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Apr 16, 2013
 
Firstly. I'm 22
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Apr 16, 2013
 
Ok I'm 28
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Apr 16, 2013
 
I'm 17
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Apr 16, 2013
 
25 here
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Apr 16, 2013
 
What are y'all looking for?
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#10
Apr 16, 2013
 
22 any of you on bbm??
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Apr 16, 2013
 
I'm 37
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Apr 16, 2013
 
I'm 20
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Apr 16, 2013
 
Hi all. We not on bbm, email, Facebook, or any thing else like that.

We just wanna know if our sexual adventures are as good as we enjoyed them.

We may trade pics with a couple, but not right away.

I'll start with a short simple story.
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Apr 16, 2013
 
Bbm anyone?

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Apr 16, 2013
 
Our first story happened just last night.

I arrived home, my gf was in bed sleeping. So I get undressed lay in bed beside her, kiss her head, and her boobs are not covered, my penis instantly hardens, so I start to stroke myself, while tweaking at her nipples. She then moves a little, her mouth open in my direction, so I be brave, line up my hard shaft, and prepare to enter her mouth.

Before I had the chance, she was already sucking and licking the head. She wasn't asleep, just toying with me!!!!! So I sit back and enjoy the pleasures, till she stops and suggests I lick her moist hole at the same time. So I go down, and now we both enjoying the pleasures of oral sex!!!

I stopped for breathe, and she asks, do you want a show honey? Yes please!!!!

She takes out her vibes from the drawer, takes one in her love hole, and the other on her clitty! I lay back and watch, while stroking myself, then I move between her legs, place 2 fingers at the opening to her back passage, and wait for her to move them into herself, she does instantly which sends her crazy in lust and she rides my 2 fingers, a vibe in herself, and tickling her cl!t.

I then move back towards her head, fingers still deep, and fill her mouth!!! This sends her shuddering to an orgasm, and now she wants more!!!!

I bend her over, take her deep from behind, putting my fingers in and out butt with every rock she gives, until she begs me to fuck her tight little rosebud!

I bang away at her bak doors, until Im ready to blow my load, I pull out, she spreads her cheeks and demands that I cream pie her gapping butt, and take a picture for the memory!

We just slept after.

Since: Mar 13

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#19
Apr 16, 2013
 
Neymar91 wrote:
Our first story happened just last night.
I arrived home, my gf was in bed sleeping. So I get undressed lay in bed beside her, kiss her head, and her boobs are not covered, my penis instantly hardens, so I start to stroke myself, while tweaking at her nipples. She then moves a little, her mouth open in my direction, so I be brave, line up my hard shaft, and prepare to enter her mouth.
Before I had the chance, she was already sucking and licking the head. She wasn't asleep, just toying with me!!!!! So I sit back and enjoy the pleasures, till she stops and suggests I lick her moist hole at the same time. So I go down, and now we both enjoying the pleasures of oral sex!!!
I stopped for breathe, and she asks, do you want a show honey? Yes please!!!!
She takes out her vibes from the drawer, takes one in her love hole, and the other on her clitty! I lay back and watch, while stroking myself, then I move between her legs, place 2 fingers at the opening to her back passage, and wait for her to move them into herself, she does instantly which sends her crazy in lust and she rides my 2 fingers, a vibe in herself, and tickling her cl!t.
I then move back towards her head, fingers still deep, and fill her mouth!!! This sends her shuddering to an orgasm, and now she wants more!!!!
I bend her over, take her deep from behind, putting my fingers in and out butt with every rock she gives, until she begs me to fuck her tight little rosebud!
I bang away at her bak doors, until Im ready to blow my load, I pull out, she spreads her cheeks and demands that I cream pie her gapping butt, and take a picture for the memory!
We just slept after.
The general premise of the story is coo. A virtual Voyeuristic look into your bedroom, as well as the playful dynamic between you two.

I felt rushed however and the ending was a little anticlimactic. The over use of porn names for things "cream pie" etc. takes away from the sense that this is a loving relationship, not a porn script you're hopping Ron Jeremy will option.

Basically, you're trying a bit too hard here. Your story is erotic enough on its own without the unecessary vulgar euephamisms thrown in there. You want to capture your audience? Describe the details, the feelings both inner and outer, her screams reverberating off the cage of her heart. Passion in her eyes so intense you could feel the carnal need as warm thick juices streamed over you, feeling a sense of love and lust mixed creating a harmoneous moment between your two bodies before you join in with her explosion erupting inside her.

The feeling of being drained filling your mind as you struggled to catch your brearh you both lay together in an embrace that matches the excitement before it.

Something like that.
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#20
Apr 16, 2013
 
Neymar91 wrote:
Our first story happened just last night.
I arrived home, my gf was in bed sleeping. So I get undressed lay in bed beside her, kiss her head, and her boobs are not covered, my penis instantly hardens, so I start to stroke myself, while tweaking at her nipples. She then moves a little, her mouth open in my direction, so I be brave, line up my hard shaft, and prepare to enter her mouth.
Before I had the chance, she was already sucking and licking the head. She wasn't asleep, just toying with me!!!!! So I sit back and enjoy the pleasures, till she stops and suggests I lick her moist hole at the same time. So I go down, and now we both enjoying the pleasures of oral sex!!!
I stopped for breathe, and she asks, do you want a show honey? Yes please!!!!
She takes out her vibes from the drawer, takes one in her love hole, and the other on her clitty! I lay back and watch, while stroking myself, then I move between her legs, place 2 fingers at the opening to her back passage, and wait for her to move them into herself, she does instantly which sends her crazy in lust and she rides my 2 fingers, a vibe in herself, and tickling her cl!t.
I then move back towards her head, fingers still deep, and fill her mouth!!! This sends her shuddering to an orgasm, and now she wants more!!!!
I bend her over, take her deep from behind, putting my fingers in and out butt with every rock she gives, until she begs me to fuck her tight little rosebud!
I bang away at her bak doors, until Im ready to blow my load, I pull out, she spreads her cheeks and demands that I cream pie her gapping butt, and take a picture for the memory!
We just slept after.
I want to see the pic. K ik me lordleo11

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Apr 16, 2013
 
HardDominant wrote:
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The general premise of the story is coo. A virtual Voyeuristic look into your bedroom, as well as the playful dynamic between you two.
I felt rushed however and the ending was a little anticlimactic. The over use of porn names for things "cream pie" etc. takes away from the sense that this is a loving relationship, not a porn script you're hopping Ron Jeremy will option.
Basically, you're trying a bit too hard here. Your story is erotic enough on its own without the unecessary vulgar euephamisms thrown in there. You want to capture your audience? Describe the details, the feelings both inner and outer, her screams reverberating off the cage of her heart. Passion in her eyes so intense you could feel the carnal need as warm thick juices streamed over you, feeling a sense of love and lust mixed creating a harmoneous moment between your two bodies before you join in with her explosion erupting inside her.
The feeling of being drained filling your mind as you struggled to catch your brearh you both lay together in an embrace that matches the excitement before it.
Something like that.
Thanks for the advice. Much appreciated

“Depravity abounds...”

Since: Mar 13

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#22
Apr 16, 2013
 
Do you have a link to your erotica blog? J/k, good advice though.
HardDominant wrote:
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The general premise of the story is coo. A virtual Voyeuristic look into your bedroom, as well as the playful dynamic between you two.
I felt rushed however and the ending was a little anticlimactic. The over use of porn names for things "cream pie" etc. takes away from the sense that this is a loving relationship, not a porn script you're hopping Ron Jeremy will option.
Basically, you're trying a bit too hard here. Your story is erotic enough on its own without the unecessary vulgar euephamisms thrown in there. You want to capture your audience? Describe the details, the feelings both inner and outer, her screams reverberating off the cage of her heart. Passion in her eyes so intense you could feel the carnal need as warm thick juices streamed over you, feeling a sense of love and lust mixed creating a harmoneous moment between your two bodies before you join in with her explosion erupting inside her.
The feeling of being drained filling your mind as you struggled to catch your brearh you both lay together in an embrace that matches the excitement before it.
Something like that.

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Apr 16, 2013
 
TwistedHubby wrote:
Do you have a link to your erotica blog? J/k, good advice though.
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Lol, I am a writer by hobby. I write mostly lyrics, spoken word, and poetry, but I write. I actually don't do erotic fiction, though have, on occasion done erotic poetry.

And thank you. I just feel the subtlety of imagery will beat out the hammer of verbage any day.

@OP: You're welcome, I am happy to have helped.

“Depravity abounds...”

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#25
Apr 16, 2013
 
I can tell, your posts on this forum are always well put together... I always respect a fellow wordsmith.
HardDominant wrote:
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Lol, I am a writer by hobby. I write mostly lyrics, spoken word, and poetry, but I write. I actually don't do erotic fiction, though have, on occasion done erotic poetry.
And thank you. I just feel the subtlety of imagery will beat out the hammer of verbage any day.
@OP: You're welcome, I am happy to have helped.
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Apr 16, 2013
 

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me and my girlfriend were in a nightclub.i was fingering her while dancing without anyone noticing.we tried to go upstairs but without any panties on my girlfriend cummed everywhere in font of everyone.i cummed as well and you could see a wet patch on my jeans.i was already embarrassed so i just stripped both of us and started to have sex with my girlfriend.i knew no one there,luckily.in a few minutes everyone was naked and fucking each other!!!

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