IllMortal vs. Lenox Da Kid

IllMortal vs. Lenox Da Kid

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“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#2 Mar 8, 2014
My bad on being late with it. ive had a lot of work these past three days... But...

Lenox da Kid couldn't handle the fire I spit wire to wire with wit,
He's getting tired, admired the acquired lines of my writs,

The script of the skit is hitting Lenox with crits from spits,
He's slipped and fell in the abyss of these slick pits so grim,

Lenox Da Kid huh, feelin my sh*t huh/
How bout I sh*t all over you, since I'm rippin a big one/

Death is imminent as Roth versus Emi-nem uh/
Ill end your career bruh, ain't I makin it clear son/

You can take that to the bank, like Phillips/
Will you do it for the fresh prince that breaks necks like pencils/

Ol sentimental, quick to get sad a$$/
Ill end your life quick cuz your on deaths fast path/

Your quick to take stabs at me but won't dam-age/
Ill stick a javelin up your a$$ and push it through til your skull cracks man/

You say you gotta make your rhymes shine, but their rusted/
Your futures busted, every time your mouth opens its a joke, not real punches/

A featherweight getting heavy weight/
Stacked on his chest, it's a KO he's met his fate/

You're just a kid, not even close to a man, your flow is just bad/
Mostly I'm hoping to go and just drag, you deep into hell, smile at lucifer and laugh/
MrFlames

Oshawa, Canada

#3 Mar 9, 2014
At the beginning it was a bit hard to understand, but as I went on it actually flowed pretty nice, I enjoyed it

“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#4 Mar 22, 2014
Still been waiting on your drop Lenox, yet you're asking for other people to battle you. I dropped like two weeks ago and you never did anything back. Come on son drop.

“Dropping Bars Of Knowledge”

Since: Feb 14

Syracuse New York

#5 Mar 22, 2014
IllMortal wrote:
Still been waiting on your drop Lenox, yet you're asking for other people to battle you. I dropped like two weeks ago and you never did anything back. Come on son drop.
I got you bro it was my fault was kind of busy this month

“Dropping Bars Of Knowledge”

Since: Feb 14

Syracuse New York

#6 Mar 23, 2014
no fuc8ing way.... it didn't send

“always”

Since: Jun 12

Connecticut

#7 Mar 23, 2014
Immortal. Good drop bro.! I thought the multis in the beginning were very clever but some of the rhymes later in the rap did seem to add up in my mind. I'll elaborate in another comment. But over all good flow, but just need to brush up on Consistency. And just a tip from me to you, look in the thesaurus or the dictionary for more complex words to tighten your Rythem.

“always”

Since: Jun 12

Connecticut

#8 Mar 23, 2014
IllMortal wrote:
My bad on being late with it. ive had a lot of work these past three days... But...

Lenox da Kid couldn't handle the fire I spit wire to wire with wit,
He's getting tired, admired the acquired lines of my writs,

The script of the skit is hitting Lenox with crits from spits,
He's slipped and fell in the abyss of these slick pits so grim,

Lenox Da Kid huh, feelin my sh*t huh/
How bout I sh*t all over you, since I'm rippin a big one/

Death is imminent as Roth versus Emi-nem uh/
Ill end your career bruh, ain't I makin it clear son/

You can take that to the bank, like Phillips/
Will you do it for the fresh prince that breaks necks like pencils/

Ol sentimental, quick to get sad a$$/
Ill end your life quick cuz your on deaths fast path/

Your quick to take stabs at me but won't dam-age/
Ill stick a javelin up your a$$ and push it through til your skull cracks man/

You say you gotta make your rhymes shine, but their rusted/
Your futures busted, every time your mouth opens its a joke, not real punches/

A featherweight getting heavy weight/
Stacked on his chest, it's a KO he's met his fate/

You're just a kid, not even close to a man, your flow is just bad/
Mostly I'm hoping to go and just drag, you deep into hell, smile at lucifer and laugh/
Elaboration: "Death is imminent as Roth versus Emi-nem uh/
Ill end your career bruh, ain't I makin it clear son/

You can take that to the bank, like Phillips/
Will you do it for the fresh prince that breaks necks like pencils/ "
It felt like these were rhyme-able, but was very unattached in sense. Like, they were harder to read, and probably easier to spit aloud using emphasis in your words.. Aside from this, great drop.!

“reverbnation.com /evolusean”

Since: Feb 14

CANADA

#9 Mar 23, 2014
@ill was therea beat u used to write this too or did u just do it off the cusp kinda thing, no beat. just wonderin. i dont judge til both mc's drop lol exception being like they never dropped, or somethin. some good advice from AA, and as being a former 8infinity member last year, i know his advice is at the very least truthful. nice to see ya back AA.
IllMortal

Houston, TX

#10 Mar 23, 2014
annoyin artist wrote:
<quoted text>
Elaboration: "Death is imminent as Roth versus Emi-nem uh/
Ill end your career bruh, ain't I makin it clear son/
You can take that to the bank, like Phillips/
Will you do it for the fresh prince that breaks necks like pencils/ "
It felt like these were rhyme-able, but was very unattached in sense. Like, they were harder to read, and probably easier to spit aloud using emphasis in your words.. Aside from this, great drop.!
I ncan see that now going through it like if it were my first time reading it, it is kinda hard. But thanks for the feedback AA, greatly appreciated.
IllMortal

Houston, TX

#11 Mar 23, 2014
Evolusean wrote:
@ill was therea beat u used to write this too or did u just do it off the cusp kinda thing, no beat. just wonderin. i dont judge til both mc's drop lol exception being like they never dropped, or somethin. some good advice from AA, and as being a former 8infinity member last year, i know his advice is at the very least truthful. nice to see ya back AA.
There actually wasnt a beat I used lol i usually use a beat but for this one i was just trying to get It out thinking he already had his done.

also @AA why didnt you try out for 8infinity again?

“always”

Since: Jun 12

Connecticut

#12 Mar 24, 2014
IllMortal wrote:
<quoted text>I ncan see that now going through it like if it were my first time reading it, it is kinda hard. But thanks for the feedback AA, greatly appreciated.
No doubt bro, and to be honest I didn't know we had to sign up again for the team Lol

“Dropping Bars Of Knowledge”

Since: Feb 14

Syracuse New York

#14 Mar 27, 2014
Evolusean wrote:
@ill was therea beat u used to write this too or did u just do it off the cusp kinda thing, no beat. just wonderin. i dont judge til both mc's drop lol exception being like they never dropped, or somethin. some good advice from AA, and as being a former 8infinity member last year, i know his advice is at the very least truthful. nice to see ya back AA.
im going to drop against ill once Im back at my dads. sorry for not being trust worthy

“Dropping Bars Of Knowledge”

Since: Feb 14

Syracuse New York

#15 Mar 31, 2014
ill is next on the list so its time to fulfill satins request,
quickly jump out the mist and stick a nickel plated blade in his chest,

My style of kil@ing is convincing way different from the rest,
hitting net like Billiup's on the Pistons, but when ill shoots everyone yells "hit the deck"

I heard your Moms and Uncle Steve used to get real mean, so I cut off his di!k, wrapped it, and gave it to her on Christmas Eve,

Cut out ill's spleen with a Guillotine, fu@k ebay I bought that shit in the Philippines, make a blood bath in his bedroom but the murder scene had no DNA, no fuc*in magician, just call me Mr. Clean,

The Battle Scene was set at "Post Apocalyptic",
I drew my gun (Mic) and cocked the biscuit (Spit a Punch Line),

Eyes not on the prize, but on my mind and what I try to comply,
to make it simple, I dropped him in a minute,

Your no Mike Tyson, but I may be Lenox Lewis,
Houston Texas? Fool you just best remember where the roots is,

You might think im talkin about Joe Pesi in casino, cause the last dude who fronted me and my crew through in a ditch,

so keep both eyes opened cause it could be you bitc(,
bruised , toothless, roots are ripped, your parents turned on the news

and found you next to a barn executed on a crucifix,

“not a guy...”

Since: Nov 13

Location hidden

#16 Apr 1, 2014
IllMortal wrote:
My bad on being late with it. ive had a lot of work these past three days... But...
Lenox da Kid couldn't handle the fire I spit wire to wire with wit,
He's getting tired, admired the acquired lines of my writs,
The script of the skit is hitting Lenox with crits from spits,
He's slipped and fell in the abyss of these slick pits so grim,
Lenox Da Kid huh, feelin my sh*t huh/
How bout I sh*t all over you, since I'm rippin a big one/
Death is imminent as Roth versus Emi-nem uh/
Ill end your career bruh, ain't I makin it clear son/
You can take that to the bank, like Phillips/
Will you do it for the fresh prince that breaks necks like pencils/
Ol sentimental, quick to get sad a$$/
Ill end your life quick cuz your on deaths fast path/
Your quick to take stabs at me but won't dam-age/
Ill stick a javelin up your a$$ and push it through til your skull cracks man/
You say you gotta make your rhymes shine, but their rusted/
Your futures busted, every time your mouth opens its a joke, not real punches/
A featherweight getting heavy weight/
Stacked on his chest, it's a KO he's met his fate/
You're just a kid, not even close to a man, your flow is just bad/
Mostly I'm hoping to go and just drag, you deep into hell, smile at lucifer and laugh/
you've got my vote x

“Dropping Bars Of Knowledge”

Since: Feb 14

Syracuse New York

#17 Apr 1, 2014
G-E-M wrote:
<quoted text>
you've got my vote x
don't vote if your going to be an idiot. Also don't think im mad because you voted for his. even if you voted for me id be pissed. id like to know why his rap was better and mine was not. so please. judge again with why his was better. thanks.

“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#18 Apr 1, 2014
Lenox Da Kid wrote:
<quoted text>don't vote if your going to be an idiot. Also don't think im mad because you voted for his. even if you voted for me id be pissed. id like to know why his rap was better and mine was not. so please. judge again with why his was better. thanks.
Thanks Gem ;)

And cuz you had an extra month lol playin bro don't get butt hurt
Usually after the deadline it won't count at all but I'm looking for people to battle. It started getting boring on here.

And GEM is experienced at this. She's been on here for a while, just off and on.

“Dropping Bars Of Knowledge”

Since: Feb 14

Syracuse New York

#19 Apr 1, 2014
IllMortal wrote:
<quoted text>
Thanks Gem ;)
And cuz you had an extra month lol playin bro don't get butt hurt
Usually after the deadline it won't count at all but I'm looking for people to battle. It started getting boring on here.
And GEM is experienced at this. She's been on here for a while, just off and on.
like I said im not butt hurt. I just don't like when people don't explain why it was good maybe she's a retar#ed fuc$ing cu@t. and ya I didn't even use that extra time to think of a diss I just typed once I had the chance. and to be honest im really sad to see that you didn't understand that I wasn't butt hurt and that I wanted feedback on how your was better. being butt hurt to me is like selling your soul to the devil.

“Dropping Bars Of Knowledge”

Since: Feb 14

Syracuse New York

#20 Apr 4, 2014
no one ever gives feedback when i battle

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