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yoyoyo

Toms River, NJ

#1 Aug 10, 2013
here it is
16 bars
due whenever
lets get it
Some Random Dude

United States

#2 Aug 10, 2013
16 bars? Iight, sounds sick. No flipping iight? I'll get up on this sometime this week. I have decided to stop trying to improve for a little bit and just spit at this current level for a time and just be extremely story orientated. I am gonna fight hard for this one, kaybe my level will jump by relaxing my constance struggle for forward progress.
Some Random Dude

United States

#3 Aug 14, 2013
I finished the 16 bars. Post yours and mine will be up soon after. If people want a expo, I will write one.
Some Random Dude

United States

#4 Aug 15, 2013
Yo Yo Yo, type your out, I have my 16 bars. I wanna make sure you drop the verse you wrote.
Some Random Dude

United States

#5 Aug 17, 2013
Yo yo yo, where you at bro.
Some Random Dude

United States

#6 Aug 20, 2013
Yo Yo Yo where are you?
Some Random Dude

Rathdrum, ID

#7 Aug 28, 2013
I'm tired of waiting.

Yo Yo Yo, you'll miss it if you drop it, rope cut.
You're not listening. Damn, Yo Yo's not rolled up,
he's out and I'm on a roll. Ya I just out rolled a Yo-Yo. YO
Ya know, no obstacle can stop my flow. Know those
Foes blow, just fans unable to blow the smoke.
No mirror exist, the gist is, below ya whole
Spit is just a kid admiring this wicked sh!t.
Droppin' Jaws, when I'm jumping Jack an' Rippin' lists.
No candle's hot enough to bestow this evil nitch.
I'll live the stake, enchant you and end this sh!t.
Yet we haven't come close to the credits, face it b!tch.
Even if you ignite the forest, I'll shed light on this syndicate.
Too cold to burn, I'm a Snowdenman, Educating the public.
My (Dedicated Illness Continually Kills) I mean my D.!.C.K. now suck it.
Deep in ya throat is chocolate with my name in it. See,
my name is Zachary, schooling you at Clark University.
The diversity in which I murder these; has me currently,
murdering wannabe M.C.'s like they're ropeless Yo-Yos. Certainly
ya missed it at first. Beautifully modeling the art ya see.
Yo Yo's a deformed hobbit. Ya, I'm battling a halfing.
I'm the white ya suckin' on, but skin color doesn't mean a thing.
Why,'cause Yo Yo I'm damaging your Ego, while my lyrics are fastening.
Blockin' ya from lines, like your flow was just you imagining.
Diggin' through your lyrics, an' archeologist scavenging.
Battling a Knight as Dark as me will leave me laughing.
Multiple personalities, will have me a crazy clown worth battling.
Ya your at bat choking, joking thinking your a joker. Asking
when it'll all be over, but there's no bottom to my bag o' tricks.
Yo Yo's day-zed like a empty mattress. Tell me, have you had it kid?
Like Magic Johnson's Johnson, you suck at this magic sh!t.
Yo Yo's a fat b@st@rd, fatter than fat b@st@rd. Slurplin' turds,
cuppin' a CUP between TWO GIRLS like, "Man, I found it first!"

Need a break down, let me know.

“RRC (previous name).”

Since: Jun 13

Huntsville

#9 Aug 28, 2013
Some Random Dude wrote:
I'm tired of waiting.

Yo Yo Yo, you'll miss it if you drop it, rope cut.
You're not listening. Damn, Yo Yo's not rolled up,
he's out and I'm on a roll. Ya I just out rolled a Yo-Yo. YO
Ya know, no obstacle can stop my flow. Know those
Foes blow, just fans unable to blow the smoke.
No mirror exist, the gist is, below ya whole
Spit is just a kid admiring this wicked sh!t.
Droppin' Jaws, when I'm jumping Jack an' Rippin' lists.
No candle's hot enough to bestow this evil nitch.
I'll live the stake, enchant you and end this sh!t.
Yet we haven't come close to the credits, face it b!tch.
Even if you ignite the forest, I'll shed light on this syndicate.
Too cold to burn, I'm a Snowdenman, Educating the public.
My (Dedicated Illness Continually Kills) I mean my D.!.C.K. now suck it.
Deep in ya throat is chocolate with my name in it. See,
my name is Zachary, schooling you at Clark University.
The diversity in which I murder these; has me currently,
murdering wannabe M.C.'s like they're ropeless Yo-Yos. Certainly
ya missed it at first. Beautifully modeling the art ya see.
Yo Yo's a deformed hobbit. Ya, I'm battling a halfing.
I'm the white ya suckin' on, but skin color doesn't mean a thing.
Why,'cause Yo Yo I'm damaging your Ego, while my lyrics are fastening.
Blockin' ya from lines, like your flow was just you imagining.
Diggin' through your lyrics, an' archeologist scavenging.
Battling a Knight as Dark as me will leave me laughing.
Multiple personalities, will have me a crazy clown worth battling.
Ya your at bat choking, joking thinking your a joker. Asking
when it'll all be over, but there's no bottom to my bag o' tricks.
Yo Yo's day-zed like a empty mattress. Tell me, have you had it kid?
Like Magic Johnson's Johnson, you suck at this magic sh!t.
Yo Yo's a fat b@st@rd, fatter than fat b@st@rd. Slurplin' turds,
cuppin' a CUP between TWO GIRLS like, "Man, I found it first!"

Need a break down, let me know.
Wow... Just wow
Some Random Dude

United States

#10 Aug 28, 2013
Not sure if that is a floored, 'Wow,' or a, 'What the hell did I just read,' wow.

“RRC (previous name).”

Since: Jun 13

Huntsville

#11 Aug 28, 2013
Some Random Dude wrote:
Not sure if that is a floored,'Wow,' or a,'What the hell did I just read,' wow.
That was a "wow this is the best I've ever read from you" type of wow

“No pain No Gain!”

Since: Mar 13

accra(Ghana)

#12 Sep 3, 2013
"rappin as YOYOYO if he comes back u can Igonre ma own."
1.SRD lets walk in the park,
your way was dark,
ya lost direction,no light in ya path.
Wasted a bar,now unleash the wrath,
went out of action like mike tyson,now am back with hits so hard that u sit forever like rosa parks.
Stormed in ma room,to see ma gal fokn "some random dude",
i was like "this is just rude",i should have knocked first.
Ya life could be a dog pound but no b!tches around this vet,
thats why i dont mind,caus you wont get "ACTION" even if u were "on set".
This dude is home grown,so his only contact is his habitat,
Thats why he's unkuown everywhere he goes,livin with a nickname similar to "who the f is that".
To battle me we all felt ya heart beat,like ya chest's pressed against a drum set,
But after u wrote this masterpiece,no recoqnition,like virgins no one gives a fu*# yet.
Before ya battle ya write for a week,before yo drop the heat,
and when it fails like cannibus u take ur notebook fast,but am a battler am always dissin "em" like everlast.
Ya immature,gat to be incubated,
yo gat a heavy flow,like a used pad but its gettin out of hand,amputated,
anyway u aint above the bar,so i dont give a sh!t like i was constipated.
Real talk,from before your posts were hot that they used fire to cool u off,
I dont know when @HHH pass the torch it wasnt yours so u got scorched.
For a while no one saw ya,ya style went from the human torch to Jack Frost,
SRD a walkin obituary,caus death(Shini) was at his call.
Shini now stretched SRD with an ovary score,
meanin everytime they battle their battle ended 0-3.
SRD stayed on his grind,drop few frees full of vocabs,
some called his verses wack caus they dont understand half.
Srd would register for tourneys,drops out,and later says he regrets,
new hot rap kids who came here says he has been here long enough to claim himself a vet.
Days were there when srd snaps and develops a beef,
but no one gets slap on the cheek caus 1 retreats.
NOW SRD's heat is back,he's now fight herds,
better structure,better style,and his rhymin words.
Thats all he can be,even thou u dont see,
he loves ma drops so much after i piss he licks the toliet seat.
finished this keystyle,som lines are easy and some are hard to get,so holla if u wanna expo.
Some Random Dude

United States

#13 Sep 3, 2013
It sounds like you are just writing that I am back and everyone should look out, lmao. Almost sounds like you are building me up, haha. Overall though, most of it wasn't even a diss, it was like a little bit of a summary of EXACTLY how things went down. However, I don't know when you became Vet. and I don't remember a time when you could or ever will catch me bud.

I never stop, I keep moving. I also don't pull out a pad, I take it as it is and move on. Even if I lose from people not getting it, lmao. Just remember, Eminem's album drops soon. When it does... Watch out. I will be re-building and dropping straight fire yet again. I don't battle when I am not improving, I make sure what I put out is something worth reading.

So, if you want beef with me, I have no problem getting it out before Eminem's Album comes. Just remember, now is far from the time to wait. Make sure you bring your A-Game and build the best 16 you can. These 16's are short right now and I won't run out of punches within the next 6 months. I am fighting for that Elite Status and I am sure at this rate. It WILL be within my grasp soon.

I have Seanny-T's written and I also have Shini's. When Seanny and Shini return and give feedback, Seanny-T will only have to post his verse and I'll post soon after. Tgen once Seanny and I get votes, I'll post up Shini's verse. I have spit Shini's over Xbox Live and I've been getting some seriously positive reviews. It's fire and I am sure people will like it.

“No pain No Gain!”

Since: Mar 13

accra(Ghana)

#14 Sep 3, 2013
alright,anyway am not a start of beef kinda person,my whole verse was done in less than 7 min,so if later ur free and u wanna battle thats when i will pre-write,but this i dont think @YOYOYO would post now so i just post this to keep ur post fresh,and for evaluation,peace.

“No pain No Gain!”

Since: Mar 13

accra(Ghana)

#15 Sep 3, 2013
And u may see less punches but if u study it closely 92 percent of this and all ma post are personals and punches.
Some Random Dude

United States

#16 Sep 3, 2013
Makes sense yo.

“No pain No Gain!”

Since: Mar 13

accra(Ghana)

#17 Sep 3, 2013
u see with the pad punch it means,
"that when girls have their period they were pad,so with all that juice it becomes heavy,and went the remove the pad it sometimes gets on their hand"
u see ma punches are so abstract u got to relate it.its not those punches u need 40 line expo to explain a bar,its accurate.And i always keep a different but skilled rhyme scheme.
Some Random Dude

United States

#18 Sep 3, 2013
It's the truth, nothing insulting or hurtful about it. Nothing that.makes people think, WOAH! It's just the truth, a truth I already talked about and admitted too.:/
Shini

Seoul, Korea

#20 Sep 3, 2013
Some Random Dude wrote:
I'm tired of waiting.
Yo Yo Yo, you'll miss it if you drop it, rope cut.
You're not listening. Damn, Yo Yo's not rolled up,
he's out and I'm on a roll. Ya I just out rolled a Yo-Yo. YO
Ya know, no obstacle can stop my flow. Know those
Foes blow, just fans unable to blow the smoke.
No mirror exist, the gist is, below ya whole
Spit is just a kid admiring this wicked sh!t.
Droppin' Jaws, when I'm jumping Jack an' Rippin' lists.
No candle's hot enough to bestow this evil nitch.
I'll live the stake, enchant you and end this sh!t.
Yet we haven't come close to the credits, face it b!tch.
Even if you ignite the forest, I'll shed light on this syndicate.
Too cold to burn, I'm a Snowdenman, Educating the public.
My (Dedicated Illness Continually Kills) I mean my D.!.C.K. now suck it.
Deep in ya throat is chocolate with my name in it. See,
my name is Zachary, schooling you at Clark University.
The diversity in which I murder these; has me currently,
murdering wannabe M.C.'s like they're ropeless Yo-Yos. Certainly
ya missed it at first. Beautifully modeling the art ya see.
Yo Yo's a deformed hobbit. Ya, I'm battling a halfing.
I'm the white ya suckin' on, but skin color doesn't mean a thing.
Why,'cause Yo Yo I'm damaging your Ego, while my lyrics are fastening.
Blockin' ya from lines, like your flow was just you imagining.
Diggin' through your lyrics, an' archeologist scavenging.
Battling a Knight as Dark as me will leave me laughing.
Multiple personalities, will have me a crazy clown worth battling.
Ya your at bat choking, joking thinking your a joker. Asking
when it'll all be over, but there's no bottom to my bag o' tricks.
Yo Yo's day-zed like a empty mattress. Tell me, have you had it kid?
Like Magic Johnson's Johnson, you suck at this magic sh!t.
Yo Yo's a fat b@st@rd, fatter than fat b@st@rd. Slurplin' turds,
cuppin' a CUP between TWO GIRLS like, "Man, I found it first!"
Need a break down, let me know.
This is probably the best you've ever written. Not all the bars were direct punches, but the ones that were stung. That acronym bar was your funniest. The flow was good at the beginning, but I felt it was a little hard to find it in the 2nd part, but it was still there. Some of your rhymes towards the end felt a little forced, too. You had a great opener and closer. That two girls one cup bar almost made me gag.

“RRC (previous name).”

Since: Jun 13

Huntsville

#21 Sep 3, 2013
Some Random Dude wrote:
It sounds like you are just writing that I am back and everyone should look out, lmao. Almost sounds like you are building me up, haha. Overall though, most of it wasn't even a diss, it was like a little bit of a summary of EXACTLY how things went down. However, I don't know when you became Vet. and I don't remember a time when you could or ever will catch me bud.

I never stop, I keep moving. I also don't pull out a pad, I take it as it is and move on. Even if I lose from people not getting it, lmao. Just remember, Eminem's album drops soon. When it does... Watch out. I will be re-building and dropping straight fire yet again. I don't battle when I am not improving, I make sure what I put out is something worth reading.

So, if you want beef with me, I have no problem getting it out before Eminem's Album comes. Just remember, now is far from the time to wait. Make sure you bring your A-Game and build the best 16 you can. These 16's are short right now and I won't run out of punches within the next 6 months. I am fighting for that Elite Status and I am sure at this rate. It WILL be within my grasp soon.

I have Seanny-T's written and I also have Shini's. When Seanny and Shini return and give feedback, Seanny-T will only have to post his verse and I'll post soon after. Tgen once Seanny and I get votes, I'll post up Shini's verse. I have spit Shini's over Xbox Live and I've been getting some seriously positive reviews. It's fire and I am sure people will like it.
Invite me to a party and spit at me.
Some Random Dude

United States

#22 Sep 3, 2013
Thanks Shini, now we just wait for Seanny-T's return and he reply. After that, I will put his verse up, he's just gotta put his verse up first.

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