked at ruby
" why are you looking at me? I don't have anyone!!" She screamed still shaking
"We can go to my brothers place in Brisbane for a bit, we can be safe there, for a bit anyway" Jessie said groaning in pain as he swerved agin on the highway I looked back and saw that they stopped following us I guess they didnt want a shoot out in broad daylight.
After a while Jessie was getting pale I told him to stop. I started to perform first aid as good as I could he was losing a bit of blood but he would make it, I strapped him in and told him to rest. Then I walked toward ruby, she was throwing up on the side if the road
"We are dead, you understand me? DEAD!!" She screamed wiping vomit from her mouth " we are so screwed man I can't believe this-" she threw up again I patted her on the shoulder "I'm sorry..." She mumbled
"You don't have to apologise to me" I said to her " we will keep you safe ok? I promise you"
I picked her up and laid her down in the back seat she fell asleep almost instantly I kissed her in the forehead
"I'm going to get us out of this"
I got in the drivers seat of the car and drove I didn't know how long I just drove and kept on driving checking on Jessie every now and then, one thing I didn't know was that ruby talks in her sleep... She was saying a name... My name...

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#36 May 8, 2013
Chapter seven

"Safe"

After what seemed like days but really was an hour we arrived at Brisbane, the city was breathtaking at night the lights, the people it seemed like we might get out of this. We stopped by Jessie's brothers place he was waiting for us
"I heard what happened come on let's get them inside" as he grabbed Jessie. I picked up ruby looking at her, she was still sleeping, her chest was moving slowly up and down, her make up smudged from the vomit, I took off my jacket at started to wipe her face while we were walking in
When I walked in to Jessie's brothers place he already started trying to take out the bullet from his shoulder.
" surprisingly the bullet didn't break any of his bones a clear hit. Hit nothing but meat" he said as he had a long pair of tweezers in the bloody hole in Jessie's arm " I'm jake by the way"
I shook hands with him as he pulled out a small metal bullet out of his arm, she shined it in the light "looks like your typical 9mm" he said as he started to wrap him up as I looked at the bullet "he will make it don't worry, Jessie is tough as fuck, you are all welcome to stay here as long as you need"
I thanked him just when I heard a groan from behind me, ruby just woke up
"Are you ok babe?" I asked her as she started to get up
"No" she replied as she started to grow a cheeky smile on her face "I need speed"
I let out a little laugh and kissed her, even though she tasted like vomit I didn't care we were safe for now and we were together. Nothing could make me happier...

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#37 May 8, 2013
Need some criticism guys, come on help me out

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#38 May 8, 2013
Blarg writers block

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#39 May 8, 2013
Chapter eight

"Overdose"

For the next few days it seemed like nothing even happened, we all had or own fun and ruby seemed more happy. For the first time me and ruby could have some time together we were going out to movies, dinner and parks like we were a normal couple. The feeling was beautiful but it wasn't all perfect the lifestyle here was different to the lifestyle in surfers, ruby started using coke.
"You don't need it" I said as I grabbed her hand when she was cutting some "I know what I'm doing babe ok?" She said with that cute smile she does she kissed me on the cheek before doing the line she just finished cutting
"Ohhhhhhhhh yeaahhahhhh" she moaned as she jumped up and grabbed my hand and started jumping "lets fuck babe!! Come on!!"
"No babe not yet ok?"
I was holding it back for something special but she always tried anyway walking around the flat naked and jumping on me kissing my neck begging me to do it.
She opened another package and started to line another one
"Really ruby, you should stop" I said trying my hardest to pull the rest away from her
"Babe! I know what I'm doing!" She said aggressively "apparently this stuff is good I want to try it" she lent forward and snorted the line, she looked at me and smiled.
"Ruby... Your nose is bleeding" I pointed to her nose she started to shake and she fell on the floor, foam coming out of her mouth gargling. I was screaming out to Jessie as he ran in I was moving ruby in the recovering position, she was still shaking.
"Dude what the fuck?" Jessie screamed as he ran to ruby "what did she take?"
"Just some coke man, fuck she's ODing!" I was panicking again
After a few seconds she stopped moving foam coming out of her mouth just twitching, I put my ear on her chest while Jessie was calling an ambulance.
"Fuck man..." I started crying "she's not breathing man!"

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#40 May 8, 2013
*whistles* uhhh forever alone haha

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