Niahtro vs Phaze META/PUN tourney

Niahtro vs Phaze META/PUN tourney

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“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#1 Jul 23, 2013
Alright for the first round we have 4 bars.
I don't know the deadline I think its within 1-2 days.
You need more time just ask..
Good luck and lets go..

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#2 Jul 23, 2013
1
this bastard's annoyin', I don't trust this coward.
Im like a rapping toilet, since I'm known to flush "sh!t" downward.

2
like a crazy vet, I prescribe these "cats" the wrong prescription.
acting like a di<k on the mic, I come with long intentions.

3
Like a gun with the safety's off, I'm "automatically" killin'.
My lyrical nightmare reigns "outta this world", like my bars have Apollo's galaxy limits.

4
I'm mexican with lyrical beefs, I'm know to be "crossin lines."
Theres no way I'm "outta it", when I have "more in mind"...

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#3 Jul 23, 2013
Expo:
Bar 1-hes annoying and I dont trust him, pretty explanable. I'm like a rapping toilet since I flush sh!t downward just like how a toilet flushes down poop lol

Bar 2- I'm referring crazy vet as a crazy veterinarian, giving these cats, which is another word for p-ssy, the wrong prescription. I'm acting like a d!ck on the mic coming with long intentions meaning since I have a big one my intentions are long on what I have in mind to say.

Bar 3- when the safety gun is off it gives you the power to actually pull a trigger and killing someone so like an automatic gun with its saftey off I'm automatically killing.
My lyrical nightmare is outta this world meaning its really good and I threw in apollo's galaxy limit which is the moon which is technically outta this world.

Bar 4- I'm mexican with lyrical beefs, I'm known to be crossin lines. just like mexicans how their stereotypes are immigrants and hopping borders I used this reference as a way of how I cross other peoples line when theres a lyrical beef. Theres no way I'm outta it when I have more in mind. I'm actually say theres no way i'm outta my mind if I have more in mind meaning I'm just getting started even tho its the ending but remember its the beginning to a tourney so I'm foreshadowing that I'm just warming up lol I hoped you guys enjoyed my diss and after this understand what I was actually saying..

“RRC (previous name).”

Since: Jun 13

Huntsville

#4 Jul 23, 2013
Checking in

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#5 Jul 23, 2013
I spelled your name wrong I just noticed that lol my bad bro
Some Random Dude

United States

#6 Jul 23, 2013
Those are similes not metaphores.

You have zero metaphors.

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#7 Jul 23, 2013
Really?!

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#8 Jul 23, 2013
What about punchlines?
Some Random Dude

United States

#9 Jul 23, 2013
Being rap is a form of poetry, look up basic poetic structure and terms. Then find how to apply what you learned.

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#10 Jul 23, 2013
Okay, I guess I lost by default then lmao you learn from your mistakes
Some Random Dude

United States

#11 Jul 23, 2013
I will give you a do over if Niatroh allows it.

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#12 Jul 23, 2013
Alright but can you give me an example of a metaphor?

“RRC (previous name).”

Since: Jun 13

Huntsville

#13 Jul 23, 2013
Scream at the world and say f**k it
Cut me open look at my core deep inside pull out the best and make you suck it

Making you speed up to keep up this is your plight bro
Accelerate to decimate hit that button to use my Niatroh (nitro)

You can spit at me all you want ill ignore for day
Armageddon when I drop have your disses go by they like they just a phaze (phase)

How can you beat me when I speak cause the planetary alignment
But your not big enough for a vet Pluto sized this is your literary confinement

“RRC (previous name).”

Since: Jun 13

Huntsville

#14 Jul 23, 2013
Let me know if it needs a explanation.
Some Random Dude

United States

#15 Jul 23, 2013
I'd call a redo on both sides.

Look up when you are doing, research.

“RRC (previous name).”

Since: Jun 13

Huntsville

#16 Jul 24, 2013
Some Random Dude wrote:
I'd call a redo on both sides.

Look up when you are doing, research.
I thought those were metaphors!!
Some Random Dude

United States

#17 Jul 24, 2013
You have three metaphors, but I'd call it sloppy.

Puns? Hahahahaha, riiight.
Some Random Dude

United States

#18 Jul 24, 2013
I good example of puns is from when I wrote my paper. The title alone was,'My Abhorrent Intercourse.'

What it actually meant,'My Discusting Communication.'

Just that easy, I am a very punny person.

Metaphors themselves are a breeze, comparing things together without using,'Like,' or,'As.'

“RRC (previous name).”

Since: Jun 13

Huntsville

#19 Jul 24, 2013
Some Random Dude wrote:
I good example of puns is from when I wrote my paper. The title alone was,'My Abhorrent Intercourse.'

What it actually meant,'My Discusting Communication.'

Just that easy, I am a very punny person.

Metaphors themselves are a breeze, comparing things together without using,'Like,' or,'As.'
I read it...

“RRC (previous name).”

Since: Jun 13

Huntsville

#20 Jul 24, 2013
This site is space I'm a meteorite and the vets the planets
But phaze is the smallest barely capable Pluto sized that's how I planned it

How can you speed past with out me I'm highly needed
Nitro on the speed (scene) checking on things to see that I'm rightly conceited

Phaze you blew the chance you had to come on back and be great
You've whaled it up now you've gotta work your way back up you bi mate (primate)

Let me take the big picture and cutting up so you get the new perception
That it's a puzzle how you think you near perfection

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