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#22
Mar 11, 2013
 
Does this mean we will start he sc fi or gaming tournament, but then again truthfully i don't plan on entering just wanna see how it's going to be like

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#23
Mar 11, 2013
 
Shini wrote:
Well if you want to, then go ahead. He gets crowned the champ still. This will just be him defending his reign as punchline champ.
You techniqually would be next in line for a contender match so go ahead and just drop it here or create another. I will come back again later.
For the title match Chi-town can ask from 4 for up to 16 bars. Right now he's Topix's The Saurus lol. I'll let you two sort it out just let me know when it is done.
Think you could still break down my verse? If not its cool. Just wanna see areas of improvement

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#24
Mar 11, 2013
 
CHI-TOWN u haven't answered my question

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#25
Mar 11, 2013
 
MrFlames wrote:
CHI-TOWN u haven't answered my question
Which one

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#26
Mar 11, 2013
 
What's the name of ur crew and do u want me to put up the thread for it
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#28
Mar 11, 2013
 
Chi let's hear it.

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#29
Mar 11, 2013
 
Some Random Dude wrote:
Chi let's hear it.
Hear what

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#30
Mar 11, 2013
 
What's the name of ur crew and do u want me to make th forum

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#31
Mar 11, 2013
 
Yea but who's in the crew. You and who else? Let me know so I can come up with a name for everyone

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#32
Mar 11, 2013
 
Uhm me and rap king and Nicole and Peter
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#33
Mar 12, 2013
 
You have to give the conditions... -.-
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#34
Mar 12, 2013
 
Alright, I'll do it later once I get time to. I've been a little bit busy adjusting to a new semester of students.
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Think you could still break down my verse? If not its cool. Just wanna see areas of improvement
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#35
Mar 15, 2013
 
Some Random Dude wrote:
You have to give the conditions...-.-
Conditions:

Chi-town sets the bar limit. The bar max is 16 because that I can only judge so many bars lol.

One of you has to create the room. I'll come back and check later for it. Seriously, I am busy on my end.
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#36
Mar 15, 2013
 
Oh and he sets the day limit with a min of 3 days.
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#37
Mar 15, 2013
 
Shini wrote:
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Conditions:
Chi-town sets the bar limit. The bar max is 16 because that I can only judge so many bars lol.
One of you has to create the room. I'll come back and check later for it. Seriously, I am busy on my end.
I know this bro. Chi-Town isn't grasping it.
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#38
Mar 15, 2013
 
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I'll stomp your face in the "mud" this dudes no "thug" he's just a vampire that drinks f@gget "blood"(lmfao)

This one has a little humor. Nicely written everyone watch Can-I_bus vs. Dizaster to get the references.(4.5/5)

Kotd "reference" no limits to how il rip you like dizasters time "preference"

I went ooooh after the second bar (5/5)

This dude got no BARS like a "wooden-gate"Catch you while your sleeping and go to your "heart"... with that "wooden-stake"

Vampire reference. Not bad word play. Punch is killer.(4.5/5)

Alucard, what's that "castlevania?"I'll drop kick you from the top rope like "wrestlemania"

Un fortunately this one doesn't land well. It's an ok diss, but not a true punchline bar. This just needed simple re-wording to make it a punchline.

You a "thug?" more like (tragic- Bronson)Want some "blood?" Here's (Magic-Johnson's)

Ooooooh! 5 points. If no one here gets the Magic Johnson reference, you're too young lol. He has AIDS.(5/5)

This dudes a f@gget tryna "rap" we know you worried about that "SAC" more than "quarterback" 

Ok here's watch a standard punchline should look like. Nice set-up/wordplay/punch. He did it without mutis too.(4/5)

I'll let the "mags-speak" when I "flash-heat" cuz this "f@gs-sweet" like underneath a "drags-sheet"
He gets his "a$$-beat"...by dumpsters Cuz he's garbage...like a "trash-heap"

Gunbar multi combo. Chi-town is becoming a problem with the lyrics. This is probably the most entertaining judging I have done so far.

he claims he's hot but couldn't melt an "ICE-cube"....hittem with the ICE pick when I  "ICED-dude"had to whoop you on a Friday....now I'm "Ice-Cube"
This would have been a funny nameplay on SRD. On that note he Devoed Alucard with this line.(5/5)

I'll put the CLIP to your "top" and I ain't talking bout the "barber-shop"You just waiting to get CUT....like when the "barber-stop" 
I don't think were talking about hair here lol.(4.5/5)

My guns like Hindus they gotta "red-dot-on-em"Do you like Batman when I put that "Dead-shot-on-em"

I seriously think Alucard ducked him on this 16. He's just vicious. Too bad it Alucard didn't drop, too. He should have tried. This would have been a classic. Tangents aside (5/5)

I fight dirty, il kick your balls like an NFL  "punter"You claim to be a vampire.... well you Fu*king with blade the vampire "hunter"

This one is alright. I think the set-up is better than the punch. It would have probably been a better punch with the 2nd line as the set-up line.(3.5/5)
 
I'm fly...."starship" "bar-sick"  ill stop your "heart-quick" heart attack from that "gar-lic"

Standard set-up, multi, punch. Nicely written (4/5)

 
You can't put up a "fight"... il shut you down like an android when it force "closes"All I need for you is a UV "light"....to turn your body in to ashes like ring around the "roses"

Not bad. Maybe a little stylism here, but I think "closes" should have been typed like "close-Es" and then have the same with "rose-Es" I read it that way though. It sounded better too.(4.5/5)

This dudes a young "teen" who hasn't "seen" the (work scene).... il pop this dude faster then The (twerk team) when I (murk heam)

...Or maybe you forgot to word it like heam. Read it like murking which works well.(4.5/5)
 
These "PUNCH-LINES" will PUNCH you out like its "lunch time"and I got that (PUNCH-lined) up to your face like its (PUNCH-time) your PUNCHES stay behind....like the back of the PUNCH line give it a sec you'll get The PUNCHLINE

This is overstretched, but nice word play with the word punchline into some solid multis.Looks like for the most par you got your punch lines, punch lined. I will have to deduct a point for stretching a bar though.(4/5)

I'd total them up, but my wireless mouse battery died, so I have to hit up a 7-11. Later. So far the best material for 2013 competition wise. Keep it coming.
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#41
Mar 15, 2013
 
I have to choose to accept it or not. I decline it knowing I can't make that dead line.

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#43
Mar 15, 2013
 
SomeRandomDude wrote:
I have to choose to accept it or not. I decline it knowing I can't make that dead line.
Cool you wanted the battle.
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#44
Mar 17, 2013
 
Do you think I am dumb enough to accept a deadline I know I can't hit?

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#45
Mar 17, 2013
 
Well 48 hours sound like enough time for a vet as skilled as u

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