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“I wanna be free...”

Since: Mar 08

Happyville

#1 Apr 6, 2008
Sometimes you just want to write down your thoughts...like an open journal, or sometimes you just want to be 'abstract and poetic' in your delivery.

Write as if your writing to yourself.
Or write as if your doing playwrite, as Rod Sterling would, from the Twilight zone...

This is theater, the production house, you are the artist, be creative, be cute, and try to be positive.

It's about what you think or want to present, not about crotiquing the opinions of others.

Heck, even invent a fictional character and write a short story for us to follow from day to day. Romance, thriller, action, sci-fi...ect

I'll get it kicking off in a bit here soon...

“Towards Spring”

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Since: Dec 06

Location hidden

#2 Apr 9, 2008
Nice thread!

here's a bit of prose I did sometime ago,
I just called it
'A dream sequence'..

''Fragrant scents of woodland and fern mingled and hung .. as a fragile cobweb .. in Autumn early mists..

She emerged.. ghostlike from the shadows, her
cool elegance her dark luxurious hair fell in cascading in ripples over the left shoulder.

We sat at the corner table. The magnificence of a Mozart piano concerto echoed in the breeze ...

The sweetness of her smile opened a door in my subciosness that had been chained and bolted through the passage of time...

.. She reached the depths in my lonely soul .. in the dream she drew me to
the 'Springtime' of my youth when all the world was young .. and new

In the distance I saw it, as it was then.. > I .. in a field amidst a profusion of dazzling daffodils under a cloudless April sky ... tears began to well in my eyes as I remembered when all the world there for me; youth being the highest prize.. how romantically I served at the table of love... I.. its willing Lord and master..

The power and presence of her sweet femininity swirled around and through me .. taking me .. once again through the time and space .. and to that place but when I reached out to take her hand... but like the crystal flake of snow she had vanished, as had the dream .. yet.. how gently did it leave its perfumed trail about my pleading consciousness ..

BUT ... she will come again ... I know .. when the evenings gather in.. and the mists of Autumn still the shadow lands .. then.. as before she will whisper just once more ..

of youth and love and wonder''

“New & Improved..”

Level 8

Since: Oct 07

Formerly From Kenya

#3 Apr 9, 2008
I write songs, about all kinds of things, it is how I understand some things, or just deal with them. This was written during my father in laws last two weeks of life, last December.

The windowÖ.

Donít know how I ended here
My mind seems crystal clear
Why wonít they tell
The whispers talk of doom
Am I even in the room
Am I in Hell

Things just seemed to change
My body feels so strange
What have I exchanged
Iíll be here looking out the window

I wish they would take these tubes away
Wish they would let me out to play
Just like my dream
Iím sick of all the medicine
Sick to death of this bed Iím in
Not as fragile as I seem

Things just seemed to change
My body feels so strange
What have I exchanged
Iíll be here looking out the window

“Towards Spring”

Level 8

Since: Dec 06

Location hidden

#4 Apr 9, 2008
justaguess wrote:
I write songs, about all kinds of things, it is how I understand some things, or just deal with them. This was written during my father in laws last two weeks of life, last December.
The windowÖ.
Donít know how I ended here
My mind seems crystal clear
Why wonít they tell
The whispers talk of doom
Am I even in the room
Am I in Hell
Things just seemed to change
My body feels so strange
What have I exchanged
Iíll be here looking out the window
I wish they would take these tubes away
Wish they would let me out to play
Just like my dream
Iím sick of all the medicine
Sick to death of this bed Iím in
Not as fragile as I seem
Things just seemed to change
My body feels so strange
What have I exchanged
Iíll be here looking out the window
Thanks Justaguess, that' was very 'real' and thought provoking..
Very good.

Here's a little poem I wrote re the SEASONS.
{I am very 'into' nature]

THE SEASONS:

I dreamed I walked ...
through the seasons ...
in a single day and night...
And all that I saw ...
filled me with awe ...
and brought me a dreamy delight...

I picnic'd up high on a hilltop ...
In the warmth of the noonday sun

Deep in a field of golden flowers ...
and I ... the only one ...

Who saw them dance and sway ...
in a gentle summer breeze...

Nature's haunting beauty ...
Set my heart at ease ...

The summer wind lifted my curling hair ....
soft as an angel's kiss,
and music that came from the songbird
brought me a feeling of bliss ...

In September.. I walked on carpets of
brown and crimson leaves ...
Bowing down my head .. softly, I said

'' What wonders Autumn achieves''

Winterwinds hugged me tightly ....
With an icey silvery grip..
But .. that's how it is in this season ...
When the air has a sting and a nip...

As Winter faded slowly ...
Springtime come around ...
When tiny snowdrops lifted their heads ...
From under the under..
the winter ground..

Daffodils moving together ...
Surrounded by yellow light...

Cherry and apple blossoms ...
In delicate pale pink and white...

How I wish I could walk through the Heavens ...
In a single day and a night..
To see up close ...

the Sun Moon and Stars ...

And bask in their glorious light.

“I wanna be free...”

Since: Mar 08

Happyville

#5 Apr 9, 2008
How neat, how gorgious, how very sweet, reading the last two poems has put a tingling sensation in my feet...

“A T-Girl in Progress”

Since: Dec 07

St. Cloud, Florida

#6 Apr 9, 2008
I can't do poetry, but I do word pictures. My assignment in writing class was to do a word picture of a campfirefire.

MY CAMPFIRE:

Red and yellow tongues, hungrily lapping at a sea of darkness.

-Shay

“I wanna be free...”

Since: Mar 08

Happyville

#7 Apr 9, 2008
Oh no, he found me...Scream.....Don't you ever give up???

“I wanna be free...”

Since: Mar 08

Happyville

#8 Apr 9, 2008
Poem:
Why does he follow me, I just want to be left alone...

These earthlings are really starting to bother me, oh how I miss my home.

I don't want to be here, oh how I wish I could leave, I miss the smell of fall, and the autom smell of leaves.

Im so misunderstood, by everyone around me, I don't fit in no where, I just feel like hybernating like a bear.

I try and try to make it in this world, but I just seem to get abused over and over again, like a little girl

I just want to be left alone, left in peace, that's all I want, are you feeling me?

I bother no one, I'm a very helpful soul, sometimes I just feel like hiding in a hole.

Now please leave me alone, just go away, please please mister find somewhere else to play...

“I wanna be free...”

Since: Mar 08

Happyville

#9 Apr 9, 2008
I'm lost tonight, I don't know where to go, I wish I were a kid again, so I could play in the snow.

It sucks being me, I'm alone and scared, my future is so uncertain, and no one cares.

I try to fit in, I try to make friends, but people just don't like me, looks like I'll be alone until the end.

I've endured a lot, and can't take much more, sometimes I explore the thought of knocking on eternities door.

“I wanna be free...”

Since: Mar 08

Happyville

#10 Apr 9, 2008
I'll be gone in a few days, so dont worry about me, so please go find someone else to bother, and let me be....

“Towards Spring”

Level 8

Since: Dec 06

Location hidden

#11 Apr 10, 2008
''The golden days come from .. who knows where..

but what a privilege to be here..

Sharing each new day .. it's fleeting hours

like the short lived petals of fragile flowers.

To exist in the present .. a blessing true

'cos one day will come ..

and .. out of the blue ..

I will be called to a place unknown ..

where .. the Lord will whisper..

''WELCOME HOME''

[Grace Nerissa]

“A T-Girl in Progress”

Since: Dec 07

St. Cloud, Florida

#12 Apr 10, 2008
cute guys wrote:
Oh no, he found me...Scream.....
Okay look:

I WAS HERE on Topix BEFORE YOU WERE. I have posted in several Topix forums BEFORE you showed up.

I know you'd like to BELIEVE that I'm "following you around." Wishful thinking??

I never attacked you. I never questioned your claims, your identity, or your motives. Yet you have done all that to me. It doesn't bother me, I think it's funny! But it isn't fair for you to get all defensive and claim that I "follow" you here to stalk you online.

You started a cool thread! I just put in my two cents. So quit whining and drop the paranoia already.

-Shay

“Towards Spring”

Level 8

Since: Dec 06

Location hidden

#13 Apr 10, 2008
I don't know what's going on here! I read what CUTE GUYS wrote and thought it very good, really took it as an abstract piece, in reference to 'no one' in particular.
This is a nice interesting thread, why cannot everyone just come here.. leave their contribution, no hassle..
Why not...?
I see nothing offensive written here by Coy Boy.. and the 'word picture' he left was .. lovely .. and descriptive...

“New & Improved..”

Level 8

Since: Oct 07

Formerly From Kenya

#14 Apr 10, 2008
More song here, about keeping the ADHD kids on the dope, Not a good thing in my mind....But I am not in charge...never have been.

Responsible

I didnít think they were cruel
But the teachers at school
Told my parents to give me a pill
To make me more responsible

Alone in my room
I played the game until three
Killing all of the whores and the thieves
One day Iíll take my skills to the streets

Because
Iím not
No, Iím not
Iím not responsible

I got my chance
The night of the dance
Amy said everything would be cool
I was sitting on the edge of my seat

She dumped me for Steve
The cops still believe
That they just lost control on the curve
I gave them what they deserved

Because
Iím not
No, Iím not
Iím not responsible

The doctors call it an affliction
Theyíre cashing in on my addiction
I keep saying itís not fair
No one ever seems to care
But one day Iíll be there
Then I guess theyíll see

Twenty years on my side
Iíve learned to hide
All the churning I feel inside
My wife thinks Iím responsible

Little Jimmy seems ill
So I give him his pill
And I watch, as his eyes become mine
Everything is fine

Because
Heíll be
Yea, heíll be
Heíll be responsible

“Towards Spring”

Level 8

Since: Dec 06

Location hidden

#15 Apr 10, 2008
justaguess wrote:
More song here, about keeping the ADHD kids on the dope, Not a good thing in my mind....But I am not in charge...never have been.
Responsible
I didnít think they were cruel
But the teachers at school
Told my parents to give me a pill
To make me more responsible
Alone in my room
I played the game until three

I really like this one "J" it says it exactly as it is, you goy to the heart of the
matter, it's so possible to do just that by way of a song or a poem..

Thank You for this fine one..
Killing all of the whores and the thieves
One day Iíll take my skills to the streets
Because
Iím not
No, Iím not
Iím not responsible
I got my chance
The night of the dance
Amy said everything would be cool
I was sitting on the edge of my seat
She dumped me for Steve
The cops still believe
That they just lost control on the curve
I gave them what they deserved
Because
Iím not
No, Iím not
Iím not responsible
The doctors call it an affliction
Theyíre cashing in on my addiction
I keep saying itís not fair
No one ever seems to care
But one day Iíll be there
Then I guess theyíll see
Twenty years on my side
Iíve learned to hide
All the churning I feel inside
My wife thinks Iím responsible
Little Jimmy seems ill
So I give him his pill
And I watch, as his eyes become mine
Everything is fine
Because
Heíll be
Yea, heíll be
Heíll be responsible
I really like this 'J' it says it exactly as it is, you goy to the heart of the
matter, it's so possible to do just that by way of a song or a poem..

Thank You for this fine one..

“Towards Spring”

Level 8

Since: Dec 06

Location hidden

#16 Apr 10, 2008
I did this one for little MADELINE McCANN when she was kidnapped, she disappeared about this time 12 months ago, May .. Never a trace was found, and she..a beautiful child, big brown eyes and the sweetest child's face.
The unfortunate parents are STILL looking for her .. to this day:
SWEET MADELINE
The parents must be thinking ...
at the dawn of each new day
'Our DARLING CHILD, Our PRIDE and JOY..
Was spirited away'...
A searing ache invades them
Piercing heart and soul...
A cloak of desolation.
so lost... and so alone.
While dearest friends draw near,
Offering their love..
Through raindrop tears on bended knees..
They PLEAD with God above...>
''OH! LORD OUR GOD
please hear our sighs...
Return the girl with the Angel eyes..
And silken hair of honey-gold...
She belongs in the family fold
SHE'S ONLY FOUR YEARS OLD:
'May' flowers bloom and blossom
Their heads NOW bending low...
As if they sense a sadness here
As though, somehow, they KNOW...
As Songbirds fly in the morning sky,
Through fair and misty weather..
They strangely know the secret too.
And so they chant together...>
'' OH! GOD IN HEAVEN....>
Hear our cries ...
Restore the child with the laughing smile...
If YOU could only hear our plea..
We'll sing in for you in harmony..
If you'll.. but .. search in every glen...
And .. JESUS! bring her home again...
We pray you scan the oceans wild..
That you might glimpse the stolen child..
And LOOK in EVERY place between...
Until you find sweet MADELINE:

“I wanna be free...”

Since: Mar 08

Happyville

#17 Apr 10, 2008
Coy Boy wrote:
<quoted text>
Okay look:
I WAS HERE on Topix BEFORE YOU WERE. I have posted in several Topix forums BEFORE you showed up.
I know you'd like to BELIEVE that I'm "following you around." Wishful thinking??
I never attacked you. I never questioned your claims, your identity, or your motives. Yet you have done all that to me. It doesn't bother me, I think it's funny! But it isn't fair for you to get all defensive and claim that I "follow" you here to stalk you online.
You started a cool thread! I just put in my two cents. So quit whining and drop the paranoia already.
-Shay
I'm sorry......

Since: Mar 07

Location hidden

#18 Apr 10, 2008
Trouble rather the tiger in his lair than the sage amongst his books, for to you empire's and their armies are mighty and enduring, but to him they can be over turned by the flicking of a finger.

Lost hippie days.....

“I wanna be free...”

Since: Mar 08

Happyville

#19 Apr 10, 2008
I love reading the poems on this page, it helps me to escape, while I drink my Kool-aid.

But right now, I have to take a nap, but once I wake up, I will definatly be back...

“Ridin' The Devils Little Horse”

Since: Mar 08

Straight To Hells Door

#20 Apr 10, 2008
I wrote this poem a week or so back hope you all like it....

Spring Street Catbird...

My understanding of him is limited.
He is a loner.
He likes his privacy.
He tells others to stay away.

On a rainy day he sits there.
His body grey against a grey sky.
He lifts his head and shakes all over.
He looks toward the heavens,

And he tries to sing the rain away.
His body soaked,
He lifts his head.
And He sings!

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