“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#45 Jan 20, 2013
Rhyme:AA
Punch:Seanny
Multi:AA
Metaphor:Seanny
Skill level:
1.Seanny
2.AA
Insult:AA (only cause he focused on insulting you)
Both meet the critique.
Both show exceptional skill.
Then my vote is a tie so I pull for AA, because his categories I gave him are just a bit more important (rhyme, multi)
Understand I'm not the best at judge but I gave it a shot so there it goes. These were extremely close in my eyes excellent work, both of you really, just prove I've got a long way to go since I'm at the bottom.
MVGT: Annoying Artist

“always”

Since: Jun 12

Connecticut

#46 Jan 20, 2013
RappinRollerCoaster wrote:
Rhyme:AA
Punch:Seanny
Multi:AA
Metaphor:Seanny
Skill level:
1.Seanny
2.AA
Insult:AA (only cause he focused on insulting you)
Both meet the critique.
Both show exceptional skill.
Then my vote is a tie so I pull for AA, because his categories I gave him are just a bit more important (rhyme, multi)
Understand I'm not the best at judge but I gave it a shot so there it goes. These were extremely close in my eyes excellent work, both of you really, just prove I've got a long way to go since I'm at the bottom.
MVGT: Annoying Artist
Thank you Rrc
Seanny T

Edmonton, Canada

#47 Jan 20, 2013
Thanks for feedback rrc. U forgot to vote one category we had to do: alliteration. I think I took that one
Seanny T

Edmonton, Canada

#48 Jan 20, 2013
Just sayin lol

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#49 Jan 20, 2013
Seanny T wrote:
Just sayin lol
Oh I skipped because I actually didn't know what it was :( my bad.
Some Random Dude

United States

#50 Jan 20, 2013
That vote should be invalid, the guidelines posts on the first page were not met in the summary. I'll break it down later, I am chilling at my Sister's house at the moment.

“always”

Since: Jun 12

Connecticut

#51 Jan 20, 2013
Some Random Dude wrote:
That vote should be invalid, the guidelines posts on the first page were not met in the summary. I'll break it down later, I am chilling at my Sister's house at the moment.
If seanny accepts it then its a valid vote
XxRap_KingxX

New York, NY

#52 Jan 20, 2013
Srd do u hate onn aa or what?
Some Random Dude

Post Falls, ID

#53 Jan 20, 2013
Vet and Elite rank are to be taken seriously and voted on properly. It is a very serious thing to finally be able to be called one on this site.

“Horrocore-Tourna ment 2012CHAMP”

Since: May 11

Calgary, Canada

#54 Jan 20, 2013
i agree with srd its to be taken very serious. here, rrc, re-do ur voting thing following these guidelines:
1) did each MC meet bar requirements:(9 bar minimum, 11 bar max)
2) 1 bar metephor, who did it better?
3) 1 bar simile, who did it better?
4) 1 bar of alliteration, who did it better?
5) one bar of a nameflip, wo did it better?
6) one good punchline, who did it better?
7) two bars of multies, who did them better?
8) flow, who flowed better?

there. SRD please vote too. same with u rap king. and phaze. and everyone. lol.
Some Random Dude

Post Falls, ID

#55 Jan 20, 2013
"Alrighty, here are the rules:
each of our drops MUST contain:
(9 bar minimum, 11 bar max)
1) 1 bar metephor
2) 1 bar simile
3) 1 bar of alliteration
4) one bar of a nameflip
5) one good punchline
6) two bars of multies
6) must have some sort of topic to it."

Seanny-T

About 10 bars that I count.

I spotted multiple Metaphors, though no metaphor that was too original.

I like this, you made name flipped similes, that was pretty unique and I enjoyed it.

You've definetely made a couple punchlines that hit for sure, so you got that.

Two bars or multies, I saw a very small amount (Close to none) so I am disapointed by that.

In case people don't know, "bright blood before the bed, bit by my bullet,
bleeding broken beside the pages of a suicide booklet," this is alliteration.
Could've used a little work, but is came off clean enough.

His whole drop was about him bing a Suicidal Drug Abusing Wh*re, so he definetely had a topic.

Over all, I saw it start mediocre. Towards the middle his it's stride, but then trip and stumbled over the end. I'd give Seanny-T a 6/10 just because it definetely could've been cleaner.

Seanny-T, count syllables; get your flow back to center.

Annoyin Artist

About 9 bars on count and immediately lost a point for no Alliterate bar.

Sublimal styled metaphors, I like that.
Something not seen much and mixed it with name flips. Very entertaining.

You definetely had similes no question.

"This kid wanna battle I leave and come back with a laser ,
Leave you lit up like a generator that got shocked wit a tazer"
I particularly like this punchline, very fun to read.

Your multies were weak like Seanny's were again going todrop a point same as him.

Basicly in the end his topic was calling Seanny-T is out of date
Veteran getting schooled by fresh meat. Nice choice.

Two points lost due to failure to follow format. So automatically the max you could get is 8/10.

From the flow it was fairly well put together, nice and unique styled writ and enjoyable.

I think you need to make it more complex, but overall a major improvement from past writs.

I'd give this about a 7/10 just because of the unexpected originality.

A.A. work on making it more complex, you can really improve your game that way.
Some Random Dude

Post Falls, ID

#56 Jan 20, 2013
Seanny-T, I wish you would have fought harder for this as it was a little bit of a slop next to your usual caliber.

Aslo, go ahead and read the last post on Phaze and I's thread.

“always”

Since: Jun 12

Connecticut

#57 Jan 21, 2013
XxRap_KingxX wrote:
Srd do u hate onn aa or what?
Yeah I know

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#58 Jan 21, 2013
Hey he gave you a 7/10 that's one vote to vetness

“always”

Since: Jun 12

Connecticut

#59 Jan 21, 2013
That's true

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#60 Jan 21, 2013
Some Random Dude wrote:
"Alrighty, here are the rules:
each of our drops MUST contain:
(9 bar minimum, 11 bar max)
1) 1 bar metephor
2) 1 bar simile
3) 1 bar of alliteration
4) one bar of a nameflip
5) one good punchline
6) two bars of multies
6) must have some sort of topic to it."
Seanny-T
About 10 bars that I count.
I spotted multiple Metaphors, though no metaphor that was too original.
I like this, you made name flipped similes, that was pretty unique and I enjoyed it.
You've definetely made a couple punchlines that hit for sure, so you got that.
Two bars or multies, I saw a very small amount (Close to none) so I am disapointed by that.
In case people don't know, "bright blood before the bed, bit by my bullet,
bleeding broken beside the pages of a suicide booklet," this is alliteration.
Could've used a little work, but is came off clean enough.
His whole drop was about him bing a Suicidal Drug Abusing Wh*re, so he definetely had a topic.
Over all, I saw it start mediocre. Towards the middle his it's stride, but then trip and stumbled over the end. I'd give Seanny-T a 6/10 just because it definetely could've been cleaner.
Seanny-T, count syllables; get your flow back to center.
Annoyin Artist
About 9 bars on count and immediately lost a point for no Alliterate bar.
Sublimal styled metaphors, I like that.
Something not seen much and mixed it with name flips. Very entertaining.
You definetely had similes no question.
"This kid wanna battle I leave and come back with a laser ,
Leave you lit up like a generator that got shocked wit a tazer"
I particularly like this punchline, very fun to read.
Your multies were weak like Seanny's were again going todrop a point same as him.
Basicly in the end his topic was calling Seanny-T is out of date
Veteran getting schooled by fresh meat. Nice choice.
Two points lost due to failure to follow format. So automatically the max you could get is 8/10.
From the flow it was fairly well put together, nice and unique styled writ and enjoyable.
I think you need to make it more complex, but overall a major improvement from past writs.
I'd give this about a 7/10 just because of the unexpected originality.
A.A. work on making it more complex, you can really improve your game that way.
To be honest SRD hit it on the spot, this is exactly what I would've said except I think Seanny took flow way more than AA personally! but regardless
MVGT:Annoying Artist
Some Random Dude

United States

#61 Jan 21, 2013
A.A. i am not here to vote you a Vet. because your panties smell good, or your t*mp*n soaked up all the blood. I am here to vote on skill, Vet is to be earned properly not uanded to you with no worth in it. Honestly though, your lucky I don't call you out on a battle to reassure you Vet. possibility because you had it easy this time around. Seanny wasn't on his game.

“always”

Since: Jun 12

Connecticut

#62 Jan 21, 2013
Some Random Dude wrote:
A.A. i am not here to vote you a Vet. because your panties smell good, or your t*mp*n soaked up all the blood. I am here to vote on skill, Vet is to be earned properly not uanded to you with no worth in it. Honestly though, your lucky I don't call you out on a battle to reassure you Vet. possibility because you had it easy this time around. Seanny wasn't on his game.
I earn everything I have, don't ever question that.
XxRap_KingxX

New York, NY

#63 Jan 21, 2013
Respect^*
Anonymous

New York, NY

#64 Jan 22, 2013
Some Random Dude wrote:
A.A. i am not here to vote you a Vet. because your panties smell good, or your t*mp*n soaked up all the blood. I am here to vote on skill, Vet is to be earned properly not uanded to you with no worth in it. Honestly though, your lucky I don't call you out on a battle to reassure you Vet. possibility because you had it easy this time around. Seanny wasn't on his game.
Oh and btw your lucky i dont murder you with my rhymes and send you back to 0 and laugh all you want, got beef then battle me.

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