SRD vs. Alucard
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Shini

Korea

#21 Mar 4, 2013
"Tough Love" *** my bad lol
Some Random Dude

Coeur D Alene, ID

#22 Mar 6, 2013
Eyes, green with envy at other rappers makin' green tempt me Alucard
Thinkin' ya soundin' hard? I'll beat your @ss down with the salad bar
So don't go a-'dressing' me textin' these M.C.'s I'm too deadly
Grab the 'P' and shove it deep in your belly like a pregnancy
Watch ya disperse, I took your wet nurse you're too perverse
I'm a wizard with words with this verse you're just a frog with a curse
I discourage your verbiage, it's worthless the a horse that's nerveless
Hungry an' malnourished time to shoot this lame broken legged impure purist

Expo: Frog wordplay and some Horse wordplay. Should all be easily understood.
Some Random Dude

Coeur D Alene, ID

#23 Mar 6, 2013
worth-less then*

Worth less/Worthless

“Read it backwards”

Since: Jan 13

Saint Albans, NY

#24 Mar 6, 2013
walk through that door and get your bone SLEDGED,
I keep the arguments "open" like a door WEDGE/

messing with me is allowing you to endorse MEDS,
your a fraudulent credit card, your swipe was read by the FEDS/

I'm in "shock" of all the BOGGLE I'm hearin,it's like "ELECTRIC",
cause I'm all ears like a BOTTLE of NESQUIK,

your standing on a checkered board, "ice" cold murder this man,
Imma "tea" bag this horse, arizona can/

“Read it backwards”

Since: Jan 13

Saint Albans, NY

#25 Mar 6, 2013
Expo: when I said," ...cause I'm all ears like a bottle of nesquik", the rabbit on the bottle has big ears. If you don't know what Nesquik is, it's chocolate syrup.

Expo 2: "your standing on a checkered board, "ice" cold murder this man, Imma "tea" bag this horse, arizona can"

put ice and tea together, you get ice tea. Arizona makes ice tea. The checkered board part was refering to the design the arizona can has.
Some Random Dude

United States

#26 Mar 6, 2013
This is why I don't go second. I flip only when it's multiple rounds...
Shini

Korea

#27 Mar 7, 2013
[Some Random Dude]

Eyes, "green with envy" at other rappers makin' "green tempt me" Alucard
Thinkin' ya soundin' hard? I'll "beat your @ss down" with the salad bar

He got diet jokes folks. lol This isn't bad though I do not think it is heavy per se.(4/5)

So don't go a-'dressing' me textin' these M.C.'s I'm too deadly
Grab the 'P' and shove it "deep in your belly" like a pregnancy

I assume that P is a gun like a Walter PPK. YOu should provide and expo here. The punch still lands.(3/5)

Watch ya disperse, I took your "wet nurse" you're too perverse
I'm a wizard with "words with this verse" you're just a frog with a curse

This is a funny ass punch. The frog and nurse thing works well together. He basically said he took his girl with mere words.(5/5)

I discourage your verbiage, it's worthless the a horse that's nerveless
Hungry an' malnourished time to shoot this lame broken legged impure purist

Nice multi scheme with a punch. Nice vocab too. The punchline on this one is nasty and brutal.(5/5)

Expo: Frog wordplay and some Horse wordplay. Should all be easily understood.

(17/20) SRD, despite not following the rules, it seems you have still put forth an effort to land some punches. Some of the stuff written here was straight disrespectful. lol Though not as good as your Hellsing piece it is still excellent nonetheless.
Shini

Korea

#28 Mar 7, 2013
[XxAlucardxX]

walk through that door and get your bone SLEDGED,
I keep the arguments "open" like a door WEDGE/

Ok this is more like it. Set-up and punch are on point. Nice personl.(4.5/5)

messing with me is allowing you to "endorse MEDS",
your a fraudulent credit card, your swipe was "read by the FEDS"/

Getting personal are we? lol Nice set-up and punch. Another personal bar.(4/5)

I'm in "shock" of all the BOGGLE I'm hearin,it's like "ELECTRIC",
cause I'm all ears like a BOTTLE of NESQUIK,

This is a nice subtle stab here. Some people will probably have to read it twice to get the punch here, but it has a solid set-up. You can understand it easily if you pay attention to every word.
This is one of those bars you have to think about. It sounds like he is talking about himself, but he isn't.(5/5)

your standing on a checkered board, "ice" cold murder this man,
Imma "tea" bag this horse, arizona can/

Wow, I had to read the expo to get this one, but it is dope. I got the "ice-tea" part, but I never thought about the Arizona can design until the expo. Not bad at all. Basically he is using the box closure.(Put you in a box..) Good closure.(5/5)

Score (18.5/20) Wow you stepped your punchlines up! I thought SRD was honestly going to take this before I read yours. No hating SRD, you had a good run, but I will have to go with Alucard. This is probably the closest battle in this tournament, but Alucard edged you. He is the definate winner.

The finals will be Alucard vs. Chi-town.
Some Random Dude

United States

#29 Mar 7, 2013
Too bad I wasn't clear enough I guess. The 'P' was the punch.

Don't go addressing me, texting me.

^^See, I grabbed the let 'P' itself and used it. Hence the Wizard of words continues the scheme of being able to use the letter themselves to hurt him.

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