Show us your own Freestyle Rap song

[Jmac10]

haha k, how about your favorite rapper and the reasons why he(or she for that matter lol)is your choice ?

[zackafras]

Jmac10 wrote:

haha k, how about your favorite rapper and the reasons why he(or she for that matter lol)is your choice ?

"its appropriate we go get soakin wet
toast, we met became close associates"
rakim allah, the pro, the vet, global best
deadtoned rappers froze in sweat when they approach his set
some kids say wayne, what? homie will you listen
lemme spill some wisdon on the truest William Griffin
rap rhymes he'd say n show would be engrained in skulls
from now til him n eric b dropped "Paid in Full"
take a note, nevermind that just take a dose
rewind me back to the time "Follow the Leader" was framed in gold
whoevers ever been in the game could never sit in
the same throne of those who dropped "Let the Rythme Hit 'Em"
argue all you want but "Dont Sweat the Technique"
just chill back relax let the 18th letter speak
"Yo, I arrive to the show, rhyme til its time to go
I'm designed to blow, my minds inclined to flow
Yo my M.O., makin all kinds of dough
From the info that Rakim show, ya know?"

[Jmac10]

zackafras wrote:

<quoted text>
"its appropriate we go get soakin wet
toast, we met became close associates"
rakim allah, the pro, the vet, global best
deadtoned rappers froze in sweat when they approach his set
some kids say wayne, what? homie will you listen
lemme spill some wisdon on the truest William Griffin
rap rhymes he'd say n show would be engrained in skulls
from now til him n eric b dropped "Paid in Full"
take a note, nevermind that just take a dose
rewind me back to the time "Follow the Leader" was framed in gold
whoevers ever been in the game could never sit in
the same throne of those who dropped "Let the Rythme Hit 'Em"
argue all you want but "Dont Sweat the Technique"
just chill back relax let the 18th letter speak
"Yo, I arrive to the show, rhyme til its time to go
I'm designed to blow, my minds inclined to flow
Yo my M.O., makin all kinds of dough
From the info that Rakim show, ya know?"

Im gonna have to go with the best of the best, the one who said “muthafu*k the rest”, straight from the west, I know you know who I’m talking about, there shouldn’t be any doubt, if he was alive I’d give him a shout, I don't need to state his name, but we do need a player in this game, so in that case, the one I list as 1st place, is TUPAC SHAKUR, no other had such a diverse fan base, listeners could relate to him no matter what social class or race, a thug who was still honest to his faith, never lied to his fans, himself or god, only asked questions and remarked on things that he found odd,(I hope as you read you’re responding with a nod), but it’s hard to describe him even this rhyme is quite broad, his lyrics were detailed and meaningful, I can’t believe that he’s gone, if I am ever feeling withdrawn, I can always sit down and listen to one of his inspirational songs, disagree? If so, point out where you think that I’m wrong

[Playaz Dogg]

Hi Hater
You see me
money in my hand
livin' like a king
no one like me
I rap I don't sing
I got my gold chain
I got my Bling
there hater, hate on dat
yo rap is slow and fat
you got words to say to dat
I'm Playaz Dogg, I'm wat you lack
I got paper dawg, you don't like dat
well get away from me, Da dogg is back
I'm always in town, always around
when I come it's going down
You can hear my speaker sound
I'm in it's gonna get loud
around me there's a crowd
ready for me to hit da MIC
I'm still up, while you sleep
You got your self deep
thinkin' you can defeat me

Hi Hater you see me

[Afro Boyz]

Wat dis sh*t?
look like a lil girl got bit
yall guys throw a fit over dis
i can't belive this
get off da internet yall can't rhyme
go away yall waste my time
yall guyz wack
my rhymes are bad like crack
but mathaf**a I'm ill
I scare and kill
go and pay a bill
if you can't hold a deal

[Playaz Dogg]

zackafras wrote:

<quoted text>
yo DMP's gunna meet his E.N.D.
he walks in with a room full of queers and leaves men please
i teach emcees when these pens reach
the paper, im no stranger to making these men cease

Yo dawg, were you get those wicked rhymes from, they is ill dawg

[Jmac10]

Playaz Dogg wrote:

Hi Hater
You see me
money in my hand
livin' like a king
no one like me
I rap I don't sing
I got my gold chain
I got my Bling
there hater, hate on dat
yo rap is slow and fat
you got words to say to dat
I'm Playaz Dogg, I'm wat you lack
I got paper dawg, you don't like dat
well get away from me, Da dogg is back
I'm always in town, always around
when I come it's going down
You can hear my speaker sound
I'm in it's gonna get loud
around me there's a crowd
ready for me to hit da MIC
I'm still up, while you sleep
You got your self deep
thinkin' you can defeat me
Hi Hater you see me

“I'm Playaz Dogg, I'm wat you lack”, true
no disagreement to that
but the fact is your rhymes reek of stench like a fat man’s ass crack
don’t be giving me any flack buddy
you think you can flow with J-MAC? funny
you’re so ignorant to rap,
I bet you pronounce his name “Tu-pack”
“I got paper dawg, you don't like dat”
I got no problem with “dat”
that’s cool, but maybe you should invest that money in school
your vocab is useless like a waterless pool
now I hate to be cruel
never diss others that’s usually my rule
but you’re an exception
I was trying help by giving you a rhyming lesson
but you were blind and came back blazing like a Smith and Wesson
I’ve never thought of myself as a hater,
I got mad props for anyone getting paper
but do me a favour
add some flavour to ya rhymes cuz right now they hard to savour
peace bro, I’ll catch ya later

[Jmac10]

Afro Boyz wrote:

Wat dis sh*t?
look like a lil girl got bit
yall guys throw a fit over dis
i can't belive this
get off da internet yall can't rhyme
go away yall waste my time
yall guyz wack
my rhymes are bad like crack
but mathaf**a I'm ill
I scare and kill
go and pay a bill
if you can't hold a deal

“my rhymes are bad like crack”,“yall guyz wack”
I hope you’re not including J-MAC in that “ya’ll”
Watch your step on the edge be careful you don’t fall
I can barely understand what you wrote
Got me thinking your mind wasn’t clear, did you toke?
No one rhymes like that sober, I hope, maybe lay off the dope
There’s no competition, let me pop open a coke
I would advise against a brawl in the ropes
It’ll be over before you can say “that’s all folks”
Now I’m not here to spew hate
Or scrape the cake of your plate
But don’t step, I drop disses at an alarming rate
Known worldwide like Obama’s taped reverend
My rhymes are like a 1-8-7
They will inflict severe consequences on your fate,
But wait
There is another way
Where we both can be players and play
How is that possible? You say
Well you SEE Afro boy and J-mac, that’s ME
Rhyme about something different next time
Pick a topic, like sports, and drop a line
“yall guys throw a fit over dis”
True we do especially when it’s aimed at you
And we have a justifiable reason
To peoples ears disses arn’t pleasing
They’re dark and cold like the winter season
But go ahead keep hating on others if it’s relieving
Get used to me though cuz I’M NOT LEAVING

[Jozzy Jay]

Ma Name Is ASH AND BUSH BUT WAT I DO IS A DASH 1 KK LOL BASTERD ROBED MY HOUSE AND SHOT ME IN MY ASS BITCH

[Lil Weezy]

Yo, I got a question: were da f*ck did da "Afro Boyz" come from? couldn't yall find a better name that dat? it's terrible dawg. It's like all of a sudden' yall got high on crack or somethin' and came up wit a stupid ass name foe yo selfs, but couldn't yall at least do better at pickin a name?

yo name makes me laugh

[Better than Yall]

Looks like schools out/
Bunch of kids actin like they can rap -
BUT should go a new route/
I'd rather listen to TRUTH out of a fools mouth/
lemme know when you leave ya momma house and move out!/
Kings? Please!!!,
yall more like monkeys swingin from treez/...
"Chump-panzee's"
wit make belevie Bling - Geeez,
Oh lil weez'-
stop blindin my vision/
wait -its definately not ya diamonds glistenin',
its all the LIES u deliverin,
bout how you livin /
Save it Yall/
& OH! how original is the Name PLayas dogg?/
Im droppin Gems, spittin Oxygen,
while all you spray is SMOG/
frontin like you hustle,
when the "Block" layed you off!!/
And heres some tissues',
for J-mac crying about the Dis' use /
cuz your game is soft/
too sentimental/
afriad of the lead in a pencil
i'll dent in ya mental/
w/flows harder then a bi-centennial.../
coin/
you cant beat me , so youll wanna join/
the perennial.../
all star /
Im flyer than asteroids shootin off mars/
blow ya wigs back on mics,
and then the roof off ya cars/
wait are you old enuff for a license???
they should put the same age requirements on mic devices/
tryn to stand up to real comp and your height-less/
wanna see me but liek Stevie-- your sight-less/
Im like virgins w/the verse, my words are the tightest!/
righteous and rightfully so -- see
you know the stees/
Spit calm or agressive lessons
Cuz hip hop is expression thru poetry/
if you lookin for an ultimate emcee/
look no further
cuz you already know its me..../

[Lil Weezy]

What?

[Da DMPz]

Ya gonna say somthin to us or you to much of a emcee to say anything Mr. "Better than yall"
We is hood rich
get away b!tch
we don't need this sh!t
we ain't gonna take this
cause you f*cka is raw
you go long
but you stay short at a song
we ain't hangin wit this dogg
man you dead wrong
you dead as can be
we hit hard wit our poetry
let us teach you somthin from me
an aggression lesson
you came to da wrong session
we is livin high, you livin low
d*mn it's like a f*ckin freek show
everyone hater like you ya know
we make money like gold
you make quarters like a post
you forget yo medicine yo second dose
you gonna need it
you don't got it, beat it
cause da Kings are here yo

[Jmac10]

Da DMPz wrote:

Ya gonna say somthin to us or you to much of a emcee to say anything Mr. "Better than yall"
We is hood rich
get away b!tch
we don't need this sh!t
we ain't gonna take this
cause you f*cka is raw
you go long
but you stay short at a song
we ain't hangin wit this dogg
man you dead wrong
you dead as can be
we hit hard wit our poetry
let us teach you somthin from me
an aggression lesson
you came to da wrong session
we is livin high, you livin low
d*mn it's like a f*ckin freek show
everyone hater like you ya know
we make money like gold
you make quarters like a post
you forget yo medicine yo second dose
you gonna need it
you don't got it, beat it
cause da Kings are here yo

“let us teach you somthin from me”
WOW an essential English speaking person is NOT what you be
You’re just a big dumMY
Trying to speak with the tongue of G
But aint fooling nobody ya see
You ignorant buffoon
Will you be arriving here on a BOAT anytime soon?
Or are you like the others, trying to spit after a TOKE?
A yes to either I hope
You attempting to compete but you’re slipping like soap on a rope
You open up but nothing comes out of your throat
And when something does it be hazy like ‘twas filled with smoke
I KNOW it’s DOPE
After reading you can’t believe what I wrote
I wasn’t looking for a kill but you’re in my scope
I don’t miss when I diss,
You just have to cope with the FACT
Defeat is inevitable when you facing J-MAC

[Jmac10]

Da DMPz wrote:

Ya gonna say somthin to us or you to much of a emcee to say anything Mr. "Better than yall"
We is hood rich
get away b!tch
we don't need this sh!t
we ain't gonna take this
cause you f*cka is raw
you go long
but you stay short at a song
we ain't hangin wit this dogg
man you dead wrong
you dead as can be
we hit hard wit our poetry
let us teach you somthin from me
an aggression lesson
you came to da wrong session
we is livin high, you livin low
d*mn it's like a f*ckin freek show
everyone hater like you ya know
we make money like gold
you make quarters like a post
you forget yo medicine yo second dose
you gonna need it
you don't got it, beat it
cause da Kings are here yo

Da D-M-P-zzzz’s
Speaking as if ya’ll were GGGG’s
Now THAT’S funny to me
“we is hood RICH”
is that what you be?
YOU HAVE “GOOD” ENGLISH too it seems
Have you yet to complete grade 3?
PAAALEASE who you trying to fool here
Are fiited hats, bagy jeans, and LUGZ what you wear?
If so cool cuz I too own a pair
But that don’t make you a G c’mon please be sincere
You came in this forum saying “Look out the real gangstas are here”
I’m like “Oh really where?”
Who? Da DMP’z over there?
Acting like the gays,“We’re here, we’re queer”
The kids with the XXX sized clothes
Clunky boots backward hats and BIG BOOTY HOES
One of them spins his chain “check out this shiner yo”
Ya’ll a bunch of liars though
Bitches and whiners
“No we ain’t check out our gold wires”
Ya they be real (sense the satire?)
“We is livin hiGH” Really you higher and higher
Is that SO?
I don’t even have a repLY to that BRO
“we make money like gold”
Don’t try and auction your rhymes
cuz NONE would be sold
I hate to be bold or scold
But someone needed to and now you’ve been told
It’s summer time and your rhymes are cold
I’ve got you beat accept it and fold
Not gonna lie aint mad paper in my pockets
But watch it, with this pen I rock it, drop it
Don’t stop and I won’t stop
Till you DMP’z cop it
Remember me J-MAC jack
This how my game is
quite famous in fact
And the DMP’z
would better off nameless then that

[Better than Yall]

Damn J-mac....
I think they was rappin at me?/
Its Cuz IM "BETTER THAN YALL"
And NONE of yall wanna Battle wit "HE"/
Actually - Ya better off as Lumberjacks -
SLAPPIN a tree/
It'll be a Multiple fake rapper
catastrophe - tragedy /
Slow down cuz I shatter dreams rapidly,
so Either Take a Nap or Knee/
Ya No Frills skills R' so ass, you went PRO..
at HAVIN A SEAT!/
Ya styles about as PHAT
as a concrete crack in the street'/
Damn fools...
I'll slam you wit a 4x4...
Not a peice of wood- dummy,
A PASSENGE JEEP!/
Catch me putting the carcass
of other fake artists
back in the creek/
wrapped in sheet /
After Grabbin A limb havin a TREAT/
I Give new meaning to Cold Cuts
with my Axe to ya Meat/
The only Vibe im feelin from you...
is ya Chatterin Teeth/
U Petrified ,
Shittin ya briefs
as additional piss and flatulence leak!/
Students...
your teachers's givin you a pass to leave'/
congratulations
Yall just graduated from the CLass of Defeat/

[Birdmans Brother]

D*mn dawg! yall is tearin each other up man
I like it, compettion is harsh around here dawg!

[Da DMPz]

alright dawg, we ain't tryin to kill the compettion, were just havin fun man, so wat if we say somthing harsh that's wat it's about!

Like it says: "Show us your own Freestyle"
we ain't battlin' each other dawg, we just rappin' at our own gesture and style, aight?

How about we introduce ourselfs so you know who you talkin to:

I am DJ Junk and my homeboyz Slang T, Xcellent, Big Joc, and especialy Playaz Dogg

[j-LAW]

HOLLA AT YO BOY j-LAW I'M SO FLAWLESS LIKE YA HOUSE AIN'T GOT NO HALLS SO I'M LIKE WHO IS THE GREATEST RAPPER ALIVE WHEZZYFBABY JR. CAUSE YA KNOW I'M SO NEW LIKE A COUGAR ALL U OTHER DUDES LIKE A GOT DANG SEWER SO U DON'T KNOW ABOUT ME SO PLEASE LET ME BE NO PLEASE SAVE ME NO LET ME SAVE U WHO KNEW WHAT WHAT IT WOULD DO LIVE'N IN DIXON LIKE RICHARD NIXON LIVE'N IN THIS TOWN FULL OF CLOWNS S0 DO U THINK U CAN HANG WIT ME NAH JUST LET BE WE BE REP'N CASH MONEY NOW YALL KNOW ME

[Da Gangsta Redz]

Yo, Da Gangsta Redz in da buildin'
that's our style ya feelin'
got more money than crack dealin'
wit this compettion we killin'

Trippin'up G's we flawless
rap style you call this
ni55az, yall clueless

We crush yall like smash
We da fire, yall turn to ash
Muthaf*cka how we do this cash

Gangsta 301, gettin' that money
way yall rap it seems so funky
funny like DMP'z in battling
like NASCAR we always winning

No one can defeat these three kingz
Da Gangsta Redz, ya know wat it meanz
Hood Gangstaz 301, peace!