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Some Random Dude

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#22
Oct 8, 2013
 
Oh, by the way, I have even threaten to walk out of work for something I found,'Shady.' I was told to collect Credit Card information in order for my system to populate desposits. I found that to be wrong, considering we haven't given a price yet. I had them break it down. One of the big dogs from T-Mobile personally sent a E-Mail explaining that in an attempt to divert fraud, they ask for the C.C. as a last line of defense. As we value security, unlike the other companies, we push hard to make sure there is not fraud.

So, while you think about writting a disrespectful little reply to my sh!t calling me dishonest,(breaking the rules and being a hypocrite is dishonesty) you can just think about my facing down my betters to ensure that my work ethic is truthful and transparent.

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Since: Sep 11

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#23
Oct 8, 2013
 
Someone please vote lets get on with this already
Use the judging format
Hannibal Barca

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#24
Oct 9, 2013
 
I see no sportsmanship... :(
Shini

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#25
Oct 9, 2013
 
chi-town lover wrote:
And you just flipped my rhymes but whatever
I think that is hard to determine. You knew each other's weapons so there's no way to determine that off the scheme. He didn't rebuttal the material so that's why it is hard to determine.
Shini

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#26
Oct 9, 2013
 
Seanny T wrote:
A bar is basically a couplet.
Example of something super simple:
There was a dog on the chair,
It had really long hair.
Lol. Now as for chi's...ya either he typed/spaced out each of his two bars weirdly or there seems to be more...Idl tho lets wait to hear what chi says
A bar can be 2-3 lines, but if you do 3 they should be shorter.
Shini

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#27
Oct 9, 2013
 
Flow Tie Chi town has 4 bars, checked is structure.
Gore ChiTown
ST SRD
Multis SRD He had slightly better multis
Dismemberment SRD
Enjoyment SRD

Ok, don't complain about flipping or bar structures. You both seriously sound like little kids doing this.

That aside, I went with SRD on this because he had a solid story with visual material. Also that cutting of the penis reference was cleverly referrenced without saying what getting sawed off. Read SRDs gladiator bit. Chitown, I honestly thought you had this and while you drop was good, it was a little lackluster. I just plain enjoyed SRDs more.

MVGT SRD

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Since: Sep 11

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#28
Oct 9, 2013
 
Lol that's cool I mean he chopped my name off lol that didn't make sense the rest was not even rhyming I spiked his head like a football y'all didn't peep the punch lines and metas the Heisenberg reference but it's cool good battle srd I still thing the slice your face off and acid drop was exactly what I said

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#29
Oct 9, 2013
 
The wu tang reference!! Y'all snoozed

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#30
Oct 10, 2013
 
Multies I had way more

Dismemberment? He sliced my name off and cut my penis off really? Oh and he cut my girl while I for some reason decided to drink scotch with acid. Come on really shit didn't make no sense.

This is exactly what happened with me during the punch line title defense

please did you read his rap? Let's get some more votes in

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#31
Oct 10, 2013
 
And how much Do I have to dismember his body I mean I

Hit him with a spiked bat it got stuck I pulled it right back took his chainsaw and slice half his head off took the other half of the brains and cooked it with steak sauce pissed on his corpse then made it all disappear in euphoric acid. Not to mentioned I put a sock in his mouth and banged his nuts with a spiked bat!! What he do? Cut my name off which didn't make no sense, chopped off my di*k kinda gay, and sliced my girl. I'm still alive and drunk from scotch with a touch of acid. Like come on this was a joke as you can tell I'm a little pissed. When I lost to hhh it was close but a clear winner but this come on people I had multies punch lines metaphors reference gore rhymes and made his body disappear. This worst then Bradley vs PAC man lol
Hannibal Barca

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#32
Oct 10, 2013
 
Now then chit own does explain I kinda think he does have more gore. But this is just a forum for fun and improvement not some extremely competitive thing. So just relax a bit more and let your actions and spits portray the man you really are
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#33
Oct 12, 2013
 
chi-town lover wrote:
And how much Do I have to dismember his body I mean I
Hit him with a spiked bat it got stuck I pulled it right back took his chainsaw and slice half his head off took the other half of the brains and cooked it with steak sauce pissed on his corpse then made it all disappear in euphoric acid. Not to mentioned I put a sock in his mouth and banged his nuts with a spiked bat!! What he do? Cut my name off which didn't make no sense, chopped off my di*k kinda gay, and sliced my girl. I'm still alive and drunk from scotch with a touch of acid. Like come on this was a joke as you can tell I'm a little pissed. When I lost to hhh it was close but a clear winner but this come on people I had multies punch lines metaphors reference gore rhymes and made his body disappear. This worst then Bradley vs PAC man lol
Sorry man, I wasn't feeling your drop. I thought SRD's was at.least a bit creative. And you can honestly rematch Niatroh. I honestly thought you were do something like you did on that drop with me.

We can easily set that up. I honestly didn't think the title would have turned hands easily.
SomeRandomDude

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#34
Oct 12, 2013
 
Chi, mine was slept on and your, 'Bars,' are extended at best.
SomeRandomDude

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#35
Oct 12, 2013
 
By the way, our ways of mutilating will intertwine at times, it happens. Tupes of punches intertwine, it happens. They wanted simple, but clever, it obvious in the judging.

I'll give you a tip, I had to learn this as well, if you give the audience a bit of what they want, the response it better.

Want to know how my verse was slept on? It was a referrence as a whole to the Headless Horseman.
Shini

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#36
Oct 14, 2013
 
SomeRandomDude wrote:
By the way, our ways of mutilating will intertwine at times, it happens. Tupes of punches intertwine, it happens. They wanted simple, but clever, it obvious in the judging.
I'll give you a tip, I had to learn this as well, if you give the audience a bit of what they want, the response it better.
Want to know how my verse was slept on? It was a referrence as a whole to the Headless Horseman.
Well I got the reference, but there is only so much I can type on this phone. Normally I would be breaking down bars and content, but I have to keep my phone from overheating. Doing this is much easier on my laptop.

Also the emphasis is storytelling. Technique can be used to emphasize this. I wasn't going to have 12 categories to be judged on, but people should be doing the techniqual stuff anyways cause I enjoy it. So consider enjoyment worth several. The drop with Phaze and Nitroh is about what I am looking for.

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