sorry in advance

Since: Oct 13

United States

#1 Oct 6, 2013
sorry in advance, but i couldn't wait
i just had to join this little debate
i haven't even made a move but it's checkmate
i get paid early and your check late
i get sex early and i get sex late
your girl blows me on the first date, then i her on the next date
my words hit your heart even if you had a chestplate
nerd kids watching x play
i'm gettin paid like i'm playin in the x games
i'm talkin to every single one of you
be thankful i ain't put my gun on you
for now i'm just gonna' make fun of you
i don't give a about none of you
i the mother of the son of you
i don't even have to make a pun of you
i'm the last man standing even if there was a hun of you
i've got your girl in a trance
and she's takin off her pants
rubbin her with her hands
as i'm throwin all these bands
and you know bands'll make her dance
like i said before, sorry in advance
Shini

Seongnam, Korea

#2 Oct 7, 2013
eLEHMANater wrote:
sorry in advance, but i couldn't wait
i just had to join this little debate
i haven't even made a move but it's checkmate
i get paid early and your check late
i get sex early and i get sex late
your girl blows me on the first date, then i her on the next date
my words hit your heart even if you had a chestplate
nerd kids watching x play
i'm gettin paid like i'm playin in the x games
i'm talkin to every single one of you
be thankful i ain't put my gun on you
for now i'm just gonna' make fun of you
i don't give a about none of you
i the mother of the son of you
i don't even have to make a pun of you
i'm the last man standing even if there was a hun of you
i've got your girl in a trance
and she's takin off her pants
rubbin her with her hands
as i'm throwin all these bands
and you know bands'll make her dance
like i said before, sorry in advance
Nice punches. It is refreshing not to read beginner material for a change. A lot of these kids need to join real forums to improve their skill.

Since: Oct 13

United States

#3 Oct 7, 2013
Shini wrote:
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Nice punches. It is refreshing not to read beginner material for a change. A lot of these kids need to join real forums to improve their skill.
thanks. i can put together a lot better work, though. do you flow any or no?
Shini

Seongnam, Korea

#4 Oct 7, 2013
eLEHMANater wrote:
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thanks. i can put together a lot better work, though. do you flow any or no?
You can check the threads for my work. My notables probably was Shinigami vs HHH or Shini vs. Somerandomdude. Also Chitown vs. Shini in the World Text Tourney files.Shini vs. Phaze is more thematic with the writs.

Since: Oct 13

United States

#5 Oct 7, 2013
Shini wrote:
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You can check the threads for my work. My notables probably was Shinigami vs HHH or Shini vs. Somerandomdude. Also Chitown vs. Shini in the World Text Tourney files.Shini vs. Phaze is more thematic with the writs.
bet. i'll poke an eye out for them.

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