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Shini

Korea

#22 Nov 7, 2012
Phaze wrote:
This,will be,fun since I can talk about hurricane sandy.
Yes, you should definately try connecting with the topic.

I think people can connect a little bit to this especially if they are Korean or worked in Korea. Talk about yourself though.

I am just a lowly foreigner, making a wage to pave way
to intellectual snobs such a way to produce a head ache
but this is how I make cake
but if I getta shot best believe I'mma breakway
they say they way can pump out Korea's wage slaves
okay so they troll bait the students into a slow grave
no wait they dragging me under so there's no save
Rapublican_or_De morap

Minneapolis, MN

#23 Nov 7, 2012
november 7th and somebody got elected
yesterday, but i don't dare to say who what or where it may
effect us cuz i ain't got a clue. i know alotta ya do
they're all cheaters so i figure, whats the point in checkin a box or 2?
checks'll stay short so a lot of us gotta have 2
or 3 jobs and theez snobs are elite cuz they got it from you
the votes and notes that is and still quote to invoke a "Change"
my change comes in pennies from denny's. still broke and enslaved
waitin' tables. ain't no weight in their fables
two puppets and more puppets above em fingerin' cables
it's entertainment that they bring to the table n got you tunin' in
like it was the Super Bowl 2 logo'd pros'll lure ya in
and battle it out? HA! alla yer coins still rattlin' out
yer pockets no matter who won or lost it just profit is what its about
no matter what comes out their mouth, don't think that Barack won't O Bomb ya n blame it on somebody else
then come up with a "promise", to snag him a couple more commas. be honest is all this gon help?

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#24 Nov 7, 2012
Just 16 can't decide what I want to do in life
Now here goes Obama and say its time
I trust then there goes my last dime
Now having to work hard and pay a lot to get into college before bedtime
I don't know I thought that weed was a crime

We got damage from hurricane sandy
Sandy was to powerful destroyed a lot of stuff but people come to help and be very handy
Just hope there won't be another one called randy
That would be horrible not dandy
On another note the nation uniting to help that's sweet as candy
Cleaning out your food to help the people with no pantry
Then we have mitt Romney fans who are very angry
But I like Romney but Obama won fair with a clean entry

But there are kids out there with no father
And the fathers don't know how to raise their daughter
So they leave on the street for slaughter
Kids will get sick from rainwater
Just hope this isnt the walking dead and we aren't attacked by walkers
Not going to be attacked this is not hawker
Our government is in much debt to much being bought to
With the different parties it's like our government fought
Not want the 4 fathers sought
Hope we don't get caught
Shini

Seoul, Korea

#25 Nov 7, 2012
Rapublican_or_Demorap wrote:
november 7th and somebody got elected
yesterday, but i don't dare to say who what or where it may
effect us cuz i ain't got a clue. i know alotta ya do
they're all cheaters so i figure, whats the point in checkin a box or 2?
checks'll stay short so a lot of us gotta have 2
or 3 jobs and theez snobs are elite cuz they got it from you
the votes and notes that is and still quote to invoke a "Change"
my change comes in pennies from denny's. still broke and enslaved
waitin' tables. ain't no weight in their fables
two puppets and more puppets above em fingerin' cables
it's entertainment that they bring to the table n got you tunin' in
like it was the Super Bowl 2 logo'd pros'll lure ya in
and battle it out? HA! alla yer coins still rattlin' out
yer pockets no matter who won or lost it just profit is what its about
no matter what comes out their mouth, don't think that Barack won't O Bomb ya n blame it on somebody else
then come up with a "promise", to snag him a couple more commas. be honest is all this gon help?
You have to drop a 16 (think 32 lines). Invalid entry. Please try again.
Rapublican_or_De morap

Minneapolis, MN

#26 Nov 7, 2012
i hear ya man. wuzn't tryna enter jus writin' a lil. but lemme ask, duzn't that mean that both of the other fooz drops are invalid as well?...
Shini

Korea

#27 Nov 8, 2012
RappinRollerCoaster wrote:
Just 16 can't decide what I want to do in life
Now here goes Obama and say its time
I trust then there goes my last dime
Now having to work hard and pay a lot to get into college before bedtime
I don't know I thought that weed was a crime
We got damage from hurricane sandy
Sandy was to powerful destroyed a lot of stuff but people come to help and be very handy
Just hope there won't be another one called randy
That would be horrible not dandy
On another note the nation uniting to help that's sweet as candy
Cleaning out your food to help the people with no pantry
Then we have mitt Romney fans who are very angry
But I like Romney but Obama won fair with a clean entry
But there are kids out there with no father
And the fathers don't know how to raise their daughter
So they leave on the street for slaughter
Kids will get sick from rainwater
Just hope this isnt the walking dead and we aren't attacked by walkers
Not going to be attacked this is not hawker
Our government is in much debt to much being bought to
With the different parties it's like our government fought
Not want the 4 fathers sought
Hope we don't get caught
You need a few more bars. If it is hard to count a 16 think 32 rhyimg lines. You entry wasn't bad though. I would just edit this bit and fix the flow a little.
Shini

Korea

#28 Nov 8, 2012
Rapublican_or_Demorap wrote:
i hear ya man. wuzn't tryna enter jus writin' a lil. but lemme ask, duzn't that mean that both of the other fooz drops are invalid as well?...
Yes, they are invalid. Chitown so far is the only valid drop.

People need to learn what a sixteen is.

Demorap You're actually not bad. Why not drop a legit 16 and use your legit name?
Shini

Korea

#29 Nov 8, 2012
***Demorap, you're actually not bad. Why not drop a legit 16 and use your legit name?

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#30 Nov 8, 2012
Just 16 can't decide what I want to do in life
Now here goes Obama and saying its time
I trust then there goes my last dime
Now having to work hard and pay a lot to get into college before bedtime
I don't know I thought that weed was a crime

We got damage from hurricane sandy
Sandy was to powerful destroyed a lot of stuff but people come to help and be very handy
Just hope there won't be another one called randy
That would be horrible not dandy
On another note the nation uniting to help that's sweet as candy
Cleaning out your food to help the people with no pantry
Then we have mitt Romney fans who are very angry
But I like Romney but Obama won fair with a clean entry

But there are kids out there with no father
And the fathers don't know how to raise their daughter
So they leave them on the street for slaughter
Kids will get sick from rainwater
Just hope this isnt the walking dead and we aren't attacked by walkers
Not going to be attacked this is not hawker
Our government is in much debt to much being bought for
With the different parties it's like our government fought for
Not what the 4 fathers sought
Hope we don't get caught
Caught lock them get shot hit then pass we are hot
America is so not
16 trill thats crazy next thing we know Canada will have all the money from pot
Haha just kidding well be owned by china get ready for a lot
Right now are economy is snot
I surprised were not already bought
And we decided for Obama in the office I'm moving Africa on the dot

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#31 Nov 8, 2012
There I think thats 16 and I edited a little not a lot so as to not mess up any other part of the rap.
Shini

Korea

#32 Nov 9, 2012
I looks like it is over 16. You're fine. The min is 16.
RappinRollerCoaster wrote:
Just 16 can't decide what I want to do in life
Now here goes Obama and saying its time
I trust then there goes my last dime
Now having to work hard and pay a lot to get into college before bedtime
I don't know I thought that weed was a crime
We got damage from hurricane sandy
Sandy was to powerful destroyed a lot of stuff but people come to help and be very handy
Just hope there won't be another one called randy
That would be horrible not dandy
On another note the nation uniting to help that's sweet as candy
Cleaning out your food to help the people with no pantry
Then we have mitt Romney fans who are very angry
But I like Romney but Obama won fair with a clean entry
But there are kids out there with no father
And the fathers don't know how to raise their daughter
So they leave them on the street for slaughter
Kids will get sick from rainwater
Just hope this isnt the walking dead and we aren't attacked by walkers
Not going to be attacked this is not hawker
Our government is in much debt to much being bought for
With the different parties it's like our government fought for
Not what the 4 fathers sought
Hope we don't get caught
Caught lock them get shot hit then pass we are hot
America is so not
16 trill thats crazy next thing we know Canada will have all the money from pot
Haha just kidding well be owned by china get ready for a lot
Right now are economy is snot
I surprised were not already bought
And we decided for Obama in the office I'm moving Africa on the dot

“serious about music , love rap”

Since: Oct 12

Huntsville

#33 Nov 9, 2012
Ok great lol
Shini

Korea

#34 Nov 10, 2012
Update: Last day to submit entries.

You have to submit a 16 bar verse (or over) to qualify. I will begin setting up the first topic soon. Please submit your entry on the Mold Winners November page.(It's under the hip-hop forums)

The topic is politics and revolution.
Shini

Korea

#35 Nov 10, 2012
2 HOurs left until the deadline.

So far we have Phaze, Raprollercoaster and Chi-town.
Shini

Seoul, Korea

#36 Nov 11, 2012
Update:

Prelims is closed. Since there is a lack of numbers, I will allow late sign-up if they drop a 16 to the prelim topic. I chose a hard starting topic because it is easier to "cut the fat" that way.
Shini

Seoul, Korea

#37 Nov 11, 2012
8 bar drop

Concept: You want to dump a girl using a rap song. How would you do this? How would you convey your emotions.

You can let her off easy or kick her to the curb. It's your vision, take it anywhere you want it to go.

You have 72 Hours to do 8 bars. You should be done on the 14th. You can drop in here for now. I will create a judging room later.
SomeRandomDude

United States

#38 Nov 12, 2012
Sorry, got busy. :(
Shini

Korea

#40 Nov 13, 2012
SomeRandomDude wrote:
Sorry, got busy.:(
It's okay.
Shini

Korea

#41 Nov 15, 2012
Contest cancelled due to a lack of interest (and personal issues). No one seems to be ropping their material so I am not going to run a tourney if no one participates. It takes a lot of time.

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