freestyle battle, spit it! (raps only)

Since: Feb 09

United States

#4331 Aug 20, 2009
Aww thats so cute, you keep runnin n runnin n you stopped rappin.

“facebook.com/tre .tru”

Since: Nov 08

Yo Mom's Mouth

#4332 Aug 20, 2009
Da Originator wrote:
<quoted text>
AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH
ZACk-My-ASS, I thought of dissin' you early
when you tell me
I quote Pac letters, really, dude, you "ain't ready"
you got yo own DAWG, Mitchell20 say you got to stick to battlin'
can C already, U fumblin', tumblin', crumblin', while I'm just rattlin'
didn't come to diss you, but to reach you
That's just my opinion, need to come and teach you
not to feed you, cuz you hungry
the last song you wrote was clumsy
tho, I'm at my weakest point
AKTHEGUN, see me and RUN, Mr_DMC come too, then follow him
CHoZEn got Froze, and HIP-HOP HERO you know,
take time off, and go fuck my hoe kim
HAHAHA^^
ya first letters were far from clever,you ledger crap rhymes
ya worst error ever , mentionin me in ya whack lines
there aint a vision greater then watchin how triple ate ya
Originator you'll get shredded to ribbons hater
have ya momma in labor,cuz my shots will end this rookie
and bein born's the only time you were ever in some puzszy..
kid you must've mistook me, for a cat who really gives a fcuk
about what ya say im not MJ but kid ya gettin touched.
but you'd probly like it Origin, rigid when reminiscin
cuz the secrets out da closet this midget wishes 4 prison

Since: Jul 07

Location hidden

#4333 Aug 20, 2009
antonyto wrote:
<quoted text>I fondle kids like you everyday of the week
I got your orifice torn your vocal cords become weak
The love that you seek I turn my back in defiance
I stay on beat so tremendous
you beat the meat till your eyelids
rotate like cartoon blinds, kid
my rhymes paint pictures for blind kids
Its like you yayo your sinuses
beating me in your wildest
dreams of the child is
what you see is the stylist
sit back rewind that 8 mile shit!
I would like to ask does anybody like this.

Its like giving props is weak or something.

Zak you must admit the last two disses I sent you where pretty dope, no?
br1b3

Croydon, Australia

#4334 Aug 20, 2009
antonyto wrote:
<quoted text>I would like to ask does anybody like this.
Its like giving props is weak or something.
Zak you must admit the last two disses I sent you where pretty dope, no?
its not my style but i guess its some peoples...isnt ne thrown up ne more freestyles u out of ideas
yoyoyo

Oxnard, CA

#4335 Aug 20, 2009
deadbeatmusik wrote:
<quoted text>
i spit it back and forth, see yoyoyo roll like a yoyo goes
its a cold cold globe that i solo stroll
i fold those foes with no control holdin
id say youd never a white spitter but your mom left the door open.
1 shot'll feel like I popped 'em in the mouth
N the only door you come out of is the closet in ur house
Queer, going at me, this wack kids a dummy Deadbeat, so ur musics only good to crackheads & junkies
Fuggin' disgrace, tryna make moves but u stuck in 1 place
Brown skinned, but ur chick knows the white spitter i use to bust in her face!

Since: Jul 07

Location hidden

#4336 Aug 20, 2009
br1b3 wrote:
<quoted text>
its not my style but i guess its some peoples...isnt ne thrown up ne more freestyles u out of ideas
What?
ADP

Willowbrook, IL

#4337 Aug 20, 2009
<Part time is gettin to be so old
Life is passin by
i see it everyday walkin out the door
i feel like im wastin my time
jus to make a fuckin dime
but this is reality have you not been told
Welcome to planet earth and it feels so cold
But it dont matter cus i still got shit droppin from my dome
Spittin shit that makes your jaw drop right to the floor
my ryhmes will shit on you and later turn into mold
and tell your bitch to stop callin me cus ive already been sold> ADP
br1b3

Croydon, Australia

#4338 Aug 20, 2009
yoyoyo wrote:
<quoted text>1 shot'll feel like I popped 'em in the mouth
N the only door you come out of is the closet in ur house
Queer, going at me, this wack kids a dummy Deadbeat, so ur musics only good to crackheads & junkies
Fuggin' disgrace, tryna make moves but u stuck in 1 place
Brown skinned, but ur chick knows the white spitter i use to bust in her face!
yoyoyo? thats a low blow bro leave the crackheads alone n stick 2 what u know,
talkn junkies u feel off like humpty dumpty
At a gig with your nursery rhymes thinkn why the fuk they bump me,its kinda funny
How u talkn about queers
when its its apparent to every 1 your the only queer here ,
Cabron-maricon whats the hells is wrong?
yoyoyo u know the words feel free 2 sing along
Ok im gone like cheech n chong,with bong n dro
Spit it back gangsta i hope u liked my flow.....
yoyoyo

Oxnard, CA

#4339 Aug 20, 2009
br1b3 wrote:
<quoted text>
yoyoyo? thats a low blow bro leave the crackheads alone n stick 2 what u know,
talkn junkies u feel off like humpty dumpty
At a gig with your nursery rhymes thinkn why the fuk they bump me,its kinda funny
How u talkn about queers
when its its apparent to every 1 your the only queer here ,
Cabron-maricon whats the hells is wrong?
yoyoyo u know the words feel free 2 sing along
Ok im gone like cheech n chong,with bong n dro
Spit it back gangsta i hope u liked my flow.....
Your flows a puddle and I'm storming it, f*ck that boring shit
Think no1 bashes ya rhymes cuz ur dope? nah they're ignorin' it!
Cuz rhymewise, I'm Shwarzanegar, and this bastards a baby
Ur similies suck, but you will be gone, like Cheech & Chongs career, after the 80's!

Since: Jul 07

Location hidden

#4340 Aug 20, 2009
deadbeatmusik wrote:
It is zack. Deadbeat is my rap name lol.
Honestly, Zackafras is a better name than Deadbeat.

Its more original.

Since: Feb 09

United States

#4341 Aug 20, 2009
antonyto wrote:
<quoted text>Honestly, Zackafras is a better name than Deadbeat.
Its more original.
The first of the two you wrote was childish. The last one you wrote was one of the betters.

Zackafras was never a rap name its just a topix account name.

Since: Jul 07

Location hidden

#4342 Aug 21, 2009
deadbeatmusik wrote:
<quoted text>
The first of the two you wrote was childish. The last one you wrote was one of the betters.
Zackafras was never a rap name its just a topix account name.
Childish? I would say they were to the point. In all my disses I try to focus every line on my target where as you throw a couple of jabs and use a bunch of filler.

The majority of the people here are kids so writing entertaining, funny, clear rhymes is necessary to prove my point.

What would be your definition of "Childish"?

What makes your Rhymes above that?

If trying to use a more extensive vocabulary so I do not sound the same as everyone else is "Childish" welllll, your just a poop face, dummy ass, garbage picking stupid head.

Since: Jul 07

Location hidden

#4343 Aug 21, 2009
deadbeatmusik wrote:
<quoted text>
The first of the two you wrote was childish. The last one you wrote was one of the betters.
Zackafras was never a rap name its just a topix account name.
My last two disses directed at you:

Zakafras is cute he kind of gives me a boner
my style is Phat like Albert you remind me of Homer
the thing that makes me better is cause I do it with skill
I did not know kids from Wisconsin new how to keep it real
Ill give you some credit so you think you got that paper
but like the rest you'll suck my ass
be first to catch my vapours
rotten eggs marinate down your oesophagus
kind of like enormous scrotums
making their deposits
feel my flow like H2o when your front row at my show
sorry but back stage passes are reserved for hoe's

I fondle kids like you everyday of the week
I got your orifice torn your vocal cords become weak
The love that you seek I turn my back in defiance
I stay on beat so tremendous
you beat the meat till your eyelids
rotate like cartoon blinds, kid
my rhymes paint pictures for blind kids
Its like you yayo your sinuses
beating me in your wildest
dreams of the child is
what you see is the stylist
sit back rewind that 8 mile shit!

And your response:

i give you a boner? thats a silly matter, i mean im really flattered
im killing these like millions of achilles captures
im illi, from philly to miles a milli after
youre on some homo sh!t, fuckin mitchell20 while filming azzburns
ive been beatin ya, you better be more obediant now
dumbazz, locked himself in my trap seeking for the key to get out
breathe and pout-youre in need of immediate help
i read what you wrote, did you diss me or yourself?

Zack, it's pretty obvious you think because you record songs in your closet(fact) that you know the guidelines of being an MC better then most. Been there, done that(not the closet thing though, That's Lazy),& moved on.

I respect everyones opinion but trying to diminish the quality of my rhymes by labelling them Childish as opposed to being perfect like your is insulting. We have went at it for a while and its been fun its too bad your way too mature now.

“topix's immaculate stain”

Since: Aug 07

racine

#4345 Aug 21, 2009
antonyto wrote:
<quoted text>My last two disses directed at you:
Zakafras is cute he kind of gives me a boner
my style is Phat like Albert you remind me of Homer
the thing that makes me better is cause I do it with skill
I did not know kids from Wisconsin new how to keep it real
Ill give you some credit so you think you got that paper
but like the rest you'll suck my ass
be first to catch my vapours
rotten eggs marinate down your oesophagus
kind of like enormous scrotums
making their deposits
feel my flow like H2o when your front row at my show
sorry but back stage passes are reserved for hoe's
I fondle kids like you everyday of the week
I got your orifice torn your vocal cords become weak
The love that you seek I turn my back in defiance
I stay on beat so tremendous
you beat the meat till your eyelids
rotate like cartoon blinds, kid
my rhymes paint pictures for blind kids
Its like you yayo your sinuses
beating me in your wildest
dreams of the child is
what you see is the stylist
sit back rewind that 8 mile shit!
And your response:
i give you a boner? thats a silly matter, i mean im really flattered
im killing these like millions of achilles captures
im illi, from philly to miles a milli after
youre on some homo sh!t, fuckin mitchell20 while filming azzburns
ive been beatin ya, you better be more obediant now
dumbazz, locked himself in my trap seeking for the key to get out
breathe and pout-youre in need of immediate help
i read what you wrote, did you diss me or yourself?
Zack, it's pretty obvious you think because you record songs in your closet(fact) that you know the guidelines of being an MC better then most. Been there, done that(not the closet thing though, That's Lazy),& moved on.
I respect everyones opinion but trying to diminish the quality of my rhymes by labelling them Childish as opposed to being perfect like your is insulting. We have went at it for a while and its been fun its too bad your way too mature now.
??You asked for opinions fo your last two disses, I didnt just come out and say hey this is what it is. The fact that you are offended proves the only response you would of accepted is "oh that was so great". I gave an honest opinion and if you want more reasoning here

1) Admitting guy gives you a boner doesnt work as a diss no matter how you put it.
2) Saying youll force a guy to smell your ass as a diss isnt going to work no matter how you put it

Yes, those are childish to me. I didnt say everything you write is, I didnt say you are, I didnt in anyway connect childish to Antonyto. I gave you props for your second verse, you are being extremely overly sensitive about a verse.

“topix's immaculate stain”

Since: Aug 07

racine

#4346 Aug 21, 2009
Further more, as far as me thinking Im superior or whatever, I judge my own sh!t twice as hard as I do anybodys elses, but I keep it to myself.

Since: Jul 07

Location hidden

#4347 Aug 21, 2009
zackafras wrote:
<quoted text>
??You asked for opinions fo your last two disses, I didnt just come out and say hey this is what it is. The fact that you are offended proves the only response you would of accepted is "oh that was so great". I gave an honest opinion and if you want more reasoning here
1) Admitting guy gives you a boner doesnt work as a diss no matter how you put it.
2) Saying youll force a guy to smell your ass as a diss isnt going to work no matter how you put it
Yes, those are childish to me. I didnt say everything you write is, I didnt say you are, I didnt in anyway connect childish to Antonyto. I gave you props for your second verse, you are being extremely overly sensitive about a verse.
I remember when your avatar was your actual face. I was merely saying that I take advantage of you sexually cause your a little bitch and It turns me on. I could have said "I MAKE ZACK SMELL MY FARTS" but I gave it a little more style then that.

Still the fact is you got owned by a childish rhyme.

“topix's immaculate stain”

Since: Aug 07

racine

#4348 Aug 21, 2009
antonyto wrote:
<quoted text>I remember when your avatar was your actual face. I was merely saying that I take advantage of you sexually cause your a little bitch and It turns me on. I could have said "I MAKE ZACK SMELL MY FARTS" but I gave it a little more style then that.
Still the fact is you got owned by a childish rhyme.
The little b!tch is the guy who wanted to cry when someone said he writes childish sh!t.

“I kNoW U LiKe mY sTyLe !!!”

Since: Feb 08

Santa Ana CA.

#4349 Aug 21, 2009
My opinion is you both zackafras & antonyto
are great on rhymin. But its just a different style you guys have,so obviously u guys are goin to have different opinions about a diss, Honestly I thought antonyto's diss was hilarious I always read what he has to say cuz i know that hes gonna drop something dope and funny at the same time. kinda like eminem but in a different way though, you know how when eminem disses somebody hardcore and makes it funny at the same time. zackafras is different hes more serious when he rhymes, pretty dope too but like i said in a different style.

Since: Jul 07

Location hidden

#4352 Aug 21, 2009
Chozn 1 wrote:
Honestly I thought antonyto's diss was hilarious I always read what he has to say cuz i know that hes gonna drop something dope and funny at the same time.
Can you dis any other way?

“I kNoW U LiKe mY sTyLe !!!”

Since: Feb 08

Santa Ana CA.

#4355 Aug 21, 2009
antonyto wrote:
<quoted text> Can you dis any other way?
well thats part of dissin some one some people diss differently ive done sometimes.

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