Phaze vs SomeRandomDude (Pro battle)
SomeRandomDude

United States

#31 Mar 30, 2014
First 8
Break
But... You don't follow those flows...
Break
Last 8

Please keep this in like that. It has it's purpose to split the 16 as the second half chances DRASTICALLY with its flow from the first.
SomeRandomDude

San Luis, AZ

#33 Apr 1, 2014
Phaze you half-wit, my rhymes are dumbed down when I met a wh()re (metaphore)
Slap this p(_)ssy with an Athraxed Tampax Encored from my reservoir (Resavoir)
Your mind is in upheavel, so I'll Annax all the best rhymes from deep ya brain you staked
Without being scared you just may(U.S.A.) fight like Russia just did to the Ukraine!
I'll throw a Mentally Retarded Kid with Down's Syndrome down a flight of stairs
Before I dumb down my words for you and Little Suzie,'cause Micheal Jackson needs a scare
In other words, I will socialize multiply and pulverize all your ties with the poltergeist
'Cause I'm the only spirit, with no need if alibi to justify when I mummify, mystify and stultify (St-ull-tify)
Which means you're bodied, dried out and confuzed in the after-life underneath a locked home
And not even Sir Arthur Conan Doyle could write a better mystery for Watson and Sherlock Holmes!
P(_)ssy foot around the bush and I'll bring in the Hedge Clippers and f-ck the tush!
'Cause Life can't compare to when I start f-king you in the @ss and get ya shook
Yo Phaze the Great, with that face ya make, raza blades, must break ya veigns
Stake ya claims, you just hate the way, I make apace, to a verse and, "Stake ya claim."
I said a Punny term can curse and call in a hearse, but wins come from a stable verse
'Cause only biased bags of dirt(Dirt Bags), vote off of one literary device for a vote coerced(From pressure)

But... You don't follow those flows...

So let incisions invision descriptions, get 'em all itchin' divisions just b-tchin'
When I'm splittin' this kids intermission, without wishin' his spittin' is livid
'Cause I will diminish all this innocence, scarring the kid with all of these images
Hittin' infinite you'd think I'm a gymnast, flexable flows winnin' percentages
Callin' a Priest ya religious victim, giving away all your earnings to missions
Who'll just keep stealin', you should know that's the way of the system
But you should know what good's the flow, with only ya third grade education
Gun soon pulled go ya should of known, this body would be your summation
Call me Aids with my sickness unstoppable, beatin' me is all to improbable
When I kill ya you'll claim it's illogical, heatin' the site no one's consolable
This battle was far from controllable, messin' with me it's not understandable
How I can murder like life is disposable, fundamentally it's all unavoidable
'Cause I'll tear down ya walls and threaten mankind, unquenchable hunger this ain't the last time
That I'll feast on your Spirits just passin' the time, I'm a Titan challenge me you cash in ya mind
Why did you think I was even approachable, what part of me made you think I was sociable
Breakin' ya spine I'm straight untouchable, YOU attacked ME, but you're just a stomach full
(Last few bars referenced heavy on Attack of the Titans.)

At a bud's house.

“reverbnation.com /evolusean”

Since: Feb 14

CANADA

#36 Apr 3, 2014
aight now that im back ill judge this ASAP.
SomeRandomDude

United States

#37 Apr 3, 2014
You cannot, Phaze needs to get his two bars in.
Evolusean

Calgary, Canada

#38 Apr 3, 2014
Im fairly certain he messaged me them ill look when i get back to a comp lol

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#39 Apr 3, 2014
I want permission to fix bar 7 also because bar 7 refers to bar 6 but none of you can see 6 so the meaning behind 7 is just plain and random if I leave it there. Is it OK if I change it? I finished bar 5-6 I just need to know if I can change 7. I won't flip
Evolusean

Calgary, Canada

#41 Apr 4, 2014
Ultimatly its srd's decision, its him ur battling for the title. MY opinion is sure go for it. I wouldnt care. But ill let srd use his opinion lol
SomeRandomDude

United States

#42 Apr 4, 2014
Send me the bars in an E-Mail... I am getting frusterated. At this rate I'll make yours a 14 if you keep ignoring me.

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#43 Apr 4, 2014
Whoa whoa whoa whoa! You don't have the power to do that bro, don't get too ahead of yourself. I already made the 3 bars all I need is to know if it's OK to change it. That's it
SomeRandomDude

United States

#44 Apr 4, 2014
You are ignoring me, I will draw a line. You refuse to acknowledge and I can refuse forcing a 14, because you cannot post the normal bars. Now, go back and read what I wrote.

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#45 Apr 4, 2014
I was never ignoring you, I've been trying since the time i set up this forum to send my bars but it won't let me, I'm more frustrated than you are, if anyone needs patience its me. And it's not my fault that I can't send 5-6, and if I change it 7 will help me lose because nobody would know why I put it so I asked to change it. But I have the 3 changed bars if you let me and we can get this over with

“reverbnation.com /evolusean”

Since: Feb 14

CANADA

#46 Apr 4, 2014
lol what? phaze finished his stuff awhile ago, topix is just being a b!tch and wont let him post the specific bar or two. i have seen them. they are in my inbox right now even. le sigh. make an account on here srd so its easy....

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#47 Apr 4, 2014
Haha I rather just post my 3 bars and be done with this thing. At this rate pro status isn't even worth my time.
SomeRandomDude

United States

#48 Apr 5, 2014
I asked him quin times to E-Mail it ti me AND my E-Mail has been written in TWO forms. Send the thing to me you f-ing nitwit.

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#49 Apr 5, 2014
What's your email then
SomeRandomDude

United States

#50 Apr 5, 2014
Scroll up!

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#51 Apr 5, 2014
Bro I've been reading every post you never gave me an actual email address
SomeRandomDude

United States

#52 Apr 5, 2014
Zacharyjamestylarclark

@

Gmail

dot

com

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#56 Apr 6, 2014
Here are the new bars replacing 5-7 due to copyright. Somebody fix up my whole drop and add these with it because I tried and it still don't let me
5
If you prefer reality it's no enigma, that your bars are seeming nebulous.
Because you lack personality and charisma, and I'm here being genuine.

6
But some of your bars are a portrait of meaning, it gives me a huge sight of image.
But what's wrong with that?(not a bar)
What good is an "image" when each line I'm reading hieroglyphics?

7
It's funny how you don't have the "nuggets" to fight,  but in battles you "dip" from the ketchup sauce.
And that's why reading your bars, your readers "space out" because you're known for "jetting off!!"
SomeRandomDude

United States

#57 Apr 6, 2014
I said 5 and 7. Six is a no. You want to replace 2 that you cannot post. I give that, you wanted 5 and 7 if I did that. So, 6 is out.

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