Epitaph vs. Mr Flames Meta/Pun Tourney RD. 1

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Since: May 13

Florence, SC

#1 Jul 23, 2013
4 bars
due in 24-48 hrs ?
Some Random Dude

United States

#2 Jul 23, 2013
24 post, 24 vote

Since: May 13

Florence, SC

#3 Jul 23, 2013
ok cool, I was confused, checkin in...

Since: May 13

Florence, SC

#4 Jul 23, 2013
aye lol, I have serious writers block, prolly nerves but, I'ma have to go ahead and spitt cuz I'm in a hurry, and prolly won't be on again till tomorrow night

look what this bracket did, " fed " Flames a " clover " laxative,
 " he's shit outta ( out a ) luck "
" tape " me rippin out his guts, I feel this bitch bout to " duct " ( duck )
Flames forgot to spike the party drinks, " I can't feel his punches "
Epitaph is Aspiration Pnuemonia, I'll spitt vomit in your lungs bitch
he's personal information, I'm rippin this clit to shreds ( Identity Theft )
you are what you eat, garbage is what this bitch is fed
don't forget ya head, you're in the wrong " neck " of the woods
this clown dropped his wallet, he " lost his cred in the hood "
Some Random Dude

United States

#5 Jul 23, 2013
Only Metaphor involved yourself. :/

Since: May 13

Florence, SC

#6 Jul 23, 2013
so.........I'm disqualified or what ?
Some Random Dude

United States

#7 Jul 23, 2013
Technically, so one gets disqualified only docked points. However, redos are given where given by your opponent.

However, you actually fit right into the regulations of the the tournament. So it is very unlikely for a redo.

Since: May 13

Florence, SC

#8 Jul 24, 2013
I'm doubtin if Flames gonna spit by deadline, I know this DeFINATELY wasn't my best verse, but I'd rather lose then win by default, so I hope he spitts

Since: Jan 13

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#9 Jul 24, 2013
These bars "need some cleaning" they all rusty and dirty."takes shots "when true MCs use there gunplay "reload with thirty"

His spits ain't hot unless he suckin on that nitro (niatroh), that's where his heat comes from when he not buying bars at metro.

His deliverys always frosted and flake(fake),even if u heat it on a stove it still won't bake

Epitaph most be a Greek("geek") he must have more than one god(cod: call of duty)

Sorry I posted late I had summer school both yesterday and today didn't get home until around 8-9 both days this was pretty rushed having only 25 minutes

Expo 1: means his bars are useless and dirty and they easily get shot down when real MCs use gunplay
Expo 2: this was quit of an awkward one just means he can't really spit heat unless he's sucking on niatroh, or stealing verses
Expo 3 his deliverys are fake and cold like frosted flakes (cereal)
Expo 4 it's a mixture between epitaph is a Greek and a geek that plays c.o.d and has a hundred fake gods 

Since: May 13

Franklin, TN

#10 Jul 25, 2013
My wifi cut off so I'll be on when I can

Since: May 13

Franklin, TN

#11 Jul 25, 2013
Ok who moves on ??????
Some Random Dude

United States

#12 Jul 25, 2013
Honestly, I am having a hard time trying to break these down for people, they are like... i can't explain it. Like forced and all over the place, it's like you didn't know what you wanted the rap to be. Not just you two either.

“No pain No Gain!”

Since: Mar 13

accra(Ghana)

#14 Jul 27, 2013
The Pun/Meta vote structure.
Metaphors:Flames had so much more,whiles
Epi had a little of basic meta.
Puns:i wanna give it to flames caus he had
more but Epi went harder on puns.
Who's mixed better?:Flames flawed Who's connected more?:Epitaph caus of his
you are what u eat punch.
Enjoyment:Flames
Who got your vote:Flames took this easy caus
he had both the puns and meta and went hard
on it,but if epitah had went harder i wouldnt be able to judge.

Since: May 13

United States

#15 Jul 27, 2013
fair enough.......more votes

Since: Jan 13

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#16 Jul 27, 2013
Thanks and u agree with srd when it comes to puns and meta I tend to force it a Lil
Shini

Kwanghuidong, Korea

#17 Jul 27, 2013
Metaphors:Flames
Puns:Epitaph (One of Flames' punches felt awkward and forced.)(The many god one)
Who's mixed better?: Flames
Who's connected more?:Epitaph (He had better flow, multies, and punches)
Enjoyment:Tie
Who got your vote:Epitaph (By a slight margin.)

Epitaph edged out Flames in my opinion. One of Flames' punches the Greek geek line felt a little forced, because most non-geeks play COD or Halo and Geek usually gravitate towards other genres or different types of FPS games. So the metaphor kind of falls flat and the punch is weakened to. Epitaph had the better flow with the hard hitting punches plus he had some decent multies. Also come to think of it the take shots/ reload with 30 metaphor was a little weak. He goes from a bar eulogy to something related with a gun. I think he should have just stuck with one or the other.

He did have the best bar though. That personal in 2nd bar was pretty rank. If his other 3 were just as good or a little better, that might have swayed me to give him the win, but alas...MVGT Epitaph

Epitaph had home nice analogies and clean punches along with decent flow and multies. Also if people have been paying attention, he has a nice vocabulary, too.

Epitaph is Aspiration Pnuemonia, I'll spitt vomit in your lungs b!tch
he's personal information, I'm rippin this cl!t to shreds ( Identity Theft )

^ This here is to give you an example of what I'm talking about. He ties in the definition of these words nicely in his diss.

Since: Jan 13

Location hidden

#18 Jul 27, 2013
Shini wrote:
Metaphors:Flames
Puns:Epitaph (One of Flames' punches felt awkward and forced.)(The many god one)
Who's mixed better?: Flames
Who's connected more?:Epitaph (He had better flow, multies, and punches)
Enjoyment:Tie
Who got your vote:Epitaph (By a slight margin.)
Epitaph edged out Flames in my opinion. One of Flames' punches the Greek geek line felt a little forced, because most non-geeks play COD or Halo and Geek usually gravitate towards other genres or different types of FPS games. So the metaphor kind of falls flat and the punch is weakened to. Epitaph had the better flow with the hard hitting punches plus he had some decent multies. Also come to think of it the take shots/ reload with 30 metaphor was a little weak. He goes from a bar eulogy to something related with a gun. I think he should have just stuck with one or the other.
He did have the best bar though. That personal in 2nd bar was pretty rank. If his other 3 were just as good or a little better, that might have swayed me to give him the win, but alas...MVGT Epitaph
Epitaph had home nice analogies and clean punches along with decent flow and multies. Also if people have been paying attention, he has a nice vocabulary, too.
Epitaph is Aspiration Pnuemonia, I'll spitt vomit in your lungs b!tch
he's personal information, I'm rippin this cl!t to shreds ( Identity Theft )
^ This here is to give you an example of what I'm talking about. He ties in the definition of these words nicely in his diss.
I agree with u , I'm not saying ur right about epitiaph Winninf, I'm just agree that the last bar was forced I was writing this in the night after I got back from summer school , I was at the last bar , I acutally didn't know what to put down I felt pretty tired to and I know if I didn't finish it that night i would miss the deadline so I basically just put whatever I could think off , I acutally feel bad about that I should of really took my time :/ but I accept it
Some Random Dude

United States

#19 Jul 27, 2013
Any votes voting punches are out.

Puns, not punches.

Since: Jan 13

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#20 Jul 28, 2013
Some Random Dude wrote:
Any votes voting punches are out.
Puns, not punches.
I don't understand white vote is out ?
Some Random Dude

United States

#21 Jul 28, 2013
A pun: I am very Punny

A punch: Two bars, one set-up, one punch.

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