freestyle battle, spit it! (raps only)

Since: Mar 14

Willard, NC

#41723 Jul 7, 2014
Besides rape, he has no crutch to lean on as a lyricist, just a lame mofo starving for attention, how bout come at me with something a lil more creative than rape, oh yeah, i forgot, YOU CANT, lol not even worth another verse from me, how bout go Work on yo shit so u can be a lil more versatile, i cotos slaughter ur bxtch ass once again, but this rape concept is gettin played out and boring, BTW, the only reason u focusing on attacking my woman or women in general for that matter, is because ur an ugly fat no life son of a bitch, that hasn't had contact with pussy since being squirted on ur mom's herpes infected one lol, kill urself while me and my girl watch
Asylum

Harlan, IA

#41724 Jul 7, 2014
thank u for the feedback guys I truly do appreciate that
I know U both experienced on here I'ma work on what u said
Asylum

Harlan, IA

#41725 Jul 7, 2014
Ligature, your lines are fuxkin' whack
if you reply to me you better not show no slack
I'll step on a cracked sidewalk and fuxk your baby mama in her broken a$$ crack
then Jackie Chan chop you in the neck and snap your back in half
I have a knack for rap like you gotta knack for drinking seeds from a sack
I see the fear in your eyes like a deer in the headlights
I'll bite your face off like you're made of wood and I'm a termite
freestyle, b!tch, I'll smite you with a beam of white light
If you reply back again don't fuxkin' lack, or I'll eat you up like a snack pack

Since: Mar 14

Willard, NC

#41726 Jul 8, 2014
Asylum wrote:
Ligature, your lines are fuxkin' whack
if you reply to me you better not show no slack
I'll step on a cracked sidewalk and fuxk
your baby mama in her broken a$$ crack
then Jackie Chan chop you in the neck
and snap your back in half
I have a knack for rap like you gotta
knack for drinking seeds from a sack
I see the fear in your eyes like a deer in
the headlights
I'll bite your face off like you're made of
wood and I'm a termite
freestyle, b!tch, I'll smite you with a beam
of white light
If you reply back again don't fuxkin' lack,
or I'll eat you up like a snack
pack
we couldn't " feel ur words " if you wrote in Braille 
ur verses froze the sale if being " sick a' sell "
this narcissist with bars of shit is frail,
even HE felt his shit wack
Ur " bars " are sweet and softer than a melted kit kat
i bet he felt his ribs crack, I suggest u " rest ur rants " 
fuck ur weak ass " delivery ", I'll " carry out " ur death wish
ur like an obese in the petite section, ur a fukin " misfit "
if your catch phrase was " ur despicable ", you still couldn't spitt shit
bout to ring the neck of this daffy duck
a molested step child, " this bastard sucks "
quit actin tough, all u spitt about is sexual violation
Like an exile, I'm bout to " diss member " this bxtch, use his severed limbs to supply the nation

not my best, I'm in a hurry, but what I need my best material for with this lame bitch
Asylum

Harlan, IA

#41727 Jul 8, 2014
Listen, I'm clinically ill
I pop an Xanax pill every morning cus' I told my mom I wanna rape women and kill
And every Saturday I see a Dr. Phil to spill my feelings and talk about how my life is still going downhill
You'll see me on your T.V. in the future with the headline 'troubled teen shoots up school for a cheap thrill'
I'm evil and plot devious ways to steal like Plankton the krill
I'm only sixteen but I'll still put a gun in your grill and send a bullet through your skull for a twenty dollar bill
I'll do like my mother said and eat my green beans so I'll rip out your kidney and devour it like a rabid wolverine
I was born with my father's gene so it's inevitable I'll be crazy as Charlie Sheen in his winning routine
Now, watch your television screen because I might pop up for killing then sipping Oxi Clean from a canteen

“Dropping Bars Of Knowledge”

Since: Feb 14

Syracuse New York

#41728 Jul 8, 2014
Asylum wrote:
Listen, I'm clinically ill
I pop an Xanax pill every morning cus' I told my mom I wanna rape women and kill
And every Saturday I see a Dr. Phil to spill my feelings and talk about how my life is still going downhill
You'll see me on your T.V. in the future with the headline 'troubled teen shoots up school for a cheap thrill'
I'm evil and plot devious ways to steal like Plankton the krill
I'm only sixteen but I'll still put a gun in your grill and send a bullet through your skull for a twenty dollar bill
I'll do like my mother said and eat my green beans so I'll rip out your kidney and devour it like a rabid wolverine
I was born with my father's gene so it's inevitable I'll be crazy as Charlie Sheen in his winning routine
Now, watch your television screen because I might pop up for killing then sipping Oxi Clean from a canteen
You make horrorcore look bad.

Since: Oct 13

Location hidden

#41729 Jul 8, 2014
Actually asylum pretty dope for me 1 of the best new comers Dude did you rap previously because you have skill

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#41730 Jul 8, 2014
Guys total slaughter is this Friday. Do you think Joe Budden is really for Hollow Da Don?

Since: Mar 14

Willard, NC

#41731 Jul 8, 2014
lil biggy wrote:
Actually asylum pretty dope for me 1 of the best new comers Dude did you rap previously because you have skill
Every single verse of his is about the same damn thing, Rape Rape Rape, now a' days ppl use to word " dope " too loosely, in order to be considered dope, u have to have a key element, CREATIVITY, not milk the same concept over and over again, his verses are like giant recycle bin, the same material getting used over and over again, yeah he's better than alotta newbies I've seen come through, but he's faaaaaaarrrrr from dope, he's a prime example of mediocre, so stop fullin his head with that nonsense, we have an infestation of overinflated Egos as is,( Killah to name one ), we don't need another

Since: Mar 14

Willard, NC

#41733 Jul 8, 2014
Asylum wrote:
Listen, I'm clinically ill
I pop an Xanax pill every morning cus' I told my mom I wanna rape women and kill
And every Saturday I see a Dr. Phil to
spill my feelings and talk about how my
life is still going downhill
You'll see me on your T.V. in the future
with the headline 'troubled teen shoots up
school for a cheap thrill'
I'm evil and plot devious ways to steal like
Plankton the krill
I'm only sixteen but I'll still put a gun in
your grill and send a bullet through your
skull for a twenty dollar bill
I'll do like my mother said and eat my
green beans so I'll rip out your kidney and
devour it like a rabid wolverine
I was born with my father's gene so it's
inevitable I'll be crazy as Charlie Sheen in
his winning routine
Now, watch your television screen
because I might pop up for killing then
sipping Oxi Clean from a
canteen
is gettin smoked, you fein ?,
This blade I spitt is mean, will do more than just " nick a teen " ( nicotine )
the gashes make when I lacerate will fkin split his spleen
cause my tongue is a " fun razor ", bitch " I come with barz "
it's done with none regard, as I peel the scabs from his scars
the shit you spitt is dumb, this Idiot is a snack, an " Idi- Yum " ( Idiom )
" split " this bitch in " half ", like a mapped meridian
I come harder than a glass of Obsidian,
bitch, I'm shatter-proof
Ur obsession with rape conveys to me a tragic youth
ur cornier than a cob in spring, like a door knob and string, I will fkin snatch his tooth
for u, ur streets can't " say cred " ( sacred ), like a catholic pastor's booth
don't get ur path confused,
like a fallen tree, bitch I " end trails " ( entrails )
I'm a lyrical " taxidermist ", this verbal bash confirms it,
colder than a " patch of ice " that hits the land, this sacrificial lamb cant " inhale " ( in hail )

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#41734 Jul 8, 2014
I meant ready .-.

“You only live once”

Since: Mar 13

Location hidden

#41735 Jul 8, 2014
@asylum
rappings my drug and I need my fix,
I write so much I almost broke my wrists,
there's really no cure for this type of virus,
I'm haunted by these thoughts that just weren't invited,
I'm smokin to loud, I never learned to be quiet,
im high in the sky and that's a fuckin plane pilot,
But asylum being hard? I just don't buy it,
Take a knife to the corners of his mouth and chelsey smile it,
See if u really want crazy, than look me in the eye,
But don't blink cause in a second u might die,
Cause I'll cut your throat and cut it wide,
Where you can see through your kneck on either side,
I'm out.......
Asylum

Harlan, IA

#41736 Jul 8, 2014
Speak of rape just to p!ss Ligature off,
I ain't gonna tweak my technique for some [email protected] that judges another man's physique
I'm sick like I got the whooping cough, I'll snort the powder off a gypsy moth and blow it out my nose like I'm dusting an antique off
b!tch don't scoff, I'll chop your head off and push my finger in to your face until I puncture your left cheek and it leaks blood like a leech
My dad is tipsy, yelling at my mom and saying he's gonna hit me
I know where the bleach is, I can escape it at any time but I just write rhymes and try to ignore the screeches,
You feel the grime in my lines like I'm spitting out slime
I'm a cop killer, I'll snap the spine of a swine and eat up his pork rinds
that's all for now, I'm gonna go fuxk your wife in her behind and slap her hind like it talked out of line.
Evolusean

Calgary, Canada

#41737 Jul 8, 2014
Lol one bar rhyme scheme facepalm hardly any couplets of rhymes at all. Waaack. Lol sorry man, get a lil more 'complicated' and maybe you will get a reply...but not with super simplistic ish
Evolusean

Calgary, Canada

#41738 Jul 8, 2014
Also has anyone seen schizophrenic freds soundcloud page lmao i follow him and dude put up a song finally...its...weird...but in a weird way i like it lol like i said reminds me of delusional thomas aka mac millers alter ego . Im interested in seeing what else he delivers for sure lol hes peaked my interest. Wack bars but i think thats the point. A lyricist he aint...but in his own warped way...he is lol idk lemme know what yall think of him cuz hes strange fir sure

Since: Mar 14

Willard, NC

#41739 Jul 8, 2014
Asylum wrote:
Speak of rape just to p!ss Ligature off,
I ain't gonna tweak my technique for some [email protected] that judges another man's physique
I'm sick like I got the whooping cough, I'll
snort the powder off a gypsy moth and
blow it out my nose like I'm dusting an
antique off
b!tch don't scoff, I'll chop your head off
and push my finger in to your face until I
puncture your left cheek and it leaks blood
like a leech
My dad is tipsy, yelling at my mom and
saying he's gonna hit me
I know where the bleach is, I can escape
it at any time but I just write rhymes and
try to ignore the screeches,
You feel the grime in my lines like I'm
spitting out slime
I'm a cop killer, I'll snap the spine of a
swine and eat up his pork rinds
that's all for now, I'm gonna go fuxk your
wife in her behind and slap her hind like it
talked out of line.
bitch, gag on these nutts, like acid reflux, you " die just in " ( digestin ) battles
label it a " die verse " ( diverse ), ur " diss stinks " ( distincts ), leave this " whore in dust " ( horrendous ), baffled
bitch, fuck ur journey,
I " diss bars " ( disbars ) like corrupt attorneys
you couldn't " diss scribes " ( describes) using adjectives,
this bastard is,
too irrelevant to concern me
ur smaller than an " asterisk ", fk with me, its ur " ass to risk "
I'll viciously smash his ribs as I " pass a fist " to this " pacifist "
" you serve no purpose " like an appendix, you're " a pen dick ",
whose ran outta gimmicks
like a cleft, " chins, I'll dent it "
a dog catcher meetin quota, " I pound relentless ", 
burning asylums, on this arsonist's agenda
 I smile at this faggot's plea
like a " wife-beater ", I see u as just another " casual tee " ( casualty )
dirty

Pacific Palisades, CA

#41740 Jul 9, 2014
Fresh

Kenosha, WI

#41741 Jul 9, 2014
Ligature is funny.
RapRook

UK

#41742 Jul 9, 2014
Lenox Da Kid wrote:
<quoted text>
You make horrorcore look bad.
I have to agree he has gone "downhill" but the original verse he spat on Ligature was pretty good. And i think Ligature you shouldn't take it personally but i understand its disturbing.
Asylum: stick to castration
Cuz right now you can only endure masturbation
In the hope someone will pay attention
Maybe 20dollars in donation
For fantasizing until your head is aching
You're tbe reason people question their sanity: are they truly foresaken?
Youre the reason my visions are hallucinations
Cutting up women, mate, get to Bedlam

“Dropping Bars Of Knowledge”

Since: Feb 14

Syracuse New York

#41743 Jul 9, 2014
Anyone up for a battle?

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