freestyle battle, spit it! (raps only)
climax

Ireland

#39529 Mar 31, 2014
IllMortal wrote:
<quoted text>
Thanks bro but you still haven't seen any of the really good people though lol
Ye man g instance is pretty good too and crusher t! But tgen there are some like fresh and hell boy who are pretty crap!
G Instance

Kirkland, WA

#39530 Mar 31, 2014
climax wrote:
<quoted text>
Ye man g instance is pretty good too and crusher t! But tgen there are some like fresh and hell boy who are pretty crap!
yo thanks climax, I know i'm new here but I just like to verse. this is a good place to practice for the cypher.
climax

Ireland

#39531 Mar 31, 2014
G Instance wrote:
<quoted text>
yo thanks climax, I know i'm new here but I just like to verse. this is a good place to practice for the cypher.
Same joined Saturday ha. Ye good place to lay out some verses and good battles can happen too
despotic

Trenton, NJ

#39532 Mar 31, 2014
you all stink, like a skunk
take the gun, give you a bump on the head
you're done
i don't do this for fun
you all terrible, atrocious
make you bounce like locomotives, i stay focused
i'm the best here i flow for years until we old
and eardrums corrode when my acid spit flows

“Dropping Bars Of Knowledge”

Since: Feb 14

Syracuse New York

#39533 Mar 31, 2014
G Instance wrote:
<quoted text>
I wish you would finally snap - as you say that I snapchat out a selfie
of me beating you over the head with a spiked bat recklessly
Then post it to Instagram just to show the homies what's up
Caption: What it's like to K-illMortal? hashtag shut the f#ck up
trying to filibuster, all you do is fill the room with lackluster
then I gotta clean the mess up with my Dirt Devil dustbuster
Like "damn", who verse (Hoover) like that and "suck" so bad
oh who but of course, illmortal yeah that be the man
With one cold hook i knock you out and rip off yo ear like Tyson
Your mumsy standing over your dead body saying please don't die, son (Dyson)
all the peeps be like, sorry ill, you worse
by the end off this rap, you dead riding shotgun in a hearse
I'm Enterpris-ing this road while you return your rental to Hertz
It hurts, these Hertz, but expect this "frequency" frequently
And between you and me, you are probably [email protected] as much as you talk [email protected] obsessively
detail [email protected] fantasies in your raps, you probably dream of getting f#cked in the ass
you was a straight alter boy, til getting reamed by the pastor after mass,
but sh1t there I go again, bringing up your repressed past
I'm a national incident b1tch, better put that flag at half mast!
Hmm, interesting what's it say on your profile, you like to see dreams come true
Hah, well since you dream fantasies about sex with dudes, your wet dream is now through
And since you talking Back 2 the Future now, I'm about to go Marty McFly on your ass
I ride my flying skateboard in your sisters window and stick my flux capacitor in her hatch
your long winded raps full of fluff and hot air, I leave you dead in the ditch grasping for air
not a molecule of oxygen for you to spare, and tell your girl to clean her bush, next time use Nair
I'll break into your brachial grab you by the tracheal, then leave you in a red pool in the basement fool
you a fish out of water, Wanda, get the sand out of your vag1na
G Instance, ain't no one on this forum who can spit rhymes finer
I'm a chronic hydroponic hyperbolic systemic and diastolic threat
Chronic fumes inhalation to the face, you know I only smoke the best
Listen y'all, my intent is no disrespect, but you must relent
That words have more fire when thrown at another, check!
And yeah I am crossing boundaries, like a wetback across country lines
Just trying to prove to you p#ssies on line at a time
I'm not here to spit a soliloquy, monologue or diatribe
And if you got a problem, last Mohican, no worries yo, y'all can die-a-tribe
I'm going to have to give this well thought out and humorous yet choppy diss one thumb up and the other half way. I loved the funny metaphors and your use of talking about the instagram and hash tags. that showed your maturity of being unique, cause you don't really see a lot of cats spitting that shi# and making it enjoyable and good. Also your flow was so well set up that it was building a quick amount of suspense to end the bar with a killer punch line. but I didn't see that and when I didn't, it kind of left me at disappointment. I can really tell you would be lethal in a battle. but in order to be a real contender in that discussion id have to say work on the punch lines a bit.(honest opinions, with constructive criticism). good work.
G Instance

Kirkland, WA

#39534 Mar 31, 2014
Lenox Da Kid wrote:
<quoted text>
I'm going to have to give this well thought out and humorous yet choppy diss one thumb up and the other half way. I loved the funny metaphors and your use of talking about the instagram and hash tags. that showed your maturity of being unique, cause you don't really see a lot of cats spitting that shi# and making it enjoyable and good. Also your flow was so well set up that it was building a quick amount of suspense to end the bar with a killer punch line. but I didn't see that and when I didn't, it kind of left me at disappointment. I can really tell you would be lethal in a battle. but in order to be a real contender in that discussion id have to say work on the punch lines a bit.(honest opinions, with constructive criticism). good work.
yo thanks for the props, Lenox. I do appreciate the honest critique and i'm always striving to improve

“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#39535 Mar 31, 2014
G Instance wrote:
<quoted text>yo thanks for the props, Lenox. I do appreciate the honest critique and i'm always striving to improve
Yo G don't think this is over bro haha I give you props though, you've made this a good battle
SomeRandomDude

United States

#39536 Mar 31, 2014
I finished it, someone need to staple them together. Phaze needs two bars as well.

http://m.topix.com/forum/music/hip-hop

“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#39537 Mar 31, 2014
G Instance wrote:
<quoted text>yo thanks for the props, Lenox. I do appreciate the honest critique and i'm always striving to improve
Been working all day so expect something tomorrow morning...

“Dropping Bars Of Knowledge”

Since: Feb 14

Syracuse New York

#39538 Mar 31, 2014
IllMortal wrote:
<quoted text>
Yo G don't think this is over bro haha I give you props though, you've made this a good battle
just dropped my diss.. hopefully it posted.. Im really feeling confident that it was a good drop

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#39539 Mar 31, 2014
SomeRandomDude wrote:
I finished it, someone need to staple them together. Phaze needs two bars as well.
http://m.topix.com/forum/music/hip-hop
I want to know if I have the permission to change the two bars completely because no matter how I type them it keeps getting deleted so I want to rewrite the two bars. And I won't flip either I just want to write two bars that'll be seen that's all. Is it OK?

“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#39543 Mar 31, 2014
G Instance wrote:
<quoted text>yo thanks for the props, Lenox. I do appreciate the honest critique and i'm always striving to improve
Here it goes. End of your career on topix.

Keep on "bark"ing G, but you better "leave" quiet "dog",
'Fore I break your "limbs", dislocate your "stem", and leave you to dialogue/"die a log",
I might've solved the reason why this "hog",
Is outta his "pen" writing "bars", he's lonely and wants a blood bath, time to "slaughter" y'all,
You don't want trouble G, I'll bring it in an instant,
The moment you came upon my territory my instincts turned pit mix,
I'm talking pit bulls, Like they pit a bull against this sh*t,
This pitiful/pit is full, I can't fit another rapper in it,
Calls himself G Instance but can't keep with my "repetitions",
I'll have the "weight" lifted off his chest as he struggles with the "benches",
Or should I say b*tches, as I pull em left and right,
Got girls on each side, tug o' war, me in the middle pulling em inside,
Inside or did I say in sight or did I say insight,
As I have insight into why he can't pull the b*tch inside within sight with all his might,
He's just another low life, another wannabe tryna make it,
If I was God, I would regret the day I made ya,
But I son'd ya last time so I guess I did make ya,
Flow so "acidic" your moms p*ssy and face ain't "basic",
My dude you ain't relevant,
You're like the kids on scoobydoo always meddlin,
But you don't have a clue as to how I destroy so elegant,
I've shattered your dreams like your sisters hymen when she WAS celibate,
I'm hella bent, on destroying you until you have no breath to spit,
Until you give up and give in, askin how I can be so heaven sent,
Like I'm a rap god or some crazy idea like that,
Fight back lil man, I tell you please fight back,
You have no idea how one sided this is,
You remember the fight Apollo vs Rocky, the margins twice as big,
I've got the hooks landing and it's seems like every punch is on point,
The KO should come soon, I see the crowd is annoyed,
They want this to end, so you and your boys can just kiss and make up,
Get it, make-up, cuz your purple and blue from the waist up,
I've bodied you G, if this forum was a cemetery you would be bodyin it,
Get it, body in it, as in your bodies in it,
Just get outta here dog we don't want your kind,
You're a f*cking shitzu/sh*t zoo, I'm the Doberman/doper man, mastermind,

“facebook.com/tre .tru”

Since: Nov 08

Yo Mom's Mouth

#39544 Apr 1, 2014
http://youtu.be/ptbt7LkV7QU

This is for a Topical competition for 150 bucks.. It's more of a storytelling style track cause it's a topical about a moment of change.. Check it out Lmk what you think... Feedback is appreciated

“not a guy...”

Since: Nov 13

Location hidden

#39545 Apr 1, 2014
Lenox Da Kid wrote:
<quoted text>
calm down she thinks shes the nicki minaj that's all
and you are all your username says you are...a kid (._.) oh snap!
Fresh

Kenosha, WI

#39546 Apr 1, 2014
Stealing from the homeless
you can call me a thief
Better yet I rob banks
Holding out on release
Proved my rage and my age
Started at thirteen
Never stopped when I got
arrested at fourteen
climax

Ireland

#39547 Apr 1, 2014
Fresh wrote:
Stealing from the homeless
you can call me a thief
Better yet I rob banks
Holding out on release
Proved my rage and my age
Started at thirteen
Never stopped when I got
arrested at fourteen
You need to leave unless you can make good lyrics this aint for little boys like you.

“Life's a monopoly”

Since: Nov 13

Houston

#39548 Apr 1, 2014
Fresh wrote:
Stealing from the homeless
you can call me a thief
Better yet I rob banks
Holding out on release
Proved my rage and my age
Started at thirteen
Never stopped when I got
arrested at fourteen
Check out my drop three above yours. Compare.
Then proceed to "hang" yourself. "Picture" that. You fell/fail.

“Dropping Bars Of Knowledge”

Since: Feb 14

Syracuse New York

#39549 Apr 1, 2014
G-E-M wrote:
<quoted text>
and you are all your username says you are...a kid (._.) oh snap!
oh im sorry. didn't know putting faces in your typing didn't make you a fa%%ot. anyways coming at me for no reason is harsh. Cause when you come at me for no reason normally you have a lot of hate built up inside you. and believe me I can understand. I have enough hate to kill someone with no reason. either its the hate that brought you to what you said or its probably that you have a crush on a slu@ Barbie STD carrying wh#re who has no skill and talent what so ever. and by the way. your vote doesn't count for sh!it because right when your pu$$y started to swell up about a negative comment that I had against nicki minaj doesn't mean you can give a random vote to the other contender witch happened to be ill. now Im pretty sure ill knows where im going with this. meaning that im not butt hurt that he voted for him and not me but the fact that you have no right to even judge on a battle because I insulted your dream girl. now I hate having to get up set and lose respect for people but we should start over.

“Dropping Bars Of Knowledge”

Since: Feb 14

Syracuse New York

#39551 Apr 1, 2014
well congratulations yall got me riled up. yaa. its one thig to talk about my age and have no idea what maturity I hold inside.

“Dropping Bars Of Knowledge”

Since: Feb 14

Syracuse New York

#39552 Apr 1, 2014
sorry for getting out of control.. didn't have the greatest day. but thatas not an excuse. so sorry

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