please tell me if my song is any good

please tell me if my song is any good

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Since: Jan 13

Sevierville, TN

#1 Jan 30, 2013
I'll Be Waiting

(Verse 1)
You've always been bright. You've got the world in your hands. The sky's the limit but even then you hesitate, and i know its because of me your dreams have come to a stop. You don't want to leave me you don't want to break my heart. One part of me wants you to feel guilty. But the other side know you've got to go off and find your very own. Its time for me to grow up. And put your needs before my own. But I want you to know you'll always have a home.

(Chorus)
I'll be waiting to the early morning. I'll keep holding on to the sun sets. As much as i want it to be. I want you here with me but i know that's selfish so i've gotta set you free. But I'll be waiting with love deeper than a canyon i'll always be your faithful, honest companion. With memories of you, wishing all of your dreams come true. Because i love you i'll stay until you break through.

(Verse 2)
I'll be here. With patience so sweet i wont give in to the urges. I wont compete. With your life choices and time that's rightfully yours. How can i expect you to be the man i need when you haven't even found the man your supposed to be.

(Chorus)
I'll be waiting to the early morning. I'll keep holding on to the sun sets. As much as i want it to be. I want you here with me but i know that's selfish so i've gotta set you free. But I'll be waiting with love deeper than a canyon i'll always be your faithful, honest companion. With memories of you wishing all of your dreams come true. Because i love you i'll stay until you break through.(x2)

(Verse 3)
My shelter, my temple i've got to let you go. So you can become all that you can be. And maybe while your away, one day the sky wont be so gray and i'll follow in your example, and go out take what i need. So i'll be waiting . For you i would wait an eternity because i'm certain your the man for me.

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