Show us your own Freestyle Rap song

[Da DMPz]

You think you can rhyme wit da DMP'z?
Show us you own freestyle!

[Lil Weezy]

This is Lil weezy
the greatest rapper since Young Jeezy
I ride hard but I take it eazy
I'm ture to my rhymes, no cheating
there ain't no other rapper can beat the king
That king, yeah that's me
da DMP'z gangsta no one's like me
like my Grillz, I'm so clean
I'm so bad with my hangin' bling
yes, it's hard to challenge me
that's because I'm a gangsta from Da DMP'z
Peace

[Playaz Dogg]

Uh, No cheating, no beating
no singing, no leading
just listen to me
yeah, that's right
listen to da REAL king
King of Hip Hop
King of Rap
Dont like that?
well kiss my ass
this is my freestyle Rap
Like $20 sittin' on Kilo's tap
You see my name on shirts and a Baseball cap
Yo, from hood to Arkansas, my rap is raw
sceamin' my name: Playaz Dogg!

[DMPz and Playaz Dogg]

Yo dawg, yall wrong
We got it right
DMP'z & Playaz Dogg
Hittin' it up
On our new Rap song
We got shawtys
showin they thong
It feels right
When it's Wrong
We smashin' da compettion
Like King Kong
New style like Rick Ross
A new song to show and toss
Yo Playaz Dogg, Tell'em what's on

[Playaz Dogg]
Yo, Yo, I say whats's good
You say what's bad
I got new Hype, not dat bad
I got money you never had
all da bad boyz, are all just sad
brand new Cadilac, how 'bout dat
20" DUB's, style to kick that
this da King, DMP'z and Playaz Dogg
all i gotta say, end of Rap song
Peace dawg, we out.

[yung zeek]

yall ni55az whack

[Playaz Dogg]

How we wack
you on crack
you dont like this
well kiss my a*s
hater like yall
around me they turn to ash
can't stay here, go on back
cause they wack
Sh*t like this
I dont deal wit that
you ain't got money
so you aint got cash
one on one, kiss my a*s

[Playaz Dogg]

Low ridin' hard
I spendin it all
Like money on a credit card
Dem Haters got dollas
On a gangsta's card
walk in da club
Wit my chain hang low
I put it on for show
I got paper foe
walk you out da door
While I hit da dance floor
Ya know my style is hardcore
This is da Dogg in town
can't hit this clown
this is da new sound
so don't fool around
While I keep lookin' up
You keep lookin' down
Im da King, so give me da crown
Playaz Dogg's gettin down
peace yall, we out

[Jozzy Jay]

Yo, wat is this sh!t?
Playaz Dogg?
Da DMP'z?
Lil Weezy?
this a clown party?

[Jmac10]

Playaz Dogg wrote:

How we wack
you on crack
you dont like this
well kiss my a*s
hater like yall
around me they turn to ash
can't stay here, go on back
cause they wack
Sh*t like this
I dont deal wit that
you ain't got money
so you aint got cash
one on one, kiss my a*s

How many times you gonna rhyme “kiss my ass”? is your vocabulary that limited?, did you sleep during English class? If your rhymes were to be graded they’d receive less than a pass, now, I hate to sit and diss or harass, but I can’t stand those who think they can “rap”, talking about the fancy cars you whip and the types of gats you pack, well listen up jack, cuz this is a fact, unlike J-MAC, you rhyme the same old sh*t over and oVER, but I don’t see, J-MAC that’s me, rare like a 4 leaf cloVER, why don’t you open up and drop something that’s real, don’t be afraid your true feeling you shouldn’t conceal, cars, hos, and bling don’t need to be included in a rhyme for it to appeal, so I dare you, to write a rhyme without that stuff and don’t say kiss my ass cuz I’ve heard it enough, can you handle that? Is my mission for you too tough?

[zackafras]

Da DMPz wrote:

You think you can rhyme wit da DMP'z?
Show us you own freestyle!

yo DMP's gunna meet his E.N.D.
he walks in with a room full of queers and leaves men please
i teach emcees when these pens reach
the paper, im no stranger to making these men cease

[zackafras]

Lil Weezy wrote:

This is Lil weezy
the greatest rapper since Young Jeezy
I ride hard but I take it eazy
I'm ture to my rhymes, no cheating
there ain't no other rapper can beat the king
That king, yeah that's me
da DMP'z gangsta no one's like me
like my Grillz, I'm so clean
I'm so bad with my hangin' bling
yes, it's hard to challenge me
that's because I'm a gangsta from Da DMP'z
Peace

i tear lil waynes brittle frame with instant pain
let it fast break, cuz his raps grade is his middle name
"F", yes, weezy "F", throw out your cd, "NEXT!"
from the start i rip his fukkin heart from his bleeding chest
keep kickin til physicians start deem him dead
am i reaching you speakers? i rip into your weaklings flesh
am i dreamin? im seeing scenes of being best
livin life homie, no cheating death

[zackafras]

yung zeek wrote:

yall ni55az whack

i make yung zeeks blood leak,
shut him up like his lungs shrizzled and his tongue shrinked
come see, what we do to dudes once we
battle, standback tho cuz this gets ugly

[zackafras]

Jmac10 wrote:

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How many times you gonna rhyme “kiss my ass”? is your vocabulary that limited?, did you sleep during English class? If your rhymes were to be graded they’d receive less than a pass, now, I hate to sit and diss or harass, but I can’t stand those who think they can “rap”, talking about the fancy cars you whip and the types of gats you pack, well listen up jack, cuz this is a fact, unlike J-MAC, you rhyme the same old sh*t over and oVER, but I don’t see, J-MAC that’s me, rare like a 4 leaf cloVER, why don’t you open up and drop something that’s real, don’t be afraid your true feeling you shouldn’t conceal, cars, hos, and bling don’t need to be included in a rhyme for it to appeal, so I dare you, to write a rhyme without that stuff and don’t say kiss my ass cuz I’ve heard it enough, can you handle that? Is my mission for you too tough?

thought i warned garbage emcees, but still he's back?
jamc get face smacked, take that back to chilliwack
really wack silly cats still fill these raps
with enough bullsh!t to stuff a fatazz hillbillys crack

[Jmac10]

zackafras wrote:

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i make yung zeeks blood leak,
shut him up like his lungs shrizzled and his tongue shrinked
come see, what we do to dudes once we
battle, standback tho cuz this gets ugly

Let me say man your rhymes I’m feeling them, and I’m glad they’re real you aint stealing them, cuz these others are acting like fools, rhyming with words that would imply they haven’t finished high school, I treat this like a trade and I’m good with my tools, I draw people in like a pool on a hot day, my flows be cool, you got game indeed, and your rhymes are true to you, agreed, but so far every one has been about making foes bleed, violence in a verse is that something that you need? Now, rap can be emotional, that I’ll concede, do you come from a violent environment, is that what you’re trying to plead, cuz that’s how I feel after reading, but maybe you’re not speaking literally, even so your words are misleading, why don’t you spit a rap that doesn’t involve that crap, put down your gat, if you even have one in fact, and rhyme with the J-MAC, maybe to your flow my fingers will snap, my foot will tap, and when you’re finished I’ll proceed to clap, but leave out the blood and gore, cuz to be honest man it’s a bit of a bore, not to mention it’s all been done before

[zackafras]

Jmac10 wrote:

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Let me say man your rhymes I’m feeling them, and I’m glad they’re real you aint stealing them, cuz these others are acting like fools, rhyming with words that would imply they haven’t finished high school, I treat this like a trade and I’m good with my tools, I draw people in like a pool on a hot day, my flows be cool, you got game indeed, and your rhymes are true to you, agreed, but so far every one has been about making foes bleed, violence in a verse is that something that you need? Now, rap can be emotional, that I’ll concede, do you come from a violent environment, is that what you’re trying to plead, cuz that’s how I feel after reading, but maybe you’re not speaking literally, even so your words are misleading, why don’t you spit a rap that doesn’t involve that crap, put down your gat, if you even have one in fact, and rhyme with the J-MAC, maybe to your flow my fingers will snap, my foot will tap, and when you’re finished I’ll proceed to clap, but leave out the blood and gore, cuz to be honest man it’s a bit of a bore, not to mention it’s all been done before

myspace.com/zazazarus

Dont normaly rap bout violence, but i treat this like a battle, dont take everything so literal, its just practice over the internet.

[zackafras]

normally

[Jmac10]

zackafras wrote:

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thought i warned garbage emcees, but still he's back?
jamc get face smacked, take that back to chilliwack
really wack silly cats still fill these raps
with enough bullsh!t to stuff a fatazz hillbillys crack

Garbage? buddy if you can't rhyme without a diss, then I suggest seeking the book "how to rap" cuz there's something that you missed, normally when people speak that way to me I'm pissed, but I'm choosing not to take offense to your diss, as you're just searching for a feeling of bliss, by putting down others, a scar on your ego, looking to get your Boo Boo kissed, I give you the same challenge as the others, spit a rhyme without dissing and if you can’t don’t even bother, just logoff and don’t dare post another,

[Jmac10]

zackafras wrote:

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myspace.com/zazazarus
Dont normaly rap bout violence, but i treat this like a battle, dont take everything so literal, its just practice over the internet.

Fair enough. I just can't stand when I rhyme with people and they just hate on others. Why can't two people just rhyme without dissing each other? THAT'S how you're supposed to practice, spit about anything; weather, sports, bitches, rap and the wrong direction it's heading in...ANYTHING. I don't recall this particualar forum being about dissing others, I thought it was just a freestyle...

[Jmac10]

By the way I peeped your music and it's pretty good. Your style is different I respect that, do you just do it for fun?

[zackafras]

Jmac10 wrote:

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Fair enough. I just can't stand when I rhyme with people and they just hate on others. Why can't two people just rhyme without dissing each other? THAT'S how you're supposed to practice, spit about anything; weather, sports, bitches, rap and the wrong direction it's heading in...ANYTHING. I don't recall this particualar forum being about dissing others, I thought it was just a freestyle...

alrite we can try somethin else if u want. name a topic and ill write somethin for it.