-rapSwipe- VS YOYOYO META/PUN tourney

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“No pain No Gain!”

Since: Mar 13

accra(Ghana)

#1 Jul 23, 2013
4 bars
no flipping

“No pain No Gain!”

Since: Mar 13

accra(Ghana)

#2 Jul 23, 2013
You wanna drown a shark,
caus i know a YoYO is known for getting Swiped down.
Am a horse always a "stable" animal,
but i with the gore "i take your base" i rip your soul/sole, had lectures with Hannibal.
You cant divorce your husband caus he was having sex at your back,
your'e a gay you got to take it bent "hunchback".
Your'e a p*#*y,your'e too afraid to be scared of failure,
YO got that scared sting,your'e a bee without a bee-hive-iour.
Yo can be a choosen "SIR",
but this boogie man gonna leave u like a kid with "Knight-mare".

“No pain No Gain!”

Since: Mar 13

accra(Ghana)

#3 Jul 23, 2013
EXPO
1.set up=horse stable animal=pun horse stay in stables
Punch=take your base=what your on your shoe sole or a metaphor for how people believe their soul is their base and lectures with hannibal=pun or nameplay hannibal lecture.
2.set up=havin sex at your back=this is a pun gay bar caus havin sex at your back can mean cheatin or havin sex in the buttocks.
punch=take it bent "hunchback"=usually to have sex at the back they bend down for easy penetration=pun
3 and 4 self explanatory.

“No pain No Gain!”

Since: Mar 13

accra(Ghana)

#4 Jul 23, 2013
is @YOYOYO around?
Some Random Dude

United States

#5 Jul 23, 2013
He gets 24 hours, calm down.
yoyoyo

Toms River, NJ

#6 Jul 23, 2013
Your "bars" only "crazy sick" when you're "on meds"
Assuming your in my "class" i "drop you out" the first round, that's what you call ledge/college
You are nonsense/non cents, adding up to no amount
I "decline swipe", you receive no "credit" on your own account
He a "b1tch", I'mma sock her/soccer, my "goal on the nets" to "score" up ya slut
Can't kick it, you gonna/Ghana lose like World cup results
Run like hell I, let my hellish style scorch fools
They'll be yelling "dash!" rapswipe "dash!"; shouldn't have to spell it out for you
Some Random Dude

United States

#7 Jul 23, 2013
This is interesting, Yoyo has metaphors... But they could be missed.. xD

“No pain No Gain!”

Since: Mar 13

accra(Ghana)

#8 Jul 24, 2013
You are nonsense/non cents, adding up to no amount

i really like this bar hahahaha
never taught of it.
so how many votes for a winner 3 votes or 3 for each?
Some Random Dude

United States

#9 Jul 24, 2013
I'd say 3 votes.

I'll have to extend deadlines.*sigh*
Shini

Seoul, Korea

#10 Jul 24, 2013
Your "bars" only "crazy sick" when you're "on meds"
Assuming your in my "class" i "drop you out" the first round, that's what you call ledge/college

^ That first bar went hard.

Since: Feb 07

Toms River, NJ

#11 Jul 24, 2013
Shini wrote:
Your "bars" only "crazy sick" when you're "on meds"
Assuming your in my "class" i "drop you out" the first round, that's what you call ledge/college
^ That first bar went hard.
appreciate it. i came up with most of those lines when i went jogging haha

“RRC (previous name).”

Since: Jun 13

Huntsville

#12 Jul 24, 2013
Prodigy wrote:
<quoted text>appreciate it. i came up with most of those lines when i went jogging haha
New name? Or old? It looks like you been on for a while lol
Some Random Dude

United States

#13 Jul 25, 2013
Iight, these are what I am looking for too, a lot more fluid and the fit together well. A good battle.
Shini

Kwanghuidong, Korea

#15 Jul 27, 2013
Metaphores: Tie (Both did well in this cata)
Punches: Prodigy (aka yoyoyo) They were just overpowering.
Who connected better: Prodigy
Who Related better: Prodigy
Enjoyment: Tie (I equally enjoyed rapswipes wordplay and Prodigy's punches.)

This one was the toughest of the three to judge. Prodigy came hard hitting from the start. He had a nice opener and closer. He had some mammoth punchlines that were on the level of HHH/Chi-Town/Mulisha Made. I can tell he has been doing this a while.

I feel bad for rapswipe because he really improved, but while his were good, Prodigy's were that much better.

It took me awhile to get that your bee-hive-iour rhyme wasn't forced. That was your dopest bar in my opinion.

MVGT: Prodigy (aka yoyoyo)

“No pain No Gain!”

Since: Mar 13

accra(Ghana)

#16 Jul 27, 2013
hahaha thanks @Shini.

“Get money ”

Since: Sep 11

Chicago

#17 Jul 27, 2013
Metas- both did good but I have to go with yoyoyo
Punches- yoyoyo hit harder
Who connected better- yoyoyo thought his made more sense and overall had a bigger impact
Who relates better- yoyoyo
Enjoyment - tie I really enjoyed reading both. Rap swipe snapped had good word play yoyoyo did his thing with awesome punch lines and metas
Mvgt- overall I liked yoyoyo it was more on par with the style I liked his word play was sick and used great metas and punch lines great job you two awesome read

“No pain No Gain!”

Since: Mar 13

accra(Ghana)

#18 Jul 27, 2013
thanks guys for your votes so its 2-0 so it means i lose,no hard feelings buh if all battles could be judged then we can go on with the losses and winners.
Some Random Dude

United States

#19 Jul 27, 2013
Wrong platform! PUNS not PUNCHES! F.F.S.
Shini

Kwanghuidong, Korea

#20 Jul 27, 2013
Some Random Dude wrote:
Wrong platform! PUNS not PUNCHES! F.F.S.
This is what a "pun" is. Are you sure you want puns? Everyone should be writing more slapstick then. You should had been more specific because when you say "pun", we are thinking punchlines.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pun
Some Random Dude

United States

#21 Jul 28, 2013
A PUN, not pun., a HUGE difference. I use proper grammar.

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