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Chitown vs some random dude horror core 2

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“Get money ”

Since: Sep 11

Chicago

#1 Oct 6, 2013
Chitown checking in horror core 2 let's get it!!

“Get money ”

Since: Sep 11

Chicago

#2 Oct 6, 2013
Shini | Yesterday
Ok here are the offical rules.
Horrorcore Bars w/ weapons
Since the talent pool has increased a little I thought I develop the tourney a little more.
All drops have a 3 day deadline. Unless a hurricane hits your city or there is a death in the family, there are no excuses.
Please create your own rooms. Whoever has dropped first, please provide the link to your battle here.
No flipping or feeding. Do not reference the material of the battle in progress. That only works in audio battles.
The catagories are (copy and paste this into your battle)
Flow
Gore
Storytelling
Multis
Dismemberment
Enjoyment
Enjoymet.
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“Get money ”

Since: Sep 11

Chicago

#3 Oct 7, 2013
Hit you with a SPIKED BAT
Step on your head and pull it RIGHT BACK
Treat it like a football the way I SPIKED THAT

Take your CHAINSAW
Slice half of your FACE OFF
Take the rest of your brain cook it marinated in some STEAK SAUCE

Piss on your corpse act real RATCHET
Throw your body in a PLASTIC
barrel filled with euphoric ACID

Disposing of body's I MASTERED
Nail bat swinging BASTARD
Bang your nuts with a SPIKE BAT
Sock in your mouth like "BITE THAT"
Some Random Dude

United States

#4 Oct 7, 2013
Auto fail, more then 4 bars.
Hannibal Barca

Singapore, Singapore

#5 Oct 7, 2013
Ok now I have to no clue what bars mean. I thought it was
Every 2 sentences
Seanny T

Calgary, Canada

#6 Oct 7, 2013
A bar is basically a couplet.
Example of something super simple:

There was a dog on the chair,
It had really long hair.

Lol. Now as for chi's...ya either he typed/spaced out each of his two bars weirdly or there seems to be more...Idl tho lets wait to hear what chi says

“Get money ”

Since: Sep 11

Chicago

#8 Oct 7, 2013
Jesus why do I always face this whining ass baby match my out put and drop something
Some Random Dude

United States

#9 Oct 7, 2013
Not going to match it, you don't know how to follow directions. That's straight stupid f(_)cking sh!t right there. The more bars the more the judging is uneven. I'll drop my 4 in a second.
Some Random Dude

United States

#10 Oct 7, 2013
Well, after about an hour and a half of not being able to piece together a smoother story and flow with the weapons, I am left with my original.

Let's head this off, while we let your brains rot
Cutting bars, like I'm in Texas with a chainsaw
Revving the crowd, like a gladiator's main draw
Giving thumbs down, while slashin' your name off
Sawin' ya Wood, I just fileted ya whole game gone
Saw ya girl chained as I hacked her face off
Still alive her muscled cheeks had you take shots
Of Scotch I filled with sulfuric acid, pain's taught
Hannibal Barca

Singapore, Singapore

#11 Oct 8, 2013
Chi was good. But totally ignoring the bars and shit
Srd had gore and I like the gladiator reference
Chi had better rhymes

my vote goes to SRD. But by a bit
Some Random Dude

United States

#12 Oct 8, 2013
If you are doing the straight 4 bars, then Nailed Bat and Chainsaw are counter intuitives and can't flow together. I spent several hours trying to tackle it, it just threw the flow off everytime.

“Get money ”

Since: Sep 11

Chicago

#13 Oct 8, 2013
Some Random Dude wrote:
If you are doing the straight 4 bars, then Nailed Bat and Chainsaw are counter intuitives and can't flow together. I spent several hours trying to tackle it, it just threw the flow off everytime.
It's a slant rhyme flows well with it I broke my lines down smaller so it's easier to read

“Get money ”

Since: Sep 11

Chicago

#14 Oct 8, 2013
And you just flipped my rhymes but whatever

“Get money ”

Since: Sep 11

Chicago

#15 Oct 8, 2013
Hannibal Barca wrote:
Chi was good. But totally ignoring the bars and shit
Srd had gore and I like the gladiator reference
Chi had better rhymes
my vote goes to SRD. But by a bit
Vote using the catas.
Some Random Dude

United States

#16 Oct 8, 2013
F(_)ck you you little sh!t, I wrote that before anything was posted a damn thing. So you can go f(_)ck yourself for acussing me of flipping.

Since: Oct 13

United States

#17 Oct 8, 2013
are "chitown" and "chi-town lover" the same person or no..?

Since: Sep 12

Dongola, IL

#18 Oct 8, 2013
eLEHMANater wrote:
are "chitown" and "chi-town lover" the same person or no..?
Yes it's the same person

“Get money ”

Since: Sep 11

Chicago

#19 Oct 8, 2013
Some Random Dude wrote:
F(_)ck you you little sh!t, I wrote that before anything was posted a damn thing. So you can go f(_)ck yourself for acussing me of flipping.
Right it just so happened to come after mine the whole slice your face off acid thing was flipped. Battle me in a no holds bar chump seperate thread unlimited time no limit to your drop or bars
Some Random Dude

United States

#20 Oct 8, 2013
I made the face off and sulfuric acid.

If you look at my past Horrorcores, that is my goto acid. Also, how many rhymes that work well is it possible to find for this? Little disrespectful sh!t, I spend 2 hours trying to re-write something and couldn't do a whole 4 bars to this flow. If you know my writtens at all and my style, you'd know this whole thing is off kilter for me.

Check this

Let's head this out, I am going to do something I haven't before. I am going to write my failed attempts. The first shot I made was the one you see before you, but the chainsaw verse I wanted to re-write in attempt to make a better story and to follow the rules a little closer.

These are the things I could find.

Let's head this off, while I saw through his chained lines
Catch him frowning, flip

I stopped, next attempt

Let's head this off, I saw through his chained lines
shove the,'Studded Wood,' up his @ss, call it,'Hang Time.'
String him up by it so he splinters

Now that I am looking at these,(Did them on paper) not sure which ones are in which order.

Let's head this off, while I saw through his chained lines
Shove the,'Studded Wood,' up his @ss, call it,'Hang Time.'
Rip out the nails through his instestinal track

I think this next one might be the first attempt after the original, but again, these weapons are hard to flow, also I did not label the attempt, so I am not sure the order.

Let's head this off, while I saw through his chained lines
String him up with the guts glowin', strang times
While I was cutting chains, saw him locked in his closet
So, I cut through the locked that locked it

Then I got stumped how to keep it a smoother flow.

I tried a seperate attempt to make dverything smoother, but the flow did jot lines up with the syllable sounds.

When you rattled my chains, I saw you cryin' in fright
I ripped the nailed wood out your hands, while you went to hide in the night

Use the
(Short attempt, I know)

At this point I had been search for Chainsaw slang and slang for Spiked Bat, couldn't find sh!t.

There are a few other attempts on my re-creation, but I could not find them all, I did throw some away. Also, these are on paper, instead of my first attempt after I got off work on my phone. I was using an APP called,'Memo.'
Some Random Dude

United States

#21 Oct 8, 2013
Now, I am getting sick of you acussing me of sh!t I don't do. I am about to quit T-Mobile, because those that work there are mot honest. When I ask questions, then just tell me to, "Just f(_)cking do it," so yeah, I am also pretty frusterated at work. So between the dumb sh!ts calling from, Altanta, Detroit, Chicago, and Bronx I am f(_)ckin' no mood to deal with more disrespectful,'Know it all,' little punk @ss f(_)cks. I can't say what I am thinking at work, so just omagine the sh!t I am getting built up right now.

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