(SRD)SomeRandomDude VS (RS)rapSwipe [...

(SRD)SomeRandomDude VS (RS)rapSwipe [Vet battle status].

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“No pain No Gain!”

Since: Mar 13

accra(Ghana)

#1 Sep 16, 2013
Dont be alarmed,this is Just there so that when you finish ya battles you can post ya 16 bars,but i will post my 16 tomorrow,caus i would be goin to school so i wont be regular here.
this is the structure of Vote,so you can copy and paste it to vote.

Opener:
Punches:
Metaphors:
Puns:
Nameplay:
Wordplay:
Personals:
Multies:
WoW Factor:
Enjoyment:

And Vote:

“No pain No Gain!”

Since: Mar 13

accra(Ghana)

#2 Sep 16, 2013
This aint a Bank robbery, buh get on the ground please,
Thats where ya level be, consider my punches a diary Dildo,they keep ya mouth creamed.
You rap with a good vocab,buh ya gat to change that O to A,
Caus ya rhyme and multies are Flowless.
Actin all Macho with that Seanny racial attack,
Swipe's a dude ya cant last, I'll play ya 2 balls on ya 6 packs.
Think fast,ya think u drop metaphors? A metaphor for failure thats more like you,
Even shini wont take this poor soul/sole like a beggers shoe.
SRD wears tha crown of takin down YoYo's,
buh I ma get SRD to be RSD thats Rap Swiped Down(RSD).
Compared to me your a smack am a big hit,
even if i feed ya a manhole you couldnt spit sh!t.
He doesnt spit that sh!t so he stays healty,
somebody help him,SRD's always clean like came out of a washin machine.
I ma leave ya family mourning like breakfast or your parents worried like its past curfew,
caus i'll hurt ya,raise the steal like magneto to murk ya,am the anchor of rap so i make this meta-fall(metaphor) on you.
Yea its true, am holdin the 5th and loadin the clip,
blast and leave ya blown to bits.
Your gonna get thrown in a ditch,
now his parents can see their son like a solar eclipse.
You wanna f with me? Dis rap Dog is infected,
I ma make ya blead,bite ya till i kill this vet.
Ya idea of a punchline is a glove on a ruler,
haha..think that and i'll leave ya blood splatted all over,yeah the stove of jack the ripper.
Some Random Dude could be the Gum or Tampon dude,
its true i aint rude,its your name similar to Who the fock is that.
Comin in this game a lyrical beast, on his for head 666,
So imagine the Gore as i Rip(R.I.P) this b!tch from the core.
I freestyled this whole verse, buh sh!t is sh!t i got to f*ck this whore first,
I was cursed to rap,blessed with words,some where born with silver spoons i was born with a horror set.
I ma trick and give ya treats but ya cant eat this cake,
caus seriously your wrong in the cemetry,you made a grave Mistake.
This battle on topix gonna be history,
caus its only Mortal Komat where you see a battle end flawless victory.

“No pain No Gain!”

Since: Mar 13

accra(Ghana)

#3 Sep 21, 2013
Yo @SRD if ya could reply to this in a weeks time it would be appreciated, and if anyone wants an expo just holla.

“No pain No Gain!”

Since: Mar 13

accra(Ghana)

#5 Oct 5, 2013
YO @SRD YO GONNA REPLY TO THIS OR WHAT? i didnt put much effort in this like i wanted, i just wanted you to keystyle a verse in it,so that we would finish it early, or should it be a NO SHOW?
Some Random Dude

United States

#6 Oct 5, 2013
I got some sh!t I have been doing, uaven't you noticed my inactivity?

“No pain No Gain!”

Since: Mar 13

accra(Ghana)

#7 Oct 6, 2013
alright! buh am a vet until u post!peace

“No pain No Gain!”

Since: Mar 13

accra(Ghana)

#8 Oct 22, 2013
ta-da.
SomeRandomDude

United States

#9 Oct 22, 2013
I have to write Phaze's then I'll write yours.

“No pain No Gain!”

Since: Mar 13

accra(Ghana)

#10 Oct 22, 2013
alright.peace.
Some Random Dude

Post Falls, ID

#11 Oct 25, 2013
You can't be mad, you got to experience Veteran for a little bit.

I'm gonna trash rapswipe, but first I'll swipe his rap b!tch
Who the f(_)ck tracked this, it's obvious he has no practice
It's a cheap class act trick, an' one that's not attractive
I want to know who I'm battlin', so tell him that I'm askin'
While you are here baskin', in his hard work tragic
His hard work is damaged,'cause you had to snatch it
I'll send you back twit, just body pieces in a basket
While I'm screaming "[email protected]()t, I just let you have it!"
Man I'm not holding back sh!t, it'll be drowning you pelagic
Your reputation won't be lavish, your death will be manic
Disposal will be a classic, shark jaws cavin' your @ss in
There won't be sadness, no you'll just hear me laughing
Disapointment will be massive, no eulogy that's fantastic
Hell your life isn't even dramatic, auto-pilot and automatic
Your participation wasn't active, just a Roger in the attic
Your American Dad is, not even a High School graduate
Your girl was savage, hired a hit you got too much baggage
Shot you with a Canon(Cannon), but it blew up in her face plastic
Here you came in bandit, and though you had the advantage
This isn't even a challenge, your life was mismanaged
Try to give me an adage, I can put on this bloody canvas
I can see your mind collapsin', your intelligence is lapsin'
I love you graspin', it's like your mind is f(_)cking gaspin'
While you're claspin', onto life you say your curses raspin'
There is nothing that you're maskin', your pain is everlastin'
I'll just stay here an' keep contrastin', the thought of grafting
Your head onto a manakin, to remember your pathetic passin'
No amount of your gabbin', will ever stop my tackin'
Listen while I'm braggin', I am not afraid to get to crackin'
You can't stop this from happenin', right now I'm attackin'
Now be still while I practice, my swing I use when whackin'
With this iron that I brandish, or I'll just throw your @ss in
alter ego

UK

#12 Oct 25, 2013
We must vote right
Rap swiped??
You got f
He said he will put no stop
But look when you started
He only spit this today this was some pre planned shit
Freestyle shit
If I should right before I spit
I'll spit lead in other words all your posses will be dead
F ck rap out ya head
Scared you'll come of as a shit ??
Well I see you as a prefrestyle epilepsy fit

“No pain No Gain!”

Since: Mar 13

accra(Ghana)

#13 Oct 26, 2013
what?
SomeRandomDude

United States

#14 Oct 26, 2013
Don't mind the ramblings of a madman.

“No pain No Gain!”

Since: Mar 13

accra(Ghana)

#15 Oct 28, 2013
pis can we get som votes
SomeRandomDude

United States

#16 Oct 28, 2013
Post the link in free for all.
Shini

Korea

#17 Oct 30, 2013
-rapSwipe- wrote:
pis can we get som votes
I will vote on this later. Suprisingly Rapswipes punchlines improved. I will limit the categories and try to provide a breakdown with advice.

“No pain No Gain!”

Since: Mar 13

accra(Ghana)

#18 Oct 30, 2013
Shini wrote:
<quoted text>
I will vote on this later. Suprisingly Rapswipes punchlines improved. I will limit the categories and try to provide a breakdown with advice.
...thanks

“No pain No Gain!”

Since: Mar 13

accra(Ghana)

#19 Nov 2, 2013
seriously, i never read your posts well but to be frank ur rap rhyme scheme has improve.
SomeRandomDude

United States

#20 Nov 2, 2013
???

“RRC (previous name).”

Since: Jun 13

Huntsville

#21 Nov 2, 2013
If you want ill vote as well.

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