Phaze vs. Seanny T Halloween Horrorco...

“Horrocore-Tourna ment 2012CHAMP”

Since: May 11

Calgary, Canada

#50 Nov 24, 2013
not sayin chi towns is a disputed voter....just sayin i want more feedback from more high up people....lol

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#51 Nov 24, 2013
rhyme scheme: B B A
setting: from seanny's house to my
house under my basement. then I move onto my backyard to bury him.
onomatopoeia: "shhh!", "ding-dong" (bar 1)
wordplay: "hawaiian punch"(bar 2), "saw"(bar 5), "foul(fowl)"(bar 12), "mourning"(bar 15)
simile: "eat the carcass like a scavenger"(bar 11)
theme: I am trying to kill seanny to satisfy my killing needs.
idiom: "he's on the go.." (bar 14)
personification: "death wears me as a costume"(bar 9), "death walks around, swarms around in my head." (both bar 16)
hyperbole: "so much blood on my hand I can't wash it off." (bar 15)
metaphor: "I'm the meaning of what death is." (bar 14)
alliteration: "body buried between both brittle bastards." (bar 15)(taking about silent striker and niatroh & if you remember my setting from silent striker battle is my house but niatroh was in the woods. I had his body hung up in strikers battle but he wasn't buried and the ending was silent being buried. srd had no body because I erased it with acid lol)
pun: "gets a taste of my hawaiian punch." (seanny is from hawaii.. I think lol)
"his head is what I saw." (i saw his head, you know, with a saw)
"you can say I'm fowl("like a scavenger" line before was this follow up. fowl means bird and scavengers mostly are birds who are decomposers and I was also being foul from eating his organs)
"created a mourning for the bright day." (bright day is morning and mourning can be from a funeral or from his disappearance)
gore: approach his porch and knocks him out. lock him in my trunk and drive away. drag him in my house and brings him down my basement. saw off his head and drink his blood. with many tools and rules I don't think its done yet.
stab his stomach with a fork and burn his ribs with my blowtorch to make baby.back ribs. I use my woodaxe to cut off his body in twain(two). axe off legs and skin him (take off his skin). so much blood I step in it and I bring down his body that was hung up from his intestines. I put them in garbage bags and bring them outside to bury him 6 feet under. and them I go back inside my.house to continue satisfying my killing needs lol

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#52 Nov 24, 2013
I'm not a sore loser and cries when people doesn't feel my writing but thanks for the votes guys. and yeaa chi-town I did the rhyme scheme to make my flow a lil better. I didn't have stretched rhymes because nothing was forced, I admit I had a little of fillers because 16 is super long but nothing was forced haha but oh well and I made this only to show you I came in using every category from literary elements and poetic device so forced? no you guys are reading it literally rather than its true meaning

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#53 Nov 24, 2013
also I wanted to add I used my two weapons from previous battles in play here haha its all like my battles were a movie and this is the finishing sequel to my first battle. I think that was quite clever and unique but yeaa seanny good luck. :)

“Get money ”

Since: Sep 11

Chicago

#54 Nov 25, 2013
Phaze the Great wrote:
also I wanted to add I used my two weapons from previous battles in play here haha its all like my battles were a movie and this is the finishing sequel to my first battle. I think that was quite clever and unique but yeaa seanny good luck.:)
I noticed one of the reasons you got my vote

“Get money ”

Since: Sep 11

Chicago

#55 Nov 25, 2013
Seanny T wrote:
not sayin chi towns is a disputed voter....just sayin i want more feedback from more high up people....lol
You but me so down in the "vet/elite" bracket but I've battled and ripped you countless times, I've been the only dude on here to beat shini (one of the coldest IMO), I've given hhh a run for his money in the 1st world tourney match, I am the current WORLD TOURNEY CHAMP, I won the PUNCHLINE TOURNEY CHAMP,(got robed in the title defense),had battles with white rabbit that went on for weeks ultimately leading in his disappearance, have beaten countless of rappers on here too many to count. Oh and I've bodied SRD too many times. What "higher" can it get on this forum? I voted on what I thought was better. No offense to you just saying that was a long thought out vote on par with anyone else's vote. Other then your boy who is a bias vote anyway. That vote gets tossed in my book.
Seanny T

Calgary, Canada

#56 Nov 25, 2013
Lol calm yoself, you misunderstood. I said i want votes from MORE high up people, meaning your high up vote was the first high up vote and i want more high up ppl to vote. Also this is why i wanted only known respected people voting...if 'my boys' vote doesnt count, liquids doesnt count. They are in the same boat actually, so any arguement anyone has about that come talk to me ill set you straight. I dont know why shini hasnt voted yet, and i messaged hhh but he hasnt responded on here or FB so idk... But i wasnt dissing u chi lol i even just said ur definitly a vet still if we implement the new cata system.
Shini

Seongnam, Korea

#57 Nov 25, 2013
Flow Phaze He had a complex flow. Him and Seanny had some choppy parts, but he was doing inside and outside multis. I feel it is better to be choppy and complex than choppy and simple in flow. People tend forgive it more.

Gore Phaze Phaze had some revisitations of his earlier work including the weapons given to him in the earlier tournament. Did anyone catch those parts. He hacked, disemboweled, and mutilated with the woodaxe and brought back the blow torch for some dark humor. Seanny's piece was more about mutilation which I will get more into.

Multi Phaze had some nice, complex multis going off meshed with some slant rhymes and word play. Seanny was good, but Phaze brought out multis that we can appreciate both beginner and advance.

Storytelling Seanny T He guided us into a more methological approach. The stories setups felt simular, but Seanny had this. His material felt more vivid.
Dismemberment Seanny T He stabbed, flogged, branded, deep-throated Phaze with a water hose proceeded to knock his teeth out, picked his pussed-filled wounds, dug his eyeballs out, proceeded to melt his face off, sliced open Phaze's neck, proceeded to slice open his chest and expose his heart exposing his intestines and beating heart, Very vivid stuff albiet didn't feel gory.
Shini

Seongnam, Korea

#58 Nov 25, 2013
I'm typing on my phone so forgive me for this.

Enjoyment Tie This was close for me. Both showed good technique in their own rites. Both came with fairly good stories. One was delievered simple and heavy with description the other one favored technique and word play. Both drops had their strengths and weaknesses.

MVGT Phaze. This was a close drop for me as a final drop should be. I co-sign everyone's opinion on the closing bars. I will say that Seanny showed why he won the title last year. To me Phaze got a CLOSE victory. It is nice to see him improve though.

Props to both MCs

Now can we get some votes on these other battles?
Shini

Seongnam, Korea

#59 Nov 25, 2013
chi-town lover wrote:
<quoted text>
You but me so down in the "vet/elite" bracket but I've battled and ripped you countless times, I've been the only dude on here to beat shini (one of the coldest IMO), I've given hhh a run for his money in the 1st world tourney match, I am the current WORLD TOURNEY CHAMP, I won the PUNCHLINE TOURNEY CHAMP,(got robed in the title defense),had battles with white rabbit that went on for weeks ultimately leading in his disappearance, have beaten countless of rappers on here too many to count. Oh and I've bodied SRD too many times. What "higher" can it get on this forum? I voted on what I thought was better. No offense to you just saying that was a long thought out vote on par with anyone else's vote. Other then your boy who is a bias vote anyway. That vote gets tossed in my book.
I would not say robbed. Niatroh has been doing alright on rapdogs, but I know you have written better material than him before. I want to get that mini ladder popping since I have 4 contenders in mind. I just need one more to sign up. And honestly he didn't blow you out of the park either.

“RRC (previous name).”

Since: Jun 13

Huntsville

#60 Nov 25, 2013
Shini wrote:
<quoted text>I would not say robbed. Niatroh has been doing alright on rapdogs, but I know you have written better material than him before. I want to get that mini ladder popping since I have 4 contenders in mind. I just need one more to sign up. And honestly he didn't blow you out of the park either.
Why would anyone think I blew him out? I won off a strike of luck, and seeing as my best is punchlines and I'm not that good at it, then I'm not very good my self. I've a lot to learn and struggling to learn it all, so chi is a great mc anyone who thinks I'm better than him or than he's not good is a straight dumba*d

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#61 Nov 25, 2013
niahtro your able to vote, if b-diligent has a valid vote so do you. just give good points to back up why you think whoever won

“Get money ”

Since: Sep 11

Chicago

#62 Nov 25, 2013
Seanny T wrote:
Lol calm yoself, you misunderstood. I said i want votes from MORE high up people, meaning your high up vote was the first high up vote and i want more high up ppl to vote. Also this is why i wanted only known respected people voting...if 'my boys' vote doesnt count, liquids doesnt count. They are in the same boat actually, so any arguement anyone has about that come talk to me ill set you straight. I dont know why shini hasnt voted yet, and i messaged hhh but he hasnt responded on here or FB so idk... But i wasnt dissing u chi lol i even just said ur definitly a vet still if we implement the new cata system.
No doubt thanks for clearing that up

“Get money ”

Since: Sep 11

Chicago

#63 Nov 25, 2013
Shini wrote:
<quoted text>
I would not say robbed. Niatroh has been doing alright on rapdogs, but I know you have written better material than him before. I want to get that mini ladder popping since I have 4 contenders in mind. I just need one more to sign up. And honestly he didn't blow you out of the park either.
You got a tournament brewing? I'm in just keep me posted please
Shini

Seongnam, Korea

#64 Nov 26, 2013
chi-town lover wrote:
<quoted text>
You got a tournament brewing? I'm in just keep me posted please
Actually I think I will do some sort of endurance mode for it since I can't get a forth person. He will battle in succession. There is you, Phaze and Yoyoyo.Then whoever has the belt will be the hot potato so to speak.

As far as tourneys go. I want to try the topical point system route but simplify it. I will not have the prelim test cause that discouraged applicants. They have to drop on time to get their points though. I think this system will need to be further developed though.

“Horrocore-Tourna ment 2012CHAMP”

Since: May 11

Calgary, Canada

#65 Nov 26, 2013
ya we need a system for a) on time drops and b) whose votes can count or not. a thread like this can have anyone from billie the 12 year old who has never even seen a rap battle to someone voting under a different alias and changing the location to vote for themselves. thats why i think its good to have SOME SORT of rule on voting. i couldnt think of anything so i was just saying 'only these classes can vote' to get my point of fair voting across. all other rap battle sites usually make you HAVE to make an account to use/post/etc. we should maybe start there? everyone make an account on here? that way we know its definitly you and not someone else posting, or some tard who doesnt know what hes talkin about.

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#66 Nov 26, 2013
lmao oh sh-t I wasn't even thinking that, you could make an account voting for yourself. but I think we should do that for future tournaments because its already tied 2-2 and i think all we need is hhh, srd and niahtro to vote. because lets say srd votes for you and hhh votes for me, it'll be tied and we need a tie breaker. I think whoever gets to 4 wins lol best out of 7

“Horrocore-Tourna ment 2012CHAMP”

Since: May 11

Calgary, Canada

#67 Nov 26, 2013
oh yeah im just saying, we need some sort of established and accepted system. ours just doesnt work in the long run lol. and hopefully srd votes but idk if he will cuz 'of the way phaze posted' it (in his words) but maybe if you ask nice haha. and i just talked to hhh, he might do the catagory thing as a quick vote, he doesnt have time to do one of those bar for bar breakdowns or anything that intricate lol. and yeah niatroh should vote as well if we are counting both liquid and b diligent.
Shini

Seongnam, Korea

#68 Nov 26, 2013
Seanny T wrote:
ya we need a system for a) on time drops and b) whose votes can count or not. a thread like this can have anyone from billie the 12 year old who has never even seen a rap battle to someone voting under a different alias and changing the location to vote for themselves. thats why i think its good to have SOME SORT of rule on voting. i couldnt think of anything so i was just saying 'only these classes can vote' to get my point of fair voting across. all other rap battle sites usually make you HAVE to make an account to use/post/etc. we should maybe start there? everyone make an account on here? that way we know its definitly you and not someone else posting, or some tard who doesnt know what hes talkin about.
They would still have to sign up. And if they sign up and they are total tards= 0 points. If they don't drop on time they will also get 0 points, but they won't be DQed. They can still be in it, but they have to make up the difference.
Shini

Seongnam, Korea

#69 Nov 26, 2013
Shini wrote:
<quoted text>
They would still have to sign up. And if they sign up and they are total tards= 0 points. If they don't drop on time they will also get 0 points, but they won't be DQed. They can still be in it, but they have to make up the difference.
Also I think people should just give feedback so I could assign points. I will be in charge of the score board. I will curb points based on number of entrants.

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