“topix's immaculate stain”

Since: Aug 07

racine

#4257 Aug 16, 2009
jgomes14 wrote:
Bs, i mean that boston shit
cus i'm on the boston shit
pull it out and lay it on the table
rap this, rap that but you aint gonna be able
to bring it all down
i donít wear a crown
you all throw down
but i throw up, throw up rhymes like prejectile vomit
i know you think im a star, but im just a comet
see, i gotta do this its my prophecy
im up and down the street, donít you dare come walk with me
ma used to cook up pancakes on the grittle
and i have been grindin ever since i was little
you see, you think you got game, when really, just cus you can rhyme dont mean you know the game
sorry to you, i aint trying to put you to shame
okay, im just a kid that wants to do this for a livin
i wanna write songs, and maybe spit couple a rhymes
write three verses, and scramble up the lines
even the diamond in the dirt shines
i like this, i like this a lot
girls, and all that shit, i could go without
as long as i had a notebook, and boys, thatís what lifes about
and no, rap is not all about glocks and making doe
it aint about a pimp or some hoe
its about the struggle and what we had to do to make it all go
stumble, stagger, and trip I tricked you it all means the same thing
Lupe is god and CuDi is Jesus
you hear me, but really you hear us
i hope we all speaking out and reaching out clear
till we are grabbin your shirt, you wonít know we are here
the whole time you all just pushed real hip hop to the rear
im not saying I made this, or know all about this
yall just donít understand completely what you miss
Why bother to write this? Its like the last Tyson bout
U said all u need is a notebook n boys, thats what lifes about?
Talk bout real hip hop when u rhyme like you likin the south
like u ride to T.I. type tykes, hows anybody sposed to be likin you now?
Thats was jus another passage in massive rap polution
i have solutions, dont panic, just grab a gat start shootin
lil everett massachusetts, laugh n rhyme too
cuz hopefully the pigs'll stick u jus like the swine flu

“topix's immaculate stain”

Since: Aug 07

racine

#4258 Aug 16, 2009
Da Originator wrote:
<quoted text>
NO RESPONSE WHICH MEANS I WON,
2pac---they see me, they RUN, you tell me WHO WON
Im revered, I revel with devils wherever im left in
I level temples with tenants tethered in wreckage
U quote Pacs letters like he never had left yet
Soon the only quote youll know is September seventh
I got the sickest nature I rip the originator
Like fifty some sixty sabers that stick thru like sickled lasers
I sift thru your simple paper, youre brittle, a nimble hater
Dont anybody see u like tha last flick with Brendan Frasier.
jgomes14

New Bedford, MA

#4259 Aug 16, 2009
ha thats all you could come back with zackafras? i dont think i really needa prove myself to you, Da Originator got game, bing got game thats it nobody else even has any idea what they doin, why dont you get a little better before you try to diss people. yo tha originator, respect brotha. you cant really diss tha originator etha, take someone that you might have a chance with, all im sayin, peace.

“topix's immaculate stain”

Since: Aug 07

racine

#4260 Aug 16, 2009
jgomes14 wrote:
ha thats all you could come back with zackafras? i dont think i really needa prove myself to you, Da Originator got game, bing got game thats it nobody else even has any idea what they doin, why dont you get a little better before you try to diss people. yo tha originator, respect brotha. you cant really diss tha originator etha, take someone that you might have a chance with, all im sayin, peace.
lmfao you punks are all the same, run away when you get the chance.

“"The world is but a stage."”

Since: Mar 08

A-Town

#4261 Aug 16, 2009
Lol at the Brendan Frasier line
jgomes14

New Bedford, MA

#4262 Aug 16, 2009
zackafras, you could talk, if you were good, lol you really aint that good at all, you a wisconsin boy right? midwest? you dont sound very midwest. you dont sound like anything all you can do is diss, i would like to see you write a song. before you call me a punk.
kjj

United States

#4263 Aug 16, 2009
the dems are into killings
50000000 babes mostly black
shh thats a glass ceiling
how bho let this happen
where is the blacks
with a little pride
too busy counting stacks
the dems are just lies
speaking bout rights
when they reward our votes
reward by taking our lives

“topix's immaculate stain”

Since: Aug 07

racine

#4264 Aug 16, 2009
jgomes14 wrote:
zackafras, you could talk, if you were good, lol you really aint that good at all, you a wisconsin boy right? midwest? you dont sound very midwest. you dont sound like anything all you can do is diss, i would like to see you write a song. before you call me a punk.
lol You are really to scared to diss back huh? Dumbazz Im not a battle rapper, Im a lyricist, I only battle rap here for fun.

go to myspace dot com / deadbeatzg

Cant give the url, they count it as spam.

“topix's immaculate stain”

Since: Aug 07

racine

#4265 Aug 16, 2009
Heres a songs just for you, since I have probably near a thousand this is just the latest. Not that it matters, since you are too fraid to battle me its obvious you wont say anything positive about it. Thats kool though lol Im gettin mine.

Fukk you pay me, if I dont love you, hate me
And I dont trust you baby so dont come thru saying
we're a one-two-save it, Im aiming for sun, moon placement
I swear to my mother Ill undo every shunned move Im making
This is my heart, my tears, my blood, drool draping
on the desk at summer school, yes I was fool vaguely
I aint praying, some do for one new day, see
If God wont shine on me he's in for one rude awakening
Ill spit gospel like apostles hearin that
I will stop cold on hot coals and barely crack
I will not go back to foldin clothes at Shopko
Dont hollo, my frowns froze staring back
Dont knock, I am not home and u dont care to ask
So shalom, fair thee well, I will not go glaring back
I now know you couldnt follow where we at
I had to hobble on Apollos chariot.
yoyoyo

Oxnard, CA

#4266 Aug 16, 2009
Who's as nice as this? when i write my scripts
Its like I play with eagles, throw bullets n kill dogs like michael vick
My styles so ill im comparing it to weaponry
So when im airing 'em, its embarassing to step to me
I know these dudes wack, i aint gotta feel 'em out
My shines still gleaming, yall dummies is dimming out
JCALI

Cartersville, GA

#4267 Aug 17, 2009
can someone help me learn to freestyle

Since: Aug 09

United States

#4272 Aug 17, 2009
they see e they run who won? haha nigfga always say that and didnt write back..

Since: Jul 07

Location hidden

#4273 Aug 17, 2009
Akthegun raps like he got the runs
mother is dumb, dad's a professional bum
sister's a skeezer, boning the next door geezer
he wit those perverted types
thinkin his style is tight?
Sit back what the hell do ya think
my shit be gonzo you pokin chicks wit cha little dink
you be cool at suppressing the facts
even though you ain't probably black
you the kind who walks with a limp
spewing the lastest slang
just because you mothers boning a brother, dang
thats a dis just to say the least
then again your fam be white so they be callin police
trying to sue cause I made they boy cry
I ain't my fault you try while I'm fly!
Mr_DMC

Davenport, FL

#4274 Aug 18, 2009
i saw these posts while surfin the net,
i bet you guys cant even pay yo rent,
forced to try and get fame from the web,
"maybe people will notice me!" thats what you said,
but man, go back to yo substance abuse,
findin a girl, rapin her, makin her a tie a noose,
embaraced yet? me spewin out wut you think?
yo face prolly so red its Japanese Pink,
dont worry,Japanese is a great description of you,
accordin to yo mom, yo dong's an inch, maybe two,
so go practice some more, maybe in the basement,
before even thinkin to make another statement.
Der Bomber

Istanbul, Turkey

#4277 Aug 18, 2009
JCALI wrote:
can someone help me learn to freestyle
no but if you pay high then we can think...

“"The world is but a stage."”

Since: Mar 08

A-Town

#4279 Aug 18, 2009
zackafras wrote:
Heres a songs just for you, since I have probably near a thousand this is just the latest. Not that it matters, since you are too fraid to battle me its obvious you wont say anything positive about it. Thats kool though lol Im gettin mine.
Fukk you pay me, if I dont love you, hate me
And I dont trust you baby so dont come thru saying
we're a one-two-save it, Im aiming for sun, moon placement
I swear to my mother Ill undo every shunned move Im making
This is my heart, my tears, my blood, drool draping
on the desk at summer school, yes I was fool vaguely
I aint praying, some do for one new day, see
If God wont shine on me he's in for one rude awakening
Ill spit gospel like apostles hearin that
I will stop cold on hot coals and barely crack
I will not go back to foldin clothes at Shopko
Dont hollo, my frowns froze staring back
Dont knock, I am not home and u dont care to ask
So shalom, fair thee well, I will not go glaring back
I now know you couldnt follow where we at
I had to hobble on Apollos chariot.
I think you're a better battle rapper. That's just my opinion though for what its worth.

Since: Jul 07

Location hidden

#4280 Aug 18, 2009
mitchell20 wrote:
<quoted text>
I think you're a better battle rapper. That's just my opinion though for what its worth.
Plus, I think that verse is so-so

“topix's immaculate stain”

Since: Aug 07

racine

#4281 Aug 18, 2009
As I said, it was just the last one I wrote. Doestn matter though just makes me hungrier.

And wtf happened to this site? Hardly anymore disses.

Since: Jul 07

Location hidden

#4283 Aug 18, 2009
zackafras wrote:
As I said, it was just the last one I wrote. Doestn matter though just makes me hungrier.
And wtf happened to this site? Hardly anymore disses.
They come on for a sec and say there the best, you reply, and thats it. they leave.

Or

No matter what they write they think its better when its obviously not.
br1b3

Australia

#4284 Aug 18, 2009
california nc all the way 2 sydney,redfern the aussie hood we livin the word shifty brothers that take 5 seconds to boost cars ,c products in tonnes, n c half their lives lookn out between bars.
Killin 2 real n if they get the feeln u slippn up u get shot up or even get your throat cut, bodies in dumspster trucks gone by the end of the week we start riots and fires in the middle of streets cops dont want 2 come cause they know theres a chance that they wont leave.
always coke if my nose is itchn stay out all night drinkn come home and listen 2 my girl start bitchn.
There u go gangstas a insight 2 my life br1b3s south sydney rabbitoh"s till the day i die...

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