Mr. Flames vs. Chi-town

Mr. Flames vs. Chi-town

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Shini

Seoul, Korea

#1 Feb 20, 2013
Please write your bars. You have 4 bars a piece. Only punches will count towards your score. Good luck!
Shini

Seoul, Korea

#2 Feb 20, 2013
Oh and you have 72 hours.

“Get money ”

Since: Sep 11

Chicago

#3 Feb 21, 2013
To me four lines is four bars. But are you counting each multi as a bar? Cuz this should really be four lines if it is to be four bars correct? But if you count each multi than its more like 8 lines.
Shini

Seongnam, Korea

#4 Feb 21, 2013
Multis are optional. The main thin is having a verse that has a hard hitting punchline.
Shini

Seongnam, Korea

#5 Feb 21, 2013
Hard hitting punchlines***

“Get money ”

Since: Sep 11

Chicago

#6 Feb 21, 2013
What I mean is like four lines

________
________
________
________

Or

______
________
_________
________
_________
________
_________
________

Which format looks correct
Shini

Korea

#7 Feb 21, 2013
chi-town lover wrote:
What I mean is like four lines
________
________
________
________
Or
______
________
_________
________
_________
________
_________
________
Which format looks correct
3-4 stanzas = 1 bar (I used to think four stanzas but I have seen people deliver clean lyrics with only 3 using triplate staza bars.)
2 Lines= 1 bar

So to answer your question:

__________

__________ <--- 1 bar

______,___

______, <---- 1 bar

or

______,___

_______,__ <---- 1 bar

CLass is in session call me the master mind way I rig elections
^(One line)

Class is in session call me the mastermind way I rig elections
A Bush answers to me power comin droves, I don't drive-by I "Rove"

^ 1 bar (3-4 stanzas = 2 lines = 1 bar)
Shini

Korea

#8 Feb 21, 2013
Your 2nd example looks correct.

“Get money ”

Since: Sep 11

Chicago

#9 Feb 21, 2013
Shini wrote:
Your 2nd example looks correct.
Cool thanks il go with second format but a bar is really one line. When you read music lyrics they usually have 16 bars before a chorus those 16bars are really 16 lines.
Shini

Korea

#10 Feb 21, 2013
chi-town lover wrote:
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Cool thanks il go with second format but a bar is really one line. When you read music lyrics they usually have 16 bars before a chorus those 16bars are really 16 lines.
Like I said 3-4 stanzas is considered a bar. Usually that is 2 lines for me. I wouldn't go of the 2-4 measure story. I lean towards the poetic aspect of rapping. If you do it off of music it is 4 measures.

How fast can I go <-- 4 quarter beats (3 quarter and two 8ths)
HIttin my flow <--- 4 quarter beats
jiv and jive-o <--- 4 quarter beats
pissin 5-0 <--- 4 quarter beats

You can do a bar with two measures. It just really depends on the flow and format. Deviation is possible, but the rule is it can't be just 1 stanza.

Look at my gold rich
Ya'll can't hold this <--- 1 bar (if you were to use a two measure rule)

I like going with 4 stanzas although I seen people using three and making the flow sound better. I try to confine to a specific pattern though. In a punchline it should be set-up then punch.

“Get money ”

Since: Sep 11

Chicago

#11 Feb 21, 2013
This dude [blows] more [flames] than a "bomb"
That's why this fags favorite website is allflamerz."com"

First round ima take you out "quick"
Don't got a license (to-drive)so he Sits between (two-guys)as he learns how to ride "stick"

One more thing for I change the "subject",
before you take (this-lost),
you starting to look "susbect" similar to (Chris Bosh)

You hot well I'm colder than liquid "nitrogen", 
had to murder this dude cuz The only way to put a [flame] out is by suppressing its "oxygen"

Since: Jan 13

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#12 Feb 21, 2013
I'm on my last bar ill reply in 20 mins or so

Since: Jan 13

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#13 Feb 21, 2013
This weirdo always on that W.W.E nude
If rap was wrestling I would slam this dude

check the time it's 12 o'clock gotta go to bed soon
But this dumbass always on that red tube

This dude got 2 kids never learned how to use protection
He sounds like a player probably got an HIV infection

This dude needs to brush his teeth going threw toxication
Breathe smelled so bad he could never have an conversation

“Get money ”

Since: Sep 11

Chicago

#14 Feb 21, 2013
Good sh7t Mr flames lol

Since: Jan 13

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#15 Feb 21, 2013
Yours was good to

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#16 Feb 21, 2013
MrFlames wrote:
This weirdo always on that W.W.E nude
If rap was wrestling I would slam this dude

check the time it's 12 o'clock gotta go to bed soon
But this dumbass always on that red tube

This dude got 2 kids never learned how to use protection
He sounds like a player probably got an HIV infection

This dude needs to brush his teeth going threw toxication
Breathe smelled so bad he could never have an conversation
They were both good what I would like to know is how you know about that site?

Since: Jan 13

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#17 Feb 21, 2013
Lol that's what I was wondering to

Since: Jan 13

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#18 Feb 21, 2013
I guess we both did some research on each other

Since: Jan 13

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#19 Feb 21, 2013
Wait what site.

WWE
Or
Allflamerz

Since: Jan 13

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#20 Feb 21, 2013
I would say I have improved a lil from when I came to this website , and I still have years to practice being only 13 and I thank chi town he pushes me to do my best every tourney so I give lots of respect to him and my idol at the moment would be shini like that's who I wanna be soon but in my way (original) and I learned that u gotta be careful cuz u can make enemy's while ur reaching the top and that's a good thing it pushes u and makes u work harder so thank u to my enemy's to :D and I plan to move to another forum just to improve myself but I will always be here

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