SomeRandomDude Vs ILLMORTAL (semi-fin...

SomeRandomDude Vs ILLMORTAL (semi-finals) correction

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Since: Oct 13

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#1 Jun 3, 2014
Sorry about the mistake , enjoy the match
SomeRandomDude

United States

#2 Jun 3, 2014
You should sober up and stay that way. You'll have a hard time getting anywhere high.

It is possible, but very tough. I was high on prescription meds my doc. gave me all through my younger years, my brain was mush.

Since: Oct 13

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#3 Jun 3, 2014
I was an everyday smoker and I stopped 4 months ago now I'm smoking again its complicated but I will never really stop smoking
IllMortal

Houston, TX

#8 Jun 8, 2014
Nothing's changed since "Yoyoyo" you're still "strung up" on that battle when you got dropped down,
See, I'm the "sleeper" in this one but I'm gonna "rock the baby" and leave you "knocked out",

It's funny how some "random" dude is typical adding up to being "predictable",
I'll divide to conquer him in this tourney his whole name being his reciprocal,

It's plain to see that SRD is an unequivocal individual,
First off he's minuscule, immiscible and pitiful... better emcee than me? nah that would be criminal,

I'm gonna finish you with a "get over here" like a scorpion fatality,
Causing calamity I can't believe I scored this peon and now I gotta end him savagely,

This "dude love"s complexity but just know I won't treat this "man kind" and stand by clawin,
My rhymes pin point you like "cactus, jack", I'm crackin backs as I propel you off cage, the "undertaker" ready to choke slam this "dead man walkin",

Hittin, attackin/a tack in spines, tactics grind and smash his mind,
To blast this passive guy into the after life and detach his "hide" so he can reply without actin "ass"inine,

He has y'all thinkin Zach could read/Zachary fine,
But then dyslexia kicks in and he can't comprehend the passage we write,

I can "phase/Phaze" you easily if a "Rook" can have you "pinned/penned" well,
"Typing" a paragraph about losing, is the only time you'll "send Ls",

He's allergic to all drugs so I hope my "dope bars" don't mark him killin 'em,
I inject this "heroine" with an unsterile pen and watch him peril with known carnage rippin 'em,

Asking for "breakdowns", you're "mental instability" starts it off and I "partly chop",
Then you "dart" right off, saying you see a "point" for the vote being "marked" and dropped,

SRD getting dismissed from my "court" cuz he's arguing with my judgement/judge men,
I'm a "king"/aching waiting for a "knight"/night where my swords pungent/punch in,

You're a "narcissus" I'll be "nemesis" and show you the image you uphold,
Lead you to "some" flow as you end your life, not "random"ly, since we knew "dude's" gimmick would unfold,
IllMortal

Houston, TX

#9 Jun 8, 2014
Bar 1: yoyo trick references and if you "rock a baby" you knock it out/put it to sleep. Also means knock out SRD from the punch.

Bar 2: calls himself "random" but I see his actions and ways as predictable.

Bar 5: wwe references. Mankind, cactus jack, and dude love were all the same person. And also a reference to when undertaker choke slams mankind off the top of a cage onto the announcer tables.

Bar 8: reference to Phaze beating SRD. If a rook in chess pins a king it shows the player isn't good. Rook "penned"/wrote about how SRD is well. Next line is self explanatory.

Bar 9: in the freestyle battle thread SRD said he was allergic to all drugs. "Dope bars" can also be a reference to bars which are a drug. Then heroine... And yeah lol

Bar 10: SRD always asks for breakdowns in a battle if he feels the vote wasn't right. Mental instability can lead to "break downs" and partly chopping something can lead to "break downs" as well.
Second line reference to the game darts and to darts. Also means SRD darts off/runs away from battles and always says when a vote isn't broken down it shouldn't count.

Bar 11: again SRDs always questioning judgment and the judges.

Bar 12: reference to Greek mythology. Nemesis takes narcissus to a river where narcissus sees his reflection, falls in love, then commits suicide because he can't be with it.
Next line has "some random dude" in it.
Shini

Korea

#10 Jun 9, 2014
Nice drop. Just so you both know, I will not add my 2 cents as it will provide a bias due to being a semi finalist.

Good luck to both of you.
SomeRandomDude

United States

#11 Jun 9, 2014
I hate doing this, but I'll need an extension. I have so far one rough bar, that's it. I have been busy.

Monday: I was volunteering nearby at Hospice.
Tuesday: Grocery shopping, P.S.R., Apartment Hunting.
Wednesday: Counselor, Allergies started, Over at my Grandparents and with a girl cuddling late at night.
Thursday: P.S.R., Apartment Hunting, Health and Welfare.
Friday: Went over to my Parent's House and spent time with my cousins.
Saturday: Spent all day helping out my Parents and Grandparents.
Sunday: Bible Study, then helped someone from Bible Study named Bob the rest of the day.
Monday: Volunteering at Hospice, since Wednesday, been sneezing from allergies, runny nose, dried nose, head spinning and feeling like I am getting sick. It is supposed to be due tonight, but the pikely chance of getting it done is minimal and it would be s*** at that. Then tommorow I have to get down to Hospice after leaving early today to continue helping out AFTER I am done with my P.S.R.

“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#12 Jun 9, 2014
SomeRandomDude wrote:
I hate doing this, but I'll need an extension. I have so far one rough bar, that's it. I have been busy.

Monday: I was volunteering nearby at Hospice.
Tuesday: Grocery shopping, P.S.R., Apartment Hunting.
Wednesday: Counselor, Allergies started, Over at my Grandparents and with a girl cuddling late at night.
Thursday: P.S.R., Apartment Hunting, Health and Welfare.
Friday: Went over to my Parent's House and spent time with my cousins.
Saturday: Spent all day helping out my Parents and Grandparents.
Sunday: Bible Study, then helped someone from Bible Study named Bob the rest of the day.
Monday: Volunteering at Hospice, since Wednesday, been sneezing from allergies, runny nose, dried nose, head spinning and feeling like I am getting sick. It is supposed to be due tonight, but the pikely chance of getting it done is minimal and it would be s*** at that. Then tommorow I have to get down to Hospice after leaving early today to continue helping out AFTER I am done with my P.S.R.
So when are you gonna be available??????

“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#13 Jun 9, 2014
SomeRandomDude wrote:
I hate doing this, but I'll need an extension. I have so far one rough bar, that's it. I have been busy.

Monday: I was volunteering nearby at Hospice.
Tuesday: Grocery shopping, P.S.R., Apartment Hunting.
Wednesday: Counselor, Allergies started, Over at my Grandparents and with a girl cuddling late at night.
Thursday: P.S.R., Apartment Hunting, Health and Welfare.
Friday: Went over to my Parent's House and spent time with my cousins.
Saturday: Spent all day helping out my Parents and Grandparents.
Sunday: Bible Study, then helped someone from Bible Study named Bob the rest of the day.
Monday: Volunteering at Hospice, since Wednesday, been sneezing from allergies, runny nose, dried nose, head spinning and feeling like I am getting sick. It is supposed to be due tonight, but the pikely chance of getting it done is minimal and it would be s*** at that. Then tommorow I have to get down to Hospice after leaving early today to continue helping out AFTER I am done with my P.S.R.
I wrote mine even with a busy schedule working nearly everyday -.-

“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#14 Jun 9, 2014
You know what, take your time SRD just don't drag it out. I want you at your best so, if I beat you, it won't be just because you rushed it. I'll give you until Friday to hopefully write something I know you can write.
climax

Ireland

#15 Jun 9, 2014
Just saying that illmortal I loved that drop it was really good . But I know srd even though he's busy and sick will come back with just as much an impressive diss . Good luck to both of you guys , respect.

Since: Oct 13

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#17 Jun 10, 2014
extension. For that , do you have 4 hour days or something ? Lol but k we should get shxt rolling, so I think a 4 day maximum extension is needed please find the time because we do understand but I think it would be unfair to illmortal and the other semi finalist... I think 4 days is fair because I know its hard for you to write those , complex verses.
Shini

Seoul, Korea

#18 Jun 10, 2014
lil biggy wrote:
extension. For that , do you have 4 hour days or something ? Lol but k we should get shxt rolling, so I think a 4 day manximum extension is needed please find the time because we do understand but I think it would be unfair to illmortal and the other semi finalist... I think 4 days is fair because I know its hard for you to write those , complex verses.
I would give 2 days. Phaze got more time only because of a city wide power outage. People should be able to sit down and write good bars in an hour.

Personally as a textcee, I rarely extend. As a host, I give a short extention to create a sense of urgency.

Btw @ Everyone else I will probably do a tourney after Evolusean's.I will also continue Tough Love 2 after I get internet at my new place.
SomeRandomDude

United States

#19 Jun 10, 2014
I would totally have written it out already, but I had a compounding allergy problem. I will have time soon, just not quite yet. Power Outages, you have time to write.

Since: Oct 13

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#20 Jun 10, 2014
2 days seem fair enough srd its not personal its just unfair I understand life is hectic there but come on bro you can do it win or loose ,do or die just don't "climax" us
RapRook

Brighton, UK

#21 Jun 10, 2014
SomeRandomDude wrote:
I would totally have written it out already, but I had a compounding allergy problem. I will have time soon, just not quite yet. Power Outages, you have time to write.
:) I am saying nothing.(You cocked this up big time) Let it flow, don't let the dry nose put you off, talk about how IllMortal is gonna be dead before you can make him sneeze soon as you turn in the breeze cuz you consider this s*** a breeze, match for you? oh please, your name is srd telling people to get on your level, a highly respected intellectual who proves himself worthy of every medal. People are insdcribing your nick before you proved s*** etc...
You will lose respect from people if you continue to delay. No offence.
(Yes I am aware that I swore in that paragraph.)
Good luck all. Wish you well SRD.

“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#22 Jun 10, 2014
SomeRandomDude wrote:
I would totally have written it out already, but I had a compounding allergy problem. I will have time soon, just not quite yet. Power Outages, you have time to write.
With power outages you have no electricity, so no computer, which means no post.
Anyways, two days it is. Due date is now Wednesday night.
SomeRandomDude

United States

#23 Jun 10, 2014
I might not make it, I am working trying to get this. I got both a bigger problem and at the same time a small re-prieve. I have financial and living problems going on, at the same time though, I got free of the volunteering time to deal with it. However, I might get called up. As it sits though, I have 4 out of the 12 bars written. So, before life turns to s*** again. I will try to kick it out. As you know, this is the 2nd time I have called for a delay and not for about a year or so. I am usually, "No excuses," but my life is about to turn into an absolute b**** and I am trying my hardest to keep a smile on and keep pushing forward. Defeat is not on my mind, only achieving and I pray I can do what is needed.

“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#24 Jun 10, 2014
.-. Well then....

Since: Oct 13

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#25 Jun 10, 2014
Good luck with you situation hopefully it will turn out the best and do your best .

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