SomeRandomDude vs PhazeTheGreat (Pro ...

SomeRandomDude vs PhazeTheGreat (Pro Status)

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Since: Oct 13

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#1 Apr 22, 2014
Hopefully the votes will be in by today because this battle was much neglected for its importance

Since: Oct 13

Location hidden

#2 Apr 22, 2014


SRD's Verse:

Phaze you half-wit, my rhymes are dumbed down when I met a wh()re (metaphore)
Slap this p(_)ssy with an Athraxed Tampax Encored from my reservoir (Resavoir)
Your mind is in upheavel, so I'll Annax all the best rhymes from deep ya brain you staked
Without being scared you just may(U.S.A.) fight like Russia just did to the Ukraine!
I'll throw a Mentally Retarded Kid with Down's Syndrome down a flight of stairs
Before I dumb down my words for you and Little Suzie,'cause Micheal Jackson needs a scare
In other words, I will socialize multiply and pulverize all your ties with the poltergeist
'Cause I'm the only spirit, with no need if alibi to justify when I mummify, mystify and stultify (St-ull-tify)
Which means you're bodied, dried out and confuzed in the after-life underneath a locked home
And not even Sir Arthur Conan Doyle could write a better mystery for Watson and Sherlock Holmes!
P(_)ssy foot around the bush and I'll bring in the Hedge Clippers and f-ck the tush!
'Cause Life can't compare to when I start f-king you in the @ss and get ya shook
Yo Phaze the Great, with that face ya make, raza blades, must break ya veigns
Stake ya claims, you just hate the way, I make apace, to a verse and, "Stake ya claim."
I said a Punny term can curse and call in a hearse, but wins come from a stable verse
'Cause only biased bags of dirt(Dirt Bags), vote off of one literary device for a vote coerced(From pressure)

But... You don't follow those flows...

So let incisions invision descriptions, get 'em all itchin' divisions just b-tchin'
When I'm splittin' this kids intermission, without wishin' his spittin' is livid
'Cause I will diminish all this innocence, scarring the kid with all of these images
Hittin' infinite you'd think I'm a gymnast, flexable flows winnin' percentages
Callin' a Priest ya religious victim, giving away all your earnings to missions
Who'll just keep stealin', you should know that's the way of the system
But you should know what good's the flow, with only ya third grade education
Gun soon pulled go ya should of known, this body would be your summation
Call me Aids with my sickness unstoppable, beatin' me is all to improbable
When I kill ya you'll claim it's illogical, heatin' the site no one's consolable
This battle was far from controllable, messin' with me it's not understandable
How I can murder like life is disposable, fundamentally it's all unavoidable
'Cause I'll tear down ya walls and threaten mankind, unquenchable hunger this ain't the last time
That I'll feast on your Spirits just passin' the time, I'm a Titan challenge me you cash in ya mind
Why did you think I was even approachable, what part of me made you think I was sociable
Breakin' ya spine I'm straight untouchable, YOU attacked ME, but you're just a stomach full!
. Phazes Next:
SomeRandomDude

United States

#3 Apr 22, 2014
Take the TIME to vote on it. Read it multiple times, then look up what we are saying, then read over it a few more times. Then, break it down and vote on it. That's how I vote.

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#4 Apr 23, 2014
1
Why should I start now? He's gonna be a no show anyways.
You think puns can't take you out homie I'll whoop your ass like yoyo any day.
2
This battle will only go "one direction", better prepare its wild.
I'm insane bro
If hes in de"Niall"/denile, I'll "Liam" "Zayn"/sane, so why you tryna "Harry" styles?
3
You think your bars are ill? I come to fight "sick cells",and tie bodies/antibodies.
Then when I beat him he'll drop tiers/tears like when rapswipe copied.
4
You see, you the type of guy to cry and whine and throw this whole dumb tantrum, too.
You add all these lines and rhymes up but your Sum random, dude./SomeRandomDude
5
If you prefer reality it's no enigma, that your bars are seeming nebulous.
Because you lack personality and charisma, and I'm here being genuine.
6
But some of your bars are a portrait of meaning, it gives me a huge sight of image.
But what's wrong with that?(not a bar)
What good is an "image" when each line I'm reading hieroglyphics?
7
It's funny how you don't have the "nuggets" to fight, but in battles you "dip" from the ketchup sauce.
And that's why reading your bars, your readers "space out" because you're known for "jetting off!!"
8
And bro your rhyming contains black holes, no one can ever understand what you lead on.
Like an Aero's myth/ aerosmith, if you think you could win you better

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#5 Apr 23, 2014
9
because you admitted it, you post bars to topix and some of it isn't clear.
You'll be wrong if you think I'm not a challenge because I'm just like shini, I'll show you what happens when I diss a peer/disappear
10
Whats the whole point of grasping all of this knowledge when you can't rap with it?
Think this pro fits? because reading his bars you think hes a prophet/profit, but you never have "interest".
11
You see this "g-sus(sus means gay)"/Jesus, whenever he tries to speak smart he's on that parable shxt.
Slow that down I said
This g-sus/Jesus, whenever he tries to speak "smart" he's on that pair of bullshxt!
12
Quit thinking you smart you oxy"moron", there was a reason you wanted to be second, first.
hes scared.
any co-bane/Cobain in my "bars" get "shots", so you know the lesson's curt/ Kurt.
13
Forget puns, I'm an Emperor who was  sent to hurt, with a hectic verse, that's only gettin worse.
my temper burst, snapped his neck and turn, to make his head reverse, with his arms and legs' dispersed, into a bed of dirt, with an embedded curse!
14
You cant stop the horror, I'm dissing with a wall of gore.
Your concepts have no relation"ship" cause when I over"sea" them, all-a-board/bored.
15
Like what are you saying? its true if I say -you have amazin' concepts.-
Because they bring me to dead ends, thats how you know -you have "a maze in" concepts!-
16
This pro feigning/profaning, if he lectures us again I'll burn his ass and bring this pro pain/propane.
I'm as dope as two rappers in the process of mitosis because that's
Evolusean

Calgary, Canada

#7 Apr 24, 2014
Im able to see both up here. Ill put my vote on this thread. Topix can finally load on my comp again. Aight ima sleep, when i wake up i promise ill vote! If i dont ill quit forever! Lol. Just watch my vote get delete and ppl be like 'welp...u said it urself...' hahaha

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#8 Apr 24, 2014
Damn it got cut off, the last line on bar 8 of my first post its suppose to be read :

"like an Aero's myth/aerosmith", if you think you could win you better 'Dream on'.

And the very last line of bar 16 it's as followed :

"I'm as dope as two rappers in the process of mitosis because thats when you know you have a prophase/Pro Phaze"

I don't know how this happened my apologies but I hope this prevents any confusion

“reverbnation.com /evolusean”

Since: Feb 14

CANADA

#9 Apr 24, 2014
who knows.
aight:
FLOW: SRD. the multies in there, tho highly numerous, rarely seemed forced or out of place. made it feel smooth as i read the words in my head or out loud.
MULTIS: SRD. you def got multies down. im surprised phaze didnt weild AS big a multie sword as i expected overall tbh haha
WORDPLAY: SRD. hes flippin hamburgers up there. if you get that, good for you haha.
RHYME SCHEME: SRD edged my choice on this one. i preferred his approach and style to this. always seems in control, dominant in battles lol. not sayin phaze doesnt, but theres just a certain 'persona' around an srd drop lol the way his words are woven.
PUNCHLINES: PHAZE. id say he inched it for me on this. veeeery close call tho.
NAME PLAY: PHAZE. he took this one for me. lol he even dropped others names in, tho that didnt effect my decision on this.
ORIGINALITY: TIE. both came with their own material, i even randomly checked bars JUST to be sure lmfao gotta have that like "100% approved" sticker on it ya know :p
VOCABULARY: id say...TIE. srd has multies yes, but they both have good vocab, no one really has a clear edge over the dictionary between the two lol
NAME PLAY: PHAZE. he took this one for me. lol he even dropped others names in, tho that didnt effect my decision on this.
METAPHORS/SIMILIS: TIE.
ENJOYMENT: I enjoyed PHAZE's drop a LIL bit more. this was a very good battle. both ppl brought their good side.
.
I mean, this legit brought it down to a tie within these cata's haha. basically, at this point in my decision, i just gotta go with the simple question: did phaze show his stuff and show pro quality stuff? and if i cant break this down to a clear winner? yea id say so. PLus, phaze has the other factors cleared: hes been here for awhile, has a track record of putting out quality, and has never been accused or caught biting.
MVGT: PHAZE.
sorry it took so longlol. but i think phaze has proved himself. and i think he is more then capable. props man.
SomeRandomDude

United States

#10 Apr 24, 2014
0/100 Seanny-T.
GriiMMiis

San Marcos, CA

#11 Apr 24, 2014
This site is cool
Evolusean

Calgary, Canada

#12 Apr 24, 2014
@srd: lol i def have no time to rate each bar and do that anytime soon. If u want i can give u a "out of 100" score relative to my cata choices? But yeah, wayyy too busy lol i mean i barely get on as much as i am recently. Mostly cuz any free time is spent on my mixtape and my fellow 8infinity artists in calgs here who also do music
SomeRandomDude

United States

#13 Apr 24, 2014
I wrote the voting style when I wraps Phazes work...

Out of 100, I gave the catas...*Remember, just because someone make you feel a certain way, does not mean you have the right to call them a dumbass... Even if you feel like it is soooo... Rightly... Deserved.... Grrrr...*

Montrah I am saying to myself.

“reverbnation.com /evolusean”

Since: Feb 14

CANADA

#14 Apr 24, 2014
ok now u just need to explain cuz im lost...... lol.
SomeRandomDude

United States

#15 Apr 25, 2014
Look at the way Biggie voted on Rook and I's battle. Also, vote on that while you are there.
Shini

San Jose, CA

#16 May 2, 2014
FLOW: SRD.(Especially his second half)

MULTIS: SRD.I think he is the only one rivaling me write now in multis.

WORDPLAY: Phaze (The USA thing was forced on SRD's part, but nonetheless I barely edged it to Phaze)
RHYME SCHEME:SRD (His was more intricate and complex. Especially in the last 8 bars)

PUNCHLINES: PHAZE Phaze dominated this. There isn't much to say here. Phaze hit hard with all 16 of his bars. I never thought my parables would get mentioned in a battle. Also me being referenced was on point with his word plays.

NAME PLAY: PHAZE- While he didn't top my KOTD verse- this was up there.

ORIGINALITY:SRD got this. He usually come with those off the wall references that sometimes makes you think, "Why didn't I think of that?" SRD, given is rarely beaten in Originality, but Phaze came pretty close.

VOCABULARY:TIE- I cosign Evolusean's opinion on this matter. Both MCs possess a college level vocabulary.

Metaphors: TIE (Both had varying styles, but had some awesome metaphors.

ENJOYMENT: Phaze Although I liked the complexity of SRD material, my enjoyment comes more from punchlines in a battle, because let's face it: 90% of the time punchlines win battles. I have to give this to Phaze because he wasn't overtly complex to the point that his punchlines wavered in his material. He also got more personal that SRD. Of the 16 bars I think 14 of them were personals. This was much much more evenly matched than the SRD vs RapRook battle.

This was reeally close for me. I had to weigh originality versus punchlines. If I had to score it it will be 94 for SRD to 98 for Phaze. SRD did not get bodied, but he got edged. This was fun to read. I actually went OOOHHH out loud when I read Phaze's lines. He went very personal. While I like the original verse, writing punchlines are integral to battle. Having them translate clearly helps, too.

I wouldn't mind another round but MVGT: Phaze (slightly)

BTW: I am going to limit these categories because judging wise it becomes harder to tally, comment, then recheck. I think 6 or 7 is enough. Simulies, alliterations, slant rhymes or any other non-multied rhyming device can be umbrella under rhyme scheme. Also it actually takes away from my time to re-read material if I am making more comments due to the numerous categories when I can check for these things within 5 and be more detailed on those.

However I like the score idea. I will keep that in case of a close match like this,
Shini

San Jose, CA

#17 May 2, 2014
I said a Punny term can curse and call in a hearse, but wins come from a stable verse
'Cause only biased bags of dirt(Dirt Bags), vote off of one literary device for a vote coerced(From pressure)

SRD best bar

because you admitted it, you post bars to topix and some of it isn't clear.
You'll be wrong if you think I'm not a challenge because I'm just like shini, I'll show you what happens when I diss a peer/disappear

Phaze Best Bar (I never realized it but I'm fairly good at doing both huh? lol)

Runners UP
SRD
In other words, I will socialize multiply and pulverize all your ties with the poltergeist
'Cause I'm the only spirit, with no need if alibi to justify when I mummify, mystify and stultify (St-ull-tify)

Phaze

But some of your bars are a portrait of meaning, it gives me a huge sight of image.
But what's wrong with that?(not a bar)
What good is an "image" when each line I'm reading hieroglyphics?

This is probably the best punch though.
SomeRandomDude

United States

#18 May 2, 2014
My favorite would be the Eminem reference, to his Encore Album and Superman Single.

The second would be the Micheal Jackson Reference.:)

I would like to ask where I did not have a punch though?

"Slap this pussy with a Anthrax Tampax Encored from my reservoir"

"Put an Anthrax on a Tampax, and slap you 'til you can't stand.
Girl you just blew your chance, don't mean to ruin your plans."

Also, that Micheal Jackson Song.

http://m.youtube.com/...

My personal opinion is I thought that would fly over heads. It was close to 20 years ago that song was released.

I also, I used the original verse which I figured would not even be noticed much. To create the second verse to refference it. Kind of like a little cookie. I kept it going all the way through going back with referrences. While pushing forward. I pushed for a more melodic and echanting rhyme scheme at the end, because it seems like that is what everyone is after. I could write like that ir even go as far as Tech N9ne's Multie Style and Rhyme Scheme. However, I really am not a fan of that. When I referred to puns, I obviously meant wordplay not punches. Pun+Funny=Punny

Either way, this was a very powerful verse for me and I don't know if all the referrences were gotten. However, if people went back through my posts and searched with an open mind. They might end up finding something disturbing. I am a very estranged individual. I watched Fish Heads and Lonely Stoner and... Just I want something, the ability to explain. The crap that is in this f***ed up head of mine.

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