Phaze vs. Seanny T Halloween Horrorco...
Seanny T

Calgary, Canada

#26 Nov 23, 2013
Email it to me phaze lol we need to get votes started! I wanna hear feedback from everyone asap

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#27 Nov 23, 2013
its because my rhyme scheme is A A B
maybe I should change it to A B
or if you want I could post only 8 bars and then post the other 8 bars as a separate message.
Shini

Seoul, Korea

#28 Nov 23, 2013
Phaze the Great wrote:
its because my rhyme scheme is A A B
maybe I should change it to A B
or if you want I could post only 8 bars and then post the other 8 bars as a separate message.
That works. We need something to judge.

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#29 Nov 23, 2013
1
Shh! without a sound//@ his house// as I start approaching the porch.
ding dong! ring the bell once//, bit unwelcomed// as seanny opens the door.
2
gets a taste of my "Hawaiian punch"//, hes knocked out cold on the floor.
I tie him up// hes inside my trunk// as I go in my ford.
3
drive away and pull over//, take him out dragging him by the shoulder// on the sidewalk.
karma is what I bring back//, got a ski mask// only showing my eyeballs.
4
inside my house has hung up previous victims//, packed with devious systems// as I drag him down my basement.
"damn it stinks in here!"// I'm thinking here// will be your burial replacement.
5
is there even any room?// full with mc tombs// and I haven't even killed him yet!
his head is what I "saw"//, blood is raw// and I grab the driller to drill his head!
6
a bleeding dome//, reached the skull// and I start to drink his blood.
no set of rules,// get my tools,// yea thats right its over when I think its done.
7
i made his stomach pour// with this rugged fork// cause i'm insanely that sick.
use my blowing torch// to slowly scorch// his ribs until I can have baby back ribs!
8
with my wood axe I axe him in half// back with the axe// to sever in twain.
its already arduous//, many artists// dead, look at what my endeavor has gained.

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#30 Nov 23, 2013
9
axe your arms and your legs//, skin the flesh// because I plot doom.
this is your bury place//, I have such a scary face// death wears me as a costume!
10
scene is pleasant//, with his intestines// I hang his skeleton up.
so much organs on the floor// it can't be ignored // when I'm literally steppin' in blood.
11
his belly drains// death comes everyday// on my calendar.
my gluttony// loves the feast// so I continue to eat the carcass like a scavenger!
12
so you can I say I'm "foul/fowl"// so messy I might throw in the towel// to clean it up.
so many body parts// decadence got me far// gonna bury him I can't keep him up.
13
grab the shovel// bit of a struggle// to carry every part.
holding them by a garbage bag// bringing the carcass back// to my back yard.
14
put him in 6 feet under// dirt on the bags with each covered// and I stay thinking on his grave yard.
hes on the go to heaven// I'm the meaning of what death is// maybe I brought it way far.
15
so much blood on my hands I can't wash it off// not a cloth// will wipe away.
body buried between both brittle bastards// a little rapper// but still created a "mourning" for the bright day.
16
I finally walk away from where the body's laying// I end God's creations// and I always had from day one.
Death walks around// and swarms around// in my head as I go back inside .. I'm going back to phaze one ..

“Horrocore-Tourna ment 2012CHAMP”

Since: May 11

Calgary, Canada

#31 Nov 23, 2013
pretty wicked drop phaze! haha. liked the whole middle part of your story. heres my breakdown:
your started out pretty good, got into the swing of things pretty quick, the whole middle section is intense and graphic and i love the story!....and then at the end you kinda taper off...coulda added so much more violence haha i stacked mine full to the last bar almost. not that the ending was BAD im just sayin it wasnt AS graphic/gory/horror-esque as the rest, your just kinda talking about the consequences and having deep thoughts lol. idk that just my opinion, but overall sick drop man! always show up when you need to haha.

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#32 Nov 23, 2013
I think topix deleted it again :(

“Horrocore-Tourna ment 2012CHAMP”

Since: May 11

Calgary, Canada

#33 Nov 23, 2013
no i still see it
SomeRandomDude

United States

#34 Nov 23, 2013
I can't vote, I can't f(_)cking stabd the way Phaze layed it out.

Just a personal issue, just can't stand it...
liquidflow

United States

#35 Nov 23, 2013
flow: to me they were both good but i will have to go seanny t much more smoother, i think phaze from what i seen before strecthed ur bars too much started solid at the end fell off seanny t flow was much more compact yet his rimes hit better
FLOW: SEANNY T
Gore: both were very gory but i felt phaze one this category he talked about flesh intestines ribs he took to a high level with the gore skeleton mentioned a lot more what he did to u then what seanny t said in the sense of bodyparts saying what he did to everybody pary as seanny fell a liitle short
GORE:PHAZE
Storytelling: Once again both were great but storytelling definetly to me went to seanny t i never felt as i was lost from begginning to end chapter after chapter i felt i was in the story, phaze on the other hand, cause his bars were so strecthed at times lost me at times then the rime will reel me in, i was with seanny t the whole time never delt lost
STORYTELLING:SEANNY T
Multis: Definetly felt phaze got this one seanny t had some multis but phaze was pretty much multis the whole way.
MULTIS: PHAZE
Dismemberment: goes to phaze to me on this he literally tore ur whole body to shreds like i said before ge described what he did to a lot of body parts, Seanny T was a great dismemberment fell just a little short could of talked about more body parts
DISMEMBERMENT:PHAZE
Enjoyment: I really enjoyed both shout out to both great mcs for bringing fire, But ill have to sau Seanny T was more enjoyable smooth flow great story understood easily the whole way through strong start strong finish, as with phaze started of great but then it seemed he was throwing in fillers not such a smooth flow, bars a little strecthed
ENJOYMENT:SEANNY T
THE WINNER: SEANNY T
SMOOTH FLOW DIDNT SEEMED FORCED I FELT AS SOME OF PHAZES BARS WERE FORCED SEANNY T STARTED STRONG AND NEVER REALLY FADED AS PHAZE DID
SIDE NOTE: CREDIT TO BOTH MC GREAT STORIES HARD TO CHOOSE ON BUT SEANNY T GOT MY VOTE
Seanny T

Calgary, Canada

#36 Nov 23, 2013
Come on srd lol just vote

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#37 Nov 23, 2013
what you mean layed it out? by how I posted 2 instead of one or how each bar is structured?

“Horrocore-Tourna ment 2012CHAMP”

Since: May 11

Calgary, Canada

#38 Nov 23, 2013
he means your structuring i guess

“RRC (previous name).”

Since: Jun 13

Huntsville

#39 Nov 24, 2013
I'm guessing it's because of the numbered bars. That's my 2 cents, but if not oh well

“Get money ”

Since: Sep 11

Chicago

#42 Nov 24, 2013
Flow: phaze gets this one IMO. Sick rhymes awesome multies and great story from top to bottom. Seannys had a nice story but was just so easy and simple phaze gets this one due to the complexity of the rhyme scheme.

Gore: both had great story's and really vivid gore in both. This was a bit harder to give a winner too but I'm going to have to go with phaze. Just a little more detailed a bit more intricate followed the character on this sadistic mission through out the whole story. just a violent piece. Seanny was very gory as well but again just seemed to basic phaze was a bit harder to write yet it all connected well

Multies: phaze it's kind of obvious he multied the whole thing.

Dismemberment: phaze just more gory drank his blood and ate his body like a scavenger. Totally dismembered and destroyed seanny. Both snap don't get me wrong seannys was also very vivid and a great story but when I look at them both phaze had way more "dismemberment"

Enjoyment: both these two snapped and went all out for this title. I enjoyed both pieces equally thought seanny had a great story and flow and phaze was so vividly detailed. I liked that phaze really used multies in his flow and honestly they a hit pretty hard. Yea some filler here and there but overall brought his piece together nicely.

Mvgt: phaze thought he worked a lot harder in creating this piece then seanny did. Phaze hit hard with more intricate rhyme scheme. Great use of multies and overall awesome flow I literally spit this to like four different instrumentals and it just connected nicely with all. Great job you two seanny awesome flow as well but just a bit to basic for a title match.

Ps. If rules mattered seanny wins this on 16bar limit. What phaze dropped IMO was not 16bars it was way more. Just because they are structured with a 1 next to it doesn't make it one bar. Just saying that's way passed the 16 bar limit
B-Diligent

Calgary, Canada

#44 Nov 24, 2013
FLOW
Seanny was much more smooth everything fit and made sense when you rhymed it out loud
Phaze right from the start feels forced and rhymes that don't make sense entering from the porch ,punching him out ,driving away in his ford ,showing his eyeballs it's just not as smooth as seanny was and could have been worded better for a better flow you feel me?
Flow: seanny t
GORE
" a bleeding dome//, reached the skull// and I start to drink his blood.
no set of rules,// get my tools,// yea thats right its over when I think its done.
7
i made his stomach pour// with this rugged fork// cause i'm insanely that sick.
use my blowing torch// to slowly scorch// his ribs until I can have baby back ribs!"
That really was the only gore I felt from phase that had me thinking "damn this kid is sadistic!"
Seanny on the other hand had multiple parts that really hit me like daaaaaaamn this is horrorcore
"Finally stop and drag him out, blast him with a freezing hose,
Phaze shivers and begs for mercy but im not giving into his petty woes,
then I flip and hang this broken soul, stick picks thru his mouth and nose,
Shove red-hot coal into his @sshole then grab his ribs and pull to expose,
Your beating heart that grows ever dark, shove your insides around to look like Picasso art,
Offer you water so your hope sparks, but stems when you hear the chainsaw start,
Make you deep-throat the end then turn it on; the teeth blend,
Your face into mashed potatoes, and into MY hell you descend,
Flogging you every step you make, with every breath you take,
Your seeping wounds are pus filled, they starting to crack and break,
I fill up a glass full of the yellow ooze; force-feed to him his fluid,
I’m consuming copious amounts of booze, yet my thinking is so lucid,
My evil side takes stride; in my eyes you can see I’m RUTHLESS,
I dug my fingers into Phaze’s eyes, now their sockets left ROOTLESS,
Cutting homemade gills into your neck; a human amphibian,
The light in the tunnel brighter as phaze reaches Oblivion,
The tunnel quickly fades as I shoot adrenaline into his legs,
Right back in the torture-fest, featuring the jack-of-all-trades,
Im giggling like a school girl as I see your blood cascade,
It arrays itself on the floor, now your maggot buffet,
I continue in my twisted dreams to make you sputter and scream,
Put your stupid face near old pipeline, and melt it off with steam,
Bubbling right to the bone, flesh sticky like a pinecone,
Im spraying cologne on the injury, you just softly just moan,"
There was parts in phaze's I would of corrected or done differently
For example :
Phaze
"inside my house has hung up previous victims//, packed with devious systems// as I drag him down my basement.
"damn it stinks in here!"// I'm thinking here// will be your burial replacement. "
My version :
" previous victims hang flesh rotting through the house I hid them/
Ripped them skin removed like costume I unzipped them/ drag you like road kill across asphalt bleeding into my basement/ the scent is stagnant purtrious in my ritual of body burial pavement/"
Flows better and makes more sense that's just an example
Nicely done both of you but for me seanny is the gore king
Gore: seanny
B-Diligent

Calgary, Canada

#45 Nov 24, 2013
Story

Seanny told it better made each verse interesting to read understand and learn how he massacres phaze

Phaze just didn't make enough sense to me I felt the story was forced as with rhyme scheme was just harder to understand

Story: seanny

MULTIS

Phaze used what seem like a lot more Multi's even again felt forced but he did use alot more than Sean as he just told a story that flows.

Multi's : Phaze

DISMEMBERMENT

Seanny all the way he was so brutal in taking phaze apart ! Phaze had some good lines but not enough

Dismemberment : seanny

Enjoyment: seanny

Was easy to understand laugh and give props on

Winner : seanny t

Nice job both mcs grats to you seanny t has my vote!
B-Diligent

Calgary, Canada

#47 Nov 24, 2013
this posted backwards was too long had to do two parts fml...

“Horrocore-Tourna ment 2012CHAMP”

Since: May 11

Calgary, Canada

#48 Nov 24, 2013
lol idk chi town i think i did more to phaze over my 16 then he did to me.....i wrote down everything on the first page haha like matching up everything we do to each other, pretty sure my list is longer...

“Horrocore-Tourna ment 2012CHAMP”

Since: May 11

Calgary, Canada

#49 Nov 24, 2013
thanks for some votes finally people! but i want shini/hhh/srd to vote too. their votes are always non-disputed and well thought out. who ever those three vote is their vote for sure haha.

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