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“Towards Spring”

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#1 Nov 6, 2008
Think this might be fun where EVERYONE could join in.
and keep it going on and on, anything they wish,
linked EVER SO slightly to the previous 4 lines..
but can change anyway you want..

(4 lines ONLY or less..)

Well folks, once upon a time

i saw a man commit a crime.

But I don't know if he saw me

That's my problem now, you see....

“Well? ARE you?”

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#2 Nov 6, 2008
Grace Nerissa wrote:
Think this might be fun where EVERYONE could join in.
and keep it going on and on, anything they wish,
linked EVER SO slightly to the previous 4 lines..
but can change anyway you want..
(4 lines ONLY or less..)
Well folks, once upon a time
i saw a man commit a crime.
But I don't know if he saw me
That's my problem now, you see....
I have to hide now and be afraid,

that the man I saw might make me wade,

into the ocean with shoes of cement,

and people will wonder where I went.

“Towards Spring”

Level 8

Since: Dec 06

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#3 Nov 6, 2008
GeorgiaQueen wrote:
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I have to hide now and be afraid,
that the man I saw might make me wade,
into the ocean with shoes of cement,
and people will wonder where I went.
Um.. that's a worry I agree
Go off and have a cuppa tea..
and consider well 'what's best to do'
I'd help, but, it's really up to you

“No time like the present”

Since: Jul 08

to make it happen!

#4 Nov 6, 2008
Grace Nerissa wrote:
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Um.. that's a worry I agree
Go off and have a cuppa tea..
and consider well 'what's best to do'
I'd help, but, it's really up to you
What if the tea itself is bad?
And should I drink and I've been had?
I'd rather try to hide
or get a big guy on my side.

“Well? ARE you?”

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Since: Jun 08

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#5 Nov 6, 2008
Grace Nerissa wrote:
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Um.. that's a worry I agree
Go off and have a cuppa tea..
and consider well 'what's best to do'
I'd help, but, it's really up to you
whats best to do..
well, thats the confusion.
for the man I saw..
might be an illusion....
Heres1or2

United States

#6 Nov 6, 2008
Illusion or not , what am I to do
I'm getting confused, my mind all a stew
Tea is good but alcohol might be better
What all I saw, will be put pen to letter.

“Towards Spring”

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Since: Dec 06

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#7 Nov 6, 2008
GeorgiaQueen wrote:
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whats best to do..
well, thats the confusion.
for the man I saw..
might be an illusion....
well,indeed that could be true,
but still, you know, if i were you
i'd look over my shoulder wehere'ere i'd go
because you .. never .. ever know!

“Towards Spring”

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Since: Dec 06

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#8 Nov 6, 2008
Heres1or2 wrote:
Illusion or not , what am I to do
I'm getting confused, my mind all a stew
Tea is good but alcohol might be better
What all I saw, will be put pen to letter.
(sorry our posts cam in together]
Heres1or2

United States

#9 Nov 6, 2008
No problem with me regarding the posting. I have been told that I have a gift of rhyme, more than once. It's all in fun. Enjoy.

“Well? ARE you?”

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Since: Jun 08

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#10 Nov 6, 2008
Grace Nerissa wrote:
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well,indeed that could be true,
but still, you know, if i were you
i'd look over my shoulder wehere'ere i'd go
because you .. never .. ever know!
I so much agree..
that scared I will be,
Until that day my fears dissappear...
and my tiny mind will be ever so clear...
Rae

East Hampton, CT

#11 Nov 6, 2008
GeorgiaQueen wrote:
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I so much agree..
that scared I will be,
Until that day my fears dissappear...
and my tiny mind will be ever so clear...
clear to think sweetly
my thoughts aligned neatly
I now know how to act
and you can write this as fact..

“Towards Spring”

Level 8

Since: Dec 06

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#12 Nov 6, 2008
Rae wrote:
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clear to think sweetly
my thoughts aligned neatly
I now know how to act
and you can write this as fact..
BUT what if I should once more see
that creepy guy looking at me -
the one, I told you, who did the crime.
he is on my mind .. all the time.
Heres1or2

United States

#13 Nov 6, 2008
Do not attention, to yourself draw,
Take a picture and give to the law.
Once this is over, be no more afraid,
Go on to enjoy life and maybe get laid.
Heres1or2

United States

#14 Nov 6, 2008
lame, I know, but it rhymes............

“Well? ARE you?”

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Since: Jun 08

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#15 Nov 6, 2008
Heres1or2 wrote:
lame, I know, but it rhymes..........
LOLOLOL!!!

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Since: Apr 08

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#16 Nov 6, 2008
Heres1or2 wrote:
Do not attention, to yourself draw,
Take a picture and give to the law.
Once this is over, be no more afraid,
Go on to enjoy life and maybe get laid.
get laid ??? you say??

it late in the day!!!

im off early to bed???

for tomorrow i dread,,,,

“Towards Spring”

Level 8

Since: Dec 06

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#17 Nov 7, 2008
reebie wrote:
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get laid ??? you say??
it late in the day!!!
im off early to bed???
for tomorrow i dread,,,,
but.. everything passes and this will to

now, If I may tell you what to do
Go out on the town, and with all your might,

PARTY PARTY 'cos it' Friday night!

“you're not the boss of me!”

Since: Jan 08

the road less traveled.....

#18 Nov 7, 2008
Grace Nerissa wrote:
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but.. everything passes and this will to
now, If I may tell you what to do
Go out on the town, and with all your might,
PARTY PARTY 'cos it' Friday night!
Friday, friday is finally here
eight more hours and then we'll cheer.
Go out on the town to celebrate
and come back home entirely too late.

Since: Nov 08

United States

#19 Nov 7, 2008
Party tonight, but with due care
You know the cops will be out there
Party at home, or one of a friend's
That way the party never ends.

“Towards Spring”

Level 8

Since: Dec 06

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#20 Nov 7, 2008
VeeTwin wrote:
Party tonight, but with due care
You know the cops will be out there
Party at home, or one of a friend's
That way the party never ends.
And go to OBAMAS- there's a party there too..
but a word of warning,I pass on to you..
Don't tell OBAMA- in his new job-
what to do!

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