freestyle battle, spit it! (raps only)

Since: Oct 13

Location hidden

#40422 Apr 30, 2014
Ks there must be information that connects random shxt other wise its just rhyming sentences , because then all you need to know is the last word, which is simple . TRY focusing on a topic a simple one then use complexity with the rhyming words and not how broad it is ... Then sum
kingsteven

United States

#40423 Apr 30, 2014
Lol can't help it just starts flying off the top of the head
Mc wrecker

United States

#40424 Apr 30, 2014
I lyrically spit yo head off cut yo ballz and feed it to ur dawgs...beccause I'm that raw uhhh....
I'm done son...
SomeRandomDude

United States

#40425 Apr 30, 2014
I do not post often in the freestyle thread or at all really... Because I rarely get any feedback. O.o
killah

Lower Sackville, Canada

#40427 Apr 30, 2014
who's next in line? step up unless you're too scared to verse
Cafeteria style, I prepare to serve
school yard bully, sit you down in the chair yah nerd
give you wedgies in the locker room, rip up your homework because I tear to hurt
top of my class in English, I don't need anybody doing my homework
lyrically unstoppable, punchlines bloody your nose then I make you clean it up with your own shirt
figuratively speaking,
literally I'll smack yah 'til yah groan in the dirt and send you home hurt

“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#40428 Apr 30, 2014
kingsteven wrote:
Lol can't help it just starts flying off the top of the head
You don't always have to freestyle. Write some ish if you wanna. It doesn't matter as long as it's rap.

Like coming out of retirement
A forty year old fireman
Blasting Ks and spraying lames
With higher iq than
Einstein.
My rhymes, are more complex than 5 9's,
Blasting at 25 people within 5 miles,
I got 5 mines,
Ready to eradicate these suckas,
Sucking so much putting prostitutes out of luck bruh,
No more chances to go back once I'm on the stage,
They tell me to flip the page,
But the next chapter can't be written today,
I'm still tryna make it through this chapter first,
And if I die before the next then the whole worlds gonna be cursed,
Cuz ima come back to life with a vengeance,
300 henchman,
Spartan resemblance,
The fire kindling,
I hear the whisperin,
So it's time to either speak up or get your heart torn out completely,
I'm not completely ready to end this,
I got a million more people to kill on my hitlist,
But I also got a wish list,
And if my wishes
Dont come true the genies gone swim with the fishes,
I could kill a bear with bare hands while barely reaching the bare minimum,
I swear I'm endin them,
The time has been played out,
My challenge gone i ate the cinnamon,
A jar full,
I'm part man part bull,
Ready to buck like i saw redd,
I could get a mill walking/ Milwaukee,
Get on the walkie and tell my boys to kill offspring/off spring,
So we hop out the car and blast at all dem/autumn,
Watch it fall,
Then come at the winters/winners cold ways to bash the front in/frontin,
Head off into the sunset,
And steal a rabbits feet for good luck,
His springs gone now so you're only hip, and bruised up,

That's what you're doing. Just rambling lol
Get some direction in your flow.
RapRook

UK

#40429 May 1, 2014
Manicas, psychopaths
Death threats, close quarters combat
Boasting high status and not bothering to acknowledge
You just got demolished
Youre horrorcore and fantasy bout being fairy queen
Just got abolished
Rewritten, scribbled out
Like when i see your lyrics
Im "cross crissing"
Out: just lije your aim is way out
Half a mile south
Youre "army" invaded the next place down
And just to point out
Anyone who goes on about "making the bed rock at your mums place"
Needs to get a life less hectic
Get on a diet
And stop making sumo wrestlers look anorexic

Peace. That was just a rap. Not a battlecry.

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#40430 May 1, 2014
SomeRandomDude wrote:
I do not post often in the freestyle thread or at all really... Because I rarely get any feedback. O.o
Stop acting like a little girl. I post many times and never get any feedback, but I have the humility to know myself that my post was good

“Dropping Bars Of Knowledge”

Since: Feb 14

Syracuse New York

#40431 May 1, 2014
SomeRandomDude wrote:
I don't tbink people got how hard I tore into myself there...
That was a level of tear I have been waiting for others to get on.
i felt it actually.

“Dropping Bars Of Knowledge”

Since: Feb 14

Syracuse New York

#40432 May 1, 2014
Phaze the Great wrote:
<quoted text>
Stop acting like a little girl. I post many times and never get any feedback, but I have the humility to know myself that my post was good
ya man i hear you.. but ill admit i do act the same way SRD did. i just gotta have enough confidence to know that people were feeling it without the word.

“Dropping Bars Of Knowledge”

Since: Feb 14

Syracuse New York

#40433 May 1, 2014
lil biggy wrote:
Lyrically I'm a freight train , which worth itself in gold !
Rhythmically Its great pain !, unhinged from earth that's known
With severity I'm on straight lane !, Infringed hell on earth !, It was cold !
Mimic-ally my traits insane , astringed worlds gave birth to its own !
Some complexity , what do you guys think ?
to be honest i think you should spit like that from now on :).
ugh i just put a smiley lol.

Since: Oct 13

Location hidden

#40434 May 1, 2014
Thank lenox awesome feedback and I see why srd wants feed back because I write wanting people to like it !.. And srd I usually comment on people disses but with yours I have no right its way better than mine so I must first find my faults before I can show you your but if I can say something its simplicity I bet if your wrote the verse easy and just enjoy the flow you will find that people will understand where it impacts and where the build up
UNLIMITEDSWAGGER 95

Bastrop, LA

#40435 May 1, 2014
Young_Girl_Allysa wrote:
Ima Rap Maniac
And You could tell i never slack
peoples say i cant rap you know what f*ck that
Mess With me your getting your *ss smacked
I aint p*ssy ill step on your face like a floor mat
people say im mean others say to change it
F*ck it thats life so you better stop complaining
ima queen your a barbie
your made out of plasic
so shut the f*ck up before i close your casket
ummm ok then
RapRook

UK

#40436 May 1, 2014
Phaze the Great wrote:
<quoted text>
Stop acting like a little girl. I post many times and never get any feedback, but I have the humility to know myself that my post was good
Im with you here. Except im not a pro yet i just rap for emotions and passion not for battles.
RapRook

UK

#40437 May 1, 2014
UNLIMITEDSWAGGER95 wrote:
<quoted text>
ummm ok then
Exactly what i thought. lol.
SomeRandomDude

United States

#40438 May 1, 2014
Phaze the Great wrote:
<quoted text>
Stop acting like a little girl. I post many times and never get any feedback, but I have the humility to know myself that my post was good
Humble: Having or showing a low estimate of one own importance or ability.

O.o

You really feeling that? I see humility in little boys and girls, a ton of it.
SomeRandomDude

United States

#40439 May 1, 2014
You know what goes through my head? The thought that this will not be taken as well, because it does not relate or is not good enough to be mentioned.

Hence when I get no replies I make a little comment, because I can't take pride in something that is not nearely the level it needs to be.

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#40441 May 1, 2014
but my point is who cares what people think? I feel if I give you feedback, you'll have this thought that I'm not your level to even give you feedback. thats why I avoid giving feedback

“Dropping Bars Of Knowledge”

Since: Feb 14

Syracuse New York

#40442 May 1, 2014
SomeRandomDude wrote:
You know what goes through my head? The thought that this will not be taken as well, because it does not relate or is not good enough to be mentioned.

Hence when I get no replies I make a little comment, because I can't take pride in something that is not nearely the level it needs to be.
You complain about not having feedback yet 45 percent of the time I give you feedback. I never see a reply trying to engage a positive conversation.. Doesn't make sense.. No offense but you seem like a pissed off guy that could care less about anyone else. Change that homie... Seriously.
SomeRandomDude

United States

#40443 May 1, 2014
? I like to hear feedback, if there is an exchange past that allows for positive interaction I will partake.

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