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I touch her hand
she feins with repose..
"do you sir find me of pleasure when only no one my champion near? Of what entreats to you hold so dear?"
Recoiling in my honor I so compose; "Tis the light of a feather the heart of a rose."
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Since: Dec 11
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Judged: 2 2 1 I touch her hand she feins with repose.. "do you sir find me of pleasure when only no one my champion near? Of what entreats to you hold so dear?" Recoiling in my honor I so compose; "Tis the light of a feather the heart of a rose." |
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“Hippie,single father,HONESTvet” Since: Apr 11
steamboat sprgs Colorado |
Judged: 4 4 4 THESE DAYS My body forces me to sit,I talk a little less,I try to think of tomorrow NOT what I coulda,woulda,shoulda done,even when restless I remain focused,maybe today possibly tomorrow,always getting it right ,no slouch never a doubt,possibilities are endless when always moving forward,brighter lights need more energy the fuel is often from the soul, concentrations of calculations often leave me lacking the simpler rhythms an easier goal,there can be no detection show no rejection. IT'S FOR THE CHILD Peace. Rick |
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Brisbane, Australia |
Judged: 3 3 3 And the morning sky is red, Then my heart doth rise and say, `Surely she will come today.' In the golden blaze of noon, `Surely she is coming soon.' In the twilight,`Will she come?' Then my heart with fear is dumb. When the night wind in the trees Plays its mournful melodies, Then I know my trust is vain, And she will not come again. |
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“May time” Since: Dec 06
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Judged: 1 I won this Poetry Challenge competition.. so they tell me.. WHY don't you folks join the next one.. it's fun> #14 http://www.topix.com/forum/news/weird/T4DH64N... |
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Since: Jun 08
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Judged: 2 2 2 I liked this poem..... so I hearted you..... |
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“Hippie,single father,HONESTvet” Since: Apr 11
steamboat sprgs Colorado |
Judged: 4 4 3 A haunting memory, living de ja vus, we used it for enlightenment, their end we felt was entitlement, Never understood our demise, our futures waited in disguise, not the beginning,never reality, no clear future certainly never an end, only today never credit to pay,shove it aside, take it in stride, when we can't make it, play along never admit to wrong,a passion to stay to really really play. A flashback to our futures sometimes reminds of our waste,do we stop the denial live without amending our minds? finding an easy way to proceed without forgetting it is all reality in the END. Peace. Rick |
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“Just watchin' the Locals” Since: Feb 13
You said you're from where? |
Judged: 3 3 3 Believe me. I learned the hard way. “It's not about going around trying to stir up trouble. As long as you're honest and you articulate what you believe to be true, somebody somewhere will become your enemy whether you like it or not.” |
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Since: Aug 09
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“I smile to see my haters frown” Since: Feb 12
Venus |
Judged: 2 1 1 Why is it easy to forget, but yet hard to remember? Why is it easy to cry, but yet hard to smile? Why is it easy to walk away, but yet hard to say goodbye? Can you tell me why? Why is it easy to put one down, but yet hard to impress? Why is it easy to die, but yet hard to live? Why is it easy to be numb, but yet hard to be happy? Can you tell me why? Why is it easy to say I hate you, but yet hard to say I love you? Why is it easy to say sorry, but yet hard to forgive? Why is it easy to be hurt, but yet easy to put on a fake face? Can you tell me why? |
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“I smile to see my haters frown” Since: Feb 12
Venus |
Judged: 1 What do you mean won the Poetry Challenge competition? So you can submit a poem and try to win??? |
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“May time” Since: Dec 06
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Judged: 1 1 With apologies for delay in replying.. you can browse through the details here>> http://www.topix.com/forum/news/weird/T4DH64N... Liked *your* poem. |
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“I smile to see my haters frown” Since: Feb 12
Venus |
Judged: 1 1 1 Thank you, was going through a rough time, at that time! So, yeah I just started writing and that's what I came up with. Have more, but will post later and thank you for letting me know about the contest! Have a great day! |
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“I used to be sane but...” Since: Feb 13
then I got better! |
Judged: 1 1 1 born of evil thus defiled cast from heaven here on earth I must prove to God my worth Do good deeds to lift me up please Lord let me fill your cup Through the days I'll live for you until the time my life is through Please Lord don't leave me hoping accept me with your arms wide open |
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Dublin, Ireland |
Judged: 2 2 2 It' is a beautifully expressed poem, I think this poem is called 'Myth' |
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“It's A New Dawn” Since: Mar 11
Rockin' USA |
Judged: 1 1 1 |
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Since: Jun 09
California Dreaming |
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“I smile to see my haters frown” Since: Feb 12
Venus |
Judged: 3 2 1 |
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“Hippie,single father,HONESTvet” Since: Apr 11
steamboat sprgs Colorado |
Judged: 7 7 7 Time is so much more than 24hrs.An endless repetition of breaths,moments,minutes,hrs,su nrises& sunsets ,The thoughts the dreams some smiles some schemes,You say they say, we stay we stray,it never forgets,The infants the seedlings a core or a crust.starting or stopping negative & positive we ponder or play,Continuous motion,goodness & greatness moving & making,reality or faking,A universe a space a globe some land,is it endless or easy to understand, revolutions are endless,my mind or TIME Rick |
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Since: Feb 12
United States |
Judged: 10 6 5 devine cuts and pastes,nut unusual for the common thief... |
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Since: Dec 11
Location hidden |
Judged: 1 1 1 on the ice of frozen dreams. |
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