freestyle battle, spit it! (raps only)
Blake FTS

Gibson, GA

#36584 Nov 22, 2013
This one is going to sting so grab a box of tissues
i read your horror core, and B*tch you have issues
so f*cked up, Dr. Phil couldnt fix you
a mental asylum is where i would commit you
and if you died tomorrow, nobody would miss you
your parents gave you up, they knew you'd be a failure
you tried to reach your mom, but no response when you mailed her
because i found her home, went inside, and then I IMPALED HER
you are trapped in your head with insanity as the jailer
but I'm about to break you out, split your prison with a razor
you are suffering and i am your savior
I'll free your mind with a lobotomy later
ill beat your *ss down like you in the middle of my mosh pit.
you dont belong in the game, you are a captive a hostage
and just like him, you are not sh*t
and just like him you had a brain, but tossed it
i had sympathy for you but i lost it
like a drum you've been beat
you look like you tweak, freak, you F'king creep
find a cliff, and take the leap
liquidflow

Desert Hot Springs, CA

#36585 Nov 22, 2013
Blake FTS wrote:
This one is going to sting so grab a box of tissues
i read your horror core, and B*tch you have issues
so f*cked up, Dr. Phil couldnt fix you
a mental asylum is where i would commit you
and if you died tomorrow, nobody would miss you
your parents gave you up, they knew you'd be a failure
you tried to reach your mom, but no response when you mailed her
because i found her home, went inside, and then I IMPALED HER
you are trapped in your head with insanity as the jailer
but I'm about to break you out, split your prison with a razor
you are suffering and i am your savior
I'll free your mind with a lobotomy later
ill beat your *ss down like you in the middle of my mosh pit.
you dont belong in the game, you are a captive a hostage
and just like him, you are not sh*t
and just like him you had a brain, but tossed it
i had sympathy for you but i lost it
like a drum you've been beat
you look like you tweak, freak, you F'king creep
find a cliff, and take the leap
nice flow bro
Shini

Seoul, Korea

#36586 Nov 22, 2013
G-E-M wrote:
blood stained fingertips,
didnt take long to think of this.
like a deadly poison, sealed with a kiss,
nobody could make anything as real as this.
i was ready when i first learnt words and phrases,
yet new words i learn all day.
spent all my time on dedication to something that needs no explanation.
in a way it stole my soul,
left an empty frozen hole,
there's everything left to fear,
your tragic fate is looking so clear.
its your nightmare.
live it clear.
That was pretty good.
Shini

Seoul, Korea

#36587 Nov 22, 2013
Test my past as my rite of passage
Discard them titles I have light a passion
Call me a has been has been
I used but made sure it wasn't lastin taxin
I streched the truth like the elastic's taxed friend
Then was thrown to the wolves alone in my actin
Mother nature scorned pulled up with a backhand
Then hit me with back end while I was gettin taxed in the back ends
I never claimed greatness it was a gift bestowed
When I was ramen binging I had some sh!? heros
My college collage made me the s!^t here though
Humbled by the craft on top of these zeros
I looked up to no one cause that ship sunk and the pier's broke
Became a boot-strap rude ass, too crass too whoo class
Graduated through class, so each kick boots back
Now those looking down need to look up cause I move fast
They move back to they mom's mine's inna coma so I can't do that
So no hard feelings if I move past you when ya chew fat
Cept for my sister I have no fam, the emotion had to reduce that
So I give no damns bout a position when I produce raps
Ya produce, snacks food for me on the produce rack
If my funds gettin me time to teach ya can't produce that

“Topix Rapper”

Since: Apr 13

South Auckland

#36588 Nov 22, 2013
Blake FTS wrote:
This one is going to sting so grab a box of tissues
i read your horror core, and B*tch you have issues
so f*cked up, Dr. Phil couldnt fix you
a mental asylum is where i would commit you
and if you died tomorrow, nobody would miss you
your parents gave you up, they knew you'd be a failure
you tried to reach your mom, but no response when you mailed her
because i found her home, went inside, and then I IMPALED HER
you are trapped in your head with insanity as the jailer
but I'm about to break you out, split your prison with a razor
you are suffering and i am your savior
I'll free your mind with a lobotomy later
ill beat your *ss down like you in the middle of my mosh pit.
you dont belong in the game, you are a captive a hostage
and just like him, you are not sh*t
and just like him you had a brain, but tossed it
i had sympathy for you but i lost it
like a drum you've been beat
you look like you tweak, freak, you F'king creep
find a cliff, and take the leap
Whose that aimed at Blake
liquidflow

Desert Hot Springs, CA

#36589 Nov 22, 2013
trying to feel sain, hard scard heal pain, life driven on a wheel change, twins hitting my brain like steel planes, the house that shuffles hustle n deals strain, living life like the real cain, strong mind, havent seen different in a long time, backstabbers hitting the wrong spine. sands ever shifting, sands sever missions, souls the weak forever ditching, they say better listen, peace came to my world when i metta christian, still living, ghetto n metal world still spinnin, still sinning, will different, will risen, left as a youngin, banging hanging by a finger, smell of hell lingers, but its fading, waiting, on my new generation, cause lifes racing, timeline, signs primed, to show, where i might go , seeds indeed need to grow, need to know, what life is, never the nicest, deliver shivers show what trife is, god continually wanting to skype with, inner demons scheming i fight with, gifted hands that i write with, never ever think i might quit, visualize or ur eyes might miss. the realities of life and some nice shit
liquidflow

Desert Hot Springs, CA

#36590 Nov 22, 2013
Shini wrote:
Test my past as my rite of passage
Discard them titles I have light a passion
Call me a has been has been
I used but made sure it wasn't lastin taxin
I streched the truth like the elastic's taxed friend
Then was thrown to the wolves alone in my actin
Mother nature scorned pulled up with a backhand
Then hit me with back end while I was gettin taxed in the back ends
I never claimed greatness it was a gift bestowed
When I was ramen binging I had some sh!? heros
My college collage made me the s!^t here though
Humbled by the craft on top of these zeros
I looked up to no one cause that ship sunk and the pier's broke
Became a boot-strap rude ass, too crass too whoo class
Graduated through class, so each kick boots back
Now those looking down need to look up cause I move fast
They move back to they mom's mine's inna coma so I can't do that
So no hard feelings if I move past you when ya chew fat
Cept for my sister I have no fam, the emotion had to reduce that
So I give no damns bout a position when I produce raps
Ya produce, snacks food for me on the produce rack
If my funds gettin me time to teach ya can't produce that
sick flow

“Horrocore-Tourna ment 2012CHAMP”

Since: May 11

Calgary, Canada

#36591 Nov 22, 2013
@hostage i think he dissing me? he tried to do a horrorcore verse, but it wasnt very good. and i think he threw u in the diss as well, the 'a captive a hostage, just like him your not sh!t' rhyme....maybe.....
blake you used words like tissues/issues, you/you (haha...), creep/leap, sh!t/it, savior/later.....up your vocab dude.....check my horrorcore 2013 verse for some more descriptive words to use. if you wanna actually hit hard with your disses, first up your rhymes. srd and shini both have massive dictionaries in their brains too lol i like to think my vocab is pretty varied and up there near theres too. iv legit used a dictionary to help write tho, works too. just lookin at words you can use to rhyme in the future.

“Horrocore-Tourna ment 2012CHAMP”

Since: May 11

Calgary, Canada

#36592 Nov 22, 2013
liquidflow wrote:
<quoted text>
sick flow
just like SRD always wins the multi catagory in battles, shini almost always wins flow catagory haha
liquidflow

Desert Hot Springs, CA

#36593 Nov 22, 2013
Seanny T wrote:
<quoted text>
just like SRD always wins the multi catagory in battles, shini almost always wins flow catagory haha
shini is tight but i will beat srd in multis
Blake

Gibson, GA

#36594 Nov 22, 2013
liquidflow wrote:
<quoted text>
nice flow bro
Thanks man.
SomeRandomDude

United States

#36595 Nov 22, 2013
Multies, Vocab, Storytelling, Imagery and working on flow.

I do a bit of wordplay, puns, metaphors and similes, but I don't think they are as good.
Blake fts

Gibson, GA

#36596 Nov 22, 2013
Seanny T wrote:
@hostage i think he dissing me? he tried to do a horrorcore verse, but it wasnt very good. and i think he threw u in the diss as well, the 'a captive a hostage, just like him your not sh!t' rhyme....maybe.....
blake you used words like tissues/issues, you/you (haha...), creep/leap, sh!t/it, savior/later.....up your vocab dude.....check my horrorcore 2013 verse for some more descriptive words to use. if you wanna actually hit hard with your disses, first up your rhymes. srd and shini both have massive dictionaries in their brains too lol i like to think my vocab is pretty varied and up there near theres too. iv legit used a dictionary to help write tho, works too. just lookin at words you can use to rhyme in the future.
first off, you and you is not what i rhymed. miss and fix and tiss- is what i rhymed. its called a multi. they dont have to be one word to be a multi, just so long as all of the syllables are basically the same. second, i wasnt going for horror core. third, you dont have a broad vocabulary if you have to read a dictionary to get your words.

“Horrocore-Tourna ment 2012CHAMP”

Since: May 11

Calgary, Canada

#36597 Nov 22, 2013
liquidflow wrote:
<quoted text>
shini is tight but i will beat srd in multis
iv only seen easy and medium level multies from you tho.... srd can multi pretty much anything lol. he has pretty intricate ones. if your that sure, challenge him to a multi battle and see if you are. im not sure anyone on here can out multi him haha but i mean im sure hes down to defend his multi abilities.
SomeRandomDude

United States

#36598 Nov 22, 2013
Though in reality the styles clash
Yo this tragedy has tiled back
Flows since lethality some guys lack
Low hits have ta be live zaps
Knowin' fatalities from my tracks
Blow this trashed balcony right back
No flinch lacalities gunned miles flat
No b!tch may call these writes wack

Yes, this is another keystyle.
SomeRandomDude

United States

#36599 Nov 22, 2013
Blake, you learn vocabulary from a dictionary. If not, you are not literary.

Eh, when I do a ton of multies, I speak and write in multies.

Frik.
B-diligent

Richmond, Canada

#36600 Nov 22, 2013
Unless i said it was truth it's all distortions

I'm the reason women are having abortions

Gag you to sleep chop your body up into unequal portions

Sew you back up in random parts leaving your anatomy unpoportioned

Did you not hear me the first time! Of course not I sent it out like static signals in distortion

Just rats In my game running course and

Scurrying scared to find the course end

only to find out there's no walls that open

Cover your stomach with petroleum lotion

Make a nine inch inscision with a scalpel

Grapple you by your Adam's apple squeezing your tightly closed in

Gods children are scared I'm the omen
liquidflow

Desert Hot Springs, CA

#36601 Nov 22, 2013
this is just showing flowing witty reflation,
my rimes i put together seem like they have a tricky relation
but its not, the way i conform it make it a pretty creation,
those weak authors that bother when im to busy cremating,
rap all styles wild im the gritty sensation,
just messing around im on my silly predation.
EASY WORDPLAY
Seanny T

Calgary, Canada

#36602 Nov 22, 2013
Nice drop b diligent lol 8infinity reppin. Oh and blake, please read. I didnt say i use the dictionary to find rhyming words, i use it to learn new ones to use. Duh. Facepalm

“Divide and conquer ”

Since: Mar 13

Brooklyn, New York

#36604 Nov 22, 2013
horrorcore diss for final, someone copy and paste it unto the battle because some reason its deleting it when I put it up

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