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“A *wink* and a smile!!”

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Feb 27, 2013
 

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Grace Nerissa wrote:
VERY NICE works
from Ohio Cowgirl AND Reebie >>
#53 and #55.
Thank you :P

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Will...
When you've time ...

Would be interested to know
how the POETRY CHALLENGE you
last spoke of, went!

and ...

'thanks'

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The winters almost over
as I look around my farm
waiting for spring
to extends it's warm arm.

Waiting for the sunshine
to watch my flowers grow
waiting on the farmer
to plow my crops in a row

Waiting on the grass
to turn emerald green
waiting on the trees to leaf
so the birds can sing

Waiting......

Ohio Cowgirl..

“ROCK ON ROCKERS!!”

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#64
Mar 5, 2013
 
Ohio Cowgirl wrote:
The winters almost over
as I look around my farm
waiting for spring
to extends it's warm arm.
Waiting for the sunshine
to watch my flowers grow
waiting on the farmer
to plow my crops in a row
Waiting on the grass
to turn emerald green
waiting on the trees to leaf
so the birds can sing
Waiting......
Ohio Cowgirl..
. So, Chick...as You and I are WAITING let's run amuck through the chilled creek waters.. NEKKID™………Skinny Dippers UNITE!!

“n stuff..”

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#65
Mar 5, 2013
 
Another storm?
for heavens sake!
snow tires ready,
piece of cake....

furry boots on
and parka ready
ill walk on the ice
holding steady

Ill trudge through the snow
and hope I dont fall
but if I do
911 Ill call

Id rather stay home
snuggled in bed
and maybe even call up fred
to snuggle with me
while we watch the storm
toasty inside all safe n warm....

“A *wink* and a smile!!”

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<quoted text>. So, Chick...as You and I are WAITING let's run amuck through the chilled creek waters.. NEKKID™………Skinny Dippers UNITE!!
Woo hoo!!!!:)

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The storms a comin'
suppose to start with a winters mix
they are predictin' 4 to six

Feeds in the barn for
my horses and cats
they have thier own fur
and they don't wear hats

Groceries are in
and the wood is stacked
to build a fire
and thats a fact

One last snowman
to build today
hoping for spring
to melt him away

A winter wonderful
so I will play
making snow angels
along the way..

Ohio Cowgirl....

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#68
Mar 5, 2013
 
Grace Nerissa wrote:
Will...
When you've time ...
Would be interested to know
how the POETRY CHALLENGE you
last spoke of, went!
and ...
'thanks'
I know you won one of them, Grace, and the one after that it is difficult to tell just what happened there!

Everybody in the poetry group seems to be spending all their time bickering over poetry and "not poetry"!

Here's the link, and as soon as I find out myself, I'll post it here!

https://groups.google.com/forum/... #!forum/alt.arts.poetry.commen ts

“Time to Make the Donuts”

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Mar 5, 2013
 

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Later in the evening
As you lie awake in bed
With the echoes from the amplifiers
Ringin' in your head
You smoke the day's last cigarette,
Rememberin' what she said

“Time to Make the Donuts”

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Mar 5, 2013
 

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Many dreams come true and some have silver linings
I live for my dream and a pocketful of gold.

Mellow is the man who knows what he's been missing
Many many men can't see the open road.

Many is a word that only leaves you guessing
Guessing 'bout a thing you really ought to know, ooh!
You really ought to know...

“n stuff..”

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#71
Mar 5, 2013
 
Well you walk into a restaurant all strung out from the road
And you feel the eyes upon you as you're shaking off the cold

You pretend it doesn't bother you, but you just want to explode

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#72
Mar 5, 2013
 
I love the babes, don't get me wrong
Hey, that's why I wrote this song

I don't care if my liver is hanging by a thread
Don't care if my doctor says I ought to be dead
When my ugly big car won't climb this hill
I'll write a suicide note on a hundred dollar bill

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Mar 6, 2013
 
Will Dockery wrote:
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I know you won one of them, Grace, and the one after that it is difficult to tell just what happened there!
Everybody in the poetry group seems to be spending all their time bickering over poetry and "not poetry"!
Here's the link, and as soon as I find out myself, I'll post it here!
https://groups.google.com/forum/... #!forum/alt.arts.poetry.commen ts
Thanks v much for this info, Will..
I knew I'd won... LOL and got a kick
out of that one;
was just wondering what happened after that.

What a pity the bickering you speak of,
is going on..
what matter! it's all self expression..
i'm sure you'll agree...
and...
surely that defeats the purpose..
one needs a quiet mind in order to
compose.

Tkx again Will.

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Mar 6, 2013
 
Grace Nerissa wrote:
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Thanks v much for this info, Will..
I knew I'd won... LOL and got a kick
out of that one;
was just wondering what happened after that.
What a pity the bickering you speak of,
is going on..
what matter! it's all self expression..
i'm sure you'll agree...
and...
surely that defeats the purpose..
one needs a quiet mind in order to
compose.
Tkx again Will.
Hello Grace... this just was posted, the winner of the last contest was Dana Dodd:

https://groups.google.com/d/msg/alt.arts.poet...

All votes have been tabulated
and the winner is My Child by
Ms. Dana Dodd. Thanks for
All your interest and input.

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My Child

Morning dew soaks bare feet
Walking in early hours of dawn
Honeysuckle sweet
And birds summer song
Fills the air
A child again out on the lawn
Down in the clover and daffodils
Looking for fairies
They must be real
Climbing up high
In the Chinaberry tree
White linen billows on a fair breeze
Nighttime falls and fireflies fly
We dance with the moon
And the stars in the sky

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What is Love
as I search my brain
is it mental or physical
or one in the same.

Is it a soft whisper
by someone so dear
is it someone you
think about and want to be near

Is it a feeling you get
when you see them close by
when your heart starts
beating fast and you don't know why

Or is it this thing
we can't explain
that makes us feel safe
and out of harms way.

Thats gives us comfort
even on bad days
That warms us like the sunshine
with it's golden rays.

Ohio Cowgirl...

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The beginning

two souls unite, explode
collide
and for a time
an amazing ride
but frightening

the struggle begins
to keep it real
precious moments
you beg to steal
are fleeting

the love you feel
suddenly aint enough
your head begins
to call hearts bluff

you battle against
realities grip
as you view those
precious moments slip
away

this star crossed love
in destinys hand
you begin to accept
its not in "the plan"

loved and lost
they say is best
sadly I
dont feel so blessed....

so now to tuck
that love away
a special place
safe to stay
in my heart..

The End..

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Mar 13, 2013
 

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Whenever I miss you,
I have only to look up at the night sky
I see you there
awesome Orion
the icy, shimmering blue of your starlight
in the liquid purple-black sky.

All the lesser stars twinkle around you
Yours are the brightest
They long ago wove themselves into you
No longer stars, but a god
Orion, the hunter, his sword on his belt
who calls all the Universe home.

Timeless is my love for you in the clock of the stars
An ever-fixed mark.
I see you there, awesome Orion
There since the beginning of the Earth and before
there until the last of my days and beyond.

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Mar 13, 2013
 
Hold tight, wait 'till the party's over
Hold tight, we're in for nasty weather
There has got to be a way
Burning down the house
Here's your ticket, pack your bags, time for jumpin' overboard
Transportation is here
Close enough but not too far, maybe you know where you are
Fightin' fire with fire
All wet, hey you might need a raincoat
Shakedown, dreams walking in broad daylight
Three hundred sixty five degrees
Burning down the house
Grace Nerissa

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#81
Mar 28, 2013
 
Would be nice to see some poems with an 'Easter' theme here.

Any takers?

I'll put effort here later.

“Time to Make the Donuts”

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#82
Mar 28, 2013
 
Try to do the things you should
Maybe if you're extra good
He'll roll lots of Easter eggs your way
You'll wake up on Easter mornin'
And you'll know that he was there
When you find those chocolate bunnies
That he's hiding everywhere
Oh! here comes Peter Cottontail
Hoppin' down the bunny trail
Hippity hoppity, happy Easter Day
Hippity hoppity, happy Easter Day

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