freestyle battle, spit it! (raps only)

“Dropping Bars Of Knowledge”

Since: Feb 14

Syracuse New York

#41711 Jul 7, 2014
I'd acknowledge anyone who gives feedback on this verse. Thank you.

Lenox [A Philosophers Aggression](Verse 1).
Plages making an impact/
Alienated kids with pigs masks/
Grab the blade and get your wrists slashed/
Missing pages found in space associated with Salem Witch craft/
-The master of this nation/
Madness and dictation controlling our actions/
Another kind act from Satin/
Blasting up gas stations with black tainted Gats slashing like Jason/
-Steeples I conquer/
Providing my people proper with pins and needles for demons that we encounter/
-Killing singles entities with every breath in me/
Questioning the quest that I seek/
Measuring the levels of defeat to,make your existence a memory/
Centuries of devilish greed and destinies getting dismembered before anyone can see/
-No life to rage against or to visualize the truth/
Snipers at close range when I'm in the booth/
A history of violence in these times, putting aside to the roots/
-Family members getting abandoned and treasured/
This damned world you have entered, so I'm defiantly not a man to lecture/
RapRook

UK

#41713 Jul 7, 2014
Like a ballet dancer i glide elegantly
Im pwning you effortlessly
Hittin repetitively
Still on full energy
Come at me i counter without processing
Organized systematically without even blood letting
Infamous and smooth no need for tormenting
Killstreaks infinite, inexprable and never ending
Second nature to me not beating but owning
My opponents never knew the word powning
My accuracy so great like im homing in
Starting to get bored of winning
Shini

Seoul, Korea

#41714 Jul 7, 2014
Call me the condor when I touch down
You pray/prey, I'm just bound to snuff clowns
You called for a lyricist, but should fear this fist's fear it grips
I am murder in the lab Dexter in the act
The best here get Hannibal Lecter in my craft
You think I am spittin through a pencil
No you just think too f@ckin simple
That's why I wipe these puss-in-pimples
The way you anticipate ya murder suspence full
Off ya rocker etch you out like some stencils
With my fevor I can murder ya wordsearch
Crash the servor cause I'm a mental purger
Far past the best hit the X you don't the server
Got a classic feel so thinkin you matchin skill-will have ya @ss get killed
This what I do- I'll slaughter angels and buckeyes too
I'll tatter n batter that "tough guy rouse"
This is just a sample of the stuff I do
This isn't average assassin
You not up to peak ya craft flattin
Tryin to make ya rap passin
Gettin that gas in, it stinks-we gaspin
You creep ya beak but all we hear is that gab in that flatchin
So you be better off tryin to revel with a headful of devils
Maybe then perhaps you can revel inna intellectual level
Your thoughts in my hand like Caine tryin to snatch the pebble
You finally figured it out-yeah-that's ya level.

“Dropping Bars Of Knowledge”

Since: Feb 14

Syracuse New York

#41715 Jul 7, 2014
I dismantle prey/
Tangled in everyday cycles in the hand that lays/
An unmanageable maze that has tasks trapped in a cage/
Lacking the taste for wack rappers but I'll lay back till the day/
Nothing holding back to unravel the truth/
Hitting with holders till you crack when I'm strapped in the booth/
An animal to stand on what I do/
God is what brought me here/
Sold my soul to the devil so now I have bought the fear/
Done lost for years now the costs are here/
I'm devilish/
Enter my entrance of death wishes and irrelevance/
Deadly mist edging upon the endless quenching fist/
Spitting like a dentist with an endless lisp/

“Dropping Bars Of Knowledge”

Since: Feb 14

Syracuse New York

#41716 Jul 7, 2014
Bolder's**

“You only live once”

Since: Mar 13

Location hidden

#41717 Jul 7, 2014
Letters to my mother

dear mom, there are something's I just don't understand,
why did u do drugs and let me witness firsthand,
my brothers where there too, did u give a damn?
I guess u didn't cause we were put in foster care and u ran,
you chose a pipe over your kids,
do you know the damage that did?
it still continues to hurt were just good at keeping it hid,
we grew up and that's no thanks to you,

Since: Mar 14

Willard, NC

#41718 Jul 7, 2014
RapRook wrote:
<quoted text>
Graphic and unnervingly enticing. Im shivering. Literally, you need to write horrorcore.
Lol if a roach was to crawl out of a crack in a wall and type " Fuck Ligature on ice-cream cones of power puffed sprinkles ", you would be like " oh how riveting and earth shattering ", simply because it was an attack against me, anything against me, you love, simply because u don't have the balls to attack me urself so you diss precariously through others, lol give it a rest homie, hate will eat u up alive while making u look like a bitch as it chews
Asylum

Harlan, IA

#41720 Jul 7, 2014
My body an asylum, my mind the inmate. I aint lying when I say I'll find your girl and force fornicate then grate her face on the shredder until it dissipates in to a fine cheddar and you'll need her birth certificate to authenticate her fuxked up face. I'll emulate Daisy's Destruction with your b!tch but instead of a neonate the victim will be an overweight useless vertebrate. Little b!tch, I'm the devil's incarnate. I'll impregnate your girl and incubate her for 5 months then take a lighter to her stomach and deflagrate her womb then excavate the fetus and squeeze it until it obliterates in to a red cloud and I watch the life eradicate. With my level of expatiate I'll make you nauseate, my words are verbal toxins that can't even be cured with a mithridate. Take these lines intimate, b!tch, I aint playing like the Boston Marathon my words detonate and my vocabulary will educate a Harvard graduate. You can't elevate to my level unless I levitate you, we aint never gonna associate.

“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#41721 Jul 7, 2014
Asylum wrote:
My body an asylum, my mind the inmate. I aint lying when I say I'll find your girl and force fornicate then grate her face on the shredder until it dissipates in to a fine cheddar and you'll need her birth certificate to authenticate her fuxked up face. I'll emulate Daisy's Destruction with your b!tch but instead of a neonate the victim will be an overweight useless vertebrate. Little b!tch, I'm the devil's incarnate. I'll impregnate your girl and incubate her for 5 months then take a lighter to her stomach and deflagrate her womb then excavate the fetus and squeeze it until it obliterates in to a red cloud and I watch the life eradicate. With my level of expatiate I'll make you nauseate, my words are verbal toxins that can't even be cured with a mithridate. Take these lines intimate, b!tch, I aint playing like the Boston Marathon my words detonate and my vocabulary will educate a Harvard graduate. You can't elevate to my level unless I levitate you, we aint never gonna associate.
You're trying too hard. Simple as that. And you need to put your paragraph into bars/lines.

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#41722 Jul 7, 2014
Yeaa if you fix them well and cut your lines in half, you will do alright @asylum. Trying to force rhyming consistently in one line will not only ruin the flow, it'll ruin the structure and will be harder to make sense the more you go. Try using commas after every rhyming word to show where it should end and rape isn't very horrcore lol its a terrible porno

Since: Mar 14

Willard, NC

#41723 Jul 7, 2014
Besides rape, he has no crutch to lean on as a lyricist, just a lame mofo starving for attention, how bout come at me with something a lil more creative than rape, oh yeah, i forgot, YOU CANT, lol not even worth another verse from me, how bout go Work on yo shit so u can be a lil more versatile, i cotos slaughter ur bxtch ass once again, but this rape concept is gettin played out and boring, BTW, the only reason u focusing on attacking my woman or women in general for that matter, is because ur an ugly fat no life son of a bitch, that hasn't had contact with pussy since being squirted on ur mom's herpes infected one lol, kill urself while me and my girl watch
Asylum

Harlan, IA

#41724 Jul 7, 2014
thank u for the feedback guys I truly do appreciate that
I know U both experienced on here I'ma work on what u said
Asylum

Harlan, IA

#41725 Jul 7, 2014
Ligature, your lines are fuxkin' whack
if you reply to me you better not show no slack
I'll step on a cracked sidewalk and fuxk your baby mama in her broken a$$ crack
then Jackie Chan chop you in the neck and snap your back in half
I have a knack for rap like you gotta knack for drinking seeds from a sack
I see the fear in your eyes like a deer in the headlights
I'll bite your face off like you're made of wood and I'm a termite
freestyle, b!tch, I'll smite you with a beam of white light
If you reply back again don't fuxkin' lack, or I'll eat you up like a snack pack

Since: Mar 14

Willard, NC

#41726 Jul 8, 2014
Asylum wrote:
Ligature, your lines are fuxkin' whack
if you reply to me you better not show no slack
I'll step on a cracked sidewalk and fuxk
your baby mama in her broken a$$ crack
then Jackie Chan chop you in the neck
and snap your back in half
I have a knack for rap like you gotta
knack for drinking seeds from a sack
I see the fear in your eyes like a deer in
the headlights
I'll bite your face off like you're made of
wood and I'm a termite
freestyle, b!tch, I'll smite you with a beam
of white light
If you reply back again don't fuxkin' lack,
or I'll eat you up like a snack
pack
we couldn't " feel ur words " if you wrote in Braille 
ur verses froze the sale if being " sick a' sell "
this narcissist with bars of shit is frail,
even HE felt his shit wack
Ur " bars " are sweet and softer than a melted kit kat
i bet he felt his ribs crack, I suggest u " rest ur rants " 
fuck ur weak ass " delivery ", I'll " carry out " ur death wish
ur like an obese in the petite section, ur a fukin " misfit "
if your catch phrase was " ur despicable ", you still couldn't spitt shit
bout to ring the neck of this daffy duck
a molested step child, " this bastard sucks "
quit actin tough, all u spitt about is sexual violation
Like an exile, I'm bout to " diss member " this bxtch, use his severed limbs to supply the nation

not my best, I'm in a hurry, but what I need my best material for with this lame bitch
Asylum

Harlan, IA

#41727 Jul 8, 2014
Listen, I'm clinically ill
I pop an Xanax pill every morning cus' I told my mom I wanna rape women and kill
And every Saturday I see a Dr. Phil to spill my feelings and talk about how my life is still going downhill
You'll see me on your T.V. in the future with the headline 'troubled teen shoots up school for a cheap thrill'
I'm evil and plot devious ways to steal like Plankton the krill
I'm only sixteen but I'll still put a gun in your grill and send a bullet through your skull for a twenty dollar bill
I'll do like my mother said and eat my green beans so I'll rip out your kidney and devour it like a rabid wolverine
I was born with my father's gene so it's inevitable I'll be crazy as Charlie Sheen in his winning routine
Now, watch your television screen because I might pop up for killing then sipping Oxi Clean from a canteen

“Dropping Bars Of Knowledge”

Since: Feb 14

Syracuse New York

#41728 Jul 8, 2014
Asylum wrote:
Listen, I'm clinically ill
I pop an Xanax pill every morning cus' I told my mom I wanna rape women and kill
And every Saturday I see a Dr. Phil to spill my feelings and talk about how my life is still going downhill
You'll see me on your T.V. in the future with the headline 'troubled teen shoots up school for a cheap thrill'
I'm evil and plot devious ways to steal like Plankton the krill
I'm only sixteen but I'll still put a gun in your grill and send a bullet through your skull for a twenty dollar bill
I'll do like my mother said and eat my green beans so I'll rip out your kidney and devour it like a rabid wolverine
I was born with my father's gene so it's inevitable I'll be crazy as Charlie Sheen in his winning routine
Now, watch your television screen because I might pop up for killing then sipping Oxi Clean from a canteen
You make horrorcore look bad.

Since: Oct 13

Location hidden

#41729 Jul 8, 2014
Actually asylum pretty dope for me 1 of the best new comers Dude did you rap previously because you have skill

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#41730 Jul 8, 2014
Guys total slaughter is this Friday. Do you think Joe Budden is really for Hollow Da Don?

Since: Mar 14

Willard, NC

#41731 Jul 8, 2014
lil biggy wrote:
Actually asylum pretty dope for me 1 of the best new comers Dude did you rap previously because you have skill
Every single verse of his is about the same damn thing, Rape Rape Rape, now a' days ppl use to word " dope " too loosely, in order to be considered dope, u have to have a key element, CREATIVITY, not milk the same concept over and over again, his verses are like giant recycle bin, the same material getting used over and over again, yeah he's better than alotta newbies I've seen come through, but he's faaaaaaarrrrr from dope, he's a prime example of mediocre, so stop fullin his head with that nonsense, we have an infestation of overinflated Egos as is,( Killah to name one ), we don't need another

Since: Mar 14

Willard, NC

#41733 Jul 8, 2014
Asylum wrote:
Listen, I'm clinically ill
I pop an Xanax pill every morning cus' I told my mom I wanna rape women and kill
And every Saturday I see a Dr. Phil to
spill my feelings and talk about how my
life is still going downhill
You'll see me on your T.V. in the future
with the headline 'troubled teen shoots up
school for a cheap thrill'
I'm evil and plot devious ways to steal like
Plankton the krill
I'm only sixteen but I'll still put a gun in
your grill and send a bullet through your
skull for a twenty dollar bill
I'll do like my mother said and eat my
green beans so I'll rip out your kidney and
devour it like a rabid wolverine
I was born with my father's gene so it's
inevitable I'll be crazy as Charlie Sheen in
his winning routine
Now, watch your television screen
because I might pop up for killing then
sipping Oxi Clean from a
canteen
is gettin smoked, you fein ?,
This blade I spitt is mean, will do more than just " nick a teen " ( nicotine )
the gashes make when I lacerate will fkin split his spleen
cause my tongue is a " fun razor ", bitch " I come with barz "
it's done with none regard, as I peel the scabs from his scars
the shit you spitt is dumb, this Idiot is a snack, an " Idi- Yum " ( Idiom )
" split " this bitch in " half ", like a mapped meridian
I come harder than a glass of Obsidian,
bitch, I'm shatter-proof
Ur obsession with rape conveys to me a tragic youth
ur cornier than a cob in spring, like a door knob and string, I will fkin snatch his tooth
for u, ur streets can't " say cred " ( sacred ), like a catholic pastor's booth
don't get ur path confused,
like a fallen tree, bitch I " end trails " ( entrails )
I'm a lyrical " taxidermist ", this verbal bash confirms it,
colder than a " patch of ice " that hits the land, this sacrificial lamb cant " inhale " ( in hail )

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