Love Hurts R1: King Terminator vs Rap...
Some Random Dude

Post Falls, ID

#22 Feb 24, 2013
He created it before Drake made it, "You Only Live Once." It was something he used to for his text lingo. xD

Since: Jan 13

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#23 Feb 24, 2013
Oh I thought u ment he created = you obviously lack originality
But I'm sure there were many ppl who used YouOnlyLiveOnce before drake
Some Random Dude

United States

#24 Feb 24, 2013
I said my bro created, "You Obviously Lack Originality." *facepalm*

You're 13? Stay in school.

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#25 Feb 24, 2013
Now ur confusing me how could u brother create that I have been hearing that for a long time ur brother couldn't create that

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#27 Feb 24, 2013

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#28 Feb 24, 2013

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#29 Feb 24, 2013
www.facebook.com/...You-Obviously-Lack-Origin... ...
Y.O.L.O (You Obviously Lack Originality). 156 likes 0 talking

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#30 Feb 24, 2013
Idk if these things even work but the subject

You obviously lack orginiality was made a long time ago

And srd don't judge me on my age ever again it really pisses me off
Shini

Seoul, Korea

#31 Feb 24, 2013
First off, please serperate your bars and use punctuation to emphasize your set-ups and punches. I want to be able to read this quickly, comment and move on. Thank you in advance.

Who's seen one of them hemsis? I've always wanted to rude one but their for emergencies
kind of like this king will need when his "blood emerges see"

I assume that "hemsis" is something that is found in a medical kit. You need an expo here.(3/5)

So I can't express my urgency that terminator has to "self destruct" soon before I put a "bounty" on his with that "currency"
Have some one kill you by running you threw with a "current see?"

Decent horrorcore bar, mediocre punchline bar.(3/5)

You'll be having a high "fervency" as I watch your body "submerge at sea"
But if you come back like megatron ill see to it that you "converge with me"

So far this is your best punch with a decent metaphor and multis.(4/5)

Finish you off with the final blow the oracle will concur the feel

Where's the rest?(0/5) You only had the set-up line here.

Total score 10/20. Solid expos and correct punctuation would have helped you earn more. You have a nice vocabulary being used here. Keep it up. And please, separate your bars for better judging.
Shini

Seoul, Korea

#32 Feb 24, 2013
Finish you off with the final blow the oracle will concur the fees
Get paid and and get some one the check your grave and "confirm your grieves"

Solid set-up. Kind of a weak punch. I'll add 3 to your score.(Nice job with the multis and metaphores. You need to work on the "punch" line more.)

13/20
Shini

Seoul, Korea

#33 Feb 24, 2013
By default RRC advances. Please step your game up in round 2.

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#34 Feb 25, 2013
Shini wrote:
First off, please serperate your bars and use punctuation to emphasize your set-ups and punches. I want to be able to read this quickly, comment and move on. Thank you in advance.

Who's seen one of them hemsis? I've always wanted to rude one but their for emergencies
kind of like this king will need when his "blood emerges see"

I assume that "hemsis" is something that is found in a medical kit. You need an expo here.(3/5)

So I can't express my urgency that terminator has to "self destruct" soon before I put a "bounty" on his with that "currency"
Have some one kill you by running you threw with a "current see?"

Decent horrorcore bar, mediocre punchline bar.(3/5)

You'll be having a high "fervency" as I watch your body "submerge at sea"
But if you come back like megatron ill see to it that you "converge with me"

So far this is your best punch with a decent metaphor and multis.(4/5)

Finish you off with the final blow the oracle will concur the feel

Where's the rest?(0/5) You only had the set-up line here.

Total score 10/20. Solid expos and correct punctuation would have helped you earn more. You have a nice vocabulary being used here. Keep it up. And please, separate your bars for better judging.
Hemsi as in the ambulance. That's what we call them down here sorry lol.

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#35 Feb 25, 2013
Shini wrote:
Finish you off with the final blow the oracle will concur the fees
Get paid and and get some one the check your grave and "confirm your grieves"

Solid set-up. Kind of a weak punch. I'll add 3 to your score.(Nice job with the multis and metaphores. You need to work on the "punch" line more.)

13/20
Okay I'll try better do a bit of research, and thanks I really tried with the multis this time.
Some Random Dude

United States

#36 Feb 25, 2013
Your links don't work. Flames, he created it LONG ago. Don't you read what I write? You were like 10-11 when Drake first said, "YOLO = You Only Live Once?" My bro created it LONG before that, I always quoted it when I would text someone because it was awesome. However, jerks took it out of quotes. It was when I was going to freshmen uear in high school. Over 5-6 years ago.
Seanny T

Canada

#37 Feb 25, 2013
I was saying 'you only live once, so you might as well have fun and enjoy it' like back when I was in grade 7-8-9 lol and I'm in second year college. About same time srd said like 5-6-7 years ago. Drake even wanted to coin the phrase lmao b!tch plz u didn't come up with it u just made it extremely popular
Seanny T

Canada

#38 Feb 25, 2013
Then drake acted like a pouty b!tch when he couldn't coin it so that other places had to stop putting yolo on stuff and using it. He just wants the green.
Shini

Korea

#39 Feb 25, 2013
Seanny T wrote:
Then drake acted like a pouty b!tch when he couldn't coin it so that other places had to stop putting yolo on stuff and using it. He just wants the green.
LMAO, can't blame him for trying. Think of all the royalties he would get. If he had all the Yolo royalties then he would get rich off of every rapper and merchandiser who used it. He'd be in the 100s of millions if he pulled that off (as retarded of a phrase it might be).
Some Random Dude

United States

#40 Feb 25, 2013
No no no no no.

READ WHAT I TYPE! Ignorant **********

I said my brother made up YOLO, defined as: You Obviously Lack Originality. Read what the hell I am saying, it's like speaking to 13 year olds when they don't listen.

Since: Jan 13

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#41 Feb 25, 2013
Some Random Dude wrote:
Your links don't work. Flames, he created it LONG ago. Don't you read what I write? You were like 10-11 when Drake first said, "YOLO = You Only Live Once?" My bro created it LONG before that, I always quoted it when I would text someone because it was awesome. However, jerks took it out of quotes. It was when I was going to freshmen uear in high school. Over 5-6 years ago.
Maybe u might be telling the truth but there's no proof so no one can say anything and I was 12 not 10-11
Seanny T

Vancouver, Canada

#42 Feb 25, 2013
Lol srd I know I was contributing my own little yolo experience haha

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