IllMortal vs Whoever Wants To Face Me

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“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#1 May 14, 2014
It doesn't matter who it is anymore let's just get this battle over with and move on.
Whoever it is will have to post first. 8 bars.

Since: Mar 14

United States

#2 May 14, 2014
This tourney is disorganized as fk, hopefully the next one have better brackets

“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#3 May 14, 2014
I know. I'm just tired of having to go through this crap. I'm ready for the next round. I feel like I wasted bars I could've used against someone else because of a second straight no show against me in a tourney.

Since: Oct 13

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#4 May 14, 2014
It happened to me 2 and I organized this thing I can't choose whose going to keep to there word
unlimitedswagger 95

Ruston, LA

#5 May 15, 2014
Ill post soon man can it be more than 8 bars or what let me know soon so I know how many im alowed to do tops

“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#6 May 15, 2014
Between eight and twelve ima drop mine right now.

“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#7 May 15, 2014
No offense with any of this. It's just a battle.

He's tried to be too/two 50 cent but he fell just short of it, I'm feeling annoyed a bit,
Cuz I gotta go against this garbage emcee when I could be going against Evo and avoiding shit,

So how would I end up losing to a "common" man who are you fooling?
I'll chew anything you spit up and turn it into "good music",

You're clueless assumin you're improvin with each moment it's amusing,
I'll leave you ruined like loropéni, you're careers just an illusion,

This is the Bermuda Triangle and you're lost in my words,
You're lost and it hurts cuz I thought you would learn to stop 'fore I murk,

(Speaking to audience)
He couldn't "match" the "light" that I emit,
So the "fire" I spit is gonna light her/"lighter" up cuz she's been vyin to get lit,

I'm fighting the urge to knock the "shit" outta him for his lyrics,
He can't even write a good verse and he vows/"bowels" moving to get near this?

Each word written is a waste cuz his rebuttal is gonna be obvious,
He's gonna get onto the page and say "that shit seriously sucked" then not even drop a bit,

I'm just waiting for it so maybe when he "appears" and stops being "ghost",
He'll be able to make something decent that'll allow me to see him whole.

To clear anything up:
2:Common isn't in GOOD Music anymore so he isn't making "GOOD" music.

3:Reference to the ruins of loropéni.

6:Reference to bowel movement.(Calling his lyrics shit or crap or poop or whatever you wanna call it)

7:Every comment I've seen from swagger has been about how "someone's lyrics sucked" or a basic 2 bars.

8:The last bar was a diss at ghost and swagger by saying he's like ghost and when he stops being like him (dropping basic verses) he'll make something decent.

“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#8 May 15, 2014
That word in the third bar is supposed to be loropeni but I guess topix doesn't like accents...

“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#9 May 15, 2014
Swagger are you dropping soon?

“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#10 May 16, 2014
-.- Not again...

Since: Oct 13

Location hidden

#11 May 16, 2014
Lol you qualify hooray !

“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#12 May 16, 2014
lil biggy wrote:
Lol you qualify hooray !
This is some bs lol
unlimitedswagger 95

Ruston, LA

#13 May 16, 2014
Sorry bro my power went out at home so now im at mcdonalds usin the wifi didnt want u to think I stood u up so here is my part I didnt have time to prepare too much its a little longer than what I was suppost to do but u said I do the 2 bars so wanted to show u off enjoy

Call me Bugs Bunny, and your Elmer Fudd
I'm the king in the ring so don't you dare try to fuck wit me
should have left me be
it dont really make since y u With me as long as I'm still breathing
Cuz I've been kicking your ass since I've been teething
And i've been dropping bombs bigger than Nagasaki
I've learned how to rap thru 50 cent so yea I've been stocking up on burns in my arsenal
And as long as i got rhymes to spit
bitch dont ever think that i'll ever quit
Cuz i've been waiting forever for someone who can
lay down rhymes
Ones who can do it short periods of time
And I know you suckers are Professional But you guys are at least better than some pothead sniffin' ethanol
And my burns are the Titanic
Their shocking and galvanic
And my verses are called satanic
They'll leave you crying, shittin' yourself, and schizophrenic
So I don't care what you all be rappin
'Cuz I know that i'm the baddest
And If you ever try to mess with me
i will leave you with holes, not one, but three
one above each nip and another in-between ya'
eyes
And Boy, guess what? I don't tell lies
So next time you dare try to fuck with me and my
lines
I'll put a piece of lead in ya' head and dump your ass in pines And one day the'll find your sorry ass(Heh! Ya right!)
unlimitedswagger 95

Ruston, LA

#14 May 16, 2014
Ps I am on my phone so its a little messed up
unlimitedswagger 95

Ruston, LA

#15 May 16, 2014
Supost to be dump yo ass in da pines as in the woods

Since: Oct 13

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#16 May 17, 2014
Lol illmortal you first bar killed it , with that little warning on top !
Secondly I think you reused intentionally or unintentionally a bars from yours I'm not sure ?
but I remember "I gave you a dictionary but then you crewed it and spit it out on a page then proceed to call it music"
something like that , I just thought that was too similar for my liking
otherwise I think it was dope you could go harder but .......

And us95 you improving a whole lot but you trying to say things that's "BAD ASS" but they don't rhyme or fit there
I think you should try rhyming more work on you flow the space your 'bad ass' remarks with insults hopefully this helps

Okay MVGT :....... Wait for it ...... A bit longer ..... Okay I'm ready ..... Illmortal simple because it obvious is the more well rounded emcee and he delivers but more so he's perspective is dope when he try....
Btw US95 you moving up in my books and I can really only talk about myself but keep doing your thing!

“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#17 May 17, 2014
lil biggy wrote:
Lol illmortal you first bar killed it , with that little warning on top !
Secondly I think you reused intentionally or unintentionally a bars from yours I'm not sure ?
but I remember "I gave you a dictionary but then you crewed it and spit it out on a page then proceed to call it music"
something like that , I just thought that was too similar for my liking
otherwise I think it was dope you could go harder but .......

And us95 you improving a whole lot but you trying to say things that's "BAD ASS" but they don't rhyme or fit there
I think you should try rhyming more work on you flow the space your 'bad ass' remarks with insults hopefully this helps

Okay MVGT :....... Wait for it ...... A bit longer ..... Okay I'm ready ..... Illmortal simple because it obvious is the more well rounded emcee and he delivers but more so he's perspective is dope when he try....
Btw US95 you moving up in my books and I can really only talk about myself but keep doing your thing!
Lol I haven't ever used a bar like that and I was talking about ME taking his lyrics and turning them into good music.

Since: Oct 13

Location hidden

#18 May 18, 2014
Nvm I found it , it was srd against me I think that's why I remembered it ! "I'd given you a dictionary and then encourage you to use it
But you threw it up over the page then proceed to call it music " you see bro I'm not trying to call you a fraud but there is a big diff tho but you should remember its from memory hopefully no love loss
unlimitedswagger 95

Ruston, LA

#19 May 19, 2014
Thanks lil biggy

Since: Oct 13

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#20 May 21, 2014
Lol , anyway this need more votes

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