IllMortal vs. Ash - Battle of the Rooks

IllMortal vs. Ash - Battle of the Rooks

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“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#1 Jan 17, 2014
10 bars bring ya best, no topic, let's get this going, GL bruh!

“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#2 Jan 18, 2014
He's lost already, stepped into the roman's coliseum, and forgot his recipe,
Now he's heading home devastated he's false as enemies,

You stepped up to the wrong area, this is no man's land, he tried to cross the Middle East,
Fought til rest in peace, inject 'phetamine, Call a serum, boy sought the lesser beast,

Rawer then red meat, insects set to be, Lost in he-re, plan for lots of kerosene,
Pyromaniac like tendencies, burning down your dreams, leaving them deceased for eternity,

Brought the best but see, been set on the, Thought of being grand, your plots uh burying,
The hearse is ready for you apparently, you can give in, as your blood comes out in streams sparingly,

Rot, the rest of these, Vendetta's keen, Call o' demon, stand, scorched thoughts of scary scenes,
Don't even call a priest, this demon's too deadly to be exorcised out, unless you want him to be unleashed,

Loss was sent to your brain but it's apparent you didn't obtain it, face this,
crosses spent, you need to reach my level of game to challenge my basis,

At which i spit, causing backlash and cases that makes this savage sly savior angry,
creating a sick human, in other words, an Ill mortal, so hot he's flaming,

Competition like you get incinerated and eaten the moment you step up, i'm so predaceous,
You're words stuck on their period, so much blood splattered around this Rex, its the cretaceous,

Ash is to ashes, burned out rhymes like Leann past her prime trying to make a pop album crazily,
There's no time to grieve, let's bury him, he earned (urn'd) this loss after his mind was twisted insanely,

“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#3 Jan 18, 2014
IllMortal wrote:
He's lost already, stepped into the roman's coliseum, and forgot his recipe,
Now he's heading home devastated he's false as enemies,
You stepped up to the wrong area, this is no man's land, he tried to cross the Middle East,
Fought til rest in peace, inject 'phetamine, Call a serum, boy sought the lesser beast,
Rawer then red meat, insects set to be, Lost in he-re, plan for lots of kerosene,
Pyromaniac like tendencies, burning down your dreams, leaving them deceased for eternity,
Brought the best but see, been set on the, Thought of being grand, your plots uh burying,
The hearse is ready for you apparently, you can give in, as your blood comes out in streams sparingly,
Rot, the rest of these, Vendetta's keen, Call o' demon, stand, scorched thoughts of scary scenes,
Don't even call a priest, this demon's too deadly to be exorcised out, unless you want him to be unleashed,
Loss was sent to your brain but it's apparent you didn't obtain it, face this,
crosses spent, you need to reach my level of game to challenge my basis,
At which i spit, causing backlash and cases that makes this savage sly savior angry,
creating a sick human, in other words, an Ill mortal, so hot he's flaming,
Competition like you get incinerated and eaten the moment you step up, i'm so predaceous,
You're words stuck on their period, so much blood splattered around this Rex, its the cretaceous,
Ash is to ashes, burned out rhymes like Leann past her prime trying to make a pop album crazily,
There's no time to grieve, let's bury him, he earned (urn'd) this loss after his mind was twisted insanely,
Forgot my last line -.-

"You can try and end this Ill Mortal but an ash couldn't touch me safely, without me torturing him inhumanely or profanely,
I can never die or leave, I'm a f-ckin frog with no vocal chords, I can't croak, so I'll rule this world easily archaically"
Ash

Singapore, Singapore

#4 Jan 20, 2014
I can't understand half the f*cking words you're using! I've got no f*cking hope against you but I'm gonna try. Give me some time. I really need to do my best. Wow, this shits intense. That was a f*cking amazing drop...
Ash

Singapore, Singapore

#5 Jan 20, 2014
I'm pretty sure we both know who the winner is but it was a nice one. I hope we can do more in the future. Maybe I can redeem myself.

I didnt want to do it but Ill Mortal you've managed to pushed thee, now you've gotta have to face the wrath of the demon within me

My spits are deadly, leave you sick, screaming "Save Me!", take some pills but you ended up swallowing my semen completely

I may have started before you, but you're creepin quite quickly. But do not mistake kindness for weakness cuz that sin is deadly

I'm virulent, I'm a potent spitter, adding a coat the fragment in you're brain that can't even comprehend my dormant spirit of a winner.

You're chances of beating me is f*cking hopeless. I may start out slow but ill chew right through you like you're boneless

You said there is a demon within me but its actually its a god. Shut up sit back in awe while a drop a bass in lyrics for you decapod

Now I applaud you, I give you A for effort, you're jealous of me but I was born with this bod (body) and you know you've lost when you entered.

Now censor your rhyme cuz it'll pollute the minds of people, that pet turd (Petard) you call friend will get hurt but just remember

That you've been rendered useless cuz you've ventured, you're marked tender, peppered with lies but had a festered demise

you say that an Illmortal can never die but sticking out of your head is an axe. And that bitch, is what happens when you f*uck with Ash...
Ash

Singapore, Singapore

#6 Jan 20, 2014
My bars are like 1 line like that. I don't like stretchin got out
Ash

Singapore, Singapore

#7 Jan 20, 2014
Ok! Don't even need to decide the winner. Now I'm just trying to see where I went wrong and what I can improve on... Thanks for making a thread, my phone won't allow me to do so... I appreciate the little things brah! ;)
Ash

Singapore, Singapore

#8 Jan 20, 2014
Oh, 7th bar, I meant to say and you know that when you entered you've lost.
MrFlames

Oshawa, Canada

#10 Jan 20, 2014
Ash is right I don't understand a thing it's feels like your just spitting a bunch of big words that make no sense at me, maybe you should explain each bar
MrFlames

Oshawa, Canada

#11 Jan 20, 2014
And for ash,It feels like your is kinda off,

Immortal really confuses me , I don't understand how u write some dope shit one day then the next day post bullshit

“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#12 Jan 20, 2014
MrFlames wrote:
And for ash,It feels like your is kinda off,
Immortal really confuses me , I don't understand how u write some dope shit one day then the next day post bullshit
I can easily drop another 10 bars if needed. I didn't think I used any big words. I didn't spend much time on this since I've been busy all weekend. Want me to drop another 10?

“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#13 Jan 20, 2014
He's lost already, stepped into the roman's coliseum, and forgot his recipe (recipe for success)
Now he's heading home devastated he's false as enemies,(he's as false as his enemies)
You stepped up to the wrong area, this is no man's land, he tried to cross the Middle East,
Fought til rest in peace (fought til he died), inject 'phetamine (injected methamphetamine: a drug) Call a serum (he needs a serum to take away the beast), boy sought the lesser beast,(WoW reference)
Rawer then red meat (red meat is usually raw), insects set to be, Lost in he-re (insects *ash* are going to be lost in my rawness lol), plan for lots of kerosene (kerosene is a main component in insecticide),
Pyromaniac like tendencies (relates to the kerosene which is a flammable liquid), burning down your dreams (kerosene is flammable which can cause a fire), leaving them deceased for eternity (destroying dreams by burning them down),
Brought the best but see, been set on the thought of being grand, your plots uh burying (burial plot),
The hearse is ready for you apparently (hearse relates to the burial), you can give in, as your blood comes out in streams sparingly,
Rot the rest of these (rotting connects with burying your body),
Vendetta's keen (the fued between me and ash referred to as a vendetta), Call o' demons, stand, scorched thoughts of scary scenes (I called demons to stand, thus leading to scary scenes and the scorched part refers to hell which is where demons reside)
Don't even call a priest, this demon's too deadly to be exorcised out, unless you want him to be unleashed (referring to myself as a demon that's so deadly he shouldn't be unleashed)
Loss was sent to your brain but it's apparent you didn't obtain it, face this, crosses spent,(the cross is spent meaning done, it can't stop my wrath)
you need to reach my level of game to challenge my basis
At which i spit, causing backlash and cases that makes this savage sly savior angry creating a sick human, in other words, an Ill mortal, so hot he's flaming
Competition like you get incinerated and eaten the moment you step up, I'm so predaceous (predaceous means you live by taking prey)
You're words stuck on their period (a womans period there's lots of blood and when a T Rex eats there's lots of blood),
so much blood splattered around this Rex its the cretaceous (cretaceous was 65-150 million years ago when the dinosaurs were still around)
Ash is to ashes, burned out rhymes like Leann past her prime trying to make a pop album crazily ("ashes to ashes" and burned out meaning old)
There's no time to grieve, let's bury him, he earned (urn'd) this loss after his mind was twisted insanely (his mind was twisted because of my rhymes; example right now)
You can try and end this Ill Mortal but an ash couldn't touch me safely without me torturing him inhumanely or profanely,(if he touches me I'll have to torture him)
I can never die or leave, I'm a f-ckin frog with no vocal chords, I can't croak so I'll rule this world easily archaically (a frog that can't make a noise is unable to croak, croak can also mean to pass away or die)

“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#14 Jan 20, 2014
Wow... I had it all set up nicely and it destroyed my spacing. That's so hard to read... F*CK!
Shini

Suwon, Korea

#15 Jan 20, 2014
Nice! This one is pretty close.

Flow Ash
Multis Illmortal
Punches- Illmortal. Ash's hit well, but he had one pause worthy line. Wasn't really feeling that. His closure punch was a little corny.
Wordplay/Nameplay Ash by a margin.
Metaphors-Ash by a SMALL margin.
Personals-Illmortal (Ash's verse seems like he was feeding a little. He had the same amount but he can't feed off of material in a text battle.)
Enjoyment-Illmortal (Despite the feeding I felt Ash did write with quality and originality. People need to stop underestimating Ill. The dude can write punchlines.Ash writes like someone I know but I can't put my finger on it. Whoever he is/was he is someone I have to look out for.)

MVGT Illmortal (Because MVGT ties are lame.)

PS. If you're going to brag about yourself. Probably the best time to do it is in the set-up line. It takes away from the punch when you do it in the punchline.

Favorite Bars

Ill:Competition like you get incinerated and eaten the moment you step up, i'm so predaceous,
You're words stuck on their period, so much blood splattered around this Rex, its the cretaceous,

Ash: I may have started before you, but you're creepin quite quickly. But do not mistake kindness for weakness cuz that sin is deadly

Let's get some more votes.
Shini

Suwon, Korea

#16 Jan 20, 2014
I had to pick a winner. Very close battle. This is a good way to start the New Year.

“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#17 Jan 20, 2014
Shini wrote:
I had to pick a winner. Very close battle. This is a good way to start the New Year.
Thanks for that Shini. I told Ash it was closer than he thought. He got me in some areas that I knew I didn't hit/hit hard in.
Ash

Singapore, Singapore

#18 Jan 21, 2014
Woah really? I didn't know it was even close. Well thanks Shini! Your input is appreciated. I'll work on it, trust me ;). Illmortal when you explain your rap it seems super thought out. I don't really look at raps like that. I think in that category, you should have won the wordplay as well cuz, yeah lol anyway. I only look at it in terms of improvement. I don't care how good I am or who I beat or lose to. All I care about is how much people improve. Cuz that shit takes a lot out of everything...
Ash

Singapore, Singapore

#19 Jan 21, 2014
Hahahaha mr flames! Why so mean? Hahaha! Shini, do I remind you of the rapper biggie? Hahahaha joking joking. I'm so childish. F*ck me

“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#20 Jan 21, 2014
Ash wrote:
Hahahaha mr flames! Why so mean? Hahaha! Shini, do I remind you of the rapper biggie? Hahahaha joking joking. I'm so childish. F*ck me
Lmao Mr. Flames just needed an explanation. That "mind twisted insanely" line was especially for him ;)
Shini

Seoul, Korea

#21 Jan 21, 2014
Ash wrote:
Hahahaha mr flames! Why so mean? Hahaha! Shini, do I remind you of the rapper biggie? Hahahaha joking joking. I'm so childish. F*ck me
Ah so it's Mr Flames? Did you peep that text project of mine- the 13 Parables?

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