Illmortal Vs Niatroh (elimination rou...

Illmortal Vs Niatroh (elimination rounds)

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#1 May 4, 2014
Niatroh said it doesn't matter who he goes up against and illmortal said he'll take on niatroh.... So its decided

“RRC (previous name).”

Since: Jun 13

Huntsville

#2 May 4, 2014
Checking in, Do we have a due date?

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#3 May 4, 2014
As soon as possible

“RRC (previous name).”

Since: Jun 13

Huntsville

#4 May 4, 2014
lil biggy wrote:
As soon as possible
Bar limit?

“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#5 May 4, 2014
Checking in. I have 10 bars so far. How many do you wanna do niatroh?

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#6 May 4, 2014
No bar limit but don't overdo it , just make each bar count

“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#7 May 5, 2014
Good luck. No hard feelings. This is 12 bars.

He thinks he's nitro but he couldn't pass me,
I'm outlasting this trash heap and smashing him masterfully,

Rapping/'wrapping''circles' a'round' him and leaving him feeling 'bound' too,
Niatroh can't move, I spear/'sphere' him once, no need for 'round' two,

See I'd let you finish your verse but I gotta interrupt,
Cuz being the Kanye that I am, I'm leaving you in a rut/interrupt,

Don't you understand? I'm leaving you "in Europe",
Cuz Spain/cuz pain isn't what's planned, I Sweden/sweeten it, Denmark/then mark your gut,

Incisions run deep, as I play a tune with your organs,
A portion distorted leaving him looking horrid,

Niatroh/Nitro couldn't phase/Phaze me, he's just gassed up,
I'll heat that ass up and leave em plasma, it's doesn't matter (Matt-uh)

He isn't a rapper, he's an illiterate prick,
His diss'll be laughter, full of subliminal hits,

He couldn't play with words (wordplay), he'd rather play with kids,
This is 'child's play','thinking outside of the box' on how ill 'slay this bitch',

His family's getting him 'dolled up' and ready for his casket,
Cuz as soon as this verse ends you'll know he's heading towards the masses,

Of people that fell victim to the tragedy......
That walks upon this earth as a mortal/IllMortal killing em rapidly.

You taught Phaze dismemberment then he dismembered you,
Ripped you to shreds and you didn't show til after the due,(due date)

I dismember, yes, detach every limb from his body, that's a cold parting,
This is easier than when Phaze did it, I've already got old markings,

“RRC (previous name).”

Since: Jun 13

Huntsville

#8 May 5, 2014
IllMortal wrote:
Good luck. No hard feelings. This is 12 bars.

He thinks he's nitro but he couldn't pass me,
I'm outlasting this trash heap and smashing him masterfully,

Rapping/'wrapping''circles' a'round' him and leaving him feeling 'bound' too,
Niatroh can't move, I spear/'sphere' him once, no need for 'round' two,

See I'd let you finish your verse but I gotta interrupt,
Cuz being the Kanye that I am, I'm leaving you in a rut/interrupt,

Don't you understand? I'm leaving you "in Europe",
Cuz Spain/cuz pain isn't what's planned, I Sweden/sweeten it, Denmark/then mark your gut,

Incisions run deep, as I play a tune with your organs,
A portion distorted leaving him looking horrid,

Niatroh/Nitro couldn't phase/Phaze me, he's just gassed up,
I'll heat that ass up and leave em plasma, it's doesn't matter (Matt-uh)

He isn't a rapper, he's an illiterate prick,
His diss'll be laughter, full of subliminal hits,

He couldn't play with words (wordplay), he'd rather play with kids,
This is 'child's play','thinking outside of the box' on how ill 'slay this bitch',

His family's getting him 'dolled up' and ready for his casket,
Cuz as soon as this verse ends you'll know he's heading towards the masses,

Of people that fell victim to the tragedy......
That walks upon this earth as a mortal/IllMortal killing em rapidly.

You taught Phaze dismemberment then he dismembered you,
Ripped you to shreds and you didn't show til after the due,(due date)

I dismember, yes, detach every limb from his body, that's a cold parting,
This is easier than when Phaze did it, I've already got old markings,
I'm gonna go off a limb and say your strong point is wordplay.

“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#9 May 5, 2014
Niatroh wrote:
<quoted text>I'm gonna go off a limb and say your strong point is wordplay.
It's something easy for me to incorporate into my verses. So yeah it kinda is.

“Dropping Bars Of Knowledge”

Since: Feb 14

Syracuse New York

#10 May 5, 2014
I'd just like to come into this battle doing "my part" as a judge without any bias bullshit remarks. First id like to say that, ill you're word play is very sharp. Like Niatroh said, the word play that you use is the strong hold in your part of the battle. One thing that people don't give you credit for is your "flow" through out the battle.
As i was reading your diss, it was so easy for me to get through with out stopping or miss reading it. it was oh most like it was me who wrote this and i was spitting this on stage as if i practiced it 100 times. Although you did have some areas that i was concerned about with your flow and where it was just word play. Your punchlines were decent but could have been better. One punchline i "Loved" was when you said, "He couldn't play with words (wordplay), he'd rather play with kids,
This is 'child's play','thinking outside of the box' on how ill 'slay this bitch". That shit was on another level. You Also used real facts in the battle like when you said, "You taught Phaze dismemberment then he dismembered you,
Ripped you to shreds and you didn't show til after the due,(due date)". That was a really plus for me cause i normally never see people using actual facts/events in their diss.
SCORE CARD: how i will score,[1 Through 4]
Word Play= 4
Flow= 3
Punchlines= 2
Delivery= 3
Good Job on this one ill cause i really enjoyed it, also good luck to Nitaroh

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#11 May 5, 2014
Hey nice drop !

“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#12 May 5, 2014
@Niatroh I'm hoping you can drop soon so we can get the judging going on this battle.
Evolusean

Calgary, Canada

#13 May 5, 2014
Lol theres an official scoring system not just those catas and not like that.....u should use that lol
Evolusean

Calgary, Canada

#14 May 5, 2014
I mean its up to LB, but when i host a tournament, i honestly dont accept votes unless they are like the guidelines that are on previous threads.
Shini

San Jose, CA

#15 May 6, 2014
lil biggy wrote:
No bar limit but don't overdo it , just make each bar count
I think the material should have a bar limit, just from experience. Otherwise you get a 4 bar versus 32 or 16, etc. Or have them both agree on it. My rule of thumb is to start small 4 bar vs 4 bar, and then gradually increase the bar limits.

I like your ladder system idea which gives me ideas to move forward in the future. If I do another tourney, I may slow the pace down a little instead of doing a one month blitz judging system.

The ball's in your court though. I'm just glad to finally be a participant for once.

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#16 May 6, 2014
That's awesome , bringing in an official scoring system but this being kotd theme any member can use just punches or any style they prefer , so it should be judged mostly on enjoyment , style and originality etc but I will think of a neutral score card later , lol when I'm actually awake or should this be personalized ? Because I didn't look at a category I just wrote what ever came to mind ? Being kotd gave me the excuse to just have fun , I guess ?

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#17 May 6, 2014
Thanks , I should of made a bar limit , so next round how about 8 - 12 ? And for the semis 10-14 and the finals 12-16 ? This is just a thought so it can be changed ! Any advice tips

“Dropping Bars Of Knowledge”

Since: Feb 14

Syracuse New York

#18 May 6, 2014
Evolusean wrote:
Lol theres an official scoring system not just those catas and not like that.....u should use that lol
Dam son, i thought it was good, lol.

“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#19 May 8, 2014
Umm where's niatroh???

“Dropping Bars Of Knowledge”

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Syracuse New York

#20 May 8, 2014
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